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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Crazy_Arshi

Madhu accepted rk's love soon that was surprising but loved it


She had to accept it someday😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Crazy_Arshi

Loved rk madhu moments

😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shriya.bk

Rrr

Unres
Yes! Yes! I'm first Meghu!😆


You were right the Insane sisters took revenge from me but they didn't succeed properly I say🤣 because I came 1st in PWF 2nd in OP and 3rd in DK that means the insane sisters didn't succeed 🤣
And I'm full to Happy for this!😆

Coming to the story
And tada Meghu you crushed my dreams again !😆 I thought that Madbala version oops I forgot the version😆 would reject Rk and yes she rejected him but still she accepted him😆 My poor fate!😭
And Rk was also no less! Why Rk?! Why?! Why me alll the time hun?😆 Couldn't you just let her go and come to me?!😭 But now who cares even I don't give a damn about you!😆

Meghu let me tell you ...You are One hell a great writer!😃 I seriously can't compare you to antone at all! I love all your stories and now coming to this I'm still loving it . The way you depict Rk's feelings is so damn Awesome! I love to read more Rk's pov than Madhu's because you already know the reason😆


Well to tell you I'm assuming that they might have a break up soon and Rk will come running after the break up🤣 And I do think Armaan's plan will not be succeeded that's what My horoscope for Armaan tells😆 About Rk and Madhu I dont know because whenever I try to see their horoscope the magic crystal doesn't show anything but instead tells me SIGNAL NOT FOUND!😆

No thank you for pm Meghu!😆


That pic though 🤣
Congrats shriya...you made it first once again😆
Madhu will never leave RK until I'm here 🤣 maybe next time baby! RK only belongs to Madbala 😆

Aww that is very sweet to say shriya..glad you like my writing...I could say the same for you😃
Break up I haven't though about yet...and it may not even happen 🤣 we'll see
I want that magic crystal 🤣

Thanks Shriya and you are not welcome for pm😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhurish

This is one surprising update, meg.

i never expected madhu will accept her love. I though she will not come out of that betrayal she had faced from armaan, as for her love is like playing with fire but i should say she over had come from that misery so soon & dared to play with fire LOL & I should give d credit to rk as he only cured her with his love & Trust...
u have beautifully written madhus fear & Her inner turmoil..she was so shocked when he confessed but she made a wise desicion by locking herself in a room to think calmly & came up with a good desicion..that was so lovely...
even rk was so surprised like us lol...
after confession when rk took her in arms i though he will take her in to his room but u r one decent writer made him take her to his car lol..unlike me lol...
so rishbala's wedding is on cards...will that go smoothly or some more hungama will take place?
well, this time i choose this update as my most fav. one among d three though i was swinging whether to choose this or OL as that was d ending update but finally i made up my mind to choose this one specially for madhu's sudden confession...great part. Loved it.
thanks for d pm


Thank you Sudha...I am full of surprises 😆
Confession was pending...needed to show it sooner or later...so I thought...why not now? 😆
Room is a far place Sudha 🤣 I am not as fast as you are 🤣

Wedding is a little far away...hungama...maybe...😆
PWF fav for this week...awesome...love you Sudha 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
I unresed on page 50...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ni33

I am hell tired after DK comment... Writing that thing twice... And me removing a bit at the end the second time... It took a toll on me... Remembering all of that... Will try to give a long comment on PWF... But somehow it seems unlikely... Sorry Chotu...Its okay Ni...I understand 😆

All I can say is I laughed so hard...🤣 I can't, I can, he didn't do anything wrong, I shouldn't be afraid... The indecisiveness was real fun to read...🤣 Again staining his shirt with her tears... I hope that is tearfree material...🤣 Why does she love to stain his clothes with her salty tears?🤣She can't afford to use tissues...they are too harsh for her delicate eyes...only RK's good quality cloth shirts are suitable for this 🤣
He rocked her like a baby in a craddle...🤣 Comforting her, but ready to jump at any given time...🤣 That if the opportunity presented itself...🤣maybe it will...🤣
And a promise...🤣 "I'll always be there for you Madhu...that's a promise." 🤣 Wow heroji don't give promises you can't keep... I have this feeling that Armaan will jump out any minute now...🤣 When I will soon reveal...🤣And he will say "I'm back!" And pulled out two shotguns 🤣 Cowboy style 🤣
But I can't actually believe that RK drove her back home... Meaning back to Malik and Trishna... That man is either stupid or using her as a bait to lure Armaan out...I didn't want Malik and Trishna to disappear like Yash did...🤣
Then reading "I'll be back soon Madhu. To make you mine forever." 🤣 Yeah, yeah right... Fly, fly little brainy, fly like the wind... along with grey clouds that has clouded your brain with the possible outcomes...😆 And him watching Madhu's pic in bed, nothing could make him happier...🤣 I just see a dead Madhu in the future and a heartbroken and vengeful RK when I read that...🤣So...armaan will kill her? 🤣
Also I came second... And last to comment...🤣its a great accomplishment🤣
Thanks for the update and PM Chotu...you're welcome Ni 🤗
Sorry for the short comment...it's okay...your comment on DK makes up for it 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya4life

I am hell tired after DK comment... Writing that thing twice... And me removing a bit at the end the second time... It took a toll on me... Remembering all of that... Will try to give a long comment on PWF... But somehow it seems unlikely... Sorry Chotu...Its okay Ni...I understand 😆

All I can say is I laughed so hard...🤣 I can't, I can, he didn't do anything wrong, I shouldn't be afraid... The indecisiveness was real fun to read...🤣 Again staining his shirt with her tears... I hope that is tearfree material...🤣 Why does she love to stain his clothes with her salty tears?🤣She can't afford to use tissues...they are too harsh for her delicate eyes...only RK's good quality cloth shirts are suitable for this 🤣 I really feel sorry for RK... All his clothes are being destoryed by this bala...😆
He rocked her like a baby in a craddle...🤣 Comforting her, but ready to jump at any given time...🤣 That if the opportunity presented itself...🤣maybe it will...🤣 Meaning it will...🤣
And a promise...🤣 "I'll always be there for you Madhu...that's a promise." 🤣 Wow heroji don't give promises you can't keep... I have this feeling that Armaan will jump out any minute now...🤣 When I will soon reveal...🤣And he will say "I'm back!" And pulled out two shotguns 🤣 Cowboy style 🤣 You know, I had a thing I so wanted to remember, something that was really funny and suitable here... But couldn't now when you wrote I'm back I remembered what it was...😆 RK will say... "I'll be back" with a german accent... Luckily he is no Arnold and has great looks...🤣
But I can't actually believe that RK drove her back home... Meaning back to Malik and Trishna... That man is either stupid or using her as a bait to lure Armaan out...I didn't want Malik and Trishna to disappear like Yash did...🤣 You didn't want that... But are willing to kill Madhu in the process?🤣 You could have for example written that RK called Malik and Trishna, telling them what happened and stating that Madhu is safer with him... He has security and no one would be able to touch her... Well except for him that is...🤣 Yes now I remember what else I wanted to write... Maybe you can take in that RK have assigned some security, guys who would watch her every move and follow her everywhere, not letting any harm to come to her... Hopefully they won't follow her during those bathroom visits...🤣
Then reading "I'll be back soon Madhu. To make you mine forever." 🤣 Yeah, yeah right... Fly, fly little brainy, fly like the wind... along with grey clouds that has clouded your brain with the possible outcomes...😆 And him watching Madhu's pic in bed, nothing could make him happier...🤣 I just see a dead Madhu in the future and a heartbroken and vengeful RK when I read that...🤣So...armaan will kill her? 🤣 Hopefully...🤣 Or he would do something that ends up accidentally killing Madhu...🤣
Also I came second... And last to comment...🤣its a great accomplishment🤣 Tremendous...🤣
Thanks for the update and PM Chotu...you're welcome Ni 🤗
Sorry for the short comment...it's okay...your comment on DK makes up for it 😆 Luckily...😆

Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


Chapter 22
(RK's POV)

Bittuji handed me a script. We were going to shoot a proposal sequence today. I took a glance at Dipali. She was busy spraying perfume and doing heavy makeup. I laughed to myself on how ridiculous she looked. And I had to shoot with her.

"Chief, your heroine seems desperate.." Bittuji laughed.

"Highly desperate. Let's hook her up with Armaan." I said. He laughed and went to check on the set up. I sipped on my coffee and eyed Bakshi. He and Armaan would feel my wrath soon. As he prepared everything I thought of a plan. I smirked to myself as I thought of it.

My phone buzzed in my pocket. It was Madhu's message.

"RK, Didu is making me try on new dresses." It read. "Which one is better?"

She sent me two pictures, one in a light yellow anarkali and another in a green and purple anarkali.

"I like both." I messaged back. "You look beautiful in anything, Madhu."

She messaged back a smiley face. I shook my head and went to complete the next shot. Dipali seemed extra eager to pounce on me. I decided to teach her a lesson today. I walked up to her and tapped her on the shoulder.

"Dipali, would you like to join me for dinner tonight?" I asked casually.

She fluttered her eyelashes and got closer to me. I puked a little in my mouth.

"Of course RK...I would love to." She ran her finger down my neckline. She didn't care if she had been humiliated in my house before. She was desperate. Madhu would kill her one day.

"Good. Meet me at Hotel Blue Diamond tonight at 7."

"Okay.." She said.

I could have a date with Madhu tonight and I have some fun messing with Dipali.

(Madhu's POV)

RK planned a candlelight dinner for the two of us tonight. I wore the green and people anarkali for the occasion. I liked that one a pinch better. RK arrived early. Malik invited him inside. I peeked through my bedroom window. He was looking dashing black suit and tie. He adorned a red rose in the front pocket. Trishna saw me from the bed and pushed me outside.

"Didu stop it!" She laughed and kept pushing.

(RK's POV)

I stood up once I saw her, mesmerized by the beauty I was seeing in front of me. She stepped out gracefully, her hair full of curls and falling free on her shoulders. She looked gorgeous in the green and purple anarkali. I approached her and took the rose from my pocket, fixing it in her hair. I kissed her hand, bringing a smile up on her face.

"Shall we leave, jungli billi?" I said. She giggled.

"Yes, my sexy superstar."

Trishna interrupted.

"Okay lovebirds...carry on." She laughed and pushed us out the door. I winked at Madhu and linked my arm with hers. I led her out to the car.

We reached the restaurant. Dipali still hadn't shown up yet. But her date had shown up. He was a spot boy who was head over heels for her. I told him to wait, that Dipali would be a little late. The waiter greeted us and took us to the special table that I had booked for the two of us. Madhu blushed.

"What's wrong jungli billi? Shy?"

"No...it's just that this is all so beautiful." I presented a chair for her and let her sit comfortably. I kissed her on the cheek before taking a seat myself. Dipali's table was a few spaces away. A perfect evening show.

I took Madhu's hand from across the table and held it. She blushed again. The entrees arrived, and we began to eat. I looked around, and sure enough Dipali was headed start for us.

"Hi RK!" She said.

Madhu gave her a death stare, and dropped her spoon back on the plate. Then she glared at me. Dipali looked at Madhu then me.

"What's she doing here? I thought this was our date."

"Sweetheart, I said do you want to join me for dinner, not if you want to have dinner with me."

"But that's the same thing!"

"Not in my books. I'm crazy you know...your date is over there." I pointed to the other table, where the spot not was sitting. He looked over here and smiled wide, eying Dipali.

"Have fun." I waved to her. She stormed off and sat at that table, giving me looks ever so often.

"RK why is she here? And what is this about a date?" Madhu enquired.

"It's our evening show. Enjoy." I smiled. She shook her head and continued to eat.

We took occasional glances at Dipali. She was not enjoying her date, but she was getting the attention she wanted. Madhu seemed to enjoy seeing her like that. She didn't want anyone else to touch me.

I ordered a chocolate cake after dinner. I led Madhu to the back banquet hall, which I had booked just for the two of us. She gasped in excitement when she saw the cake. It read I love you on the top.

"This is so cute RK!"

"Anything for you." I wrapped my arms around her. I signaled for the music to be cued.

"May I have this dance?" I said.

"You may." She said. I took her in my arms and swayed her to the beat. We got lost in each other's eyes. I prayed from the bottom of my heart that this moment would last forever.

We cut the cake and fed each other. Madhu was being naughty and put icing on my nose. I got her back. We became children for a moment. I grabbed her by the waist again, pulling her closer to me every second. I cursed my lips into hers, sucking on them passionately. She grabbed handfuls of my hair and pulled me in longer.

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