Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki: Episode Discussion Thread - 24
Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai - 06 Aug 2025 EDT
SHIFTING BACK 6.8
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Part 1:-
Everyone was just stunned..numbly looking the scene infront of them..
The godown at which they were standing before some seconds is now burning infront of their eyes..
A man(trying to catch his breath):shree call to local police..first we have to stop this fire..
All heads turn towards that mans direction..
They all remember what happened before some seconds..
Flashback:-
They entered in that godown..they scattered n started searching for clues at the place..but soon everyone of them looses their consciousness..
When they get conscious they found themselves tied around a big pipe..n also bomb attached to them..
They even could not move..
They were so surprised n shocked..not even dare to speak..
The only chance of their saving is..none other than ACP arjun suryakant rawte..their..arjun sir..
N at the next moment they saw him running towards them..
Shree:no sir..yaha mat aayiye..
Chotu:sir..leave..aap jayiye..
Sakshi:arjun plz tum yaha se chale jao..
Aayesha:sir..plz aap hamari baat suniye..aap apni jaan bachayiye..
Liza:sir..aap samaz kyo nahi rahe..bomb bas fatne hi wala he..
But arjun don't even hear them..he successful in removing their bomb..he run somewhat away from them(other team members are still tied to pipe by ropes..)
He cut the black wire of bomb but still the timer running on..
He frustredky move his hand through his hairs..
He then decides to cut the green wire..n he was right this time..the bomb diffused.
He was taking sigh of relief..when they hear a voice..
"ye duniya nashwar he..sirf aatma hi amar he..aaj jo zinda he..kal usaki maut hona nichit he.."
Arjun trying to get from where the voice is coming..but suddenly something struck to him..
He again run to where his team is tied..
The voice is continueing its babber..but arjun realize one more bomb is there..
Aayesha(hearing beep sound):ye aawaz toh..
Arjun fire on the rope by which they have tied..the rope get burn..
Arjun(yell):run...rrunnn...
Everyone run outside..
N at the next second the whole godown is blasted by that bomb..
Flashback end..
Everyone is come out of their flashback..n stared the man who save them..
Arjun:shree..
Shree:ha sir..abhi..abhi dekhta hu..
Finally everyone come back to senses..n started doing their work..
Arjun knows his team is in shocking n stunned by the previous incident..but they have to deal with this case..moreover they have to stop the fire..
With the help of fire services they finally manage to control fire..n now they are doing all formality..
Arjun's phone buzz.
It was a call from commissioner..he wanted to see him n his team..
Arjun cut the phone..
Arjun:team.hame commissioner sir ke office jana he...yaha ka sab kaam pura ho gaya..?
Chotu:yes sir..
Liza:aur sir..meine kuch cheese bhi collect kar li he foresic analysis ke liye..
Arjun just nodded n headed towards suv..
All get inside suv..they all are unusual silent..their mind is still in the effect of the previous incidence..
(guys let me clear u all things..it is the same case in which etf team get died in show..but I m showing it in different way..n yes shree is also in team at that time in my story..
Sam has gone to delhi for some another case for some days..so arjun is having responsibility of etf team..
Its roshni's birthday today..arjun was upset from morning..n they get a case to find out about robin hudda..when they could not able to find about robin hudda..arjun get angry on them..n scolded them very badly..
Later on arjun feels bad to scold them..n he also said this to sakshi..in case..they realize that the truck they got from robin hudda is used in human organ trafficking..they enquire robin hudda.but he don't know anything about it..they come to know about this godown by some informer..
Then they come here to enquire..but this bomb blast happened..
But in my story..arjun manages to save his team..his only family after roshni..)
Commissioner's office:-
They all are standing in comm. Cabin..
Arjun is standing all above..n all other team member standing behind him..
Comm.:tum sab log thik ho..??koi ghayal toh nahi hua..??
Aayesha(on behalf of all):we all r fine sir..
Comm.:good..but I m not fine..
All look to him..
Comm.:nothing is fine..
They all just keep gazing him..
Comm.:aur kuch fine..ho bhi kaise sakta he..jab tak tum apni harkatose baz nahi aaoge arjun..
Now he turn fully towards arjun..
Comm.:etf ko case diya gaya tha robin hudda ko pakdne ka..aur tumne kya kiya..??robin hudda ko pakad liya case finish..but no..kaha ki baat kaha leke gaye..apni jaan ki toh parwah he hi nahi tumhe..par apni team ko bhi musibat me dal diya..
Comm. Speak loudly n angrily..
Arjun:ye koi simple case nahi he..human organ trafficking ka case he sir..
Comm(angrily):kya sabot he tumhare pass..??arjunn..tum har baar apni jaan zokhim me dalte ho..aaj puri team ko kahtare me dal diya..agar iss bomb blast me kisi ko bhi kuch ho jata toh tum jante bhi ho..muze kis kis ko jawab dena padta..ye toh accha luck tha jo tum sab bach gaye..par ab media bhi iss kahbar ke piche pad gayi he..
Arjun was about to say something..
Comm.:had ho gayi he laperwahi ki arjun..now this is enough..aaj tumhare wajah se pure team ki jaan ja sakti thi..i cant tolerate this anymore..i m going to meeting DIG..n soon u will get ur dismiss letter..
Arjun just keep looking straight without showing any emotions on his face..
While all other etf team members look each other from corne of eyes..
Finally shree dare to speak..
Shree:but sir..arjun sir sahi keh rahe he..hame pura yakin he ke human organ trafficking chal raha he..
Liza:aur sir..hame uss truck se jo chemical mila he..woh chemical human organs store karne ke liye use hota he..
Aayesha:n I m sure sir..ke uss godown ke foresic analysis ke baad hame zarur kuch milega..
Chotu:aur sir..ham unn tak na pahoche iss liye hi toh unhone hame iss tarah bomb blast karke marne ki koshish ki..
Comm..glare all of them..
Sakshi:aur sir..arjun ne jaan buzkar hamari jaan dhoke me nahi dali..agar usse thoda sa bhi andaza hota ke waha aise kuch hone wala he..toh woh akela hi apni jaan khatare me dalta..par hame kuch nahi hone deta..
Chotu:yes sir..sakshi is right..ulta arjun sir ne toh hamari jaan bachayi he..
Shree:agar sir chahte toh apni jaan bachake waha se jaa sakte the..par unhone hame bachane ko jyada priority di.
Ayesha:aur sir..kuch had tak galti hamari bhi thi..agar ham savdhan rehate toh woh hame iss tarah pakad hi nahi pate..
Comm.:I cant belive this..tum sab log arjun ka sath de rahe ho..??aj tak meine arjun ke collegue staff se hamesha usaki complaints hi suni he..
None said anything...
Comm.:I don't think ke ye sari baate mera decision badal sakti he..
All look to each other..
Shree:sir..aaj sham tak culprit ko pakad ke dikhayege..aur ye human organ trafficking ka case he ye sabit karege..
All other etf members just nodded little bit..
Comm.:but agar tum ye sabit nahi kar paye..toh ..
Sakshi:ham sach ko samne lake rahege..
Comm. Nodded.
All come out of comm. Cabin..
Arjun don't said anything but his heart is overwhelmed looking his team mates love n respect for him..
They don't speak more in whole journey..
They almost have six-seven hours to solve the case..
Everyone get back to work..
Chotu:yaar..jo aadmi ki voice hamne suni thi..bomb blast hone se pehale..i think..i know him..
Shree:kya bol raha he..??he kyon woh..??
Chotu:prachand baba..
Aayesha:ye kaise ho sakta he..??
Sakshi:kyo nahi ho sakta..??yaad nahi..woh kya kya bol raha tha..jaise ye duniya naswar he..sab maya he..aatma amar he n all..
Shree:chotu..r u sure ki woh aawaz..usiki thi..??
Chotu:ha baba..i m sure..din raat toh muze woh aawaz sunani padti he...
Shree:matlab..??
Chotu:are meri aai..inn prachand baba ko bahot manti he..din bhar unke pravachan sunti rehati he cd player pe..
Aayesha:agar ye prachand baba he na..toh fir hamare liye toh kaam aasan ho jayega..
Arjun:itna bhi aasan nahi he..
Saying this he enter inside conference room..he had hear whole conversation..
Chotu:arjun sir is right..bina sabot ke ham usaki enquiry bhi nahi kar payege..usake aas-pass hamesha usake followers ki crowd hoti he..woh toh hame prachand baba ko hath bhi nahi lagane ddenge..aur itne crowd ko handle karna aasan nahi hoga..
Liza(coming inside conference room):I have something..
Everyone turn to her..
Liza:meine samples check kiye he jo hamne bomb blast ke bad uss godown se collect kiye he..aur ham ye sabit kar sakte he..ke waha human organs store kiye gaye the..
Arjun:shree..uss godown ke bare me kuch info mili..
Shree:sir woh godown ek mill ka tha..jo ab band ho gayi he..woh bahot dino tak khali tha..aur usake malik ko iss baat ki koi khabar nahi ke waha pe iss tarah se kuch illegal ho raha tha..
Aayesha:arjun sir..muze lagta he iss prachand baba se hi hame kuch mil sakta he..
Arjun:hmm...chotu..get ready...
They all come to prachand baba's aashram in disguse..chotu act as getting mad..(they said ke usake upar kisi bhoot ka saya he..)lol..
Prachand baba don't get their real identity..n he ask his men to take chotu for treatment..
They take chotu in special room..where they give him injection..he fells uncounsious..n then one doctor come..n they were planning to get chotu's kidney..but etf team rush inside..save chotu..n his kidney(lol..)
They caught prachand baba..n from baba they come to know one minister is also involved..
(not going deep in case..)
Finally they have finish all procedure..comm.agreed with arjun..n forget about his dismissal..
Etf taking sigh of relief..sitting in conference room..
Arjun come inside conference room..
Arjun:umm..der ho gayi he..u can leave..
All leave each other..
Sakshi:chotu..muze drop karoge..?
Chotu just nodded..
Everyone get up to leave..arjun is standing there in puzzled state to say or not..
All just look to him..they waited him to speak..
Arjun(hesitedly):umm...thank u to all..for supporting me..
All look each other..n the next second..arjun found himself hug by his whole team..
He too hug them back hesitedly..
After some seconds they broke n look to their arjun sir with teary eyes..
Arjun(hardly trying not to show his emotions):chalo..kafi raat ho gayi he..go..kal fir fir office me milana hi he muzse..
All smile looking to him..he just softly nodded his head..n leave to his cabin..
Sakshi(looking towards the direction he went):guy..pata he arjun ne subah jab sirf mein aur woh suv me godown ko aa rahe the toh kya kaha tha..??
Shree:kya..??
Sakshi:usane hame data tha na..toh baad me usse hi bura lag raha tha..usane kaha ke usse hame iss tarah scold nahi karna chahiye tha..aur..
Aayesha:aur kya..?
Sakshi:aur usane kaha..ke roshni ke baad bas etf hi usaki family he..
All get emotional..but happy hearing this..
After a while..
Chotu:chalo chalate he..
Liza:arjun sir ghar nahi jayege kya..?bahot raat ho gayi he..aur koi case bhi nahi..
Sakshi:aaj shayad woh office me hi rehana chahe..
Aayesha:aisa kyo..??
Sakshi:kyo ki aaj roshni ka birthday he..
All look to each other..
After a while..
Shree:chalo..chalate he..mana ke aaj arjun sir hamper jyada meherbaan he..par agar kahi apne khadoos avtar me wapas aa gaye toh raat bhar office me hi rukna padega..
All smile..n leave..
At the same time,in delhi.:-
Sameer rathod receive his phone which is continuosly ringing..its from comm. Of Mumbai..
Comm.:rathod..mein chahta hu ke tum apni team ko jald se jald join karo..
Rathod(puzzled):but sir hua kya he..?
Comm..:hua kya he..?rathod tum news nahi dekhte kya..??tumhari puri team marte marte bachi he..aur ye sab arjun ke karan hua he..
Rathod:sir..par rawte ne hi toh unhe bachaya he..aur itna bada human organ trafficking ka racket bhi pakada he..
Comm..:I appreciate his work rathod..but usape control rakhne ki zarurat he..nahi toh woh issi tarah sirf khud ki hi nahi dusaro ki bhi jaan khatare me dalta rahega..iss baar toh tum logo ke team mates ki request aur ye case solve hone ke wajah se meine usape koi action nahi liya..par aisa baar baar nahi ho sakta..he has to be controlled..aur ye kaam tumse accha koi nahi kar sakta..
Rathod:sir..par mera yaha ka case..
Comm..:u join etf Mumbai tomorrow..baki sab mein dekh lunga..
Rathod(took deep sigh):ok..sir..
He cut the phone..he frustradly move his hand through his hairs..
He took out a photo frame from his cupboard..
It's a photo of arjun sam n roshni..he lightly smile..
Sam(careess roshni's photo):kash tum hoti..toh sab kuch..sab kuch bilcul perfect hota..
He stared at the photo for some time..
Sam(caressing roshni's photo):happy birthday roshni...happy birthday..
At the same time..in Mumbai..
Etf office..arjun's cabin..
Arjun(caressing roshni's photo by his thumb):happy birthday roshni..happy birthday..
He started remembering every time he spend with roshni..
(I have made the video..song-lazmi..)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JWfYKAyWFao
Hope u like this video..
Precap:-
Sam joins team again..
N much more..
Stay tune..
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