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MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

Res

U updated after so long . I m not gonna unres so fast

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Sphinx.

@Sphinx.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#262

sami!! take ur time dear!! but want comments..and mou baby thanks for ur sweeett comments😃

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Dhivii ...Sorry darling... for commenting late...I read it half earlier, today I re-read again
Such a cutie & adorable update full of family masti 😆 & naughty hubby-wifey teasing 😳 ☺️

Karn with Bacha Party moments were so cute & playful 😳

I loved the part where Karna asks Uruvi whether she needs little Karn or little Uruvi... & the reply Kuruvi gave to him 😆 ...Uruvi is surely crazy about Karn 🤣

Kuruvi conversation about Dury is also well written...in this part...u & I think same that why Karn favoured Dury for the Hastinapur Throne

Now now... Uruvi & bacha party is going to attack Karn...poor Karn baby 😆

Contuniue Soon Dhivii... I cant wait to see Karn vs Uruvi-Bacha party fight 😉 😆

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Sphinx.

@Sphinx.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#264

oh hemu..dear..how long I have been waiting for your comments..😭..missed your rasgollah comments.

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi
Dhivii ...Sorry darling... for commenting late...I read it half earlier, today I re-read again
Such a cutie & adorable update full of family masti 😆 & naughty hubby-wifey teasing 😳 ☺️

Karn with Bacha Party moments were so cute & playful 😳

I loved the part where Karna asks Uruvi whether she needs little Karn or little Uruvi... & the reply Kuruvi gave to him 😆 ...Uruvi is surely crazy about Karn 🤣 yes..exactly hemu..uruvi is surely addicted to extreme emotions

Kuruvi conversation about Dury is also well written...in this part...u & I think same that why Karn favoured Dury for the Hastinapur Throne Yeah!! hemu..we both think same..that is true sweet friends as well as karnali na

Now now... Uruvi & bacha party is going to attack Karn...poor Karn baby 😆

Contuniue Soon Dhivii... I cant wait to see Karn vs Uruvi-Bacha party fight 😉 😆

😳 😳 😳

Thank u my sweetu..@ RED no..that is left to ur imaginations..

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sania_58

@sania_58

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#265

woww, woww, woww👏

another lovely update👏

u written it so beautifully.amazing.

in this part, loved to see Karna as a complete family man.

Karna & Uruvi shared some very cute moments.

superb, awsome, brillaint.

continue soon.

btw, u wrote every part with perfection & create magic with words.👍🏼

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Sphinx.

@Sphinx.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#266

thank u for ur sweet comments dear

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Sphinx.

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#267

PART XII

Edited by dhivyakrish31 - 11 years ago

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Sphinx.

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#268

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#269

Superbb update Dhivzzz di🤗
Kadu kadu kadulicious aww their Fship I love it calm as moonlight...blazing as sunlight...deep as ocean nd shining like stars also dury nd Karn I love this sakha sakhi bond too much😳
awww Uruvi gettin j or envious of bond Kadu share is so cute...I particularly liked that line when she was staring single in crowd lovely presentation with apt words😃
ur take on Bhanu nd Dury is very interesting looking forward how it unfolds

Edited by .Sanskruti - 11 years ago