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Trisha

@-Trishh-

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: putturani
Ooh you should write that songfic Trish!!

Yess I really want too! Actually I really wanna read this. Too bad that I gotta write it first:)

But I have no idea at all on how to start this :(

Can you suggest ideas?

Like this is the first paragraph:

Woo girl you're shining
Like a 5th Avenue diamond
And they don't make you like they used to
You're never going out of style

The song isn't going along with the sequence of my thoughts, if that makes any sense at all😆

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: putturani
Also, another besharam idea came to my head: have you noticed Pragya never calls him by his first name? What would it take, for him to get her to say "Abhi"? Might need plenty of convincing 😉😉

RANIII YOU MADE ME DO THIS

WARNING: ADULT CONTENT BELOW

DRABBLE: WINNING

*context: happily married abhigya with an active and fun sex life*

a: chashmish i just want to warn you, i have a goal tonight.

p: ahh yes, like when your goal last week was to make me come eight times in a row? i told you we're not doing that again, i felt dead by the end

a: but what a beautiful death it was, right baby???

p: whatever you know i don't give compliments.

a: sure, your orgasm is my compliment, but a guy likes to hear a word of praise now and then!

p: a word, not a scream or moan?

a: yeah yeah chashmish, no more sarcasm. my goal for you tonight is to say my name.

p: ok, here i'll say it - "my name"

a: what did i say about sarcasm!

p: what do you mean, say your name? what kind of a goal is that?

a: well as gratifying as it is when you call out "oooh" and "ahhh" and "God!!!" and "meri bhagwaaan!", i need to actually hear you acknowledge who it is that is bringing you so much ecstacy

p: that's silly, you know it's you

a: but do YOU know it's me?

p: what? of course i know it's you don't be silly. accha no more talking rockstar, i don't want eight times but one or two times i should definitely have tonight.

a: no...you won't have any climaxes at all until you can ask me, by name...

p: what!!!

a: there i made it easy for you...just say "abhi, please make me come!"

p: I...I can't say that!

a: why!

p: i can say...i can say..mm-make me...make me come.

a: very good baby, but not good enough

p: fine! fine, what will you do if i won't say your name? you won't touch me? well, your loss.

a: oh no no no you're not getting away that easy...and i'm definitely going to make my goal tonight, you'll see

p: i...oh...what are you doing!

a: this chathri needs to come off, i'm not in the mood for games with clothes tonight

p: well...ok...

*abhigya undress*

*abhigya fall to the bed and start kissing and making out and so on*

*pragya realizes that though abhi is caressing her, he is not touching her hot spots, and she starts to get annoyed*

*pragya pulls abhi's hands to where she wants them but he keeps pulling them away*

p: arre!! rockstar what are you doing

a: not rockstar, chashmish. abhi.

p: uff you're being silly! and you're calling me chashmish, why do i have to use your name?

a: you know, that is a very good point. i've never really used your name in bed either, have i?

*abhi leans to whisper in her ear, his lips brushing against her skin*

a: tonight, you're going to give me everything i want...pragya

*pragya shivers; him saying her name in that tone must be the most incredible thing she's ever heard...*

*abhi starts to touch her again, and this time he pays due attention to the hotspots*

*but just when she's getting close to her moment, he switches to another part of her body*

*he does this several times and she gets angry*

p: arre! please just finish what you started!

a: please, who?

p: please, mr. most annoying husband in the universe!

a: nope, wrong answer...

p: arghhh!!!

*abhi laughs and kisses her; pragya settles down and decides that even if he won't give her satisfaction, she won't be the same way with him*

*abhi tries to resist and redirect pragya but there's no stopping a woman on a mission...and besides abhi is really just very very vulnerable to his chashmish*

*pretty soon abhi is mad with arousal and thus, with regret, he abandons his goal for the night - he has to have her, name or no name*

*abhigya come together; abhigya lose themselves to the moment; abhigya come together*

*in the afterglow they roll apart, and abhi catches his breath and tells himself that so what if he failed tonight, he'll try again next time, sooner or later he'll find a way to make her take his name, she won't win*

*pragya enjoys the last waves of her bliss and catches her breath and cools down. she is happy that she has won and decides that he should have a consolation prize*

*pragya snuggles close to abhi, and pulls his arm around her*

*abhi automatically bends to kiss the top of her head and cuddles her closer*

*pragya sighs happily and flings her hand across his stomach. then just as she's drifting off to sleep, she says into his ear...*

p: thanks for tonight...abhi

*abhi jolts awake in disbelief and pure elation, he tugs her on top of him and wants to celebrate with her, all of a sudden he's ready for round two - but haaayeee she really is asleep!!! this chashmish is just so...so...perfect...☺️*

*abhi falls asleep replaying the sound of pragya's sleepy "abhi" in his mind...and making vague plans on how he can get her to say it again...at his choosing! because he knows that she thinks she's won, but he's ABHI, and he will win in the end*

END

Edited by -mina- - 10 years ago

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Diahh

@Diahh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#553

Mina Di Mina Di Mina Di!!!

NO!!

Minamma Minamma minammaaa!!!! 🤪

UFF the drabbles!! The drabbles!! The drabbles!!

AbhiGya. Tannu one.🤣

Then Suhaag Raat one!🤣😉👏

Then then then closet one and then shower one!!! 😎

Loving the Drabble spree!!! ⭐️

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UltimateFangirl

@UltimateFangirl

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#554

Hey I got an idea...

Why don't we write a sentence and the next person has to post the next line. And no Rules whatsoever! I think it'd be awesome

That for an abhigya FanFic

Edited by UltimateFangirl - 10 years ago

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: -Trishh-

Yess I really want too! Actually I really wanna read this. Too bad that I gotta write it first:)

But I have no idea at all on how to start this :(

Can you suggest ideas?

Like this is the first paragraph:

Woo girl you're shining
Like a 5th Avenue diamond
And they don't make you like they used to
You're never going out of style

The song isn't going along with the sequence of my thoughts, if that makes any sense at all😆

Hmm Trish to me that seems like...say Pragya's saris get more elegant and she starts to look classy and pretty but in an understated way; Abhi sees that she has that traditional kind of beauty; daadi gives her khandaani jewellery that would look tacky on most people but Pragya pulls it off and Abhi is impressed...

or if you want to be less superficial, he could appreciate her confidence, how she doesn't feel the need to change herself for people or for appearance's sake...

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: UltimateFangirl
Hey I got an idea...
Why don't we write a sentence and the next person has to post the next line. And no Rules whatsoever! I think it'd be awesome

That for an abhigya FanFic

it's a good idea but the AT gets kind of crazy with cross talk and when we've attempted this sort of game in the past it hasn't quite worked. this would be a good game of the week, except you'd have to make it KKB rather than abhigya. and unfortunately we're not allowed to have threads for just random games. sooo i'm not sure how would be best to play??

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: Diahh
Mina Di Mina Di Mina Di!!!

NO!!

Minamma Minamma minammaaa!!!! 🤪

UFF the drabbles!! The drabbles!! The drabbles!!

AbhiGya. Tannu one.🤣

Then Suhaag Raat one!🤣😉👏

Then then then closet one and then shower one!!! 😎

Loving the Drabble spree!!! ⭐️

oh chotu i was scared!!! for a moment i thought you were telling me NO!!! for something! like as if i was a misbehaving dog 😆

but i see that all you meant was to call for minamma instead of mina di, and that's ok 😳

did you see the latest one 😉

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#558

i want to write tapori pragya dialogues

someone give me a drabble excuse

pleeease

that being said all the time i spend writing drabbles is time i don't spend working on the updates for "proposing" and "anarkali" 😳

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#559

MINAAA!!

It's like you pulled this one straight out of my head!! I really loved, loved this part:

a: you know, that is a very good point. i've never really used your name in bed either, have i?

*abhi leans to whisper in her ear, his lips brushing against her skin*

a: tonight, you're going to give me everything i want...pragya

Made ME shiver sitting hundreds of miles away. ☺️ This is TOO good! And I loved that at the end when she says his name on her own terms, instead of his. Nice twist.. 👏

Seriously, straight out of my head!! Now where are those other drabbles of yours Diahh was mentioning?