Broken Promises ~ Collab Tanya N Sumaiya (Chap 16 n 17 Updtd 18th Apr) - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
Loved it...
So zain is planning to make aaliya jealous... Cool...
Amazing...
Continue soon...
And thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful chapter...
Loved it..
Continue soon..
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Only for you, Sumaiya, I didn't update it soon. Same day update krti toh phir to mei gyi thi na? Sorry all, but this was for Sumi. Ok? Now back to the chapter, wonderful, sorry comment nahi kiya coz mera phone hi kharab hai, I have to get my laptop. So coming to the update, here you go!
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Zain's Room
Narrator's POV

"Bahaut ho chuka Riz, ab bas! I can't tolerate that a*****e cheating on Aaliya. Meine jo bhi kiya, uske liye kiya hai. If she doesn't get it, its ok. But I can't tolerate ANYONE, I repeat ANYONE, cheating on Aaliya. She doesn't love him, as far as I know, and don't want to cheat on him in any case. And I- I kissed her. Uski mangni ho chuki hai for god's sake! And I-" Zain suddenly felt out of words. He had did something he wasn't allowed to do. He had made Aaliya, HIS Aaliya, cheat on someone. Irrespective of that Jerk's intentions!

"Zain, look-" Rizwan was cut off as he heard someone cry for help from the window. They both looked at each other, then ran towards the window. To their biggest surprise, they saw AALIYA on the window!

"Aaliya?" Zain was shocked.

"You Jerk. Itne gande back door entrance rkhta hai koi? Help me now." Zain pulled Aaliya by her waist. Riz walked to his room, letting alone Zain and Aaliya, the two lovebirds, to talk. Zain brought Aaliya on the floor as she heaved a sigh of relief.

"Wh-" Zain was cut off as she hugged him suddenly. Zain was dumbstruck. Was he supposed to hug her back? Slowly he wrapped his arms around her, too.

"I am so so sorry Zain." She hugged him even tightly, not letting him go.

"For what, Aaliya?" Suddenly, he felt his shirt go wet. He pulled her back but she denied looking into his eyes and she just hugged him tightly. Not letting him go at any cost. Zain took him into a bear hug.

"I acted to rudely to you." She nuzzled into his chest soaking the warmth, "When I didn't even know the truth. I am sorry Zain!"

"Shhh.." He soothed her, "How do you know now?"



FLASHBACK
Aaliya's Room
Aaliya's POV

"How dare he kiss me? How dare he touch me? How dare-" I was thinking about all those moments. I cheated on Zeeshan! I CHEATED. I, Aaliya Ghulam Haider, C-H-E-A-T-E-D ON MY FIANCEE! All because of my ex. That ex, who ran away from taking any comitment seriously.

"Aaliya-" Aisha entered.

"What happened?"

"I need to show you the truth!" Di pulled me outside.



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Padh lia na?

Now comment.

Sumi will continue.
Now you decide.

Thanks a lot for liking this SS! :)


-Tani.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was small tanu and now sumi update fast I need to know more
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nyc tanya...
Amazing update ..
Sumii
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Both parts are amazing...
Awesome !!
Poor zain trying soo much:(
Finally aliya found out truth ... :)
Waiting to know more ...
Continue soon ...!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg why did u leave it on cliffhanger
pls update soon
looking foward to next chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
Seriously AISA koi end karta kya...😡
Anyways...sweet and short chappy...
Awww...Zaya hug...😳
Dude...Rizwan is like some astrologer...BHABHI Pehle hi bana DIYA...😆
Anyways continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww..
Thanx Tanya for not updating on that day itself 😆
I swear u finish it off tabhi n i'm lyk "abhi toh update kiya tha ab phirse karna padega?" 😆
Lol no seriously Thanx A Ton 😳

Cumng Back to the chap..
Sorry for the late cummnt..
We'll send the PM's now..
I was travelling yesterday so couldnt reply or send PM's..
But the chap.. Tannu.. Cliffhanger huh?? I lyk it.. Isi mei hi mazaa aata hai lol...
Amazing Chap Tannu 👏
I'll update this soon HopeFully 😆

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