war between US --- FAN FICTION---- CHAP 5 UPDATED - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Awesome update
Precap sounds interesting
Hope sanyukta's family support her engineering
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
chapter - 3
recap - vids - rd's slave for 1 day, fresher's party
in fresher's party
all started laughing at randhir...
wahan rd ki ek pic lagi thi --
jispar likha tha -- contact me girls 9892748400
rd(in mind) - what the hell? yeh kisne kiya hoga??
1 girl - hi rd... i want to dance with u..
1 boy - bhai mast pic hai!
rd - go to hell!!!
rd - (in mind) saara mood spoil kar diya..!
rd - yoyo i am going
after some time
yoyo - paaji chalo party mein nahi aana toh yeh lijiye..! (alchol )
rd - 😡 meri shakal kya dekh raha hai jaa...
sanyu - kya hua shekhawat mood spoil ho gaya? bura lag raha hai?
rd - yeh sab tumne kiya tha? meine sorry bola toh tha! idiot
sanyu - sorry my foot... kab bola?
(sanyu ne bhi alchol pee thi)
rd - vidushi ne sorry card nahi diya??
sanyukta - nah!
rd - lazy vidushi ! .. waise you don't deserve MY sorry...
sanyukta - huh! whatever!
sanyukta - btw why u hate me?
rd - kyun tumhe mujhe apna boyfriend banana hai?
sanyukta - nah!!
rd - say sorry to me! jo aaj tumne party mein kiya!
sanyukta - u don't deserve my sorry!

next day
vardhan - so guys ... u have to make a robot!
rd - its simple... but sir banana kyun hai?
vardhan - no its not simple... college mein fire extin --- nahi hai so u have to make a FIRE FIGHTING robot ... 2 days! ... yeh exam kaa part hai.. !
and pairs are
rd - sanyukta
jignesh - kaustuki
vidushi - sahil
after some time
rd - i will do this
sanyukta - alone?... u can't
rd - i'll
sanyukta - mein vd sir se complain kar dungi
rd - aur aata bhi kya hai? mein complain kar dungi... :D :D
sanyukta- look .. u
rd - fine. karlo ... ehsan yaad rakhna
sanyukta - 😲😲
note --- i made some changes in my ff
sanyukta's mom is dead. and sanyukta hates her dad ..
but why sanyukta hates her dad??
rd - yeh baar baar call kyun kar rahi hai...
(renuka ka call)
sanyukta - rd u are disurbing us... call utha kar ek baar baat karlo
rd - tumhe kya mein call uthaun yaa naa..
sanyu - whatever...
rd - watch out! u
sanyukta - aauchhh... mera haath..
parth came
parth - are u okay? .. 😲
precap - fire fighting robot gayab ...

sorry for late!!!!!















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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
After reading all the parts
Ur story reminded me of OLD SH.
How sandhir used to fight 😊😊
Really enjoyed reading it.
But please don't discontinue the ff and do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: anjipankaj

After reading all the parts

Ur story reminded me of OLD SH.
How sandhir used to fight 😊😊
Really enjoyed reading it.
But please don't discontinue the ff and do continue



thank u so much!
and i will not discontinue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Awsme update yr
Ir really reminds me of old shq
I badly misses those days


Luved it to the core

Wtng for next
Update soon

Luv u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
hey its really nice story line yaar
i read it from starting and all the chapter are awesome
continue sooon
thanks for pm
next part soon
love
sakshi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
THANK YOU SO MUCH
FOR YOUR :) COMMENTS..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
I found dis ff just now
its awesome
purana sh yaad dila diya
bt ye parth kaha se tapak pada bich me achanak😲
continue soon
plz pm me wen u update

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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: sweetshre

I found dis ff just now
its awesome
purana sh yaad dila diya
bt ye parth kaha se tapak pada bich me achanak😲
continue soon
plz pm me wen u update



i ' ll pm u for sure ... 😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Read all 3 parts in a go ... plz continue soon !

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