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Posted: 10 years ago
Min darling...wow..
It was utterly sweet and old school romance...Loved it...
The song...was just perfect...and Abhi...loved him...so well and beautifully described..


Simply amazing dear...keep writing more dear and keep rocking
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Diahh

MINMIN MEHRA!!!! COME HERE!! HUGS YOU TIGHT!!!

UFFF!!!

What can I say!!! 😲 just going to wait a second and form a sentence to express how I truly feel about this one!! 😛

Beautiful! Amazing! Sweet! Superb! Fabulous! Oh the list goes on! This is a dream come true scenario for any AbhiGya shipper Minmin!! I love it love it love it so so so much!! This is your best song fic till day!!! ⭐️

Thank you Min for this wonderful story!! What a treat on a lazy Saturday morning!!! ❤️

I can't even form a sentence about how much I ❤️ this song fic 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is sort of a cheating songfic because I skipped a lot of verses...but it wasn't supposed to be a songfic, it just kind of happened! 😳 Hope you guys like it 😊



You Belong With Me by Taylor Swift

You're on the phone with your girlfriend"she's upset,
She's going off about something that you said
'Cause she doesn't get your humor like I do.

Abhi's on the bed, his phone to his ear, trying to manao an annoyed Tanu because she didn't like some moment of nokjhok she saw between AbhiGya, or because he had to take Dadi/Daasi's side against her, or whatever it is that's got her upset today - and Pragya walks out of the closet, carrying her folded bedding, shaking her head and laughing to herself a little that he's stuck on a call like that, but inside she also feels a little bad for him...

But she wears short skirts
I wear t-shirts


Another party, another occasion where all eyes in the room are on supermodel Tanu in the latest off-the-catwalk couture while Pragya is in a sari that would please Daadi and her Maa and she really doesn't care if Abhi doesn't look at her once, of course she doesn't.

Dreaming about the day when you wake up and find
That what you're looking for has been here the whole time.


Pragya's used to sleeping on the balcony after all these weeks. Most nights she has plenty to keep her mind busy until sleep claims her, but on this particular night all she can think about is how that day she had to watch Abhi deal with Tanu embarrassing him by being clingy.

Oh, he's always telling her that they're happy together, that Tanu is his perfect match and all he needs is for her to leave his life and they'd be all set, but Pragya can see that he's not happy with her, really, that Tanu doesn't understand anything about what's important to him and that's why they keep getting into fights on a daily basis.

And she knows it's Abhi's own fault for continuing the relationship but still Pragya feels bad for how Tanu ruins his mood. And her last thought as she drifts off to sleep is that it's too bad he'll never see how much his unhappiness actually bothers her.

If you could see
That I'm the one
Who understands you.
Been here all along.
So, why can't you see"
You belong with me,
You belong with me?


Abhi thanks Pragya for taking care of Daadi, and occasionally he'll even compliment how she handles Bunty-Babli or how she manages the cranky Daasis, but he's still convinced that she doesn't belong in his world, that they have nothing in common, that she's not the one for him.

And Pragya tells herself that she takes care of everyone in her sasural because it's her duty and because they're good people and caring comes naturally to her and a hundred thousand other excuses but the truth is that some tiny part of her still just wants his approval, and since he won't accept her care and understanding the best she can do is apply those to the people who matter most to him in the world.

And she doesn't even bother dreaming anymore that she could ever be one of those people, what's the point of dreaming of what will never be?

And you've got a smile
That can light up this whole town.
I haven't seen it in awhile
Since she brought you down.

You say you're fine"I know you better than that.
Hey, what you doing with a girl like that?


Abhi's problems with Tanu are getting worse, because ever since Daadi's coma Abhi has stopped talking about how it's only a matter of time until Pragya leaves his life. He expects her to stay as long as Daadi needs her, and Tanu can't stand that because that's a timeline with no obvious end.

Abhi has his hands full balancing Tanu's demands for time with Daadi's expectation that he further his marriage with Pragya, and he also has to worry about Daadi's illness and a sudden problem with the family's finances. He takes his temper out on Pragya by being ruder than ever most days, and at first that upsets her and she answers back to him sharply, but then she starts to understand what's going on in his mind and she handles everything much more calmly.

And he's confused out of his mind that no matter what he says to her he can't seem to push her away. At the end of the day she's always there with some silly little Chashmish joke that sends him to bed with a smile, and every morning his cinnamon coffee is waiting for him even when he wakes up before she has a chance to terrorise his ears with her morning bhajans.

She wears high heels,
I wear sneakers.


Bulbul and Aaliya gang up to make Pragya dress differently for Abhi's CD launch party. They both have their own reasons for wanting Tanu out of Abhi's life, so they set aside their differences with the goal of making the rockstar see that he has a wife he should be paying attention to.

Pragya flat out refuses to wear the western dresses they bring her so they finally compromise on a sari that is more elegant than her usual style, with a more daring than usual blouse. And Pragya feels ridiculous and not at all like herself in this fancy sari and the tottering high heels Bulbul insisted on. Pragya's not comfortable at the party even though a lot more of Abhi's friends are talking to her than at any of the past parties.

As for Abhi his eyes open wide when he sees her but he doesn't say or do anything out of the ordinary and Pragya is convinced that the whole night is a failure. But then Tanu suddenly leaves mid-way, and Abhi comes to take her arm, and he still doesn't say anything but she spends the rest of the night by his side.

Standing by and waiting at your backdoor.
All this time how could you not know, baby?
You belong with me,
You belong with me.

You belong with me.

Have you ever thought just maybe
You belong with me?

You belong with me.


Pragya does have her pride, though it goes into hibernation for awhile.

Eventually she really does stop wishing that Abhi would want her. She starts to treat their marriage like the friendly compromise it's supposed to be, and she backs off from the overly-committed wife act.

It's hard to go against what comes naturally but she's trying to establish distance. She's not quite ready to start making plans for what will happen when they finally get divorced because there's still no definite date for that, but she resolves to go back to being her own person.

She decided long back that she wasn't going to fight for him, and now she's decided that she's not going to just wait for him to notice her either.

Abhi doesn't understand why she suddenly seems to be colder, and he can't get her to talk about it, as any of his questions are met with that determined friendliness that makes him feel bad for expecting more from her. And he really starts to worry about why his Chashmish is growing apart from him, and this sense that he might somehow be losing her is what finally makes him realize that he wants to be her husband.

And within days of that realization it's bye-bye Tanu and hello mission manao Chashmish. And the mission ends up taking rather a long time, much longer than Abhi would have thought, but one day he does finally win her trust, and her heart, and gives his in return. Because by then they both understand that they belong together.

Edited by -mina- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

so these are like...drabble songfics? i'd love to write them out fully but i don't know if i ever will but i can't get them out of my head so here, have a drabbly version :p

and yeah..i've got a lot of taylor swift on the mind today 😆

originally posted on abhigya AT #67!


we are never ever getting back together
by taylor swift
  • after that long stretch of time when abhi didn't want to be with her in the first place,
  • then the fake divorce and almost wedding with suresh,
  • then a misunderstanding about tanu being pregnant,
  • then abhi pushing her away out of guilt for not being good enough -
  • pragya decides that that's it, they are definitely over.
  • she'll find some other happy ending for her life because she's done putting up with the rockstar and their roller coaster relationship.
  • he tries to make her understand that they just need another chance and attempts to reach her by phone many times
  • and when that fails he starts coming to chembur and he enlists everyone from bulbul and purvi to rockstar daadi to even suresh to help make her understand that they're really meant to be.
  • but even with all her friends and family taking his side, pragya is determined that there's no future for them.
  • she tells abhi "i used to think that we were forever ever and i used to say never say never but we are never ever ever getting back together."
  • ...but at the end of the day abhi still manages to convince her, because of course, they are meant to be :P

blank spaces by taylor swift
  • pragya and abhi resolve their differences and have a happy marriage
  • and abhi helps pragya discover her wild side
  • she's still pragya, but she's not afraid to take what she wants from the world anymore
  • when she misunderstands and thinks abhi's cheating on her, abhi learns that he's actually kind of created a monster.
  • can he calm her down before her resolve to make his life hell destroys them both?
  • answer: yes, he can, and no harm no foul by the end, but it's a harrowing few weeks as pragya's philosophy of marriage is:
  • so it's gonna be forever or it's gonna go down in flames / you can tell me when it's over if the high was worth the pain / cause you know i love the players and you love the game

Edited by -mina- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful piece of writings yet again from you Mina ! Kudos !
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww thank you lasya, so glad you enjoyed!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello

Okay I was never going to post this . but I made my friend read this . and she challenged me to post this😕 . so here I am with my first song- fic.

So before reading this keep these few things in mind . tanu is nowhere in the picture . aaliya has changed for good . abhi and pragya become good friends and decide to stay together until the health condition of dadi and sarla maa is better . so after sarlaa maa and dadi are well they get divorced .And this whole thing is based on abhi

Song- let her go by passengers

Well you only need the light when it's burning low

Only miss the sun when it starts to snow

Only know you love her when you let her go

It had been six months since their divorce but he could not get her out of his mind . he knew he loved her but it was too late. He had always loved her. Maybe even when he claimed to hate her . but now it was too late . she was gone and only because he let her go.

Only know you've been high when you're feeling low

Only hate the road when you're missin' home

Only know you love her when you let her go

And you let her go

He didn't understand how valuable the moments he spent with her were. The small bickering's and the eye-locks and the accidental touches . he didn't know when they became such a huge part of his life or rather became his life .

Yes he loved her but he wished he didn't because she was gone

Staring at the bottom of your glass

Hoping one day you'll make a dream last

But dreams come slow and they go so fast

You see her when you close your eyes

Maybe one day you'll understand why

Everything you touch surely dies

he had been frustrated when he could not forget her . he would feel angry when he would see her everywhere . but most of all he had been confused . he didn't understand why this was happening . but slowly he understood. He loved her .

But you only need the light when it's burning low

Only miss the sun when it starts to snow

Only know you love her when you let her go

he had realized her importance only when she was gone. With her gone he was life - less and empty . she was the light of his life . she was the warmth he always craved for. Maybe this explained why he always felt complete with her in his arms . she was the only source where he would find the calmness and peace he never had .

Only know you've been high when you're feeling low

Only hate the road when you're missin' home

Only know you love her when you let her go

He realized how happy he was with her only when he was not with her . he knew he needed just one thing . her. She would calm down the storm he was . he wanted the times to come back . the times he was with her .

When he had thought of divorcing her he knew it would hurt her for she had feelings for him . but he wanted her to begin again . he wanted to free her from the mess he had created of their lives. Little did he know that somewhere between this mess was what he needed. He now knew how wrong he was when he thought that he would miss her sometimes. Darn!! He missed her everyday everywhere. he missed the way she would solve his problems .he missed the way she would come up with beautiful lyrics for his songs. He missed how she would wake him up with the perfect cup of coffee. But most of all he missed her eyes . the deep mesmerizing eyes . he missed how he would get lost in her eyes. he wanted to get lost in her eyes, in her . he wanted to run away .He missed her . he craved for her.

Staring at the ceiling in the dark

Same old empty feeling in your heart

'Cause love comes slow and it goes so fast

it took him one year of togetherness to fall in love with her and six months of separation to realize it . but just one day to take it all away .

he would sit in his room most of the times and he would remember all the moments he spent with her. But now the moments were just distant memories of the times which now seemed like a fairytale .

Well you see her when you fall asleep

But never to touch and never to keep

'Cause you loved her too much

And you dived too deep

he would dream of her when he slept. Every night. He would dream of her being in the place where she truly belonged- his arms . he would dream of her eyes. but then he would wake up to the same emptiness every morning . there were times when he would wish he never woke up. He wanted to stay in his dreams forever. Because it was the only place he would find solace. He would find her .

And you let her go (oh, oh, ooh, oh no)

And you let her go (oh, oh, ooh, oh no)

Will you let her go?

But he had let her go. She was gone and this was the painful truth. He always thought separation would be hard for her . but it was hell for him . she went away. She left him . but she took away his life with her.

He knew he wanted her and he was going to get her back

And you let her go

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Posted: 10 years ago
RESS

UNRES

It 's really FANTASTIC Baachu!!! i love it so much and thanks to your friend for making you post it!!

Beautiful way to explore Abhi...makes sense that he would be so late to realize...he is exactly the type to not know what he has until it's gone...love how you described that he didn't miss her sometimes but everyday...how he found peace with her in his arms...I think you just perfectly described why these two could be so good together, even though you didn't show them together! Love love love!!!

awesome song choice too, could hear it playing in my head as i read. write more baachu!! song fics or drabbles or anything!! would love to read more from you :)
Edited by -mina- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww, Nimmy! Pining Abhi. It might even suit the situation when she is gonna get shot at the end of kidnapping track and goes into coma or something.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Tia-

Aww, Nimmy! Pining Abhi. It might even suit the situation when she is gonna get shot at the end of kidnapping track and goes into coma or something.

thankyou tia 😳
yes it will suit the situation
but i never thought of it
i was going to use this in my fic
but my fic was getting to nowhere so decided to write this anyway

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