Broken Promises ~ Collab Tanya N Sumaiya (Chap 16 n 17 Updtd 18th Apr) - Page 17

Awesome update.poor Zain Aliya didn't lesson him once.I hope she get to know about Zeeshan & her parents truth.thanks for pm.

Amazing part ...!!
Feeling very bad for zain:(
Waiting to c how zain saves aliya from that idiot zeeshan ...
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chapter is awesome
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Part 5 - 9 all in one go...loved the updates.

Tanya Agar Jaldhi Update Kiya toh Maarungi tumhe lol.. 😆
Tum ussi din update kardeti ho aur mei mushkil mei aajati hoon lol 😆


Mr Khan : kya?? Tum usse dhoka doge?
Zeeshan : aur Nahi toh kya? Mei kya pagal hoon jo aaliya jaisi behnji se shaadi karunga?? Usko khabhi dekha aapne?? Kitne puraane khayalaat hai uske.. Par meri Sara aisi nahi hai.. She's hot and happening.. Aaliya se toh mei sirf uske paise aur property ke liye shaadi kar raha hoon.. Jaise hi nikaah hoga aur jaisi hi uski property meri naam hojaayegi mei usse talaaq dekar sara ke paas chala jaunga..
Mr.Khan : manna padega Zeeshan.. Plan to tumhara bahut hi kamaal ka hai.. Par agar kisi ko iske baare mei pata chal gaya toh?
Zeeshan : nahi hoga.. Maine bahut ache se planning ki hai.. Aur agar malum ho b jaata hai toh kya farak padega.. Aaliya ke us abu ko toh mei ek chutki mei pata sakta hoon.. Bewakoof hai woh aadmi.. Samajta hai mujhse behtar ladka uski beti ko aur kahi nahi milega*starts Laughing*
Zain : Kameene teri toh *starts muvigg forward to hit him*
Rizwan : kya kar rahaa hai zain? Pagal hai kya??*stops him from gng towards zeeshan*
Zain : us saale ka mooh todunga mei.. Himmat kaise huwi uski meri aaliya.. Meri aaliya ke baare mei yeh sab bolne ki.. Chhod mujhe rizwan*tries to free himself*
Rizwan : zain u'r drunk.. Aur yeh tym sahi nahi hai usse baat karne ka.. Badi mushkil se maine bhabhi .. Matlab aaliya ko yahaan se bhagaya.. Ab agar tu tamasha karega toh shayad woh wapaas aajayegi..
Zain : par usko sabaq seekhAna zaruri hai rizwan..
Rizwan : haan toh seekhayenga nuh bro.. Par aaj nahi .. Kal
Zain : par
Rizwan : plz zain.. Apne liye toh nahi .. Aaliya ke liye.. Soch agar use pata chalega ki tune zeeshan ke saath haata paayi ki hai yoh usse kaisa feel hoga.. Pehle hi tujhe galat samjti hai.. Iske baad toh teri shakal b nahi dekhegi.. Chal yahaan se plz*drags zain to their car n drives back to home*



Zain's Room

Zain: Tu Mujhe Ghar Kyun Lekar Aaya ?? Wahi us kameeneka mooh todh deta mei aaj..
Rizwan : isiliye tujhe ghar le aaya.. Bro u'r drunk..abhi sojaa..kal subaj dekhlenge us kameene ko..
Zain : himmat kaise huwi uski meri Aaliya ko dhoka dene ki.. Usko mei chodunga nahi*falls on the bed .. N dozes off to sleep*
Rizwan : acha huwa so gaya... Mei b rest karleta hoon*closes the door of zain's room n goes to the other room*

Zain : ouccch... Mera sarr*holds his head .. He's still drunk.. Has flashbacks of zeeshan talking to Mr. khan n bhagoying aaliya from the hotel*
Aaliya.. Mujhe usse baat karni hogi..abhi issi waqt.. Usse samjhaana hoga.. Usse bata hoga ki woh zeeshan ko jaisa samjhti hai woh waisa nahi hai.. Bal ke ek number ka kameena hai..*checks if riz is up.. Thn leaves*


Aaliya's House


ain : aaj phir se chilaayegi mujhe yahan dekh kar.. Par i dont care.. Mujhe andar jaana hi hoga..*goes through the window... Only to find aaliya staring at Their Pic with tears in her eyes.. He stops after he sees her*
Zain (to himself) : i'm sorry aaliya.. Maine jo kiya.. Woh mujhe nahi karna chahiye tha... Par mei kya karta.. Ab mujhe kisi aur kisi b baat ka koi farak nahi padhta.. Mei tumhe ab chodh kar nahi jaaunga.. We'll be back together... I promise...

Aaliya ..*comes forward*
Aaliya : Jaao Yahaan se.. Kahaan nuh mujhe aise mat satao.. Kitne baar aise dikhte rahoge tum?? Tum nahi ho yahaan.. Mei kyun tumhe yahaan apne kamre mei dekhti rehti hoon?? Tum kyun meri zindagi se nahi jaate?? Meri mangni hochuki hai aur mei ab bhi .. Itna sab hone ke bawajud tumhare baare me soch rahin hoon.. Kyun?? Just get out of brain n heart damn it*breaks down*
Zain : aaliya*touches her shoulder.. She gets alarmed..*
Aaliya : tum? Yahaan?? Sach mei *touches his hand to make sure if he's there*
How dare u?? Himmat kaisi huwi idhar aane ki?*angry*
Zain : mai toh..
Aaliya : zain meri magni hochuki hai zeeshan se.. Ab mei sirf uski hoon.. Chale jaao yahaan se..
Mei tumse nafrat karti hoon.. I hate u..
Zain : like hell u do.. Abbi maine tumhari saari baatein sunni.. Zeeshan se magni huwi hai or soch mere baare mei rahi ho?? Uski hone ka dawaa karti ho lekin aaj b mujhe apne aap ke dil aur dimaag mei basaaye rakha hai... Mujhse kehti ho ki mujhse nafrat karti ho aur hamari photo ko aise dekhti ho jaise ki woh haqeeqat ho.. I know u still love me aaliya..i love u too.. Hum dono phir se ek saath.. We can make it aaliya.. Trust me..*cups her face*
Aaliya : trust u?? Trust u?? After all u've done to me trust u?? Bada asaan hai kehna zain.. Apne aap ko meri jagah rakh kar dekho.. Agar yahi maine tumhare saath kiya hota toh? Kya karte tum?? Huh batao kya karte tum??*starts hitting him on his chest*
Zain : shayad wahi karta jo tum karrahi ho..lekin ek baar tumhari baat zarur sunta*pins her to the wall .. Angry*
Aaliya : baat sunte??huh.. Stop fooling me Zain..
Zain : i'm not fooling u aaliya..zeeshan is..woh tumhe dhoka de rahaa hai.. Woh tumse nikaah karke tumhari saari property lekar tumhe akele tanha chhod kar chala jaayega
Aaliya : out*pushes him with all her force n she's angry*
Zain : what??
Aaliya : out.. How dare u? Himmat kaise huwi mere mangetar ke baare mei aisi bakwaas karne ki.. Sab Zain Abdullah Nahi hote .. Woh tumhare jaisa nahi hai..
Zain : aaliya maine usse khud baat karte huwe
Aaliya : out zain.. Agar tumne mujhse khabhi thoda sa b pyaar kiya ho toh chale jaao yahaan se plz.. Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni..
Zain : aaliya..
Aaliya : zain plz..
Zain : i luv u.. *Bends down n kisses her lightly and she dosent move back nor does she responds...zain leaves*


Outside Aaliya's House


Zain : Tum Aaj b mujhse pyaar karti ho aaliya.. Uss zeeshan ki sachai toh mei saamne lakar hi rahunga aur tumhe pyaar ka ehsaas phir se karaunga...
Zain : Hello.. Yasmeen.. I need ur help..ek ladki ko jealous feel karvaana hai.. Will u become my girlfrnd for sumtym plz?Thanx Yasmeen..kal subah milte hai*on the phone*

Aaliya's Room

Aaliya : ya Allah.. Yeh sab.. Maine zain ko roka kyun nahi.. Usse kyun*touches her lips*
Zeeshan... *lies down n cries herself to sleep*

Very very nyc update
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Great update 👏
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Awesome update SUMI...