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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya4life



It's fine guys...I didn't expect the prologue to be remembered by anyone 🤣 Ni surprised me

Meghu you should know by now I am full of surprises...🤣 Especially my memory... 🤣 My selective memory is very selective...🤣 Just ask me about how to Count something something for taxes...🤣 It's so selective...🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya4life



Of course you liked the dedication 😆 I get last all the time in our group...I feel your pain 🤣 Okay maybe not pain...because it's a world record 😆
The master plan had been set 🤣 No one can stop it now 🤣 Not even Rohan or Armaan 🤣
It a specially designed coat made by yours truely...Meghu 🤣 Cost me a million dollars to make 😆 The material is a tear proof material...no Tallibala tears can destroy it 🤣
Some bed rocking as compensation? 🤣 If children can't read it then we need censors all over the place 🤣 RK would definitely like it...he almost got it when he first kissed Madhu...now he has a second chance 🤣
She could get a golf club and beat him black and blue...then use him as a golf ball in a local tournament 🤣 She would even beat Tiger Woods with her beat up Armaan 🤣
Or Armaan commits suicide...or his brother Rohan comes into the picture and kills Armaan to get to Madhu...because he was her secret lover in the past 🤣
Bakshi will meet his doom soon...how...I don't know yet 😆 But I'm working on it 🤣
I think you are the only person to remember the prologue...well now sudha knows too...😆 Don't worry about that...the end of the chapter is good 😉
And finally you are welcome for PM...😆 Love you 🤗

Haha...I understand...😆
Rohan? Will he enter the story?😲😳 If you do, please make him good...😳
Are you sure?😆 By the way where did you get the material? From Krypton? No I know... Moon Kingdom...🤣 Usagichan gave you some material from her princess gown...after killing her Prince and herself...🤣 Ah that ending is still... Nothing like the original... I wonder how Chibubusa will be like... Since this Usagichan isn't as childish as that one...Will Chibibusa be the same?😆 And I suspect that those 4 Knights won't come back...🤣 Even that was a twist and so different from the original...😆
We have censors...He is called CB...🤣 So you admit this is the second chance...🤣 RK take it... Meghu allowed you to do so...🤣
She would not only beat Tiger Woods but also Michael Jordan and Vlade Divac in basketball...Let me put it in today's stars just in case...😆 Kobe Bryant and LeBron James...😆
Rohan...I know you would do so...That is one perfect plot Meghu...Go with it...Tongue😆
Ahh... RK could doublecross him...😆 You know like in the show... Let him say pack up a couple of times...wasting his precious Money and no work has been done...🤣 Also RK finds a loophole in that contract...🤣 Just in time while media walks in a Bakshi that is on a compromissing position with Deepali...🤣 You would hit two birds with one stone...😆 Ending their careers Before it began...And in Court they would sell out Armaan...If it would go that far...😆
Are you proud of me?😳 It shows I am the most loyal reader of this story...🤣 Remember every single thing...even the prologue...🤣 I know it's good...It's you Writing it...Tongue
Love you too...🤗
End of the long qoute...🤣 This will be as long as your update...If not longer...🤣
Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey i am from pakistan i have a request for all of u that please pray for the childrens who have been shot in peshawar i beg u please pray for them that thier soul rest in peace ameen
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Posted: 10 years ago


Chapter 21
(Madhu's POV)

"Madhubala Shamsher Malik...Superstar Rishabh Kundra had fallen for you..."

My whole world was moved by his one sentence. A single tear ran down my cheek and landed silently on the floor. I didn't know how to react to it. I pushed his arms away from me and took a few steps away from him.

"What's wrong Madhu?" He approached me again, turning me to face him.

He cupped my face in his hands, and at first I liked it, but I pushed him away. I couldn't do this. No...not again.

"I can't...RK...I can't..." I denied. I pulled his hands off my face and turned to face the wall, tears brimming my eyes. "I can't accept this..." He seemed to understood what I meant.

He came closer and put his hands on my shoulders.

"Why can't you love me?" He pleaded.

I thought well about my answer...

"Because love has brought only pain and sadness with it..." I said. "Love never brought me happiness..."

An awkward silence grew between us...soon he spoke once again.

"And do you really think that will come between us?" He asked.

I didn't have an answer for him. One part of me wanted him, while another part reminded me of the betrayal I experienced from Armaan. I couldn't go through that again. Love for me was like playing with fire...I never knew if it would bring me light and warmth or if it would burn me.

"Tell me Madhu..." He said, gripping my shoulders tighter.

The tears couldn't be held back much longer. They flowed down my cheeks like waterfalls. I broke from his embrace again and ran into the nearest room, bolting the door behind me. I sank to the floor, head buried in my knees, letting all my emotions out at once. My heart didn't know what it wanted.

(RK's POV)

I slammed my hand on Madhu's door, but she wouldn't open it. I heard her muffled sobs against the door. Had I hurt her that much?

"Madhu..I'm sorry..." I said. No answer. I stood at the door, deciding only to move once she came out.

(Madhu's POV)

I sat there, my heart in conflict over the ultimate decision. Would I be able to love again? It was true that I had slowly grown feelings for RK, and I did want to admit it. But there was a fear, hidden deep inside me, of betrayal. Even if I trusted RK, that fear would never go away.

I wanted to say that "yes RK, I do love you..." But those words were prevented from forming on my lips. I peeked behind me, at the door. His silhouette was present near the door. He was waiting silently for me.

He cared for me. He listened to my every word, be it good or bad. He loved me more than himself, and I...was too weak to give him a chance. Because of my own insecurities.

Could I trust him? Could I let my heart believe that he would never betray me? Could I give him a chance? A chance to prove his love?

After a few minutes of thinking, I broke. I wanted to give him a chance, and I wanted a chance for myself to forget my past and move on. I got up and unlocked the door, falling into his arms soon after. He was surprised at first, but then began to console me as the tears began to stain his shirt.

"I love you too RK..." I sobbed.

(RK's POV)

Those words from her lips brightened up my entire life. I held her tightly by the waist and kissed her head gently. I rocked her back and forth as she got a grip on her emotions.

"I promise you Madhu, that I will always love you. I won't let you go through that same pain again." I stroked her hair. She began to melt in my touch. I rested my cheek on her head. She was finally mine.

I led her to the sofa nearby and sat her down. Her beautiful baby brown eyes were red and puffy from crying. I wiped the remaining tears with my thumb and turned to face her.

"You look terrible when you cry...where's that beautiful smile of yours?" I teased. She gave me a small smile, and blushed as well.

"There it is." I said. I cupped her face in my hands and looked into her eyes. They were swirling with emotion.

"I'll always be there for you Madhu...that's a promise." I whispered. She nodded.

I brought her closer to my face, until our lips were touching, and at the right moment, crushed my lips onto hers. It was a slow, passionate kiss. My lips moulded around hers, taking her taste in. She kissed me back, taking handfuls of my hair. I snuck my tongue into her mouth, pulling her closer to me by the waist. She broke away, losing her breath. But the sadness was gone, replaced by only the Madhu that I had seen for the past few weeks. A happy Madhu. I lifted her into my arms again...and led her out to the car. I had to drop her home, although I didn't want to. She clung to my arm while I drove, falling asleep on the way there. She looked relaxed. I shook her lightly when we reached her home.

"Madhu...we're here." I whispered. She slowly opened her eyes and looked at me.

"Oh...I..." She began, but I cut her off by placing a kiss on her cheek. She smiled as her checks turned a rosy pink.

"You go on. I bring your things upstairs." I said. She nodded and stepped out of the car.

(Madhu's POV)

Malik and Trishna were waiting happily for me...and all my favorite dishes were laid on the table. My mouth watered on seeing them. I ran straight into their open embrace into a big hug.

"Welcome back beta.." Malik said, kissing me on the forehead. Trishna gave me another hug, a tight one.

"I missed you so much Madhu!" She squealed.

I heard footsteps from behind. I turned and saw RK putting my luggage to the side. Malik walked over to him.

"Thank you for taking care of my daughter." He said.

"It's no problem Malik." He said. He looked at me and smiled. I blushed.

"Malik, let's go set the table." Trishna nudged him to the side, to leave us alone. He chuckled and went with her.

We approached each other. RK took my hand and kissed it. His lips felt nice against my skin.

"I'm going to miss you my jungili billi." He smirked.

"I'll miss you too." I said. I hugged him tightly, not wanting him to leave.

We became lost in each other in an eyelock. I was glad of my decision. I trusted him even more now.

"I'll be back soon Madhu. To make you mine forever." He winked. I blushed again. I knew what he meant.

Malik and Trishna invited RK to dine with us, but he declined. He had some important work to complete for the film. I watched him go from the balcony. He blew me a kiss and drove off into the darkness. My heart fluttered like it used to. It got to experience love all over again.

(RK's POV)

I laid on my bed, holding a picture of Madhu in my hand. I caressed her lovely face gently. We were finally a true couple, no longer playing fake boyfriend-girlfriend. I was on cloud nine. Nothing had ever made me happier.
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Next Mass Update: Jan. 18th 2015
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yes! Yes! I'm first Meghu!😆


You were right the Insane sisters took revenge from me but they didn't succeed properly I say🤣 because I came 1st in PWF 2nd in OP and 3rd in DK that means the insane sisters didn't succeed 🤣
And I'm full to Happy for this!😆

Coming to the story
And tada Meghu you crushed my dreams again !😆 I thought that Madbala version oops I forgot the version😆 would reject Rk and yes she rejected him but still she accepted him😆 My poor fate!😭
And Rk was also no less! Why Rk?! Why?! Why me alll the time hun?😆 Couldn't you just let her go and come to me?!😭 But now who cares even I don't give a damn about you!😆

Meghu let me tell you ...You are One hell a great writer!😃 I seriously can't compare you to antone at all! I love all your stories and now coming to this I'm still loving it . The way you depict Rk's feelings is so damn Awesome! I love to read more Rk's pov than Madhu's because you already know the reason😆


Well to tell you I'm assuming that they might have a break up soon and Rk will come running after the break up🤣 And I do think Armaan's plan will not be succeeded that's what My horoscope for Armaan tells😆 About Rk and Madhu I dont know because whenever I try to see their horoscope the magic crystal doesn't show anything but instead tells me SIGNAL NOT FOUND!😆

No thank you for pm Meghu!😆

Edited by Shriya.bk - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

I am hell tired after DK comment... Writing that thing twice... And me removing a bit at the end the second time... It took a toll on me... Remembering all of that... Will try to give a long comment on PWF... But somehow it seems unlikely... Sorry Chotu...

All I can say is I laughed so hard...🤣 I can't, I can, he didn't do anything wrong, I shouldn't be afraid... The indecisiveness was real fun to read...🤣 Again staining his shirt with her tears... I hope that is tearfree material...🤣 Why does she love to stain his clothes with her salty tears?🤣
He rocked her like a baby in a craddle...🤣 Comforting her, but ready to jump at any given time...🤣 That if the opportunity presented itself...🤣
And a promise...🤣 "I'll always be there for you Madhu...that's a promise." 🤣 Wow heroji don't give promises you can't keep... I have this feeling that Armaan will jump out any minute now...🤣 When I will soon reveal...🤣
But I can't actually believe that RK drove her back home... Meaning back to Malik and Trishna... That man is either stupid or using her as a bait to lure Armaan out...
Then reading "I'll be back soon Madhu. To make you mine forever." 🤣 Yeah, yeah right... Fly, fly little brainy, fly like the wind... along with grey clouds that has clouded your brain with the possible outcomes...😆 And him watching Madhu's pic in bed, nothing could make him happier...🤣 I just see a dead Madhu in the future and a heartbroken and vengeful RK when I read that...🤣
Also I came second... And last to comment...🤣
Thanks for the update and PM Chotu...
Sorry for the short comment...
Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is one surprising update, meg.
i never expected madhu will accept her love. I though she will not come out of that betrayal she had faced from armaan, as for her love is like playing with fire but i should say she over had come from that misery so soon & dared to play with fire LOL & I should give d credit to rk as he only cured her with his love & Trust...
u have beautifully written madhus fear & Her inner turmoil..she was so shocked when he confessed but she made a wise desicion by locking herself in a room to think calmly & came up with a good desicion..that was so lovely...
even rk was so surprised like us lol...
after confession when rk took her in arms i though he will take her in to his room but u r one decent writer made him take her to his car lol..unlike me lol...
so rishbala's wedding is on cards...will that go smoothly or some more hungama will take place?
well, this time i choose this update as my most fav. one among d three though i was swinging whether to choose this or OL as that was d ending update but finally i made up my mind to choose this one specially for madhu's sudden confession...great part. Loved it.
thanks for d pm

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful.
madhu confessed her feelings and rk dropped her at her place.
looking forward to next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowww...such a beautiful update..finaly madhu accepted rks love...m tooo happy...
Bt hey u didnot pm me 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
very beautiful update...
woww madhu accepted his proposal.
rk-madhu moments were written
beautifully...loved this update very
much..eagerly waiting for next update.
thank u so much for sending me pm.
Edited by drashtira - 10 years ago

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