Broken Promises ~ Collab Tanya N Sumaiya (Chap 16 n 17 Updtd 18th Apr) - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome SUMI...
Loved it...though heart breaking...
But you always end it on a cliff hanger...
Shalam are more evil than reality here...
Anyways continue soon..l
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow sumiya it was awesome. ...tanya continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice sad update
Thanx for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow itnaa emotional chapter 🤢
Ruladiya 😭 😭 😭

BTW it was good 😉

But next waala thoda kam emotional hona chahiye pls 😕

Continue soon !
And thanks for the PM 😃
Edited by Ilovezaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Exciting end huh
Do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was emotional..
Continue soon..
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aaliya got engaged to Zeeshan
hate ShaLam for doing this to ZaYa
Awesome update 👍🏼
waiting for the next part
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
too imotional update Aaliya nay engagment kar li us zeshaan say in front of zain😲
my imotions are same as zain"s how could she 😭
continu soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Okay? Last time meine bahaut jaldi update ki thi na? Iss baar bhi it's a good chance for you. Toh beta ji, (whoever is reading it), hojao shuru. Toh meine 15 minute tak socha ki iske aage kya likhu? Then mere mann mei laddooo phoota and ek bakwas idea bahar aaya. Toh ji lo, mera naya part. Great part Sumaiya! :)
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Outside
Zain's POV

I followed Zeeshan. He was with some Mr. Khan. As far as Rizwan told me, Mr. Khan was a billionaire and Zeeshan's Dad's cousin. He had come for the wedding.

"Mr. Khan, she is beautiful isn't she?" I was drunk. I tried to focus on the girl's face. Then I heard someone laughing. I turned around to see Aaliya on the phone. I looked at Zeeshan then at Aaliya. Zeeshan. Aaliya. Zeeshan. Aaliya.

"Riz jaa jaldi Aaliya ko yaha se lekar jaa. She shouldn't see this. Agar woh yaha aa gyi toh? Jaldi jaa." I told me literally pushing me from back.

"Tu pagal hai? Arre yahi toh chance hai Aaliya ko prove krne ka ki tu kitna accha ladka hai and woh kitna bura!" My blood boiled.

"And uske baad kya haan? Uski engagement ho gyi hai iss cheatercock ke saath. Uska ek baar dil already tuth chuka hai Riz, meri wajah se. Although I didn't mean to but- jaane de uss baat ko. Riz, Mei- Mei uska dil phirse kese thodte dekh skta hu? Yeh kamina jaisa bhi hai, iski engagement ho gyi hai Aaliya se. And sabse zyaada beizzati toh Aaliya aur uski family ki hogi na? Isko koi farak nahi padega. Par Aaliya? She would be heartbroken again." I sighed cooling down myself a bit. I looked at Aaliya still laughing. Such innocent girl.

"Bro-"

"Please Riz. Usse le jaa yaha se. She won't listen to me. Tujhe hi usse manana padega. Come on dude. I mean woh teri Bhaabhi- I mean, she was like a sister to you na? Ja, apne bhai ke liye yeh kr de." I smiled to him. He went. :(

"Aaliya!" Riz stopped her as she was about to approach where Zeeshan and Mr. Khan was. I quickly hid behind the long tree that was right behind me. Slowly I saw Riz taking away Aaliya. I peeped outside a bit. I was frightened at first seeing Aaliya might notice me. I quickly turned away.



"Mr. Khan this is Sara. Sara this is Mr. Khan, mere Dad ke sabse karib dost aur bhai. Mr. Khan, Sara ek bahaut hi acchi ladki hai. She's from London." I turned back as Zeeshan said all this. I internally wanted to go in front of him and slap him right on the face! How dare he? How dare he cheat on Aaliya?

"Par beta tum toh Aaliya se-" Zeeshan cut Mr. Khan off.

"Aaliya? Arre aapko kya pta? Sara baby, why don't you go and have a drink. I am sure you must be tired." Sara smiled and kissed Zeeshan's cheek and went away smiling. Zeeshan smiled victrously. "Mr. Khan, aapme dimag hai? Aaliya tehri yaha. Mei toh London jaunga Sara ke saath. Jo Sara mujhe de skti hai na? Woh yeh tucchi mucchi Aaliya kabhi nahi de skti."

"Par phir tum usse shaadi?" Mr. Khan asked confused.

"Arre mei usse chhod ke chala jaunga. Then woh apne raaste mei apne raaste!"


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Edited by harshadcrazyfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yeppi..
Me first 😆
Kya tanya itni jaldhi jaldhi update de kar mujhe phaasa rahi ho 😆
But i luved this part..
Zain 😭 😭
Zeeshan ki toh mai 😡
Well..
Mei itni jaldhi update nahi dene waali.. 😆
Once Again..
Gr8 chap Tanya 👏

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