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SHQ_forever

@SHQ_forever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

hehe

rd sanyu ke room se bahar gaya

toh ... 😆 girls ne galat matlab nikala

precap -- rd shouts at sanyu ...

hmm.. i thiink use lage ga ki sanyukta ne uska machine kharab kiya..

mujhe bhi shak ho raha hai ki kahin sach mein sanyukta ne ... toh nahi kiya!!

aur agar sanyukta nahi hai toh kahin rd (genius) ne mistake toh nahi kardi!

ITNA BADA COMMENT KIYA.. EK DAIRY MILK TOH BHEJ HI SAKTE HO! ... 😆

lots of love

himanshi

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awsme yr
Firse pehle wale shq ki yaad aa gi

Sandhir war started
Rd sanyu ke rum me
Girls talking abut them

DT selection.
Rd ki machine not working
Sanyu ki perfect
What hppnd

Precap rd shouting on sanyu

Cnt wait

Update soon

Luv u
Keep smiling

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Priya

@asya_luver

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: SHQ_forever
hehe
rd sanyu ke room se bahar gaya
toh ... 😆 girls ne galat matlab nikala
precap -- rd shouts at sanyu ...
hmm.. i thiink use lage ga ki sanyukta ne uska machine kharab kiya..
mujhe bhi shak ho raha hai ki kahin sach mein sanyukta ne ... toh nahi kiya!!
aur agar sanyukta nahi hai toh kahin rd (genius) ne mistake toh nahi kardi!

ITNA BADA COMMENT KIYA.. EK DAIRY MILK TOH BHEJ HI SAKTE HO! ... 😆

lots of love
himanshi

oye ! chatterbox DAIRYMILK ki jagah chappal bhejun??😆😆

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Priya

@asya_luver

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

😊😊😊

Originally posted by: newmoon18
Awsme yr
Firse pehle wale shq ki yaad aa gi

Sandhir war started
Rd sanyu ke rum me
Girls talking abut them

DT selection.
Rd ki machine not working
Sanyu ki perfect
What hppnd

Precap rd shouting on sanyu

Cnt wait

Update soon

Luv u
Keep smiling

thank u so much! :)

😊

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Zumi

@Zumi_Vamp

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

You always write And Innovative Chapters...
The story and the title both were Really well-settled..
#zumi

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Priya

@asya_luver

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Paramharshita
You always write And Innovative Chapters...
The story and the title both were Really well-settled..
#zumi

thank u zumi! :) :)

keep smiling :)

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Priya

@asya_luver

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

CHAPTER -2

VARDHAN - so rd ... your machine is not working... only sanyukta's machine is working!

the last 2nd ranker!..

rd - sir this is impossible!

vd - well done ! sanyukta aggarwal!

sanyu - thank u so much sir!

rd - sir please give me last chance

vd - so guys --- i'm giving u a last chance!

rd - thank u so much!

jiggy - thank u sir!

vd - but ab tumhe 2 machines repair karni hai 1 din mein

kaustuki and vids - but sir how?

vd - i dunno !

after smtime

sanyu - kaustuki help chahiye?

kaustuki - yaa... .and thanks sanyu

jiggy sabke liye tea lekar aata hai...

jiggy - kaustuki hum break lein?

kaustu - okay!

sanyu - jiggy,kaustu tum jao ... mein laptop repair karke aati hun

rd - what the hell?? tumne jaan bhuz ke tea machine par girayi naa? u cheapo

sanyu - cheapo? mein jaan bhuz kar nahi girayi!

and i'm sorry! i can help u!

rd - you moron! aaj subah bhi tumne hi meri machine ke saath kuchh kiya naa?

sanyu - haar gaye toh galti accept nahi kar rahe? gr8 mr. so called genius! ...

rd - galti tum accept nahi kar rahi ho! .. tumhe toh mein baad mein dekh lunga! now get lost!

vidushi - oh ho sanyukta tum jao naa... disturb kyun kar rahi ho!

sanyukta - i am going

vidushi - jab tak rd nahi kaam start karega toh mein kaise banungi!

vidushi rd ko dekh dekh kar karti rahi!

rd(in mind) - sanyukta aggarwal, jo tumne kiya hai uski punishment toh tumhe milegi!

next day

sanyukta was coming and she slipped

rd ne chemical floor par lagaya tha taaki sanyukta gir jaye !

rd - sanyukta tum mere pairon mein kyun gir gayi??

rd ne kisi ko pic lene ki liye kaha tha!

rd ne pic noticeboard par laga di!

after some time

sanyu (in mind)- yeh mujh pe ab kyun has rahe hain?

sanyu - notice board par??

(in mind)- i'll not leave u rd!

vd - okay guys! so ur machines are working!

welldone!

in night

rd(in mind) - ab uss sanyukta aggarwal ki poll kholne ka time aa gaya... cctv footage!

rd - what! yeh uss vidushi ne kiya tha!! oh shit!

mujhe sorry bolna chahiye...

waise ek tarf se achha hi hua! usne uss din blast bhi toh kiya tha! i will not leave vidushi

rd to vd - sir yeh dekhiye, machine vidushi ne..

vd - i know... aur tumne kisi aur se revenge liya!

action lene se pehle socha nahi!.. .u should say sorry to her!

rd - i will... say but sir punish that vidushi!

vd - call vidushi in my cabin

vd - vidushi ,,, rd will punish u

rd - u re my slave for 1 day!

vidushi - no ways

rd - vd sir se baat kar lo

vidushi - bolo kya karna hai?

rd- yeh sorry card sanyukta ke room mein rakh aao

vidushi - tum use sorry? weird

rd - dimag mat chalo , vd sir ne kaha tha isliye!

next day (freshers party)

all started laughing at randhir

rd - what the hell?

precap - embarassed randhir :D

so tell me guys... sanyukta ki family engineering ke liye supportive chahiye yaa... wahi engagement zamela chahiye!!!!!????

jaldi batao

i am waiting!

lots of love

priya!

Edited by priya_31 - 11 years ago

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

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Unres
Awsm update dear ...
Thanx for pm
update asap

Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 11 years ago

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

It was awsme yr

I m so luving it
Poor sanyu usne kuch ni kia fir b sara blame uss par aa gya
Yeh vids kabhi ni sudhregi

Rd ne sanyu ko sabke samane embarrassed kar dia
Now sanyu will not leave him

Vd sir made realize rd his mistake

Ab sanyu ne kya kia
Precap intrstng
Rd embarrassed

Cnt wait for next
Update soon

No yr engagement drama ni
Bt han if u give changed n more intrstng version of engagement fiasco we will luv it
Bcz shq version was very depression

Luv u
Keep smiling

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Priya

@asya_luver

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: newmoon18
It was awsme yr

I m so luving it
Poor sanyu usne kuch ni kia fir b sara blame uss par aa gya
Yeh vids kabhi ni sudhregi

Rd ne sanyu ko sabke samane embarrassed kar dia
Now sanyu will not leave him

Vd sir made realize rd his mistake

Ab sanyu ne kya kia
Precap intrstng
Rd embarrassed

Cnt wait for next
Update soon

No yr engagement drama ni
Bt han if u give changed n more intrstng version of engagement fiasco we will luv it
Bcz shq version was very depression

Luv u
Keep smiling