Broken Promises ~ Collab Tanya N Sumaiya (Chap 16 n 17 Updtd 18th Apr) - Page 14

nice update i had forgot the story had to read it from fist from first u two have wondefully written it do continue soon will be waiting

Awesome TANU...

Both parts are amazing ...
Hope aliya finds out d truth soon !!
Continue fast :)

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Awesome update tanu di

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Okay.. Dont throw Chappals at me... But this is gng to be HeartBreaking Chap.. I'm Sorry but yeh Zaruri tha.. I'm sure u'll Luv the cumng Chaps! 😉

Aaliya's Room

Aaliya : kya?? Zain yahaan??woh wapas kyun aaya hai??
Aisha : woh tumse ek baar milna chahta hai aaliya
Aaliya : jaake keh dijiye usse ki mujhe uski shakal bhi nahi dekhni.. Baat toh door ki baat hai*gets ready for her engagment*
Aisha : ek baar mil le plz aaliya..
Aaliya : kyun appi? Kyun milo mei usse?? Kyun?? Jis aadmi ne mujhe dhoka diya.. Mujhe cheat kiya.. Mujhe akela tanha chhod kar chala gaya.. Usse kyun milo mei?? Jab mei saari duniya se ladhne ke liye tayyar thi sirf us ke liye tab woh kahaan tha?? Nahi appi.. Mujhe nahi milna usse.. Meri engagment Zeeshan se ho rahi hai*wipes her tears n straigtens her dupatta*
Aisha : par..
Zain : aaliya*enters her room through the window*
Aaliya : tum?? Tumhari himmat kaise huwi andar aane ki?? Get out zain.. Isse pehle ki mei kisi ko awaaz dekar tumhe yahaan dhakke maar ke nikaalo tum khud nikal jaao
Zain : aaliya plz meri baat sunlo.. Bas ek mauka dedo..
Aaliya : i said leave..*tears start brimming out of her eyes*
Zain : aaliya plz*touches her shoulders*
Aaliya: dont u dare... Haath mat lagaana mujhe
Zain : theek hai.. Par meri baat toh sunlo.. Ek mauka aaliya plz .. Sirf ek mauka..
Aaliya : ek mauka?? Kyun doon mei tumhe ek mauka?? Kyun zain?? Tum samajhte kya ho apne aap ko?jab chahe jab aajaoge jab chahe jab chale jaaoge?? What do u think of urself? Tumhare liye maine apne abbu se ladhai ki.. Tum par itna aitbaar kiya.. Tumse beintehaa pyaar karne lagi thi mei zain.. Aur tumne kya kiya?? Mujhe cheat kiya.. Aur bhaag gaye? Mujhe akela chhod kar bhaag gayye?? Aur aaj aaye ho.. Meri engagemnt ke din n u expect me to u give u a chance to explain??
Zain : aaliya i know maine jo kiya woh sahi nahi tha par..
Aaliya : sahi nahi tha?? Waah zain abdullah.. "Sahi nahi tha".. Kitna aasan hai nuh yeh kehna? Abbu sahi kehte the tumhare baare mei.. Ki tum un ladko mei se jo jiske liye ladkiya ek khilona hai.. Jab mann kiya tab paas bulaaliya.. Aur jab mann bhargaya tab phek diya.. Yahin kiya nuh tumne mere saath??ab dil toh tumhara bhar gaya nuh?? Toh phir wapaas kyun aaye?? Tum kyun aaye zain?? Kyun aaye??I hate u zain.. I hate u.. Nafrat hai mujhe tumse.. Tumhari har cheez hai.. I hate u.. I hate u*cries while hitting him on his chest*
Zain : aaliya aaliya.. Plz meri baat suno*has tears in his eyes but dosent resist her hitting hin*
Aaliya : out.. I said out
Zain : aaliya par..
Aaliya : tum jaate ho ya mei security ko bulaao*goes n stand beside d window*
Get out Zain.. Jahaan se aaye the wahaan se hi wapaas chale jao..
Zain : aaliya ek baar
Aaliya : i Said Leave*tears roll down His Cheeks while she just watches him leave*
Aisha : aaliya yeh kya kiya tune??ek baar baat sunleti uski..
Aaliya : appi plz.. Meri engagemnt hai aaj zesshan ke saath
Aisha : to hell wid zeeshan aaliya.. Mei jaanti hoon tujhe yeh engagment nahi karni.. Toh kyun kar rahi hai yeh sab?
Aaliya : appi plz.. Mujhe zeeshan se hi engagment karni hai..
Aisha : aaliya yeh kya kar rahi hai tu apni zindagi ke saath??
Aaliya : appi plz.. Mei jo kar rahi hoon soch samaj ke kar rahi hoon.. Aur plz ab mujhe iske baare me koi baat nahi karni hai*wipes all the tears n gets ready for the engagment*

Banquet Hall



Zain : ek baar meri baat sunleti aaliya.. Mei bhi usse baat kare bina aaj yahaan se nahi jaaunga.. Chahe kuch b hojaaye.. Usse mei aaj baat karke rahunga..
Rizwan : par kaise?? Aaj uski engagment hai zain.. Zeeshan ke saath
Zain : woh yeh sagai nahi karegi.. Jab mei wahaan uske saamne rahunga.. Tab woh kisi aur ko ring nahi pehna paayegi..
Rizwan : i hope so bro..
Zain : chal Andar Chal..*goes to the banquet Hall where The engagment Is taking place.. Aaliya comes down wearing A baby Pink Lehenga choli Wid a dupatta covering her head.. Aisha Beside her... Zain stares at her.. N she luks at him.. They have an eyelock.. Aaliya walks past him upto the stage n goes n stands beside Zeeshan*

Zain : main jaanta hoon tum yeh sab sirf mujhe batane ke kiye kar rahi ho.. Par kitni aage jaogi aaliya??tumhe mere paas wapaas aana hi hoga.. Aur mei jaanta hoon ki tum usko Ring Nahi pehnaogi.. Kyunki u still luv me..*monologue*

Aaliya : tumhe Kya lagta hai zain?? Ki tum yahaan hoge toh mei zeeshan se engagment todh dungi?? U'r wrong Mr. abdullah.. Mei zeeshan se Sagai Karungi.. Aur woh b tumhari aankhoun ke saamne.. Tab tumhe pata chalega apne pyaar ko kisi aur ke saath dekhne ka dukh*monologue*

Shabana : Zeeshan Aaliya.. Baith jao tum dono..*both of them sit.. Zain Aaliya keep luking at each other.. While zeeshan tries to talk To aaliya but she dosent talk..*
Ghulam : Zeeshan Bete.. Aaliya ko aanghuti pehnao.. Aaliya bete apna haath aage karo*aaliya dosent give her hand.. Shabana takes it n hands it over to zeeshan.. Zain stares at her with tears in his eyes.. Aaliya luk at him while zeeshan makes her wear the ring.. He punches d wall after seeing zeeshan making her wear his ring..*
Ghulam : bhai ab zeeshan bete tum apna haath aage karo.. Aaliya bete usse anghuti pehnaao*aaliya stares at zain n vice versa wid tears in their eyes.. Aaliya takes a deep breath.. N finally makes Zeeshan wear the ring..
Ghulam : mubarak ho.. Mubarak ho.. Sagai hogayyi.. Tum dono hamesha khush rehna.. Allah tumhe buri nazar se bachaaye*everybody cumes n congratulates them*Tears roll down zain's cheeks n he keeps luking at her.. She luks at him too.. N zain leaves while aaliya watches him leave*

Rizwan : zain.. Zain*comes running behind hin*
Zain meri baat sun.. Zain rukjaa yaar plz..
Zain : what??*his eyes r red due to tears n anger*
Rizwan : zain woh aaliya..
Zain : how could she?? How could she?? Usne kaise karli yeh sagai?? How could she?? Ek baar bhi meri baat nahi suni.. Mere baare mei nahi socha?? Mujhe dekhte huwe usne usko anghoti Pehnaayi.. How could she .. How could she*throws all the chair n kicks the tables outside*
Rizwan : zain zain.. Stop it zain.. Zain chal yahaan se..
Aaliya : nahi mujhe aaliya se bast karni hai.. Woh aisa kaise karsakti hai??
Rizwan: zain abhi nahi.. Yeh tym theek nahi hai.. Plz tu chal yahaan se*takes him n leaves*


Aaliya's Room - Night Time

Aisha : tu theek hai?
Aaliya : huh?? Haan mei theek hoon*keeps staring at her ring*
Aisha : aaliya zain
Aaliya : di plz.. Mujhe uske baare mei koi baat nahi karni.. Aur jahaan tak zeeshan ki baat hai.. Ammi abbu me kuch soch kar hi mera nikaah uske saath fix kiya.. I'm sure woh bahut acha hoga.. Aur mei uske saath yeh nikaah karne ke liye tayyar hoon.. So plzz.. Mei apne ateet ko bhiol kar aage badhna chahti hoon appi .. Plz.. Mujhe baar baar uska naam lekar mere ateet ka yaad mat dilao.. Plz..
Aisha : par aaliya
Aaliya : plz appi..
Aisha : theek hai..*aaliya forces a smile n turns to sleep*


Hotel

Rizwan : bas kar zain.. Kitna peeyega?? Bahut hogaya?*tries to snatch the bottle from his hands*
Zain : nahi.. Aaj mei peeyunga.. Aaj meri Zindagi.. Meri khushi.. Meri humsafar .. Meri grlfrnd ki sagaai huwi hai.. Celebration toh banta hai boss .. Haina??*drinks more*
rizwan : zain tu hosh mei nahi hai abbi.. Plz bas kar aur ghar chal
Zain : nahi .. Mei kahin nahi jaaunga.. Usse lagta hai maine usse cheat kiya.. Usse dhoka diya.. Usko akela chhod kar chala gaya.. How i wish ki yahi sachai hoti.. Toh shayad aaj mujhe itna dukh nahi hota.. Uski khaatir usko chod kar gaya mei.. Aur woh.. Mujhe galat samajti hai rizwan?? Mujhe galat samajti hai.. Kya woh mujhe jaanti nahi?? Bas itna hi aitbaar tha usko mujh par?? Ek pal nei hamari rishte ko bhulakkar woh usse sagai kaise kar sakti hai?? How could she do this to me?? How could she*sobs*
Yeh awaaz*turns arnd to see zeeshan*

Zeeshan : Mr. Khan.. Meet The love of my life*introduces .. While Zain tries to luk at the girl*

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