Broken Promises ~ Collab Tanya N Sumaiya (Chap 16 n 17 Updtd 18th Apr) - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wahh..
Waahh..

Kya sahi banaya hai yaar.
Bahaut sahi story hai Sumi.

The way Shabana said to Zain.
The way Riz told Zain.

It's amazing and real.

Do continue so-
Ohh.. Old habit.

I WILL continue soon. :)

Tysm and tc.
-Tani.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi all. I am so glad that Sumaiya updated so soon. I mean the collab its going really well. Thanks to all of you who commented and gave us the motivation and inspiration to write. And Sumaiya, great part sis. Love the way you write. I am sorry this isn't that long. But I am sure it gives an effect to the story.
WARNING : Thoda sa heartwrenching hoga. I mean, thoda sa toh ho ga. Coz it will be Zeeshan and Aaliya moments in between. Though I will make it short an quick. So don't worry. Iss part mei Zain nahi hoga. Next part mei ho skta hai. So read at your own risk.


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Haider Mansion
Zeeshan and Aaliya Engagement ceremony
Aaliya's POV

I looked down to my dress. I was wearing a green lehenga and a green choli. I though got many compliments but only my heart knew where I was wandering to. I looked up to see Zeeshan sitting down beside me as people came around us to have pictures. Abbu and Ammi were really happy. Though Ammi had a look of guilt and regret on her face. Suddenly even after my hardest try to hold in, a tear fall down from my eyes. Luckily no body noticed it. Other than Di.

"Ammi, I think Aaliya needs to go to the washroom. I- I should take her." Di said as she made me stand and we both walked to the washroom.


In The Washroom

"Aaliya baby, why are you crying?" I poured my heart out. Di tried to hold me in by lightly stroking my hair. "Mujhe pta hai Aaliya. Yeh tere liye bilkul bhi aasan nahi hai. I mean, thoda sa bhi nahi. Abbu tujhpe bahaut harsh ho rhe hai na? Itni jaldi engagement. Yeh bahaut rush mei ho rha hai Aalu. Zeeshan is NOT the right guy for you. Tu yeh nahi samajh rhi. Zain ne tujhe cheat nahi kiya-"

"Bas Di. Mujhe uss jhoothe makar aadmi ke baare mei kuch nahi sunna. Bahaut ho gyi uski baatein. Usne mujhe dokha nahi diya? Kyun? Jab mei sabse ladne ko taeeyar thi uske liye. Abbu se lad rhi thi mei Di. Usne mujhe chod diya. He uses girls and throws them away. Like any other man!" I said crying out again.

"Zain ne tujhe cheat nahi kiya Aaliya. Woh toh sirf-" Di was cut off.

"Aisha!" Yasmin came in huffing and puffing.

"Kya hua?" I asked worried.

"Woh- woh Zain- Zain aa chuka hai Aalu. He- He is here."



FLASHBACK
At New York
Abdullah Mansion
Zain's POV

I didn't tend to cheat on her. I am sorry Aaliya. I know ki tum mujhe abhi bhi dokhebaaz samajhti ho. Par I am sorry Aaliya. Really sorry.

"Bro!" Riz came running in.

"Kya hua Rizwan? Tu ese hafta kafta kyun aa rha hai?"

"Zain- Zain Aaliya shaadi ke liye maan gyi. She- She is getting married Zain. She- She is getting married. Kal engagement hai uski. Humei- Humei jaana chahiye!"


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Unres wow we are luck that we got 2 updates today luv u tanu .its me Anki old usernames CUTEZAYA
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan


Oh sure. Call me Tanya, Tanu, Tani, jo bhi bulana hai.
Why didn't you come here bfr?

I am glad u did now.
Hope you hv loads of fun.
If you need any help, ask me. :)

What should I call you?
I don't know your name?



Me it's Saleha , just read both the chapters , i love your collab , drama full hai , i hope zain entry mare aur sab teek hojaiye , her parents are so mean with her , i want aliya to realize that zain is not at fault , i hope ayesha will do something keep writing , awesome chapters !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really happy got 2 chps of this story ..
Haye aliya zeeshan ki engagement ..
Q
Akhir q
Jaldi update karo ... cant wait anymore
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Posted: 10 years ago
Woah..
Itni jaldhi update kardiya?? 😲 😲
Kya yaar phirse phasaa diya
Amazing tannu 👏 👏
Ab aage ki story sochni padegi 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh god when will Aaliya get to knw the truth ??
Nice update dear
do continue soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
Double Dhamal was really emotional 😭 😭 😭
Great update by both of you Sumaiya and Tanu 😊
Bichari Aaliya ko aur kitna rulaogain
Rizwan ne Aaliya ko bhabhi banadiya 😆
Love him for that !

Ghulam 😡 I hate him.
How dare he do this to her own daughter 🤢

Continue soon 😛
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
finally zain come back.
hope aliya get to know about true soon.thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm story
just read all chaps
loved it
continue soon

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