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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fict

loved the update. Geet very smartly celebrated Maan's birthday without him realizing anything.


thanks dear 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pvejani

awesome update.love it.

thanx for update.


thanks dear

& most welcome
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurmaaneet

oh.. time for mrs.khurana to sudharofy mr.khurana.. nice hun.. lol izhar bhi kardiya or geet ne cale bhi khila diya.. not bad.. cont soon hun


thanks dear

updating 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 11

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Maan take cake near to her, she happily takes it...then she feed him...

& hidely pick little cake on her hand & placed on his face...

Geet : now birthday complete

Maan shouted on her...

Geet : dekha aapne dad

Jb dekho mujhpe bs ase hi gussa krte hai

Maan : dad

Geet realized what she said in front of him...

Geet : kyun nhi kh sakti

Mere dad ki age ke hai

.

Aur pata nhi kyun

Aaj mujhe apne dad ki bhut yaad aa rhi thi

Bs ussi sb mein , mein aapko dad kh gyi

I hope ko aapko bura nhi laga honga

Dad : not at all beta

Tum meri beti jaisi hi toh hai

Tum mujhe ab dad hi bulana

Maan : dad par

Dad : maan relax

Good night both of you

*************

Geet : thanks dad

Aaj aapki wajh se hi mein unke birthday mein unke sath hu

Dad : bs yuhi muskurati raho tum

God bless you

**********

After meeting both reached hotel & manger invited both for party...

Maan : party

Manger : yes sir

Today our hotel complete fifty years ...bs issi khushi mein humne evening mein ek party organize ki hai

Aap dono aaiyenga jaroor

Maan : sorry we have no time

Geet : sir waise bhi humari flight morning mein hai

Aur ab to meeting bhi ho gyi hai

Toh chaliye na

Maan : geet

Manger : sir

Madam ki baat maan lijiye sir

Maan : ok

*********

She wears net black sari, thin little red bordered around sari...with sleeveless blouse...She tried to knot the dori of blouse...but failed every time...

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Someone knocked on her door...

Geet : kaun hai

Maan : geet

Geet : sir aap

She opened the door; he mesmerized seeing her in sari ...she really looking so gorgeous, her little makeup, her accessories (like bangles, earrings) , her hair tied , she make jhudda...her little curls coming on her face...

Geet : sir I know am looking gorgeous

Aap chahe toh mujhe compliment de sakte hai

I don't mind

.

Par ye sb baad mein

Phle meri help kijiye

Maan : geet

Geet : not bad

Second time geet

.

She held his hand & takes him to near dressing table...

Maan : tum mujhe yaha kyun laayi ho

She pointed towards her back...

Geet : sir please dori ko band dijiye

Her milky skin showing with backless blouse...

He turn the face & roared on her " ye kya batmezi hai"

Geet : sir maine kya kiya

.

Maan : tumne kya kiya

Ye bhi ..ab mein batayu

Geet : sir help nhi krni

Toh saaf- saaf mna krdo

.

Thik hai

Mt kriye meri help

Mein ase hi party mein chali jaati hu

He held her wrist & pull near to own ...

Maan : dhayn se meri baat suno

Mujhse durr raho

Geet : karib toh khud aate hai

Aur mujhe khte hai durr rhehne ke liye

He pushed her...

Geet : maan

Flashback In

geet : maan meri taraf toh dekhiye

maan : kya dekhu

tumhare is gunghat ko

geet : aap itna gussa kaise kr lete hai

maan : geet

leave me alone

geet : maan aaj humara sangeet aur mehendi hai

aur fir kal haldi

aaj ke baad hum shaadi hone tak nhi mil sakte

He not gives any answer, she sadly turns for go, but he open her dori...

Kya huaa asar tere saath reh kar naa jaane
Ki hosh mujhe naa raha

Geet : maan

She clutches dupatta tightly...

He came close to her, his breath falling on her bare neck...


Lafz mere thhe zubaan pe aake ruke
Par ho Na sake woh bayaan

.

he kissed on her collerbone...

Geet : maan

Maan : sshh

Just enjoy the moment...


Dhadkan tera hi naam le
Aankhein bhi paighaam ye de

He turns her & cupped her face...

Geet : maan please

He bends little& peck on her lips...

Teri nazar ka hi ye asar hai
Mujh pe jo huaa

He tries to remove veil but she held his hand...

Geet: abhi NHI maan

Flashback OUT

Geet : karib toh khud aate hai

Aur mujhe khte hai durr rhehne ke liye

He pushed her...

Geet : maan

Maan : maan sir

Am not your friend but your boss

So maintain the distance...

Geet : aapko kis baat ka darr hai

.

Khi kuch asa toh nhi hai

jo aapko har pal pareshaan krta hai

.

.

Aapne kuch galat toh nhi kiya kissi ke sath

Maan : just shut up

.

Mein ye shaadi krke apni life spoil nhi kr sakta tha

.

.

Geet I always dreamt perfect life partner

.

.

Perfect in all manner

.

Geet tum smjh rhi ho na...

Mein kya khehna chahta hu...

.

Mein jaanta hu

Isme tumhari galati nhi hai

Par geet is wajh se mein tumhara sath nhi de sakta tha

Geet am sorry again

Mujhe umeed hai

ho sake toh mujhe maaf kr dena

.

He held her wrist & twists her hand around back & held her hairs tightly...

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Her curves were pressing against his chest..She felt her heart began to race & her body grew hot.She felt strong sensation of arousal...with pain...he held her so harshly... tear slip down from her eyes...

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He don't know why he not see her in pain and why she affect him so

much..Why her words open his past...

She tries to push him but his hold is tight... he sees she struggling to come out from his grip...he hurting her in own anger...




he loose the grip & he brought his hand from her hair to shoulder then waist ...

He realizes what he doing in anger...he takes step back...

Maan : tum tyaar ho jaayo

Mein bahar intzaar kr raha hu

.

He seeing her last time before going ...and take step back near to her...and tied the dori & left...

precap : -

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Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Priyanka it was amazing. So geet celebrated maan birthday in her style. Maan is not comfortable with geet. geet reminds maan his past where he left someone being a selfish. Geet wants maan back in her life. does he deserve this. I think first maan should realize what he lost I. His selfishness. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nishamna

Priyanka it was amazing. So geet celebrated maan birthday in her style. Maan is not comfortable with geet. geet reminds maan his past where he left someone being a selfish. Geet wants maan back in her life. does he deserve this. I think first maan should realize what he lost I. His selfishness. Waiting for next dear


thanks dear

he realize dear...just wait & watch 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finaally Get celebrated Maan's birthday with teh help of his dad..
Geet s becoming bolder and she asked Maan to tie the dori But Maan got angry at this and shouted at her..But buddu bhi hai thoda
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update.
Waiting for next update

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