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Originally posted by: rk2127
Res

OKie dokie...will wait for the unres😉

Originally posted by: anjs
beautiful...somehow when i opened the chapter page, i guessed that khushi might be pregnant again, n that turned out to be the turth...
awesome

Thank you! I guess I wasn't as subtle with that news as I was hoping to be...lol...but oh wells...doesnt matter, yeah?😉

Originally posted by: AngelTeen
Such a beautiful chapter! Loved it! Arnav and Khushi do take care of each other's every need, dream and desire...so heartwarming! :)

Thank you! Arnav and Khushi are head-over heels and after the hideous past they have moved on from...they want to make sure that the other person is happy...😳

Originally posted by: Arshi67
This chapter has been so beautifully written. I'm crying 'happy tears' now at his emotions of wonder, her joy, the children's contentment. All so wonderful to read after all that they've been through.

Thank you! I was afraid that I'll overdo the cheesy bits but then I thought, ah what the hell...they've been through purgatory, bring on the cheesiness!😆 As long as you guys are liking it, I'm content.😊

Originally posted by: juhi611
Well I certainly wasn't expecting that!!! 😲 But it was a good surprise though. It certainly beat my expectations.

Honestly, this chapter brought tears to my eyes. It was like I could feel and share their happiness about the anniversary gift. I couldn't help but go awww while I was reading the chapter.

In the previous chapter comments, you had said that you were gonna tie up a few loose ends and I totally saw some of that in this chapter. It seemed to me that with this chapter they've come full circle- which is what I'm guessing you were sorta aiming for.

I am so happy that you decided to have an extension of sorts for this. I cannot wait to read the chapters.

woohoo! Seems like I was able to surprise at least one person!😆 it was difficult to write from a guy's perspective (esp when I'm a girl)...I had to consciously make sure that it still fit ASR's personality...I had a much easier time writing Khushi's bit...but I'm glad that regardless of any of that, you found cute moments in here that made you smile.

I am aiming for a "full circle" here because some people in life are lucky enough to get that...having said that, there are other characters in the story who didn't get the exact life they wanted but now have dealt with it an accepted it...One can't have everything they wish for and the same goes for ArHi...there are a couple more chapters left and there may be a wish that doesnt get fulfilled... *hint hint*

Originally posted by: eroni
Awesome update. It was really touching. Khushi knows him so well. They feel each other and know everything begore they even speak. Loved the scene with the kids. They are so cute. Very nice. Waiting to read about the reaction of the kids... :)

Thank you! Khushi knows him like the back of her hand...once a couple goes through hardships, it can either make or break their relationship...in this case, they came out stronger, not only as individuals but as a couple as well.😳

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Originally posted by: -afsha-
Loved the update

Thank you!

Originally posted by: shilpi28march
Awesome update!!

Thanks!

Originally posted by: surrazdan
so beautiful...

u r such an amazing writer weaving such a beautiful story...

Aww, thank you so much hun!

Originally posted by: tina_1234
Awesome amazin part
Loved it

Thanks sweets!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Beautiful, Brilliant Update...Too Good...👏

Thank you!

Originally posted by: rulama
Lovely update Katie...
Arnav is getting second chances all around... One lucky guy getting all his wishes fulfilled...

Thank you! yes he is...lucky isnt he? but dont bet on that..he might not get all his wishes...a couple of ArHi fights coming up.

Originally posted by: gowri_19
superb surprise for arnav on their anniversary
really loved it Arnav has got his love back in all form..
wat a sweet and happy surprise
kushi preganant again hoping to give arnav the experience of his missed period of adi and amby life
loved to see how they broke the news to the family

I didn't think there could be a better present for him...😳 I'm glad that everyone seems to agree with me on this one.😆 Khushi has given him the surprise but will the twins be as thrilled?😛

Originally posted by: Sona257
Ahhww she's pregnant.. Khushi knows him so well. They feel each other and know everything begore they even speak.
Great chap dear!

She knows him inside out...and he her. They've become each other's in all manners and fulfilling the others' wishes (on most accounts) has become second nature to them...

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Katie

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Originally posted by: premdewaani
Super nice update dear!!! Loved it:-))

Thank you!

Originally posted by: snoopy84
awesome update they are so sweet together

Thank you hun!

Originally posted by: barbiebala
Aww so cute update
I loved it completely
Lovely to watch the concern for khushi by the family.
OMG another child it will complete all their wishes.
This way Arnav he relive his gap in life, he will experience every feelings he missed.

Thank you! Oh, the concern for Khushi hasn't begun yet! wait until everyone knows she's expecting!😆 but yes, this is more for Arnav and Khushi to go through this beautiful phase together since they missed out on the opportunity in the past.😳

Originally posted by: yeshyeshna
awesome part
Khushi is pregnant
Arnav will pamper her a lot & will bear all her tantrums😃

Thank you! Oh, Arnav will definitely pamper her but who'll throw more tantrums? Khushi or him?😆

Originally posted by: shalini_s
good one.. glad that they are going to be parents again..

Thank you!

Originally posted by: shiv456
o so beautiful she is expecting can't wait awesome update

Thank you! :)

Originally posted by: luvbug
oh wat an aamzing gift 😃...absolutely loved it... feel so happy ...n sad too since this story will end soon...but im not going to think abt tht...excited to see how the twins n the family react to this news 😃

Thanks E! I'm sad to end the story too but dragging it more than this will just ruin it...what do you think?

Originally posted by: Akorshi
wow! its superb update...
khushi expecting again...
its tremendous joy for arnav...
thank you are not ending it soon...😃

Thank you!! yeap, happy days are here again!😉

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Katie

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Originally posted by: smat
Amazing update

Thank you!

Originally posted by: LadyR
This story has been like a real life journey, I'm crying as I read they will have another baby.. another life to nurture..

On a separate level the mother within me is crying for all the mothers who lost an angel today in the horrific massacre... ..

Thank you hun! I agree with you about the Massacre...I couldn't bring myself to write of Khushi's motherhood in this fic when so many mothers out there had lost their innocent special ones...it makes me sad...what is the world coming to?😭

Originally posted by: Uzii
Loved khusi's surprise n yes we don't want this story end so soon so the baby is most welcome.

Thank you! I know you guys want the story to go on, but unfortunately..it has to end...

Originally posted by: eishe10
Wonderful update!!! Beautiful surprise for Arnav from Khushi 😃

Thank you Eish...its a good gift for both of them.😉

Originally posted by: simi91
Beautiful update

Thank you!

Originally posted by: twinki
O have read all ur chapters in one go
Loved ur story
U r a wonderful writer
In fell in love with ur work
Will be eagerly waiting to read further

Thank you!! Welcome to B&B😳 I'll be updating in a few minutes...hope that you'll like what's remaining of this story. :)

Originally posted by: sfghfj
awesome update. loved it

Thank you!

Originally posted by: SanayaMyLIFE
Wonderful superbb update

Thank you!

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Katie

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Originally posted by: sunitikapoor
Such a beautiful chapter...Khushi has given second chance to all over. What a lucky guy getting fulfilled all his wishes...Khushi is so understanding. That was a great surprise for Arnav specially on their wedding anniversary.

Thank you hun! When Khushi does something, she does it thoroughly...second chances included...in a way, this is for both of them. they deserve to go through this phase together once in their lives, right?

Originally posted by: asha_mehta
Awesome part.
Khushi has given arnav the best gift for their anniversary. She has fulfilled one of arnav's biggest dreams.
Both of them are very excited and emotional about having a new baby. This time they want to go through this pregnancy together as a couple.
A big thank you to you for taking our request into consideration and showing this phase of their life. Hope that you will show the whole pregnancy with its different phases.and not just skip through.
Waiting eagerly for the next part
Continue soon

Thanks Ash! Khushi has definitely fulfilled one of his most ardent wishes. This baby is born out of love rather than an unfortunate act of anger and lust...not that they'll every see this baby any differently than Amber-Aditya but I felt like this was necessary to complete their relationship.😳 and please don't embarrass me by thanking me...this story belongs to you readers as much as it does to me...I always look for feedback and see if there is something the readers want to see...if it doesn't alter the story too much, I definitely try to incorporate it...😳 There will be a chapter dedicated to the pregnancy and its related joys/tantrums.😆

Originally posted by: swekus
fab update.. 😊

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Arilip
Thanks for extension and the baby🤗

Thank you!!

Originally posted by: Smrikta992
Wow!
Amazing..
Sorry for late comment..

Thanks hun! and no worries...not late at all.😊

Originally posted by: addictedx53
Sweet! Arnav did deserve to experience the joys of being an expectant father as well as a new one. Thanks for extending the story a bit more.

Thank you! not just arnav, Khushi deserves to go through this with her ever-loving hubby by her side yeah?😉

Originally posted by: Rohinid
Beautiful update

Thank you!

Originally posted by: nano123
Superbe update

Thank you!

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Katie

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Originally posted by: sudhalata1
Beautiful awesome update

Thank you!

Originally posted by: SanayaMyLIFE
Awsome update i read again

Aw, thank you!😳

Originally posted by: sutapasarbabhom
What a butiful chaptr khushi is pregnant its best surprise its realy feel hw they care for eachothr waiting for baby tanx for pm

Thank you sweets! If they care for each other so much now...can you imagine Arnav in the months to come?😆

Originally posted by: navjot7
awesome update
so khushi ir pregnant
they both r happy
kids r so cute
thnx for pm

Thank you! yeap...like they say...babies bring happiness

Originally posted by: ArshiHolic_Sush
Awsum blossum update..loved it..
Omg khushi is pregnant..dats the amazing nd beautiful anniversary gift for arnav..
Wht he missed during the birth of his twins gonna xprience it all now..lovely
Love to see how khushi alwayz knw wht arnav wanted to say or thinking without even he voicing it
Waiting for the reaction of twins ndfamily abt this wonderful newz
Continue soon

Thank you!! Khushi cheated...the gift is for her too!😉 not only will Arnav get to experience all this for the first time but they'll both go through the pregnancy as a couple...as a couple, this is their first baby...excitement levels are high!! Arnav was initially not too articulate with his words..losing her changed him to an extent but somethings dont change too drastically...khushi understood him then, she understands him now...😳

Originally posted by: loves_aishu
Woohoo..
they are gonna have another baby!!!
Truly this was the only part I think missing!!!!

For extending this story, love reading it,
but you are right this ha plateaued and extending anymore would spoiling it!!
I have just one request, whenever you end it, fine with me,
just give an Epilogue, that shows our Beauty and her Beast turned Prince Charming at the end of their journey, cause this is a part of their Happy Ever After,
I hope the Epilogue to show that they lived their Happily Ever After!!!!

Aww, thank you Aishu!! I won't extend it to the point of ruinage...😳 Like I said, just tying up loose ends and honestly...I dont think I would have been satisfied with my ending if I didnt give ArHi a chance to experience pregnancy as a couple...I'm probably more excited to write about it than you guys are to read it.😆😆 and yes, I promise an epilogue...pakka wala promise.😳..but I think what I have planned for the epilogue will not be expected by you...

Originally posted by: anuarshi6
Lovely update
Aww Khushi is again pregnant nd she said right abt Arnav missing early fatherhood
I m soo happy 4 dem😊

Thank you hun!!

Originally posted by: leabello
A really beautiful update!!! Loved it to bits.. Arnav's point of view is written really well!!! The satisfaction and contentment that he is finally experiencing in his life is marvellously portrayed here.
Loved the way Khushi broke the news of her pregnancy to Arnav...truly the best gift he could receive on his anniversary :)
Waiting to know the twins' reaction to this news...
Thanks for the WONDERFUL UPDATE!!!!
Continue soon :)

Thank you! Your comment about Arnav's POV being done well is a huge relief! I normally don't write from first POV so that was a challenge and then writing it through a man's eye... so thank you thank you for mentioning that!😳

Lets see how they break the news to the others and what reactions they get.😉

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Katie

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Originally posted by: Hina69
Heartwarming!

Thank you!!

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle
Beautiful update
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

Thank you hun!

Originally posted by: ..ri..
loved it..! nice update..

Thanks!

Originally posted by: 1chilly
I so loved this chapter.
Loved the whole happy family scene.
A new baby will just complete the picture.
Can't wait to see Arnav behave like a worried father to be.
And drive everyone crazy.

Thank you!! No more drama left...I decided to leave ArHi in BB in peace😆 I'll give them a couple more happy chapters and that will be it.😊 I love how you already know he's going to behave like a worried father-to-be and drive everyone crazy..its already begun...you'll see in the next chapter.😉😆

Originally posted by: ranogill
wonderful news

Thanks!

Originally posted by: ameena671
wow brilliant update loved it thank you for pm.

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Alai123
Awesome and lovely update
Khushi is pregnant again👏👍🏼
Thanks for the pm😉

Thank you hun :)

Originally posted by: sweetkajol
it's amazing...
first time I cried while reading, the emotions of arnav after knowing that she's excepting aww..
👏
thanks for the pm dear...

Thank you!! "happy tears" I hope...😳 Arnav is over the moon with the news...lets see how he likes this experience...lol

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Katie

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Originally posted by: sweetkajol
it's amazing update
first time I cried while reading.. it's awesome
awww she's pregnant..
nd arnav's emotions after hearing it.. 👏
thanks for d pm dear

Thank you Kaj! I hope you cried happy tears like ArHi😳

Originally posted by: Spoonai
From where this story beginnings and to where it is now, I'm so happy that they found each other again... Arnav was so broken for what he did to khushi and Watson a verge to destroy himself after knowing that he destroy khushi soul. But god bring them back together cause he know tht both can heal each other pain...
Usually I totally against rape and I felt so sympathy towards the culprit but Arnav was driven by alcohol and influence by others talk. And he has really gain himself forgiveness from khushi, he work for it and repent in the worst way ever... He punish himself for doing that to her even tho he wasn't in his sense and for them to come this long, I can't be more happy... Khushi also has being strong to gives Arnav that chance again and she couldn't hve being wrong in doing that.

They r a happy family now that cross the hurdle and face the worst demon of their life and now all they deserve is each, happiness, prosperity, health, togetherness and more happiness :)

Amazing amazing story :)

Thank you Spoonai! Arnav and Khushi have indeed treaded a torturous journey...from the incident to the separation to finding love again and then defeating their inner demons...they are each other's life-lines which is why Khushi kept traces of him in her life even when things were a mess (ie...kids' initials, her married name, her rings etc)

I am against rape too and this story of mine in no way changes that for me. I'll admit that if I was in Khushi's place, I would not have given the second chance...alcohol in the equation or not...that is why I took a long time to write the redemption track...I couldn't make Khushi (who happens to be one of my fav characters from the ones that I've written) forgive him/give him a second chance if I, as a writer, wasn't convinced that he deserves one...

After this hellish few years they've endured, they deserve happiness...they've dealt with their shares of hurdles in this life so I'll give them a complete happy ending.😳

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
Amazing update
Loved it <333Beautifully writtenThanks for the pm

Thank you so much hun!

Originally posted by: neha2013g
beautiful update

Thank you!

Originally posted by: faffy
Their joy and happiness is so contagious, so infectious ... I can't stop grinning from ear to ear! Their love for each other and their family shines bright and wraps us all in its warmth and glow! Your narration infuses the reader with such a 'warm feel good' feeling - I am floating on cloud nine!!

Thank you hun! I was grinning like an idiot while writing it so I completely understand...😆 They are each other's words, including the kids...the four of them share a close relationship and the family as a whole is close...now with the baby's arrival...even Akash will be convinced that all is well in ArHi world..😉 I hope to keep you floating on cloud nine until the epilogue then.😛

Originally posted by: Sweety012345
Awesome update
Thanks for extending the story

Thank you for reading and for liking the extention.

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan
Hiii...awesome update...loved it...loved ArHi... sooo cute...sooo happy khushi is pregnant... arnav Soo sweet...can't wait 4 more...con soon...thanks 4 da pm

Thank you soo much hun!

Originally posted by: BarunsBalwantK
mindblowinggg and veryyy adorable with sweet memories to rememeber and cherish forever

Thank you! and you're right...they're creating enough joys in their life to remember and cherish forever meanwhile having this bliss eclipse out of the painful 5 years.😊