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Meghana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: momi78
What exactly did Armaan do to Madhu this time? Or did he escape hearing RK before he could do anything? I hope it is the second. Otherwise RK will not be able to forgive himself. Awesome update!

Thanks momi
We'll see 😃

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Meghana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: PRATHA1
<font color="#0000FF" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Nice update Meghna!
Anu & yash nice jodi😊 I thought Rishbala are going to confess their feeling, but still they are doing GF, BF's acting! So Bakshi is Armaan's man & this party was the part of their plan! Is Deepali also involved in it? Armaan is so cheap, he misbehaved with madhu! He must be punishable! I am waiting to know how RK will take his revenge!
Waiting for the next update! thanks for pm me!
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Thanks Swati
All confusion will be cleared in next update 😃

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Meghana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: mydrashti
just amazingg every bit of it cant take my eyes off😛rocking update loveddd ittt❤️just put that armaan in helll😡im sure he is gonna pay for it RKK is there no fearrr😊👍🏼

Thank you dear 😃

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Meghana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: ArishaDeepz
Hi,awesome update ...lovely and beautiful..urggg arman😡

Thanks so much 😃

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Meghana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: kg15
Interesting part Meghu! Hope Bala is fine!
I so imagine Rohan in place of Armaan... 🤣

Thanks di 😃
I could always change Armaan's name to Rohan 🤣

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Meghana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: Ni33

YES! YES! Finally I have come first on one of your stories...

I am doing the pingvin dance...No...not the pingvin dance...traditional...no...mix of traditional dance and my own...🤣I came first... To be honest...I loveall your stories...but this one is something special...😳Ha...Sudha I beat you this time...😆I came first...🤣
Congrats Ni...you did get first 😆im proud of you

Oho Mr. Bakshi threw a party...Nothing suspicous about that...No...absolutely not...🤣

Wow. I thought you forgot about Yash Meghu...😆He finally reappeared...🤣Only to wish to rip his own ears off thanks to Anu's nonstop jabbering about random stuff...🤣I would absolutely not wish to be in his place. I rather be in Madhu's place...Just so I could kick and knock that Armaan to a place he won't be able to remember who he is...🤣He would keep asking... Who I am?...Who am I? 🤣Poor Armaan, you are missing out on something...🤣
like nails on a chalkboard 🤣 He would be kicking in the place every man dreads to be kicked in🤣

RK thought Madhu was beautiful...😆I kept thinking wait is this the update where RK would trick Madhu to reveal her true feelings...😆Only so he can... well do whatever he wishes...🤣

Next update Ni...next update😆 well maybe...let's just say the prologue comes in here
Yes both of you are right...RK stole Madhuawayfrom you Yash. 😲OMG I just came to a realisation. What if RK didn't made that deal...Would Madhu end up with Yash? Yes...Yash is jealous of RK...He is cursing him from inside or stealing Madhu from him...Beware RK you have another enemy in your hands...🤣
he could use Anu as his weapon...the nonstop blabber machine🤣

Vodka? I thought he drank scotch... 🤣I won't type about that...🤣Just forget it...😆

At least she cam to him and forbid him to drink...😆I honestly thought when she took the glass from his hand she would finish off the drink herself...🤣But no...She only gave him a smirk...😆
Never! 🤣 I don't want a Tallibala 3.0...that's a murder plot too many 🤣

Then came the teasing and romance...🤣And RK noticing Bakshi... I so don't pity him...🤣I would probably write something worse about the whole thing...🤣Like RK confronting Armaan and kill him right there...🤣But naa. We got to see Armaan attac Madhu and us somewhat feeling pity for her for him to attac her...🤣Hello Hero!! Do you hear me? If miss Heroine was alone and crying in a corner why didn't you shout making everyone enter the room and you go after Armaan?😆I know it was for the suspense right?🤣I am looking forward to the confrontation...🤣And since Armaan is out and both Madhu and Anu are fit and fine...I assume that RK would talk her into staying some time longer at his mansion for her safety and keeping Anu company.😆I see right through your plan Superstar...🤣
It's almost like you are living in his house and watching his every move...and even reading his mind...his subconscious 🤣

Don't think I forgot about Deepali...😆Na.. She deserves to be last and to have her own little section of mockery...🤣We are little bruised aren't we Deepali?🤣What is bruised? Your cheek or your pride by coming like that to a high class party?🤣
She lost her RK...she doesn't have a clothes line now🤣

I would add a little black Eye...🤣But she wasn't that much hurt so she would get a black Eye..
Unless Madhu impailed her eye with the crutches🤣

I assume that you sent a PM. Well since a very long time I don't need it...🤣I got first and I am loving it. Yes McDonald's I stole your catchphrase...🤣And you haven't had me as a customer since the year 2002...🤣
McDonald's is gross...never had me as a customer🤣

Thanks for the update and for the PM Chotu. And I got my payback...😈🤣You did get your payback...and a very big one🤣

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Meghana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: madhurish
Awesome update meg.
as ever loved it bcis this story is one with more romance among ur other works lol.
when yash came i was like who is this new character? Is he anu's boy friend then it came to my mind that long back u showed him as rks friend with whom madhu worked as PA. But then he went gayab?lol now he is back to get hiz ear drums torn & too get blood ooze from his ears bcos of anus non stop chattering lol. If i were in yashs place i would zip her mouth lol.
when yash & Anu went for dancing i thought rk will ask madhu for a dance but nah...he went glup vodka lol but our challu madhu will never miss a single chance so she went near Him & Snatched d vodka glass so that he could hold her waist tight lol & Bar dance on lol.
hmm...this rk is more sharp & Smart than OL rk lol.
when mr.bakshi was eyeing on rishbala i thought he got embarrassed seeing these two besharmi's but nah..he went to execute his plan..so that chandlier falls was also a part of d plan even on that day bakshi stopped rk straight to d chandlier but madhu saved him.. Never thought he sas armaan's man.
gah..i hate armaan for what he did to madhu. He only rejected her & now why he is behind her. I want to strangle him for misbehaving with madhu...
today u escape u idiot but ur cards are marked. Get ready to face d storm. My rk is coming to kill u for wjat u did to anu & Now with madhu. U messed with rk's two precious girls so u have to face d fire.
haha...dipali & Her pinky cheeks oh why its not black or blue? Next time madhu give her even a tight slap. U may ask for what reason but i will give u d reason , i think dips will join hands with armaan & Play some dirty games & That time rk will handle armaan & U take care of dippsy lol.
i wish nothing wrong happened with madhu... U left us as cliff hanger. This is not fair meg..
now as eager as ever waiting for next mass update.
u r doing a fab job dear...in two weeks time u beautifully sketch the plots well & Giving us tremendous updates.
thanks for that...

More romance than THAT story? 🤣 I have to agree... 😆
He comes back only to become partially deaf from Anu's blabbering 🤣
RK and alcohol are inseparable...vodka is Madhu's sautean...🤣 he wated it more than Madhu
Yes I agree...RK actually has a mind in this story 🤣
Now Armaan should sing..."It's the final countdown..." To himself in the corner...RK is coming...
Cliffhangers are my thing sudha...it's hialrious to read reader frustration over them 🤣
I do love to torture 🤣
Awww thanks...and thanks for reading them sudha 🤗

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Meghana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: Shriya.bk
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Yay! !! I'm 3rd😆
I was eagerly waiting for this...

Meghu. ..Meghu. ..Meghu. ..you always steal my heart.with ur stories😆
I am tired of saying this...😆

Coming to the update. ..
Well Mr.Sexy and Miss.Sexy you both together make a hot couple😆
Oh ...man you have to be kidding me Meghu...I thought that there would some passionate dance between them...but na...Instead like what Sudha di told it was bar dance.Rk your sister Anu is one chatter box... I am thinking that Anu might be in a relationship with Ya sh that's why she was blushing😆. Well I thought something intresting will go on between Madhu and vodka like how it went between Rk and vodka but it didn't happen😆

Mr..Bakshi. ...what did u think huh? That Mr. Rk will not keep an eye while romancing. ...too..bad..Didn't you know he had very sharp senses...he saw u talking to someone and that was none other than Armaan. ..I do think after u know that Rk gotta know about it u would be willing to die instead of messing with Rk...🤣

Armaan you escape how many times ever you want but you will always get caught by Rk😆
Madhu I thought that you were gonna kicked that Armaan when he kept his hand on ur wrist or you would have bit him and told "Don't you dare mess with Madhubala" but u were totally opposite to that...lol...😆

No thanks for pm...because you already know the reason😆

Keep saying it shriya...your keyboard will never get tired...well unless you break it 🤣
I've done that before...a while key came off 🤣
What's wrong with bar dances? 🤣 vodka is Madhu's sautean 🤣
Bakshi is a risk taker 🤣 he isn't the brightest one 🤣
Suspense...suspense...could Madhu have made a comeback 🤣 we'll see 😆

Thanks shriya and welcome for the PM that served you no purpose 😆

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Meghana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#239

Dedicating this chappy to my insane sis sudha...thank you sudha for reading it and giving me your feedback...love you 🤗

Chapter 20
(RK's POV)

I rushed Mashu outside. Anu and Yash followed. I sat her down on a bench and kneeled down in front of her.

"Madhu...its okay. I'm here..." I stroked her hair and held her hand. She still sobbed.

"Rishu...what happened?" Anu asked.

"I'll explain." I said abruptly. I told them both of what happened behind the scenes. Anu stared at me for a moment and sat down next to Madhu.

"RK...I think we should take her home." Yash said. I nodded. But Madhu wouldn't budge from her spot. Her sobs grew louder.

I pulled her into my arms and gently strokes her hair. She held me tight, soaking my jacket with tears. Once she regained her composure she sat up again.

Then she started laughing... I stared at her, utterly confused. Why was she laughing? She wiped her tears and laughed a little longer. I raised an eyebrow.

"Madhu...are you drunk again?" I said. She slapped me.

"I don't drink..." She was avoiding the topic, which made me mad.

"Then what happened? Did you see something funny?"

"Did you really think I'd let Armaan do that to me? Nope." She said. "He tried, and I replied to him with a nice knee to where it hurts the most." She laughed a little. "He fled when you smashed the door open."

"Then why did you start crying?" I said, my voice on edge.

"The way he touched me...I didn't like it at all. He touched me in the most inappropriate places. I felt disgusted and couldn't handle my emotions anymore. It was very forceful. This wasn't the Armaan I fell in love with."

"I won't spare him Madhu..." I cupped her face in my hands. She nodded and sniffled.

"Let's go home now Madhu...put that behind you..." Anu said.

The car arrived, and we all got inside.

(Madhu's POV)

"Madhu...I don't understand how you were once in love with Armaan. How? He's so cheap." Anu asked.

"He wasn't the Armaan he is now. He was sweet and always there for me. Now he's just lost in his fame and fortune."

"I find it hard to believe he was decent before." She said, crossing her arms.

"And he never will be again. That old Armaan is dead." I said firmly.

Everyone stayed quiet afterwards. We soon reached the mansion. I quickly stepped off and rushed to my room. I had to pack my belongings. RK was taking me home today. He followed me inside, leaning against the cupboard while I paced back and forth and filled my suitcase with my things.

"What's the hurry Madhu? You look like you're going to miss a plane."

"There's a thing called excitement RK. I'm going back to Trishna and Malik. I missed them so much...I haven't seen them in so long."

"Will you miss me?" He asked. I stopped and stared at him.

"Well..." I said. "No..." I stuck my tongue out at him and continued my packing.

"Really?" He smirked.

"Yes...really." I said. He watched me pack, still giving me his signature smirk. I only now just noticed he had changed a tight white shirt and jeans. It outlined his physique perfectly. I almost started gaping.

"Are you mesmerized jungli billi?" He raised an eyebrow. "Or are you acting?" He came closer. My heart raced, my palms were sweating.

"Maybe I am...maybe I'm not." I said. He towered over me, but I pushed him away. He grabbed my waist and pulled me back onto his chest. He moved a lock of hair from my face and caressed my cheek. I lost myself in his eyes. I could feel my heart beating out of my chest.

(RK's POV)

I wanted to confess. Before she left. And I had the perfect plan for the occasion.

Our little moment was interrupted by Bittuji. Once again. Madhu got off of me and fixed her hair, while I glared at Bittuji. He laughed.

"Sorry chief." He chuckled. "Bakshi is here to see you."

I had forgotten about Bakshi. He would get my wrath. And a few broken bones here and there.

"Tell him to wait." I said. Bittuji nodded and walked off.

"Go on RK...while I finish my packing." Madhu shooed me off.

"I'll be back my jungli billi." She looked at me surprised and shut the door in my face.

I was all prepared to bash Bakshi black and blue...but then I realized that he could be a use to me. I could use him to destroy Armaan. A new plan came into my head and I continued into the living room. He was pacing back and forth.

"RK is present, Mr. Bakshi." I sat down on the couch and put my feet on the coffee table.

"Sir why did you leave suddenly? Was there any problem?" He asked frantically.

"No problems that concern you, Bakshi." I said. He looked at me in disbelief. I waited for a response.

"Are you sure?"

"Yes I'm sure."

He stood silent again. I waited for anything else he had to say and then I got up and walked to Madhu, who was waiting a few feet away with her suitcase. Anu came out with her.

"You may leave, Bakshi." I said, slightly irritated. Bittuji came and escorted him out. He looked confused as he walked out.

"I'm going to miss you Madhu." Anu said, hugging her tight.

"Me too...but I will come and visit." She said. I smiled. Then I got a text.

"Everything is set, RK sir..." It was the decorator. I replied to the text and then looked at Madhu.

"Shall we go, jungili billi?" I asked.

"Yeah, let's go." She hugged Anu again and pulled her suitcase along behind me.

(Madhu's POV)

We drove silently down the road. I stared out the window, remembering that one night I got stuck with RK. When the car broke down and how I got drunk. I giggled on the thought. RK turned on some music. "Tum Hi Ho" was playing. He was humming.

Sometime later, he stopped the car in front of a large farmhouse. It was decorated with flashing, colorful lights.

"RK, have you forgotten where I live?"

He didn't say anything. He just flashed his dimpled smile. I sat there confused as ever, while he got out of the car and opened my door. He offered me his hand.

"RK...what are you doing?" I said. He still stayed silent. It was annoying.

His next action shocked me. He lifted me into his arms and took me inside the farmhouse. He put me down onto a fluffy love seat. I was even more confused.

"RK..."

"Shhh...don't say a word..." He said, then disappearing somewhere.

I got up from the seat and tried to follow him...but suddenly a shower of flowers fell on top of me. Rose petals. The lights dimmed to a soft glow. RK stepped forward and held me close to him.

"Madhu...I've been waiting for this moment for a while now. Now it's the time." He said.

"What?" I asked, confused.

He went closer to my ear and whispered something. Something that shook my world.

"Madhubala Shamsher Malik...Superstar Rishabh Kundra had fallen for you..."

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Posted: 10 years ago

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OMG! I came 1st even in this also unbelievable right...Meghu.😆Well then let me give you the explanation for this...

Well again I was roaming the forum and when I was roaming I saw PWF 7 minutes by Abiy4life.So I went and checked and Volah you had ressed over there and at that time luck was good for me because no one else had replied and I ressed...and I was even happy that your Lover didn't trouble me 🤣

I know Meghu you don't need explanations...😆

Now coming to the story...

Meghu this is version number 1.0 Madbala which I have created...😆 OMG! I knew that this Madbala version 1.0 wasn't going to cry on that armaan though she laughed but she still cried😆 ...Man I would have been laughing like hell after kicking him on his private part and I would have even included his a** to kick...😆 but what to do Meghu fate isn't so lucky wih me ... ...🤣

Man Rk why are you so worried about that Madbaal version 1.0 hun? Why can't you worry about me?😆 Did you forget taht you named that Madbala version 1.0 JUNGLIBILLI tooo bad..🤣

She can do anything she can even do that to you if you misbehave with her🤣

Before that it itself I give you a suggestion come to me and I don't mind killing that Madbala version 1.0 before she kills me for you! 🤣 Well Meghu I think I am going to a do a world war with that Madbala 1.0 version...🤣

Dude Bakshi Go Get a Life! Before My Jaan Rk could kill you... Well you see he already nows you were the one who helped that lame idiot Armaan.I think My jaan is going to give you slow death...🤣

Rk my Jaan I'm crying like hell (In My heart not literally 😆). You are planing something for that Madbala version 1.0 tooo bad and I know what you are going to tell her😆 but before taht itself I will tell her "I HATE YOU! MADBALA VERSION 1.0"🤣

I know Meghu you will tell Rk is not going to be mine but he is still mine 🤣

No Thank you for the pm Meghu!😈

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