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Posted: 10 years ago
Rula diya aapne kitna tragic haii aap ki story ne mujhe reome and juliet ki yaad dila di paar yeh kitna emotionally sweet hai soo kya baat kya baat aur kya baat 👏
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sahi hai di ek music toh ek tune best of the best 👏 in ❤️ with ur updaatee!!!
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Read both chapters together, forgive me for the late, Jiji 😳 I am very busy with my writings 😳
the rehearsal chapter, it is a pleasure to see Satyaki-Subhadra & Bheem-Haima's love is blooming 😃 but I did not understand this line:
Kanha knew the day where Yagya's one more bondage will be cleared, is nearing, but this is going to be painful for her.
what does it mean 😕 what is Yagya's bondage here? Bheem's love of previous life?
& how dare you Jiji, why do you want a solo performance 😭 you know it will hurt Arjun devarji 😭
finally it did not happen, thanks to Govinda 😃 loved how you described Yagya as music & Arjun as lyrics
Continue soon!
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Oh, Yagyaaa... Its been a looong time, rite?? Sorry, Dear I'm always late😭😭activate javascript
As always... your writing are so beautiful, Dear! Such an emotional updates. I love your beautiful phrases. Especially this one

If Yagya was the music, Arjun became the lyrics and they danced as if everything was non-existent . Romance was not a play of burning desires but a play of emotions where we forget ourselves.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Yagyaa diii!!!!!
Idhaar v late hoo gaya bahuut...Sorry..sorry..sorry...tbc sorry

Read all the chappys I missed...aab kyaa batuaa dii pahele toh akhee gile hoo gayee thee paar aab hamara hi Dil dhakane laga hai kii aab age kyaa hoga Dancing maii😳😳...very Happy for Subhi & Styaki😃...but Ardii...aab jaldi jaldi next part update karoo dii😉

And a big round of applause for u dii👏Awesome chappys⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: areshauchiha

Rula diya aapne kitna tragic haii aap ki story ne mujhe reome and juliet ki yaad dila di paar yeh kitna emotionally sweet hai soo kya baat kya baat aur kya baat 👏

Thanks a lot, Aresha!! Romeo aur Juliet se jyada dard hai yahan!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Urmila11

Read both chapters together, forgive me for the late, Jiji 😳 I am very busy with my writings 😳
the rehearsal chapter, it is a pleasure to see Satyaki-Subhadra & Bheem-Haima's love is blooming 😃 but I did not understand this line:
Kanha knew the day where Yagya's one more bondage will be cleared, is nearing, but this is going to be painful for her.
what does it mean 😕 what is Yagya's bondage here? Bheem's love of previous life?
& how dare you Jiji, why do you want a solo performance 😭 you know it will hurt Arjun devarji 😭
finally it did not happen, thanks to Govinda 😃 loved how you described Yagya as music & Arjun as lyrics
Continue soon!

I am sorry too, Devika!! I was busy with some huge work so I couldn't come much on IF!!! And it's okay!! Yes, Bheem and Yagya's love of Dwapar YUg, is the most difficult bondage for her!! Aapke Devarji ko dard hoga par hamara, hamara to dil hi toot gaya hai, Devika!! THanks a lot!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AikaSheikh

Oh, Yagyaaa... Its been a looong time, rite?? Sorry, Dear I'm always late😭😭activate javascript

As always... your writing are so beautiful, Dear! Such an emotional updates. I love your beautiful phrases. Especially this one

If Yagya was the music, Arjun became the lyrics and they danced as if everything was non-existent . Romance was not a play of burning desires but a play of emotions where we forget ourselves.


Thanks a ton, Aika!! I miss your comments but you must be busy, so its okay!! That's my favorite line!!
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Originally posted by: Ipsita_Ipu

Yagyaa diii!!!!!

Idhaar v late hoo gaya bahuut...Sorry..sorry..sorry...tbc sorry

Read all the chappys I missed...aab kyaa batuaa dii pahele toh akhee gile hoo gayee thee paar aab hamara hi Dil dhakane laga hai kii aab age kyaa hoga Dancing maii😳😳...very Happy for Subhi & Styaki😃...but Ardii...aab jaldi jaldi next part update karoo dii😉

And a big round of applause for u dii👏Awesome chappys⭐️

It's okay, IPu!!! I understand!!! Thanks a lot, dear!! I am obliged!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 45:


The giver of pain and the healer, Time had passed very fast. Rehearsals on the full swing, flame of passion high and desires burning, Yagya and Arjun were ready to perform this afternoon. As the best dancers, they were not nervous for their performance but they were nervous for every touch of theirs. And this nervousness for not good for their dance.

They reached the place in their own cars and sat down beside each other, with no other option, silently waiting for their call. Dressed in a fiery red saree, looking like a flame, Yagya was walking fantasy of every guy present there. With Kajal highlighted eyes, minimal makeup and heaving chest, she was truly breath-taking. On the other hand, the heartthrob Arjun, was making every girl's heart go weak by his looks intensified by the color, white.

Soon their call came, and everyone's breath halted. All the nervousness of Arjun and Yagya was out of the window as the music began,

Dhak dhak karne laga, ho mora jiyara darne laga
Saiya baiya chhodna, kachchi kaliya tod naa
Dil se dil mil gaya, mujhse kaisi yeh haya
Tu hai meree dilaruba, kya lagti hai wah re wah
Dhak dhak karne laga, ho mora jiyara darne laga


Their choice of song was as breath-taking as they were. The intense
chemistry visible in each other's eyes was just a door to each other's heart
from the dancing heartthrobs.

Apna kaha jab piya tune mujhe, mai mithe mithe sapne sajane lagee
Dekha meree rani jab maine tujhe, meree soyi soyi dhadkan gane lagee Jadu teraa chhane laga, meree nas nas me samane laga
Khud ko mai bhulane laga, tujhe sanso me basane laga
Rishta abb yeh rishta, sathi tutega naa tode kabhee
Dil se dil mil gaya mujhse kaisi yeh haya
Dhak dhak karne laga, ho mora jiyara darne laga


Her every shattered sweet dream had his name written on it. His every
abruptly broken sleep was due to her thoughts. Every heart-beat of her hadhis shadow on it and his every cell had her name. They forgot themselves
for each other and they were incomplete with each other. The sensualistic
song had so much to say about each other's feelings that the expressions
contrary to those on their face were the tears which formed in their eyes.

Uljhi hai kalee kalee lat teree, jara inn julfon ko suljhane toh de
Itani bhee kya hai jaladi tujhe, ghadi apne milan kee tu aane toh de
Aise naa bahane bana meree rani abb toh bahon me aa
Aise naa nigahe mila koyee dekhega toh sochega kya
Masti chhayi hai masti, aake lag jaa gale se abhi


Arjun only hoped that he should be detangle his Yagya from the web of pain
that his love had caused. Reasons of being in each other's arms were too
many but the reason of not being was only for others and the pain they had
in themselves. Arjun knew Yagya would never be back if he tried the
romantic way but his heart always won over his mind, which thought,
he needs to make her feel special.

Dhak dhak karne laga, ho mora jiyara darne laga
Saiya baiya chhodna, kachchi kaliya tod naa
Dil se dil mil gaya, mujhse kaisi yeh haya
Tu hai meree dilaruba, kya lagti hai wah re wah
Dhak dhak karne laga, ho mora jiyara darne laga

The both hoped that each of the numerous lifts, would lift off the burden off
their hearts and each of the twirls would change the situation, but none
happened. Because, it was not timing for wishing things to happen, it was time
to make things happen.

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TBC

I dunno why, I always give my best to this FF!! But this was and will be my all-time favorite!!
Hope you liked it!!
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Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago

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