Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/Chapter 13/ (Pg-133)

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Saranya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#691

Ok mahir will wait fr ur update

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Tooba Mahir Mukhtar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#692

Ashlok Dark FF

My Ransacked Heart

...Teaser...

She was terrified of him and had wanted to ask him that why he had kidnapped her? But she also didn't want him to know that she was feeling afraid of him. So she had raised her stubborn chin and snapped at him that she didn't know...

Shlok had grabbed her chin then, pushing his face near hers. His nostrils were flaring with rage and his eyes were throwing red daggers at her...

His whole face was contorted in an inhuman mask, the mask of a monster...

You don't know or you don't want me to know, he had asked chillingly. She had again shaken her head in negation and had answered, that she honestly didn't know.

He had squeezed her jaw then and enraged by his manhandling she had spit in his eyes...

Shlok had dragged her face towards him then by yanking on her hair and had crushed her lips beneath his mouth in the most basic way a man can subdue a woman...

Edited by mahirmukhtar - 10 years ago

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priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#693

🤓What he wants to know from her????

Oh no ur teaser giving me headaches😳 pls good gal na...my cutie pie na...my choco chip na?? post the rest of the update now😳

Trying my luck with plan b😆

On serious note😆

Awesome teaser and the pic...😲 a gal hanging n a swing but her world is upside down...that's so😆 creepy

Edited by Priya_ShrAvi - 10 years ago

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meerab

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Posted: 10 years ago

#694

Woww...its damn interesting teaser...loved astha...the fighter and now mahiu update it soon gal...else I will turn in to a😈

And yippeee...finally the pic uploaded...so shlokie had arranged swings for our astha tooo..good going shlokie devil😆
Just kidding...love the pic...its quite intense if one understands...and I love such dark and deep pictures😳

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Tooba Mahir Mukhtar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#695

Originally posted by: Priya_ShrAvi
🤓What he wants to know from her????
Oh no ur teaser giving me headaches😳 pls good gal na...my cutie pie na...my choco chip na?? post the rest of the update now😳
Trying my luck with plan b😆

On serious note😆
Awesome teaser and the pic...😲 a gal hanging n a swing but her world is upside down...that's so😆 creepy

Ohh you are having a headache! Should i come and rub your head for you! 😈😆

And na my sweetu my coconut pudding you see i am very stubborn! 😈😆 Will post the chap tommorrow! 😆 (You can give gandi gandi galian to me now! 🤣)

And I liked the pic it was really creepy but apt with Astha's situation! 😉

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Tooba Mahir Mukhtar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#696

Originally posted by: meerab...
Woww...its damn interesting teaser...loved astha...the fighter and now mahiu update it soon gal...else I will turn in to a😈
And the pic is not loading...hooo...is it a skull for me mahi or something else????

Will update tommorrow 😉 meanwhile i am pulling your leg! 😈😆

Your net speed is slow too today 😲 and i thought only mine was i had to log on in india forums with a vpn address even the main page was not loading!

And the pic is not of skulls but more shocking and creepy than skulls! 😈😆

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deblina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#697

Mahi thanks for the teaser:) and for pm slso:)
interesting:)i liked the brave astha:)that monster:(
update soon:)tc:)

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Tooba Mahir Mukhtar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#698

Originally posted by: meerab...
Woww...its damn interesting teaser...loved astha...the fighter and now mahiu update it soon gal...else I will turn in to a😈

And yippeee...finally the pic uploaded...so shlokie had arranged swings for our astha tooo..good going shlokie devil😆
Just kidding...love the pic...its quite intense if one understands...and I love suck dark and deep pictures😳

Me too like dark and gothic art! 😳And dark fiction too! 😈😆

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Tooba Mahir Mukhtar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#699

Originally posted by: maitydeblina
Mahi thanks for the teaser:) and for pm slso:)
interesting:)i liked the brave astha:)that monster:(
update soon:)tc:)

Welcome buds! 🤗

You'll see in future that she is more spirited than Shlok had thought off! 😉

Will update tommorrow! 😉