zaya ss:mujhe haq hai*prolouge for chapter 13 updated(27/12)*- Page 35

Originally posted by: urvisaini

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Hello chudail

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

Hello chudail

I know I am late par kya karun yaar I have to submit an assignment next week n I have not yet started

But 7h chapter Kay batha dete hun it was Hhhooottt

It was to hot for me to handle

I am chota innocent baccha

8Th chapter

Amazing

Superb

Loved it

AWESOME

Saif is soo cute

N even Zaya were very cute in this update

Vah meri Aaliya Zain ko wink kiya aur voh cricket match har geya

Continue soon

But next separation ho ga kya??!

thanks chudail...
I hope u liked it...
Oops I am sorry for 7chapter...
I forgot about the content...
So sorry...
Yes separation is needed

Priya will u update today or not
Jaldi karo na i cant wait for this story anymore
Iss k chakar main maine movie dekh li ... but u changed the whole story
Update soon

Originally posted by: zayalove

Priya will u update today or not
Jaldi karo na i cant wait for this story anymore
Iss k chakar main maine movie dekh li ... but u changed the whole story
Update soon

I will see alina if I get time..
Story Maine thodi si change nahi puri ki hai but ending toh Vivah jaise hogi with no gutter

LOVED IT!! :) PLEASE CONTINUE SOON <3

Originally posted by: Brainbox1999

LOVED IT!! :) PLEASE CONTINUE SOON <3

thanks..
i will continue it soon

Hello guys..

Sorry for the late update...

I am very happy with the responses i am getting..

Thanks everybody...

This one is for alina(zayalove) and my cute friend sakeenah (zayacrazy?


Hope u like it alina and sakeenah..

Here is the chapter.

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CHAPTER-9

The night was going to be very short for the love birds who were going to be separated tomorrow...

Everybody was busy playing cards when zain called aliya on the terrace

As she entered she was pulled into a bone crushing hug by zain..aliya too hugged him back ...

Zain started crying

Aliya: zain kya hua??? Why are u crying??

Her voice was full of concern

Zain: u also know aliya why i am crying

And he again hugged her..

With every passing second he tightened the hug showing to the world that he will never let her go..

Aliya tired to console him best because she also knew that she could herself break ..

Aliya: zain we are going to start with a promise that we will become one

she pulled herself back and gave her smile to zain which zain always liked..

a simple sweet smile that can convey a thousand of words..

zain too smiled

zain: aliya u know i will never forget these days in my life..our masti..games..adventure...every single minute that we spend together from hiding from our family members and the little blackmailler whose promise we have to complete soon..

he winked at her making her blush

she hit him slighty on his shoulder

zain:kya???

Aliya: shayad abhi koi roh raha tha

Zain: kya laiya tum bhi na

Aliya: kya mein bhi na

She placed a kiss on his cheeks

Zain: aliya i have something for u !!

Aliya: kya zain??

Zain: close your eyes

Aliya: par

Zain: par var kuch nahi gift chaiye to close your eyes

She followed the order as she became greedy for the gift that her going to be husband brought for her..

Zain: aliya this gift is really special

Aliya: jaldi do na

Zain: just wait aliya

He took out a small maroon box from the pocket opened it and took out the chain from the box

Zain: open your eyes aliya

As she opened her eyes she saw a chain with a beautiful pendant written" za"

Aliya: this is beautiful zain but what is " za"??

She said pointing towards the pendant

Zain: aree aliya z means zain and a means aliya

He passed his cutest smile to her

Aliya: i loved it zain

Zain: aliya like in this pendant " za" will always be together zain and aliya will always be together..

Noone will be able to separate the two..

A shooting star was passing

Aliya saw that

Aliya: zain woh dekho shooting star jaldi se koi wish mango

She folded her hands to wish and zain to followed her

Aliya pov

Allah always bless us..zain ke jitne bhi sadness hai give it to me and full his life with happiness..

Give us blessing that we always saty together in whatever the situation may be



Zain pov

Allah i never asked for anything..u took my mother i said nothing.. u gave me what i always wanted..

I have complain with u but just fulfill the wish of love aliya and always keep her happy..



They opened their eyes and passed a smile to each other

Zain : toh kya manga tume aliya allah se??

Aliya: wish batate todhi na hai

Zain: what to hide from your husband??

Aliya: husband se kuch chije hide kar sakte hai mr.zain abdullah

She said in a teasing tone..

Zain: acha

Aliya: haan

He started tickling her

Aliya: stop stop

Zain: no

Aliya: okey 2 waits

Zain: okey

Aliya: ( breathing heavily) aree tum woh chain toh le aaye par usse pehnayega kaun??

Zain:oops i forgot ..

He took out the chain from his pocket and wore it around aliya's neck..

Aliya took the pendant in her hands..

The diamond written " za" shinning in her soft beautiful hands..

She stood on her toes and kissed zain's cheek once again

Zain: yeh kiike liye??

Aliya: for coming into my life...for making me how to love..for making me more beautiful under your love..

Zain: toh yeh baat hai

Aliya: haan

Zain: phir mera bhi banta hai..

He too pecked aliya's cheeks

Aliya: yeh kislyei??
zain: apni khahi hui line copy paste kar do

Both laughed

Zain took aliya's hand and both sat on the bench

With zain arms wrapped around her

Zain: u know aliya when u made me to wear this ring a thousand volt current ran into my spine

Aliya: this happed with me too

She took out her hand and was staring at her ring

Zain too took out his hand and kept it next to aliya

Zain: u know aliya these rings were in pair and the salesman said that always keep these rings together

Aliya: when zain and aliya are together these rings will always be together..

And both hgged each other again

Back ground music: mujhe haq hai

Zain: waise aliya mujhe haq hai tumse door rehne ka..tumhare intajaar mein time katne ka..i deserve it..

Before he could say soomething else she kept her lands on his mouth

Aliya: shh zain aur nahi..baas yeh imtehaan hai joh hamein par karni hai..

The night passed in each other arms talking and smiling..

The day came for which no body was waiting for..

The day of 2 months and 20 days separation..

Aliya woke up and found herself in zain's arms and smiled at the beautiful morning but the realisation struck her when she realised what is today..

She got up and went at the end to cry..

Zain woke up and looked around as he heared faint sounds of sobbing..

There he found his life his princess crying

He went near her

Zain: why are u crying aliya??
aliya: jaise u donot know which day is today

His glooming face became sad

Zain: yaad hai princess tumne kal kya khaha tha yeh hamari akhri imtehaan hai and then will be together for rest of our life..

He wipped her tears

Zain: chalo aliya get ready mujhe see of nahi karna

Aliya: haan karna hai na

Before they made way to each other bed room they hugged again because the next time they will hug each other not as lover but as husband and wife..

Jaane kaun ho

Par ho tum kahin

Hai dil ko mere yakeen

Na hai ibdeta

Na hai intehaan

Hai meri dastaan wahi..

Yeh ishq haiii...

Tera junoon ya sakoon tera

Teri khushi ya tera ghum

Jo bhi jiya woh jiya maine

Jo bhi kiya tujhe kiya..

Beintehaaa...

They broke the hug and went towards their rooms with tears of separation in their eyes..

After good 1 hour the family gathered outside to bid a adeiu to abdullahs

Aliya was standing near stairs and was waiting for zain

Zain came down with a heavy heart..

Aliya: zain ruko

Zain: kya hua aliya??

He said in a heavy voice..

His expressions depicting his pain

aliya: i want to say something to u zain

zain: kya aliya??

aliya: take care of yourself zain...donot drink cold water as u get cold and u donot look nice with red nose of yours

zain: bas??
he said with his voice more heavy
aliya: nahi aur bhi hai??
zain: jaldi bolo aliya it's getting late
aliya: i love u zain
he smiled
zain: i love u too aliya
they were again going to hug when nafeesa called zain..
with heavy hearts and tears in their eyes they got separated for a short time but for them which was going to be a very long time..

zain's car drove through the curvy roads of mussorie while aliya stood on the terrace seeing the car getting lost in the dense forest of mussorie

One month passed with lots of chit chats on mesaangers and talking on phone..

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So guys...
Here was the chapter for which u were waiting for...
More than 1100+ words...
Waiting for feed backs...
Priya

that was so cute and adorable

Originally posted by: Laila_Shiri_Lee

that was so cute and adorable

i can feel their pain

its to much

amazing chapter

continue soon

and thanks for the pm

thanks u so much shiri...
Glad u liked it..
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