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Hi dear i just prologue god damn it. It's so emotional yaar
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hello friends, first of all very very sorry dil se for late update , i am very busy these days so not being able to write and update , very sorry plz forgive me and dil se thank u so very much for all your sweet lovely wonderful precious special comments , they really mean a lot to me , i couldnt reply to anyone because of shortage of time sorry from the bottom of my heart , but i will surely try to reply u all very soon ,

AVOID MISTAKES , I HAVE NOT PROOFREAD IT , PLEASE DO LIKE AND COMMENT FROM HEART IF YOU WANT ME TO UPDATE 😊 ! THANK YOU !😊

~~HUM MAR JAYENGE~~

{part - b of ch-15 'MUJHE TERI ZAROORAT HAI }

AFTER 2 DAYS

rey was asking this to an unknown on the road while showing him a photo in the mobile - have you seen this girl ??

unknown man - no

then he rush to another man and ask the same but again no , then to another woman but still the answer was no , .. no .. no .. no.. no one has seen her ...

rey s eyes were getting wet by now with so much worry , love and care

rey to that photo - where are you taani???? Where are you my love ???

meanwhile swayam came to him and ask " kuch pata chala taani kahan hai ?? "

rey - nahi , tujhe ??

swayam - nahi

both were so worried for taani , so many questions and bad thoughts running in their mind that where has taani gone and what has happened ?? is she fine or not ?? what if something bad happened to her ?? is her health ok or not ?? .. god so many questions but no answer , only worries , fears and helplessness in both of their eyes , hearts and minds

sometime life bring us to a point where everything seems shattering and there is no way out ..

rey and swayam say together with the only hope of god ji in their hearts - hey Krishna ji please help us and give our taani back to us and please keep her safe wherever she is

rey with some tears of pain and love in his eyes " mujhe mere pyaar se milva do Krishna ji please mujhe mere pyaar se milva do , I promise I will never leave her for a second also, I will take proper care of her pakka , plz mujhe meri jaan se milva do "

swayam also say with wet eyes" plz give my nanhi pari back to me Krishna ji plz please meri pyaari behan taani ko uske bhai ke paas vapis bhej do plz Krishna ji please accept this hearty request of a brother who love her angel sister immensely "

reyam , tauji and taani's ma all were searching for taani but were unable to find her ..hopes were reducing with disappointment ,

Tring - tring ... taani's mom receive a phone call

Taani's mom answer it immediately - hello

The voice of a little boy come from another side -

Hello are you taani dis mom ??

Taani's ma- yes , who are you ?

Little boy says "why have you scolded taani di that she is crying since when she has came here? "

{ some tears roll down taani's mom's cheeks thanking Krishna ji that at least some information came about taani but again worry strikes her as her daughter is upset and crying }

Taani's ma -I have not scolded her but is taani there ?? who are you and from where you are talking ??

Little boy - then why is she crying ? yes taani di is here since morning. I am rehan and live in god's angels orphanage and I love taani di so much, i cant see her crying so called you ,

Taani's ma- I don't know baby why is my princess crying , such a bad mom I am that I don't even know the reason of my daughter's sadness but please tell me the address of ur orphanage , I am coming right now

Rehan - aunty please don't blame you , di love you so very much , i guess she is missing you , please come here fast .. ( he tell her the address and keep down the phone after promising to not let her go until her mom come there )

Taani's mom call and told about the whereabouts of taani to reyam and tauji

Reyam took a breathe of relief after knowing where is taani and immediately rush to that orphanage

{in orphanage }

Taani is sitting in a corner of a room and just crying since morning while rememebering everything that happened in those 2 days.

all children in that orphanage love taani so much. she used to come there every Sunday since when she came in America. She became their best friend in no time , she used to bring chocolates , ice creams , books , toys , teddy bears for them. She love all those children so very much , they are like her second family but no one know about it not even her mom . and they also love her so very much.

All children are trying to talk to taani but she don't want to talk to anyone , all are trying to cheer her up but nothing is working , she is just crying .

So rehan who is very naughty but a sweetheart, quietly took her ma's no. from her phone and called her from other phone just to know why is taani crying and scold her ma for scolding rehan's taani di

Now

Rehan comes there alongwith riya and other children with a glass of water for taani,

Rehan to taani - di please don't cry and have water ,

Riya forwards the glass of water to taani but she refuses to have water

Riya - di what happened ?? why are you crying so much , you call us your second family even then you are not telling us why are you crying .hmm not fair , please tell na di please (she says this while wiping her tears and cupping taani's face with her little hands )

Taani hold her hands and kiss them

Taani ask with a heavy heart , " baby please tell am I so bad ?"

Rehan " no di you are not at all bad , who said this , tell me , I will do his dishum dishum now only , you know you are the world's best di "

Riya " yes di you are our angel di "

All say yes alongwith riya

Rehan " please stop crying na di , we all cant see you crying , your tears hurt us just like our tears hurt you "

Taani always feel blessed to be around such awesome, sweet, cute, pure, innocent, lovable and adorable kids.

She hug little rehan and riya tightly from both sides

Then after breaking the hug She says " I am sorry baby , but may be I will have to leave all of you very soon "

Riya gets sad hearing that their taani di might have to leave all of them

But rehan says innocently & naughtily " so what, we will get you back again to all of us , as we can't live without you and will never let you leave us. we all love you so very much di "

Taani smile a little seeing their innocence and say

" love you all my sweetheart bacha family "

{she say in heart - but may be I will have to leave you all for forever and ever , and none of you will be able to get me back from that far away world , god's world ... but till I am alive I will make you all smile and give you all happiness so that I can go with peace "}

Taani to her sweetheart bacha family " but my sweetheart kids please promise me that you all will smile and be happy always whenever you remember your taani di , & the wonderful moments we all have spent together, I want all my nikus to smile and keep smiling , keep shining and keep rocking always "

Riya - ok di we will always smile for you only if you will smile for all of us now and always

Rehan , riya and all the children make cute faces and say with hand actions

" smiley smiley please J "

Taani smile seeing their cute antics "smiley smiley always my niku bachas " then she hug rehan ,riya and all other children

Rehan (while winking at taani ) - di aapke liye ek surprise aaraha hai

Taani ask suspiciously - surprise ? what surprise ??

Rehan - I am not going to tell that now , u will have to wait and watch

Taani- ok my naughty pie {while pulling rehan's cute cheeks )

Taani got up deciding to forget everything and live those moments with those wonderful cute little kids before those moments slip away from her hands

" ok enough of crying , let's smile and be happy now , ok my sweetus ? "

All say while smiling - ok dii

A kid say " let's play di please "

Taani - ok lets' play then but what to play ?? mm ludo ??

Riya - yes

Rehan - no that's so boring

Taani - then hide and seek ok ??

All say - ok

Rehan - my turn, you all hide and I will count till 10 and then I will find you all.

All say ok

Rehan - 1, 2, 3, 4 , 5, 6, 7, 8, 9 , 10

Then rehan start searching all

Meanwhile reyam reach the orphanage while ma aur tauji are still on the way

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Rey immediately rush in the orphanage and swayam follow him but stop at a distance letting taarey talk with each other and sort out their differences

Rey's eyes caught the sight of taani who was standing and hiding behind a pillar , rey go close to her , her back was facing him , her silky hair were flowing in the air while she is hiding and seeing in between that rehan don't search her. Rey go close to her and say in her ear from the back

" DHOONDH LIYA"

Taani was shocked as she recognize rey's voice and turn behind ... To her utter shock rey was actually there behind her

He says again with some tears in her eyes

" DHUNDH LIYA MAINE TUMHE TAANI,... DHOONDH LIYA "

In no time taani's eyes also get filled with tears

Taani says - aap.. sach main ..yahan hai??

Rey - haan taani main .. sach main yahan hun

Taani - parr .. kaaise ??

(she so wanted to be happy to see her love in front of her but can't because of her decision to go away from him forever and ever )

Rey say while controlling his tears " may be because this is Krishna ji's wish aur tumhe kya laga ki tumhara ek goodbye letter tumhe mujhse door kar dega , hamare pyaar ne hamare dilon ko joda hua hai , hamari souls ko bandha hua hai , koi hamein kabhi judaa nahi kar sakta kabhi bhi nahi "

Taani turn her face and say with teary eyes " no rey this is not Krishna jis wish if its so then he would have never decided to end my life in some days and hamein judaa hona hoga , .. hona hoga hamein judaa kyunki hamari detiny main, life main hamara sath nahi likha rey , .. nnahi likha... hum kabhi sath nahi ho sakte , kyunki meri life ne mera hath chodne ka decision le liya hai kuch time baad main aapke ya kisike bhi saath nahi houngi rey , nahi houngi "

Rey's tears flow down disobeying his wishes

He says "nothing will happen to you ..taani , don't say like that , Krishna ji will make you alright very soon very very soon , plz don't lose hope and just trust our love "

Taani says while tears were flowing down from her eyes continuously - please don't give me false hopes rey , I know my life is going to end in some days , no one can do anything about it , so please just leave me on my hand and for god sake stay away from me and ...WHAT LOVE YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT ? , OUR LOVE HAS NO DESTINATION , OUR LOVE HAS NO FUTURE AS MY LIFE DON'T HAVE ANY FUTURE , OUR LOVE CAN'T GIVE ANY HAPPINESS TO YOU OR 1 MORE LIFE TO ME , WHY ARE YOU NOT UNDERSTANDING THERE IS PAIN AND ONLY PAIN IN OUR LOVE , YOU WILL HAVE TO SUFFER BECAUSE OF ME AND MY LOVE ... WHY DO YOU WANT TO DESTROY YOUR LIFE BECAUSE OF ME "

Rey says with teary eyes while holding her shoulders, " BECAUSE YOU ARE MY ONLY LOVE AND LIFE , MY LIFE STARTS FROM YOU AND ENDS AT YOU ONLY , I DON'T EVEN WANT THAT LIFE IN WHICH MY LOVE MY TAANI IS NOT WITH ME "

Taani says while controlling her sobs "but rey our love cant change my destiny my life , which is going to end in some days "

Rey "TAANI YOU KNOW .. OUR LOVE IS PURE ... IMMORTAL ... MAGICAL AND EVERLASTING. I TRUST OUR TRUE LOVE WITH ALL MY HEART AND I KNOW OUR TRUE LOVE WILL MAKE YOU ALRIGHT VERY SOON AND IT WILL BRING US TOGETHER FOREVER & EVER "

Taani - kaash aisa ho paata rey par nahi rey ye nahi ho sakta , kabhi bhi nahi ho sakta

(she ran away from there to the terrace while crying and closed the door.. rey follow her but she had locked the door before he reach there , swayam also follow them .. kids also come out seeing them and go behind them )

Taani sat down on her knees with door's support and cry her heart out - kaash rey main apni kismat change kar sakti kaash rey hum ek ho paate , kaashhh hamara pyaar meri bimaari ko , meri kismat ko hara sakta kaash rey kaash ,

Flashback of this day ( previous' 2 days flashback will come afterwards in this story )

She went to her doctor in the morning

Taani ask from doc - doctor are there any chances of my recovery ?? can my cancer be treated ??

Doctor - see your cancer is at last stage , and medicines are also not working much on you so we can't say anything as of now, and saying the truth there are 99% chance of death in surgery

Taani (with tears in her eyes ) - so you want to say death is confirmed , there is no chance of recovery

Doctor- no miracles do happen , there are 1 % chance of you recovery

Taani ask straight forward with a heavy heart - doctor ... how much time I have ??

Doctor - max to max 1year

Taani - thank you

She leave from there while crying to the orphanage with a decision to leave everyone and go back to india from America for the rest 1yr of her life , she had to live whole day at the orphanage since the flight is at night only .but doctor has called and told about all this to tauji that taani came there and know that her disease cant get cured now . she knew doctor's answer just wanted to confirm ,she had already written the good bye letter for rey and everyone and left that in home only for them so they all were worried for her whereabouts

~~ flashback end ~~

Now taani is crying remembering everything and doc's talks that her disease cant be cured

Taani says while crying - I know rey you love me unconditionally but my disease has put a condition of pain and only pain on our love ,

How ...how can I be so selfish to let you be with me and destroy your whole life because of me , main itni khudgarz nahi hun rey ki apni khushiyon ke liye apne pyaar ki vajah se aapki life ko apki khushiyon ko tabah hone dun , meri to zindagi ke kuch he pal bachein hain par aapke saamne aapki poori zindagi padi hai , main itni buri nahi hun rey ki apko meri vajah se apni poori zindagi tabah karne dun ,

Nahi banna chahti main apke har aansoo har dard aur zindagi bhar ki takleefon ki vajah nahi banna chahti rey par aap ye kyun nahi samjhte ki jitna aap mere paas aaoge utna aapki taleefein aur dard badega , kya karun main Krishna ji kya karun , kaise mod pe le aaye ho aap ki meri khushiyon ki keemat mere apno ke aansoo aur dard hain ... kya karun main mera pyaar mere paas to hai mujhe mil to gaya hai par main usse apna nahi sakti kyunki agar maine rey ko apna liya to unhe zindagi bhar ke dard milenge , aise yaadein milengi jo baad main unhe bahut takleefein dengi , main nahi chahti ki mera pyaar rey ke liye saza ban jaaye , kya karun main Krishna ji kya karun ??

She cry a lot and a lot , her tears were not stopping , her heart need rey and his love but rey's life and his happiness is more important to her than her own life , she kept crying n only crying

On the other hand rey swayam kids n taani's ma n tauji were asking her to open the door , calling her again n again but she was not listening to anyone , their worries were increasing with every second but

She was way too upset because of everything , she was hurt , helpless , sad & hopeless this time , the one who give everyone's hope is hopeless now , the one who light up everyone's life is in darkness now , the darkness of pain , love and life ...its so true that love never comes without pain , true love has to go through the tests of life to get its right destination

~~~~~~~ ( part-b end )~~~~~~~~~

Part c precap - taani is on the edge on terrace - ... rey agar aap mujhse door nahi gaye to main meri bachi hui life bhi end kar dungi , vaise bhi kuch dino main ye end hone he wali hai

... mujhe jaana hoga rey mujhe jaana hona , tere liye hum mar jayenge sanam sirf tere liye jaan bhi qurbaan kar jayenge sanam

~~~~PART C WILL BE LAST PART OF CH-15 AND FROM CH-16 SURPRISES ARE ON THE WAY, VERY EXCITING CUTE UPDATES WILL BE AWAITING FOR YOU ALL~~~~

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SO HOW WAS THE UPDATE FRIENDS ??

SORRY FOR MISTAKES AND IF I DISAPPOINT ANYONE ,

BUT PLZ DO LIKE AND COMMENT FROM HEART ,

ONLY YOUR LIKES AND COMMENTS CAN FORCE ME TO WRITE AND UPDATE

TAKE CARE AND KEEP SMILING ALWAYS FRIENDS !!😊

Edited by chinudolly - 10 years ago
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This was not good you made
Me cry yaar this was emotional
I hope taani don't do anything
Stupid & taarey get together thanks for PM
Edited by raddhi - 10 years ago
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Res pakka after exam unres moni i read full story awesome . Actually i cried while swayam reading tanni's diary. You just cracked and beautifull depicted pain of love. I wish they live happily ever after :)
Edited by Jasmine_ash - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
whole chapter was nice.emotional.
kids r very cute
egarly waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
it Was hell touching update yaar...

loved Rehaan cuteness...

n dat part...

when rey found taani...

@ dat tym even I was gttin emotional...

precap is scary...pljjj do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I cried. 😭 Itna koi rulatha hai kya?
I hope Taani doesnt do anything stupid.
Update soon. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
So emotional 😭
Rehan was really cute..
Taani better not do something stupid
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was hell touching..
In tears now..
Awesome..
Loved it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
loved Rehaan cuteness.
Update soon

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