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Posted: 11 years ago

hello guys..
really sorry for the late update..
here it is..
i hope u all like it..
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CHAPTER-8

aliya: saif what do u need baby?

saif:let me think chaachi..

again he smiled evily increasing the tension of zain and aliya

saif: mil gaya

zain:kya mil gaya??

saif : chachu mujhe ek chota sa bhai chaiye

zain and aliya were shocked and together said "kyaaa"

they said it that much aloud that it could tear someone's ear drums

aliya: saif bache what are u saying??

aliya said with her voice choking

zain came near to aliya and whispered in her ears

"baacha sahi toh kai raha hai"

hearing it a shiver ran to aliya's spine and she slighly slapped zain..

she bend down to reach saif's level followed by zain

saif: chachi i too need it...my friends have a little brother or sister with them but i donot

have

aliya: then saif ask your mamma she will get it for u

saif: but chachi u promised that u and chachu will fulfill my wish

zain : saif par

saif: par var kuch nahi chachu i need a baby

he climbs on the bed and starts jumping

aliya: siaf donot be stuborn bache ask your mamma

saif: when i asked they shoeed me away so i came to u and starts crying..

aliya and zain are looking at each other what to do wala look???

saif: mujhe koi pyaar nahi karta

zain: saif chachu loves u

aliya: and chachi too

saif: then u will get me a baby na?? he said with a extreme cute pout..

seeing the pout aliya heart melted

zain and aliya looked at each other

saif: jaldi bolo otherwise i will tell what u both were doing

seeing the little blackmailer they didnot had any other way left but only to say a yes..

zain: yes we will get a baby for u soon

saif: pakka

aliya : pakkka

saif smiled while zain and aliya were thinking why they didnot shut the bloody door

zain: we will get the baby on one condition

saif: what is that chachu?

zain: u donot have to tell it to others otherwise they will say no

saif : haan haan done...will not tell to anyone..

by saying this he went away leaving behind a angry zain and angry aliya behind

aliya: he is such a tuffan

zain: sahi mein

aliya: what nafeesa bhabhi ate while giving birth to him??

zain: pata nahi par gutter things pakka dekhin hogi

zain and aliya laughed on hearing this statement of zain..

the room ehich was full of tension was now filled with laugh

they peeped out of the window to check where was saif only to find going out with ayat

followed by fahad and nafeesa..

now the house was fully empty and servant chaakiwala was also not there as they both

walked together to check if someone was left or not..

zain: aliya ab ham ghar mein akele hai..

he smirked looking at her..

aliya: besharam abhi hamara nikkah nahi hua hai

zain: toh kya??

aliya:buddhu yeh galat hai

zain: pyaar mein kuch galat nahi .. havenot u heard everything is fair in love and war

aliya:par zain this is wrong

zain: aliya i am joking i will not do something like this without your permission because i care for your feelings more..

he smiled cupping her face..

aliya passed a smile to him and hugged him tightly...

he too hugged her back..

they went to the garden hand in hand..

they sat under a tree blooming with flowers..

aliya: zain u know as the days are passing i am becoming nervous

zain: why aliya??

zain looked at her while she was looking down

aliya: because the wedding date is coming mear that's why..

3 months and 20 days left zain.

zain: princess u r so eager to marry me ?

aliya:yes that's not eagerness but the pain

zain: pain?

aliya:yes pain the pain of getting separated from dear ones from ones with whom i grew..with whom i played ... with whom i learned how to speak.. with whom i learned how to walk..

she broke down for the first time in front of zain..

zain could not see her crying and wipped her tears..

zain: donot cry aliya pls

she didnot stopped

zain: for me laiya pls donot cry..

she suddenly stopped

zain: donot worry aliya we will visit your home twice in a month and will stay there for one month every year if someone calls me anything rubbish then also..

aliya smiled ..

zain too smiled at her cute little smile...

he got up and went

aliya looked where he is going

he plucked a beautiful red rose and brought it for aliya...

zain: aliya ghulam haider i wanna say once again i love u

aliya: and i love u too

she took the rose and both sat hugging each other...

back ground music: ishq huda...ishq dua...

they donot knew when they slept like this ...

everybody came back home and when were going to enter the house they saw the cute scene..

i was like the couple made in heaven had reached on earth by mistake..

zain protective arms around aliya and aliya's head on his strong built chest

zain's mouth open and aliya arms wrapped neatly around his waist with a rose

nafeesa to fahad: fahad see they are so romantic..

fahad: yes it made me remeber our days

nafeesa: but look at them...they are looking like cute babies

fahad: i wish allah always keep them happy like this..

nafeesa: amen

osman: aliya utho

he said trying to wake aliya but osman stopped him

ghulam: let them sleep ghulam shahab..they might be tired

osman: par

ghulam: par var kuch nahi come with me

ghulam pulled osman along with him inside the room while fahad wrapped his jacket around the two love birds and went inside with nafeesa ,ayat and saif

it was evening when they woke up from the sweet sleep of theirs...

aliya looked towards zain with a cute smile

she saw he was sleeping and her eyes sparkled with naughtiness...
she took out her arms carefully without waking her up and started tickling him...

he woke up immediately at that point and started laughing..
zain: stop it...hahahahha/... stop it aliya
aliya:no never
and started tickling him more...
zain started to tickle her and they both were laughing and laughing...
everybody saw this and prayed to allah to keep them happy while suraiya burned in jealousy but got an angry stare from osman who saw her disgusting looks...
she quickly went inside the house...

zain started running behind aliya to catch her and the whole garden got filled with her magical laughter...

the days passed like this ...everyone was enjoying specially zain and aliya who became closed to each other...
zain used to bring gifts for aliya and aliya used to make his favourite food...
during the tug of war game zain .aliya and said were in one team amd rest in others..
they started pulling the rope but aliya was feeling shy to hold zain

zain: aliya kya kar rahi ho ..pakdo mujhe warna ham har jayenge
saif: haan chachi
aliya; okey
as she wrapped her hands around him he was surprised by the sudden change in aliya and left the rope and everybody in fahad's team fell down..
zaina nd aliya bursted into laughter along with saif while others were holding their bumps..

next day they planned to play cricket..
pnly one run was left for boy's team to win
zain was doing batting and aliya balling
nafeesa: aliya do something otherwise they win and then we have to do their ghulami
aliya :okey bhabhi i will do something just wait and watch
fahad: for god sake zain concentrate on ball fir ham raj karenge
zain : okey bhai

aliya threw the ball and she winked at zain..
seeing this he became shocked and lost his control over bat and the ball hit the wicket
girls team gathered up around zain dancing and hooting out out
fahad and saif were standing there with their face red

zain: aliya ne cheating ki hai
aliya: kya kiya hai meine
zain: isse mujhe
nafeesa: isse tumhe kya zain
aliya: haan zain kya kiya maine
and the next thing was fahad running after zain with bat down the hills
while aliya, nafeesa and ayat were enjoying the moment by laughing holding their stomach..
aliya captured the picture as a memory

a month passed and finally the day came when they were going to get separate for 2 months and 20 days..
both of their heart were filled with the pain the pain of separation...
...
so guys this was my torture..
i hope u all liked it..
more than 1300+ words..
priya
Sobtian... thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update Priya.
Nd d cricket scene was awesome.
Thanx for d pm
Continue soon
oriyu24 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sobtian...

Superb update Priya.
Nd d cricket scene was awesome.
Thanx for d pm
Continue soon

thanks aanya ..
😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice and cute part...continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hoyeee chudail, just read both the parts together
7 th part was hot hot😳
Too bold Aliya, loved her
8 th part was too cute... saifu was too cute😆
Their cricket part, hayee Aliya is too smart
Loved it, Awesome updates chudail...
U made every too sugary here, except.my pasta queen😆 kyu yaar?
Jaldi usse bi sugary karo na plss plsss
Thqnk for.lovely updates
Sorry for late comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
Priya ji ki jai ho
Finally u updated ...
Long n really cute totally loved it
Plzz update soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's beyond awesome
Outstanding
Really so light heartned chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was so funny
And they are so cute
And very entertaining
Can't wait for next part
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow it was so hillarious
Awesome
Amzaing
Fabulous
Fantastic
Funny
Now I am short of words
Update asap
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was really amazing...
I loved it...awww...Saif being so cute was really nice...
2 months separation...Will wait for that...
Cont soon...

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