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Nice ramya,

Always Hari - Simi - Krish superb combo pa 😆

Krish - Madhu va pathi thuruvi thuruvi ketkum bodhu simi doubt varalaya 😉

Yeppavume ramya neenga ippadi dhan, oru suspense oda ye to be continued nu podureengale 😲

Nice update Ramya dear. Krish - Simi - Hari semma bonding .
Krish missing Madhu - next love story on the way . Sweet Simi , Hari parthu maiyingitha athula Krish teasing vera 😆 .

Ama pa elorum yena poranga ? Twistu vanthachu ! 😃

Twist / Suspense / Cliffhanger .. whatever u call it... is to have you all pulled to the story 😉 (achchacho ragasiyatha sollittene 😛)

Jokes apart, the reason for having it is, me as a reader will be more excited to know what happens next in the story.. I remember me waiting for the day when the weekly magazine will be delivered and turning to the page of the story and finish reading it first. 😉

Last update dhaan smooth ah vachaache. even this one has nothing major as such.. so it won't be good to leave as it is.. That's why gave an heads up for the upcoming scene as a Punch to this update 😊

Super cool update...

Originally posted by: ramyvijay

Twist / Suspense / Cliffhanger .. whatever u call it... is to have you all pulled to the story 😉 (achchacho ragasiyatha sollittene 😛)

Jokes apart, the reason for having it is, me as a reader will be more excited to know what happens next in the story.. I remember me waiting for the day when the weekly magazine will be delivered and turning to the page of the story and finish reading it first. 😉

Last update dhaan smooth ah vachaache. even this one has nothing major as such.. so it won't be good to leave as it is.. That's why gave an heads up for the upcoming scene as a Punch to this update 😊

Ramya dear , thats the beauty of your story na 😉

Originally posted by: plily

Ramya dear , thats the beauty of your story na 😉

Different writers have different style , this is Ramya style 😃

Yepidi Punch okva 😆

👍🏼 👍🏼 Double Ok 😉

Originally posted by: Gayathri30

one question will prem and preethi have a good relationship with simi hari and krish they are altogeher because of there job but preethi and prem dont seem to be with them like get togethers or anything have you got anything planned for them?

yes maa.. ofcourse..

So far, they were located in different cities.. Just now, Prem has come down here and Preethi still at Mumbai..

You'll get to see they being together in later chapters.. After all, thats the title of the story 😳

Originally posted by: ramyvijay

yes maa.. ofcourse..

So far, they were located in different cities.. Just now, Prem has come down here and Preethi still at Mumbai..

You'll get to see they being together in later chapters.. After all, thats the title of the story 😳

Part 67 :


As Hari also joins the gang, everyone is eager to know where they are heading to..

Krish : Maa.. ellaarum vandhaachu... ippaachum sollungalen..

Laksh : any guesses ?

Vish : venaam Lakshmi.. yerkanave romba wait pannittaanga... straight ah sollidu...

Laksh : innaikku naama ellaarum ponnu paarkka porom...

Jaya : yaarukku ?

Laksh : vera yaarukku.. en payyanukku dhaan..

Each one gave different reactions, mostly they were shocked.. It was Karthik who broke the silence..

Karthi : chummaa vilayaadaadheenga Lakshmi... enga porom nu correct ah sollunga..

Laksh : yen namba maattengureenga.. ? nee sollu Vishnu..

Vish : aamaandaa... iva last week, avaloda childhood friend ah oru mall la meet pannaa.. appadiye ivanga pecha next generation ku poi, indha proposal vandhuchu..

Jaya : sari yaarukku ?

Vish : enna Jaya ? thirumbavum same question ketkkura..

Jaya : I mean endha payyanukku.. ?

Vish : adhuvaa.. smart Hari ku dhaan..



Again, face reaction of everyone changed.. This time too serious..

Laksh : enna onnume sollamaatteengureenga..?

Karthi : illa.. Krish ku.. ?

Krish : (mind voice) ayyoo uncle enakku aappu vaikkaadheenga...

Laksh : adhu vandhu... avan yerkkanave love failure la irukkaan... so.. konjam time kodukkalaam..

Krish : (mind voice) habaadaa..

Simi : (whispers) enna habaadaa.. ?

Krish : velila kettiduchaa ?

Simi : aamaa... nee mattum escape aanaa okay vaa.. ? ennadaa Aunty ippadi pannittaanga..?

Krish : naanum expect pannala... inga ivlo poittu irukku... anga paaru un aala.. dreamland la irukkaan..

Simi : dei... avan utter shock la irukkaan...



On the other side, Karthik and Jaya were having silent conversation..

Jaya : ennadaa ippadi aayiduchu..

Karthi : enna aachu ? onnum aagala..

Jaya : naama onnu nenachirundhom.. ippa ennadaanaa ?

Karthi : pesadhaane aarambichirukkaanga.. will see..

Jaya : edhuvaa irundhaalum.. modhallaye clear panniduradhu better... pesu daa..

Karthi : but before that, we have confirm with these two la..?

Jaya : innum unakku sandhegamaa ? anga paaru... rendum eppadi thavikkudhu nu..

Karthi : appa wait pannuvom.. avangale start pannuvaangalaa nu



Laksh : enna ? aalaalukku kusukusu nu pesureenga.. sathamaa pesunaa.. naangalum therinjukkalaam la.. ?

Krish : adhu vandhu maa...

Jaya : adhu vandhu Lakshmi..

Both start at the same time.. Lakshmi asked Jaya to go ahead..

Laksh : enna Jaya ?

Jaya : naanga vera onnu nenachirundhom...

Vish : enna ?

Jaya : Hari ku.. engalukku therinja oru ponna pesalaam nu...

Now, another shock to HSK trio..

Krish : (mind voice) idhu enna pudhu twist..?

Laksh : oh... but neenga konjam late Jaya...

Jaya : (turns sad)

Vish : venumnaa Krish ku paakkalaam later ah..



On knowing the seriousness of the situation, Hari decided to reveal it to the elders...

Hari : ammaa... naan onnu sollanum...

Vish : onnu enna ? onbadhe sollu... poittu vandhu sollu... ippo late aayiduchu..

Hari : adhukku munnaadi dhaan pesanum...

Laksh : edhuvaa irundhaalum seekkiram sollu..

Hari : idhula avasaram koodaadhu maa...

Laksh : what... sollu..

Hari : enakku ippo enna age aagudhu..? adhukkulla yen marriage ?

Simi : (mind voice) ivan enna ? thalaiya suthi mookka thodaporaanaa ?

Vish : dei.. naangalum indha age la dhaan kalyaanam pannikkittom..

Laksh : maybe mariage later ah vachukkalaam... ippa paarthu pesi mudichidalaam...

en friend, romba interested ah irukkaa...

Simi : (mind voice) idhu velaikki aagaadhu...

Aunty...

Laksh : (turns towards her)

Simi : ellaarukkum dhaan... I wanted to tell one thing.. me and Hari are in love..

Everyone's attention turns towards her..

Karthik and Jaya are happy, look at each and smiles..

Vish : ennamaa ippo solra ? too late..

Simi : enakku eppadi uncle theriyum.. neenga dhideernu mudivu pannuveenga nu..

Vish : Rascal.. neeyaavadhu sollirukkalaam la ?

Hari : adhu vandhu Dad..

Krish comes in forward to support them..

Krish : paavam Dad... pasanga pozhachu pogattum..

Vish : adhaana paarthen.. aala kaanome nu.. so.. unakkum yerkkanave theriyum...

Krish : adhu vandhu... ippo recent ah dhaan... KDs enkittayum marachittaanga..

Hari : maa... ennamaa silent ah irukkeenga..? edhaavaadhu sollunga... ungalukku idhula... ?

Vish : podhum Lakshmi... payyan azhudhuda poraan..

Laksh : I'm really happy my boy..

Vish : me too... enga bonding, friendship oda mudiyaama... relation ah aaguradhula.. we are very very happy... ennadaa machaan Ok dhaane ?

Karthi : ofcourse..

Jaya hugs Simi and kisses her..

Vish : aanaa.. neenga vera yaaroda ponna nenachirundheenga nu sonniye ?

Jaya : adhu enga sweet daughter dhaan..

Vish : paarraa... aaga maathi maathi ellaarum idhaye dhaan virumbirukkom..

Krish : bro... innum yen ippadi ye irukka.. ? cool da..

Jaya : sari.. appo indha ponnu paarkkura vishayam drama vaa ?

Vish : illa Jaya... nee ivlo kashtta pattu meake up pottadhu veenaagaadhu..

Jaya : what ?

Laksh : aamaa.. we are going now..

Karthi : but for what ?

Laksh : ellaam adhe dhaan... orey oru change in that.. paakka poradhu namma Krish kaaga..

Jaya : aanaa Lakshmi...

Laksh : hmm... puriyudhu.. en son ah kettuttu dhaan proceed pannanum..

Karthi : well said..

Laksh : sollu Krish... do you still love Leena ? I mean your Angel...

Krish : No No..

Laksh : yen padhattapadura ? onna work panreengale.. marubadiyum edhaavadhu patchup aayiduchaanu ketten..

Krish : illamaa... but we are in talking terms as friends..

Laksh : good... then.. vera yaaraavadhu...? I mean.. are you interested in someone else.. ?

Krish : (silent)

Vish : whatever it is.. sollu..

Krish : No Dad..

Simi : (whispers) dei.. appo un bus party ?

Krish : yaaru.. ?

Simi : adhaan Nepali Nikki... Thappa.. avangalukkaaga dhaan un bus travel..

Krish : cha.. work out aagala..

Simi : ohoo... so sad...

Vish : So... unakku okay dhaane ? shall we start now.. ?

Krish : hmmm... polaam paa..



While the parents move in front to take the vehicles, HSK follow them..

Simi : dei Krish... onnu gavanichiyaa ?

Krish : enna ?

Simi : nammalla... it was you who fell in love first... apparam naanga... then Prem-Preethi..

aanaa.. confirm aaguradhu reverse order la irukku paathiyaa ?

PP ku engagement mudinjiduchu takkunu... ippo engalukkum problem illa...

and edhirpaakkaama unnodadhu arranged marriage ah aaga pogudhu..

nothing is in our hands... naalaikku enna nadakkum nu yaarukkum theriyaadhu..

Krish : hmmm...

As usual, KJ goes in their bike while the other five in Car.



While on the way to see the girl, Krish thinks of what happened a few days before..



Office :

Krish was relaxing on the bench in the lawn, Leena joins him and have a casual talk..

Leena : enna ? thaniyaa irukka ? company ku yaarum illayaa ?

Krish : hmm.. I didn't look out for someone else.. relax panna vandhen... others are busy working..

Leena : Oh ok.. naan disturb panreno.. ? venumnaa naan apparamaa varren..

Krish : No No.. not a problem.. iru..

Leena : Thanks..

Krish : apparam whats up ?

Leena : perusaa onnum illa... work konjam kammi dhaan... adhaan naanum relax panna vandhen..

Krish : hmmm..

Leena : then.. romba sandhosham ah irukka pola ?

Krish : yen.. irukka koodaadhaa ?

Leena : irukkalaam irukkalaam..

Krish : yedho sollanum nu nenaikkura... sollu..

Leena : adhu vandhu..

Krish : paravaala sollu..

Leena : unakku mattum yen yaarum true ah ve irukka maattenguraanga.. ?

Krish : what ?

Leena : I mean, un friends eh sila vishayatha maraikkuraanga..

Krish : avanga sollaadhadhukku valid reason irukku...

Leena : naan ippo Simi Hari ya sollala...

Krish : then ?

Leena : Smitha... I mean.. Madhusmitha..

Krish : avalukkenna.. ?

Leena : ava ippo leave la irukkaala..?

Krish : aamaa..

Leena : yennu theriyumaa ?

Krish : ava parents vandhirukkaanga..

Leena : right.. but edhukkaaga nu theriyumaa.. ?

Krish : avlo details namakkedhukku.. ?

Leena : fine... appo naan solra vishayam unakku onnume illa nu dhaan thonudhu..

Krish : see Leena.. whatever it is.. just say it straight away..

Leena : avan vandhirukkadhu engagement kaaga... ava athai payyanoda..

Krish : (looks up) what ?

Leena : sonnen la..

Krish : chummaa vilayaadaadha.. naama yen mathavanga vishayathula interfere pannanum.. ?

Leena : un friend aache.. unakku sollala ye nu sonnen.. naan Simi maraikkuraa nu sonnadhu unmai dhaane... ? adhe maadhiri dhaan idhuvum... namburadhum nambaadhadhum un ishttam..



Saying so, Leena leaves the place.. Krish has thought for a while and decided to call Madhu.. To his surprise, this time, she picked up the call..

Krish : Madhu.. ?

Madhu : hey .. naandhaan... sollu..

Krish : adhu ... onnum illa..

Madhu : phone pannittu onnum illa nu solra ?

Krish : are you somewhere outside ? noisy ah irukku..

Madhu : aamaa... At Airport...

Krish : oh.. un parents already vandhuttaanga dhaane ? are they leaving immediately.. ?

Madhu : No No.. veetla function mudinjadhum dhaan kelambuvaanga.. naan ippo Jeeva va receive panna vandhirukken..

Krish : Jeeva ?

Madhu : Oh ya... en athai yoda son..

hey Krish.. I think he has arrived... we'll talk later... Bye..



Later, while Madhu returns home along with her cousin Jeeva, by mistake Krish's number got dialled as it was on the last call list..

On getting call from her, he picks it up and says 'Hello'. But on the other end, there was no response. But he could hear Madhu's voice which was not clear though..

Madhu : dei.. adhaan naalaikku engagement aaga poradhilla..? adhukulla enna avasaram ? mundhiri kottai.. konjam un vaala surittittu iru..

Krish couldn't listen anymore, so he cuts the call..



Back to the present, Krish hears the giggling sound of others around him.. He turns towards them..

Simi : Aunty.. dreamland la irudhu vandhuttaan pola ?

Krish : hey... enna solra ?

Simi : ivlo neram.. un aalu eppadi iruppaanu kanavu dhaane kanda ?

Krish : (silent)

Laksh : en pullaya kindal pannaadheenga.. avan mattum dhaan ammaa pecha kekkuraan..

Hari : appo naan ?

Vish : adhaan neeye select pannittiye.. ?

Laksh : illanaalum naangale arrange panniruppom..

Simi : adha vidunga Aunty.. innum evlo dhooram poganum... ponnu veedu enga irukku ?

Laksh : avanga veettukku pogala..

Hari : then.. ?

Laksh : enga rendu perukkum common friend irukkaa... anga meet pannalaam nu plan..

Simi : Oh ok ok..



Vishnu stops the car as they reached the place..

Simi : Uncle.. kandippaa naangalum varanumaa ? edhukku ithana peru ?

Vish : yen.. neen rendu perum vera engayaavadhu escape aagalaam nu plan ah.. ?

Hari : haiyyo .. no Dad..

Vish : hey... irundhaalum thappillai.. yen ivlo bayappadura ?

Laksh : nee irukka paathiyaa ? payyan kitta eppadi pesanum nu theriyala..

Vish : whats wrong.. I'm his friend..

Krish : Simi.. nee vandhaa dhaan naan varuven.. nee dhaane OK panna pora..

Simi : paarraaa... appadiya ?

Krish : idhula enna doubt ?

Simi : sari sari.. naama polaam.. Hari ingaye irukkattum..

Hari : naan thaniyaa enna panna ?

Simi : Car ah yaarum eduthuttu pogaamaa paarthuttu iru..

Vish : ennadaa puriyalayaa ?

Hari : ???

Vish : ava prechanai avalukku.. nee ulla vandhu.. andha ponnukku unnai pudichiruchu naa.. ivalukku aappu aayidum la.. adhaan.. Am I right Simi ?

Simi : Obsolutely..

Laksh : appadi laam aagaadhu... venumnaa.. ponadhum ivan dhaan mappilai.. innoru payyan already engaged nu... okay vaa ?

Simi : done (thumbs up)



Both Vishnu and Karthik family enters that house..



--- to be continued..