MG #2 - Be-intaah...Mohabbat ya Junoon/th#3added - Page 4

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PART 13

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Geet : Please dad doesn't leave me alone like maan...

Mein nhi ji paayungi

He takes geet in embrace & tries to console her...

Dad : beta shant ho ja

Mein humesha hoon tere sath

Stress mt le

He know her daughter very well... in madness for him she cross the limit but now she truly love him & feeling guilty... due to this she share this maan & now with me...

Geet : dad mujhe apne ghar wapas jaana hai

He cupped her face & wipes her tears...

Geet : dad mujhe maan ke pass wapas jaana hai

Dad : bte asse kaise

In saalo mein ek baar bhi Maan ne na kbhi koi call kiya

Aur na hi koi message choda

She held dad hand...

Geet : dad

Galati meri thi

Dad : janta hu aur manta bhi hu

Par yu sb kuch chodke New York jaana kya shi tha

Wo bhi galat tha geet

.

Tumhare accident ke waqt maine kitni baar try kiya Maan se baat krni ki

Tb pata chala

Wo toh india mein hai hi nhi

.

Ek baar mood ke nhi dekha

Tum kaisi ho

.

Kya rishte ase nibhaye jaate hai

Geet : dad wo mujhse naraaz hai

Isliye bs

Nhi toh wo asa kbhi nhi krte

Unhe toh yhi lag raha honga na

Geet ki galati hote huye bhi

Maine in duriyo ko km krne ki koshish nhi ki

Wo nhi jaante na

Mere accident ke baare mein

Ydi unhe pata hota na dad

Wo ek pal ke liye bhi mujhse durr nhi rhte

He patted her cheek...

Dad : thik hai geet

Par

Geet : par kya dad

Dad : phle tum puri tarah thik ho jaayo

Ussi ke baad mein maan se baat karunga

Geet : dad please

dad : geet bte mein tumhe firse nhi kho sakta

aur doctor ne clearly kaha hai

tumhe rest & care ki jaroorat hai

And no stress

geet : dad wo abhi india mein hai

ydi tab tak New York chale gye toh

Dad placed his hand on her head...

Dad : Maan ko abki baar mein tujhse door nhi jaane dunga

Ye promise hai mera tujhse

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Waise tujhe kaise pata Maan India mein hai

Geet : dad wo maine news pe dekha

Us din Jb daaimaa mujhe hall mein bithake gyi thi

Dad : hmm

Geet : dad hum apne ghar toh jaa sakte hai na tb tak

Mujhe yaha farm house mein nhi rhehna

Dad : thik hai

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Another side Maan try to find out about geet ...he call on her number , but now her number is out of service , then on her house & he get to know now no one is living here from past five years, caretaker not give any further information about her and her dad whereabouts.

Daadi : maan aap abhi tak soye nhi

Maan : daadi wo bs kcuh important call kr raha tha

Aap yaha kaise is waqt

Kuch kaam tha

Daadi : bina kaam ke hum apke room mein nhi aa sakte

Maan : daadi mere khehne ka wo matlab nhi tha

Daadi : waise aap itni raat ko kisko call kr rhe the

Maan : daadi wo ek client ko

Daadi : khi wo client geet to nhi

.

Maan aap hum ease mt dekhiye

Hum daadi hai aapki

Achi tarah jaanti hai

.

Par geet ko call krke koi fayda nhi hai

Uska number out of service hai

Aur ab wo delhi wale ghar mein bhi nhi rhte

In panch saalo mein geet ne koi bhi dance show bhi nhi kiya

Salman ki last time baat Mr. Malik se koi 4 - 4.5 saal phle huyi thi

Toh unhone usse kaha tha

Geet humesha ke liye London shift ho gyi hai

Par humne embassy se pata krwaya hai

In pichle paanch saalo mein geet ek bhi baar India se bahar nhi gyi hai

Toh iska matlab ye huya

Mr. Malik kuch chipa rhe hai

Wo nhi chahte geet ke baare mein kissi ko bhi kuch bhi pata chale

Maan : daadi apne ye sb kb pata kiya

Aur salman se apne kb pucha

Daadi : maan aapko apna fasla sunane se phle

Aur salman se humne nhi Arohi ne baat ki thi

Ye sb information Arjun aur arohi ne hi hume pata krke batayi hai

Maan : daadi jb aap fasla le hi rakha tha

Toh sunane mein deri kyun ki

Daadi : maan humne apna decision aapko bataya hai

Lekin aapko do option bhi toh diye hai

Shargun ya geet

Finally decide toh aapko hi krna hai

Maan : daadi mere liye ye sb asaan nhi hai

Daadi : mushkil bhi nhi hai

Ydi abhi bhi aapke dil mein geet ke liye pyaar hai

Toh usse khud se dur mt kriye

Zindagi ek baar mauka deti hai Maan

Baar- baar nhi

Ydi aapka gussa, narazagi hi sbse upar hai

Pyaar nhi

Toh kal aapko divorce paper mil jaayenge

Hume wo sign chaiye

Maan : daadi I need time

Daadi : 5 saal de chuke hai hum sb aapko

Aapka sath diya hum sbne

Aap kisse se kuch share nhi krna chahte the

Humne aapse dobara nhi pucha

.

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Lga pati- patni ka mamla hai

Dono smjhdaar hai

Khud sulja lenge

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Aur kitna waqt de aapko hum

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Maan : daadi please

Supriya : Maan bte

Maan : maa aap hi khiye na daadi se

Divorce paper ready krwa rhi hai

Supriya : Maan hum aapki daadi ke decision mein unke sath hai

Jb aap geet ke sath ek nayi shurat chahte hi nhi

Toh kya fayda is rishte ki dorr ko yu pakdke rakhne ka

Mujhe Sargun bhut pasand hai

Aap jaldi se ye divorce procedure pura kr ke

Sargun ke sath shaadi kr lijiye

Maan : bs

Mein geet ko divorce nhi dunga

Aur na hi sargun ya koi aur

Meri zindagi mein aa sakta hai

Daadi : toh iska matlab ye huya

Aap geet ko is ghar mein wapas laa rhe hai

Maan : good night

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We meet again in one business party, but this time she looking totally different from our first meeting... she wearing Cream light pink mix suit, from geeta to seta journey - really nice... here I know about her she is Mr. malik daughter ...and her name is geet...

Mr. Sharma our common bank manager introduce us ...I recognize her but am feeling she not recognize me...first time we meet due to her mistake my full face color changed into black ghost... I laughed own thoughts... on this day am so angry on her... but don't know, why today seeing her again am not feeling any anger...

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Geet tumne Maan ko aaj itna majboor kr diya hai

Na wo tumse door jaa sakta hai

Aur na tumhare pass

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Kyun tumse beintaha mohabbat ki maine

Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
maan confused not able 2 decide who 2 choose geet or sg
daadi n mom asking maan 2 choose 1😆
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It's really very nice part. So geet wants to go back to maan and wants to ask sorry. N here maan doesn't want to marry anyone so he is searching geet. I how they get together very soon. Waiting for next dear
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nice part
geet wants to go back 2 maan
n maan denies to accept dadi s proposal
n he denied to divorce geet too

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