HEART BEATS...The tale of asya kabhi ss chapter 3 updated links given - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey jil..
I'm sorry fr being late.. its just that I'm not CmG 2 IF these days
well story is interesting..
u changed all relationships.. kinda bit confusing.. bt dnt worry aadat hojayega
so asad miya is CMG 2 Bhopal 2 fall in love with Zoya 😉
continue soon...n I have 2 read ur another new story...just gimme some time...
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Jennifer ka hai
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Heart beats The tale of asya

Asad ahmed khan

zoya siddiquie

Character scketches

Khan family in delhi

Dilshad ahmed khan : elegant and pious lady asad's mom

Asad ahmed khan : 24 yrs old handsome happy go lucky natured guy...profession singer

Najma ahmed khan :19 yr old cute and decent gal asad's sis

Khan fly in bhopal

Gaffur ahmed khan : asad's dadu.. grandfather

Razia ahmed khan : asad's dadi

Rashid ahmed khan : gaffurs 1st son dead

Kabir ahmed khan : gaffurs 2nd son

Tanveer : gaffur's daughter married

Shireen ahmed khan : kabir's wife

Nikath ahmed khan : shireen's 1st daughter

Nuzzat ahmed khan : shireen's 2nd daughter

Gaffur's 2nd sister's adopted daughter : zeenat siddiquie and her husband

Anwar siddiquie died in the plane crash...their only daughter is zoya siddiquie..

Zoya siddiquie age 19: lives in a pg studying engineering in Mumbai but always videochats wth gaffur ahmed khan...her naanu she is a spoilt brat naughty and full of life...and always during holidays she comes home Bhopal to meet her dadu

Qureshi family

Farahan qureshi's :ayan qureshi's grandfather gaffur's business partner

Nausheen qureshi : farahans's first daughter dead

Imraan qureshi: farahan's son married to tanveer gaffurs daughter

Tanveer : she is a straight forward lady

Imraan qureshi s son : ayan qureshi age 25 yrs

Chapter 2

Mumbai airport scene

Outside mumbai airport...zoya allah miya...naanu ko achanak kya huva hai...dil ka daura...

Allah miya...bas naanu ko teek karo..aur meri pareshani dhoor karo...

U know na muje pareshaan rehna pasand nahi,...plz allah miya make me tension free..

Warna muje tension lene keliye bhi goli khana padega

Patha nahi plane main 1 and half hours kaise katenge ...pal pal pade bhari...

Humaira : zoya's frnd in need..zoya pg room mate

Humi : zoya main tuje airport see off karne aayi hoon aur tu as usual kudse baatain kar rahi hai...miss kipit

Zoya : Not kudse kudha se...upparwale se..hum sab ke rakwale se ...aakir mera aur unka ek cute connection hai...

Humi : haan haan teek hai chal duva karti hoon ki tumare dadu teek hojaye

Zoya :accha chalti hoon holding her bags moves towards the flight...

Delhi airport scene

asad najma dishad waiting in delhi airport

asad : agar kisine bhi aapki besathi ki tho...

dilshad : cutting his words ..asad beta pehle pouchne tho do...first lets reach there

Najma : whispering to asad's ears bhaijaan ammi ko tho apni fikar ki nahi hai..

asad : haan unne bas dusro ki fikar rehthi hai ..kudke bharemain kabhi nahi sochthi...main tho bas waha ammi ke wajese jaa raha hoon not for janab gaffur ahmed khan ...he doesn't exist for me...

najma : main bhi ammi keliye jaa rahi hoon..warna waha hum tho kisiko nahi jaante...

dilshad : tum dono kya kusur pusur kar rahe ho..aftr two hours we all will be ther rit asad

asad : jee ammi

and they all get inside the flight

Bhopal hospital scene

Razia shireen kabir nikki nuzzi the whole khan mansion family waiting for the doctors verdict

Tanveer wanting to meet her abu tries to go but is stopped by imraan her husband we hate thm so u r not going ther,...

Tanveer praying to god ya allah humare abu ko salamat rakna

Aftr a while doctors say katre se bahar hain he is out of danger...it was a mild heart attack...but he was brought to hospital on time to avoid any further complications...

All are relieved aftr 1 and half hours zoya comes running wth her bags direct to the hospital...

Allah miya nanii just tell me the good news...come on now nani...jaldi bolo naanu teek hai na...he is fine rit

Razia : zoya beta naanu ko kuch nahi huva hai he is out of danger

Zoya : thank god...waise aap soch nahi sakti ..main kithni fikar kar rahi thi aur mere plane ki safar main full on allah miya se baath kar rahi thi..

Mera bagal wala passenger muje ghoor ghoor ke langur ki tarah dekh raha tha

Aur main phir bhi ...poocho math dadi...muj nadaan par kya kya beeti hai

Razia : nahi poochungi zoya ..haha pehle saans tho lo...

Zoya : nanu ko kab discharge karege

Razia : after 1 week after undergoing certain teats...uske baad discharge

Zoya :Okie main zara fresh hoke aati hoon.. let me freshen up...

Asad and family also come direct to hospital cause razia just told thm tht thy r in the hospital...

Asad :Ammi jaao mel milap karo...me and najma yahi first floor ya fir canteen ke chakkar mar ke aate hain

Dillu : asad ab delhi se bhopal aaye hain ...kisiko dekne keliye aur najma tum aarahi ho bass

Asad : ammi main zara hospital ghum kar aata hoon..

Dillu : asad beta thts rude...asad..ruko..

Before najma could go behind asad dillu holds her hand...yeh kaisa tarika hai...tum dono ka...

Najma : ammi ...hum kya baat karenge un logo se...main tho unne jaanti bhi nahi.

Dillu : chup chap chalo..

Asad : wandering here and ther moves to the canteen ordering for a black coffee

Sipping the coffee starts blabbering and makes movement frm one place to other ammi bhi na konsa jannat hai yeh bhopal...

Ammi badi masum hai ..if someone invites she just goes without thinking of her pride...

He remains in his thoughts and zoya also has come to the canteen..and sees the soup tht she has ordered without giving money just moves taking the soup...

The person in the counter areey mam kaha chaldiye paise tho deke jaao

shouts loudly

zoya :oh shit bhullakad me ..bhool kaise gayi...paise dena tha... moves back in a hurry and collides wth asad making his coffee fall over his face and shirt

Zoya seeing asad starts laughing

Asad seeing zoya.. sees her infectious cute laugh and her hazelenut brown eyes

As though the time has stopped for a second..like it has stopped for her...

asad gets Irritated by her annoying behavior and starts to yell at her

Tume kisine tamiz nahi sikayi...ek tho kudh hi mere chehre pay coffee girayi and without saying sorry you r laughing at me... tum Bhopal ki ladkiyan aisi hoti hai kya

..

Zoya : chuckling maaf karna voh kya hai na Jabse Bhopal aayi hoon hasi nahi hoon

tume dekkar kudh ba kudh hasi aagayi aur allah se shikayat rahegi

asad folding his hands : kaisi shikayat

zoya : yahi shikayat ki tum meri chand se chehre ko dekh paye aur main tumare kayamath bhare chehre ko teek se dekh nahi payi and moves chuckling...

asad gets irritated and moves to the washroom...to get himself cleaned

dillu najma meets all of thm... razia hugs najma masa allah meri poti tho behed pyaari hai...

aur mera pota asad kaha hai

asad comes to 2nd floor annoyed ..and blabbering patha nahi kudh ko samajthi kya hai...Bhopal ki shehzadi

dillu : voh aata hi hoga...

dillu : seeing asad lo aagaya

razia seeing asad...arrey mera pota gale se nahi lagoge

asad unwantingly hugs razia...

asad : I hope ki aapke pati teek hai...

dillu : asad yeh kaise baat kar rahe ho..voh tumare dada hai...

razia : arrey rehne do dilshad...usmain narazgi hain...aakir itne saal ke baad aaya hai

asad ignores them

razia : says voh katre se bahar hain ..he is out of danger. Aftr 1 week he will get discharged ...

dilshad : shukar hain allah ka...

shireen kabir :says dillu to move to khan mansion..tum log ghar jaao aur nikkat nuzzat tum log bhi jaao unke saat ...yeh lo keys

dilshad : teek hai hum ghar chaltain hain

chalo najma..aur asad tum bhi saying (angrily)

all go to khan mansion

nikkat says :puppi aap iss room main sojayiye...

aur najma nuzzat ki room main

nuzzat : par aapi...waha tho zoya..

nikkat : aaj keliye manage karo kal kuch aur sochthe hain

nuzzat : allocates asad 1 room...

najma seeing the room tries to sleep but sleep seems far away her so she just moves around near the stairs in the dark

and sees a figure entering the house through the open window in the night...kon hosakta hai ...voh bhi ithne raat ko voh bhi window se ...yeh log window band kyon nahi rakte..

kahi chor tho nahi. Najma gets scared goes to asad bhaijaan...bhaijaan bhaijaan

asad : kya hai najma...let me sleep...

najma : bhaijaan chor chor

asad : gets up..wht rubbish..and opens the door and sees najma sweating kaha hai tumara chor...bhaijaan neeche downstairs.

Asad :yeh chor tho gaya kaam se goes slowly towards the chor like figure ..the figure runs towards the kitchen and chews on a apple..

Asad tries to put the blanket on the figure but the figure moves towards 1 room asad follows the figure and the figure senses someone following and runs and hides inside the closet...asad sees voh tho iss kamre main aaya tha..figure sees asad slowly through the closet door.. asad slowly moves away frm the room

And the figure calms down takes a deep breath but figure's mobile rings loudly ringtone Yeh duniya, yeh duniya pittal di
Yeh duniya pittal di
Ho babydoll main sone di
Ho babydoll main sone di

Asad on hearing this moves towards the closet opens it puts the blanket and grabs the figure tightly
the figure seems to be struggling

najma : shouts loudly chor pakdagaya yipeee..bhaijaan kya kehna...chor pakdagaya

nikki nuzzi dilshad come out and see kya huva hai and switchs on the light.

najma : ek chor ghus aaya tha..par mere asad bhaijaan ne usse tikne nahi di..

nikki nuzzi : bhaijaan kon hai zara blanket nikalo

seeing its zoya...

nikki nuzi shout zoya...

asad who was holding zoya's mouth releases her and she starts breathing...and gasping for air

nikki and nuzi: zoya tum teek tho ho na...

zoya : half breathingly...yeh bodybuilder tho meri jaan hi leta

asad : excuse bhi tum yaha kya kar rahi ho...???

Zoya : trying to recognize him...his voice so familiar...kya main tume jaanti hoon

Asad : jee haan..voh ladki jo nehayathi batameez hai...jisne mujpe coffe giraya remember

Zoya : allah miya its u...and remains staring at him

Asad : I know iam handsome par iska yeh matlab nahi hai ki maine tume maaf kiya hai,,

Zoya : wht do u mean...yeh mera ghar hai..i mean mere naanu ka...samje..

And main yaha window se issliye aayi kyonki main humseha aisa karti hoon kisi na kisi ko surprise karne aur waise bhi ghar ke keys nikki kay paas thain..

Asad : oh tho tum yaha rehthi ho aur choro ke tarah ghar main bhi gussti ho...kaise kaise namune rehthe hai yaha and moves towards his room

Zoya : yeh hai kon mere hi ghar main aakar muje chor bholne wala..idiot

Dilshad : beta voh mera beta asad hai...aur main rashid ki biwi hoon and she leaves

Nikki nuzzat : says the whole matter to zoya...

next morning

asad gets up and thy have their breakfast quietly in khan mansion( in serial siddiquie mansion)

najma becomes frnds with zoya nikkat and nuzzat..

and thy start speaking

Afternoon

All of thm go back to the hospital

Asad Dilshad najma nikki nuzzi zoya

They enter the hospital room to see gafur ahmed khan

Dillu smiles

Gaffur ignores

Zoya smiles

gaffur gets angry razia yeh log yaha ,kya kar rahe hain

asad : dekiye janab gaffur ahmed khan hum log bas aapke patni ke bhuane se aaye hain voh bhi aapko dekne...

dilshad : asad bhahar chalo abhi chalo beta...she takes asad outside along with najma...

razia and guffur convo: asad humara pota hai aur nikkat ki nikaah taka asad yahi rahega...

guffur :par tumne unne bhulaya kyon ??

razia : baat voh nahi hain...baat yeh hain ki mere bhulane pay voh log chale aaye ..aapkeliye voh log chale aaye...aapi halath jane keliye..dilshad humari bahu hai...

usse haq hai..yaha rehne ka...aur kitha door rahoge aapne hi pote se...aur rashid ki gunaah ki sazza hum baccho ko kyon de

gaffur : just shuts his eyes

Aftr 15 mintues

asad grabbing dillu hume wapas humara ghar jaana chayiye...

razia : koi kahi nahi jaa raha tum log 2 months tho yahi rehne wale ho..aise kaise tum logo ko jaane de..no one is leaving...u all are staying for atlest 2 months

asad : ab koi reason nahi humara yaha rehne ki...

razia : reason hai asad tumari behen nikkat ki nikaah 2 month ke baad hai..tab tak tum log yahi rahoge ...yeh nikaah wala ghar hai...and all family members and relatives must be here ...

asad 2 months..bapre

guys ..most of u are confused with charecters..so I'll be repeating the character sketches everytime I update...but still if u people r confused I can discontinue this work..its all cool for me..😎😎

no precaps...

Edited by jilmil.1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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mine 😉
unres
Fabulous Update yar
Love AsYa both 1st&2nd encounter
1st one was on Hospital Can tine,where coffee was spread all over Asad's face
but I love 2nd one most: where Zoya sneak into House like a thief, but got caught by Asad&Najma🤣 🤣 🤣
also love Asad&Najma bonding

and Jilmil can U please use any of "ROCKSTAR" movie song on upcoming Chapters
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Res for Srasti,Jas,Aroo,Affu,Amu,Aarzoo;Lisnie,Juhi;Cahat&Gowtu di😉
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -ABI-



<font size="4">Jennifer ..
🤣 🤣 🤣lol</font>


which Jennifer 😆
I said AAK not KSG...
Edited by Amulya9 - 10 years ago
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Main yeh updt tab tak nahi padungi jab tak mujhe TF ka updt nahi milega last tiem bola tha na maine
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jas91

Main yeh updt tab tak nahi padungi jab tak mujhe TF ka updt nahi milega last tiem bola tha na maine

kal doongi...aaj tu check kar le...actually aaj mera stupid cousin ko footbaal logos chayiye...
disturb kar raha hai bhar bhar muje
10 std ka...grrr
uski social science activity koi bhi logos lane ka...yeh football logos chayiye isse grrr
Edited by jilmil.1 - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jilmil.1

kal doongi...aaj tu check kar le...actually aaj mera stupid cousin ko footbaal logos chayiye...

disturb kar raha hai bhar bhar muje
10 std ka...grrr


pichli baar bhi tune nahi suna

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