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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#131

thank u Vani and Hema..i am really happy that u all loved it..and special thanks for the immediate response..

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Sphinx.

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: ..KarnaKriti..
I had reserved this after the first part and you have went on to write so many parts thereafter. 😲 That too w/o pming me. 😡

Anyhow,
Another great story on Uruvi. 👍🏼 I like the way you have articulated her thoughts regarding my Aarya. 😳 Will also read the other parts as well and then give my views. 😊

awww!!! thank u so much kriti darling..and sorry for not pm ming u..really sorry..thanks for ur comments..do read all the parts

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

PART VIII

Edited by dhivyakrish31 - 11 years ago

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Sphinx.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

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Shalini Das

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Wow...it was beautiful...Uruvi is such a strong headed girl..i loved the last part where Angraaj rescued her damsel in distress! :)

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

It was beautiful Dhivzz di 😳 no today I will call u Mrs Dhivya Krishnan⭐️

I really feel shortage of words😳

Excellent, amazing, beautiful all fall short for this piece maam⭐️

Just quoting few lines which made me smile like something😳:

" searching for me?"

😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I heard a voice close to my ears.that lovely manly mesmerizing voice..but now it is husky. I turned back..He is standing behind me..his hands are across his chest..he was leaning to the tree with head slightly tilted..he was smiling at me with naughty eyes.It is seductive..my cheeks turned pinkish." searching for me?" he asked again.

now! my naughty Uruvi answered him.." no! i came here to collect flowers..how can i expect you here? " i expected some disappointment in his face..no!! he is smiling even widely

@Blue: Uruvi represents every naughty Karnali like me hey na😳

" really!! then who scolded my horse just before?" he asked..I put down my head in shyness..he is kidding me..

"are you waiting for me.."I asked slowly but with a pride..

"no!" he said suddenly

" my horse is very tired of long journey..so i thought of giving some rest to it"

my smile ceased..my face became darker..so! he is not here for me..how folly I am? i cursed myself.but now it seems he is admiring my

disappointment..suddenly he crackled into laughter .." shall we speak some truth now" he said

@Blue:😳☺️ *blushing* the naughty me, "Truth I have heard that u never lie!"

I too cannot resist laughing..

" please Devi!! stop this laugh..I wish to live long with you.."

😳😳*blushing*☺️

it is my turn to overwhelm " I am ble" he pressed my mouth with his palm.and said " shhh"

@Blue: I complete her, "I am blessed to have your love and you!"

😳

" words are unnecessary here..sometimes silence is more adorable than sounds.." I just caught his hands tightly..and caressed it in my cheeks..

😳

and this one too:

" can you bear my weight?" I asked

he laughed loudly..he said " you are like a creeper climbing around a huge tree"

Naughty me would have replied, "Angaraj creeper doesn't weigh 41 Kgs😳☺️"

A big applaud for u👏 👏 👏

Waiting for ur next part Maam😳

Update soon please😊

Edited by .Sanskruti - 11 years ago

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MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Lovely one . 👏 Seriously cute and sweet . And Karn staring at Uruvi was like 😳 . Do continue soon really excited for their wedding 😆

Edited by Texie-Shady - 11 years ago

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Sphinx.

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

thanku sooo much kannukutty..did u really liked it?? I was very much confused before posting it..and what u said.." maaam...😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Edited by dhivyakrish31 - 11 years ago

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31
thanku sooo much kannukutty..did u really liked it?? I was very much confused before posting it..and what u said.." maaam...😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Yes dii I liked it very much didn't u read my complete comment and reaction to few lines😳

nd why r u crying😕

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Sphinx.

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

Yes dii I liked it very much didn't u read my complete comment and reaction to few lines😳
nd why r u crying😕

yes!! I saw it dear..kannukutty..I am happy that u turned into uruvi for some time.. I am crying that u called me as maam..mrs..u r going far away from me..which I don't want to..