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Iam back with an update. I know it had been tooo long sorry. I hope I have made it up for the delay. Not proof read or spell checked. Kindly excuse those errors. Please let me know your feedback.
Part 29: Ruhi is our daughter
Raman could never be without flirting with Ishitha. He loved her after all. Ishitha had resumed her teaching and life was getting back to normal. Raman progressing well in his business. He had tamed Mihir and Romi as his best next levels. He would love to watch them sitting back executing big deals for the company. He had become more of a strategist now than working for the company. That was giving him more time to spend with his lovely wife and kids.
Ishitha was a responsible person and super women. She would take care of everything at home, kids needs and her career as a professor. He always used to be amused by her energy levels. She never used to forget to spend some time with him as well. Raman could never sleep without her near him. When he was away on business trips he would call her and speak to her over skype and then only sleep. Ishitha and Raman loved eachother and the whole family to the core. Raman and Ishitha had become core of the family. Ishitha's love for Raman's family and Raman's love for Ishitha's family was a treat to watch. They would take care of each and every need.
Ishitha had a punjabhi friend called Sonal. Her brother was also a fashion designer. Ishitha had spoken about the guy to Toshiji, Raman and Mr Bhalla. They liked the guy. Rinky was alsoaware of of him. He was very successful designer and she had met him in couple of fashion shows. They had invited Sonal and her family with her brother Manish home for dinner.
The families liked eachother and Rinky and Manish also liked eachother. Their wedding was finalized. All were very happy with the choice for Rinky. Rinky and Manish started dated eachother post their engagement. It was real fun when everyone would tease Rinky. Even Adhi used to make fun of Rinky. The wedding plans were on full swing.
Amidst the wedding preparations as well Raman was not leaving his Romatic kumar avtar and troubling Ishitha. He was always the one who embarrass her by kissing her in wrong places while she is working in the kitchen. It was one such evening when Ishitha was briefing Raman about the shopping that they did on that day. Raman was hugging her from back and listening to what she was telling. Ishitha was telling him about the arrangement that they had to do for Rinky's suhagraath.
I: Raman we need to book the Honeymoon suite of Taj Oberoi for their wedding night. Can you do it tomorrow? It's a Saturday and I hope will have time
R: Don't worry Jaanu, I will book both the suites there and ensure that the arrangements are done sensuously to set the mood for the wedding night.
I: Why two Raman, book one only and ensure arrangements are done properly for that. That would do.
R: Pagal Madrasan, it long since we have had a special night. The other one is for us, saying that he starts kissing her back and removes the dori of her blouse.
I: Raman... She was morning but they were in the kitchen so she had to stop him. She knew what Raman will land up to do when he removes the dori of her blouse. Chodiya, koi aa jayega.( Leave me someone will come). Please remember we have 4 children. Log hassege Raman.( PPl will Laugh)
R: Janshi ki Raman, sexy blouse hai tumhara, kaho toh utardu? (You have a sexy blouse. Tell me shall I remove it), you will look sexier. Logo ko hasne do, abhi keliye mujje woh karne do jo kar raha hun.( Let people laugh. But for now let me do whatever Iam doing)
I: Ravan Kumar chodiye, kabhi toh serious ho javo. (Be serious sometime atleast)
R: Oh Iam so damn serious. Let's do it come na. You look so sensuous in this sexy red saree.
I: Raman please, I need to go and pick ruhi from the class.
R: First take care of this child and then u can take care of other child of yours.
Saying that he pecks her cheeks. Adhi comes in and starts making fun of them
A: Papa, this is kitchen not your bedroom. Romance chodo, yeh deko koi letter hai. I think its important has the govt seal
Raman leaves Ishitha and she straightens her saree and leaves to pick ruhi feeling very embarrassed.
Raman is shocked to read the letter. It's a court notice which Shagun has sent to seek custody of Ruhi. Raman is broken. Adhi could sense that from Raman's reactions. Raman places the court nitice in the table of the living room and leaves to his room. He is unable to walk and is struggling to get to his room. Adhi becomes much panicked about this and is calling Raman. He is not responding. Adhi was very perplexed. He knew it was not aproper manners to read a letter his father had received. But could stop from reading it. The notice read "Shagun files custody case for Ruhi. She is siting reasons of Riddhi and Advaith in Raman's life."
Adhi is literally shaken and is not able to take Ruhi going away from him. He is in tears and runs to his Dadaji and Daddi.
A: Dadu, Dadi, will Ruhi leave us. Will her mom tae her away from us. Tell me. I don't want to give my sister to anyone. Why is Raman papa not saying anything? Will he give Ruhi to Shagun aunty? Tell me Dadi you tell me will Ruhi go away from this house.
Adhi is full of tears and Mr and Mrs Bhalla do not understand what's to be done. They come out and see Raman. Raman is also having tears in his eyes. Mrs Bhalla confronts Raman. By then the whole family is around. Ishitha had taken Ridhhi and Advaith also with her. She is not yet back. Raman tells them about the custody case Shagun has filed. The whole family is shaken. Adhi is crying uncontrollably. Raman comforts him.
Ishitha is back with Ruhi and the kids. Everyone tries to hide things as it might affect Ruhi very badly. Raman requests Adhi to be strong in his ears and asks him to take Ruhi and the kids inside.
Ishitha had sensed there is a problem and asks Mummyji and Raman. Mummyji gives her the court notice. Ishitha reads it and is shocked. She faints collapsing on the floor full of tears in her eyes. Raman lifts her up and takes her to their room. They sprinkle water and nothing is changing her state. They call the doctor. The doctor arrives and is checking Ishitha.
R: What happened to Ishitha doctor?
Doc: Mr Bhalla, she is in a state of shock and needs rest. Please let her take rest.
After the doctor leaves everyone else also leave. Raman is sitting next to Ishitha and Adhi also comes and hugs him. Raman continuously comforts both of them. Adhi sleeps hugging Raman. Raman makes him lay down next to Ishitha. He is still siting and comforting Ishitha. He slips into sleep in the sitting position. Ishitha wakes up yelling "no don't take Ruhi with you". Raman also wakes up with her sound. Luckily Adhi is still sleeping. Raman takes her into a hug and comforts her.
Ishitha is literally broken and crying putting her head on his shoulders.
I: Raman, I cannot live without Ruhi. Please do something Raman.
R: She cannot claim Ruhi's custody Ishitha. She was the one who left Ruhi when she was six months old to lead a life with Ashok. She denied having Ruhi with her. I can even get Mihir say that in court. You don't worry.
I: I want to talk to Shagun. Let's not get this to court. It might affect Ruhi. Now she doesn't know. If she gets to know she will not be able to tolerate.
R: I don't think she will agree. She is such a self-centered and stubborn women.
I: It's ok Raman, at least for Ruhi's happiness let's try speaking to her.
R: Ok we will go and speak to her tomorrow. You sleep now saying that he kisses her and both sleep.
In the morning both Raman and Ishitha go to Shagun's place. Shagun is up and seeing both of them waiting from upstairs. She doesn't come and speak to them. She makes them wait for an hour. Then she comes down
S: Oh Mr and Mrs Raman Bhalla. What can I do for you giving a wicked smile
R: We are here to talk about the court Notice
S: What is there to talk about I Raman? I will never let you live happily. You are happy with four kids and why will I leave my ruhi with you. You don't have the right to be happy.I will never let you live. I left you for money, but now you have everything and you have moved on in life with this Behenji, give my Ruhi. I don't have a kid and I deserve one.
R: Don't dare to talk anything about my wife. You know what you deserve and what you don't. We didn't want ruhi to get affected by all these court proceedings and hence we are here to talk to you. Tell us how much money you want. But Ruhi forget it. You will not get her, If we go to court also I can win the case.
S: Raman Raman Raman u are such a loser. You only deserve tears. Just wait and watch how I make you all alone like before. My first step is Ruhi.
Ishitha really gets furious when she hears talk about Raman.
I: Shagun, I was quite till now because I thought it's a matter between an ex-husband and wife. But if you think you can make my husband and daughter cry you are mistaken. I will not let anything happen to them.You wait and watch what we can do to you. And I will ensure that my daughter Ruhi doesn't even come near you for the whole of her life time.
Saying that he holds Raman's hand and leaves. Raman is smiling seeing ishitha back in Janshi Ki rani avatar.
R: Shagun toh dar gaye Ishitha
I: Apko Majak lag raha hai Raman, drive down to Neil's office right now.
They discuss with Neil on the whole strategy and they decide to make Mihir tell the truth that Shagun left Ruhi. But Neil was little apprehensive that the case might be weak as its daughter and the custody is mostly granted to the mother. He suggested that if we have few more strong evidences against Shagun it would be better.
They leave home and speak to Ruhi. Ruhi is all smiling and they are very worried to share anything with her.
I: Ruhi beta, I need to talk to you
Ru: mama you are going to talk about the court case am I right
Raman and ishitha were shocked that Ruhi knew it and still was not worried at all.
Adhi comes and Ruhi hugs him and tells that when Adhi Bhaiya is with me nothing will happen to her. Saying that she leaves. Raman and ishitha look at Adhi. He tells them how he explained about the case to Ruhi
A: Ruhi I will tell you one story
Ru: Yeh tell me Bhaiya
A: Once there was one cute girl. The girl had a father and her mother left her. The girl got a new brother and a mother. The girl was very happy. One day the girl's old mother wanted to take her away from the new mother, brother and her father. She was taken to the court. The girl did not cry because she knew that her father, Mother and brother will fight for her and never let her go with her old mother. Finally the girl was won by the father and new mother and brother.
Ru: Wow the story is very good Bhiya
A: Did you like the small girl. She was brave and trusted her parents and brother
Ru: Yes Bhaiya.
A: What will you do if you are in that Situation Ruhi? I mean if Shagun mama wants to take you away. Will you cry or will you trust that you will be with us and no one can take you away from us?
Ru: Bhaiya, why are you saying like that? I know more than anyone, my Bhaiya will not let anything happen to me.
A: Thank you Ruhi. Listen to me very carefully and don't get scared.
He tells her all about shagun court notice and assures her that papa and amma will not let her go and she will be with us
Ishitha and Raman are overwhelmed by the maturity of Adhi. He did what they were supposed to do. Both hug him with tears in their eyes. They thank him as well.
R: Adhi, you yourself were much shaken when you got to know this how did you overcome that feeling
A: Papa I felt good after you comforted me last night and I felt you will never let anything happen to any of us.
Raman felt elated about the confidence of Adhi on him. He felt 2 feet taller when he heard him say that and felt contended that he had given the sense of security to his children by handling their insecurities well. They all leave.
Ishitha during the night is thiking about what Shagun spoke and also about whatever Neil mentioned. She was thinking of getting their side strong. Ishitha decides to prove that Shagun was responsible for death of Raman's son Adhitya in the court to prove she is a bad mother. She feels happy that she has got a very good trump card and thinks of ways to get evidences to prove the same.
Raman come and looks very upset. Ishitha comforts him. She assures him that they will win the case.
I: Raman you don't worry, ru is our princess we will ot let her go anywhere. She is my daughter more than Shagun's. I will not let anything happen to her.
R: I know Ishu but why is this Shagun always after our happiness. Initially she tried to create misunderstanding between us. Now this. Iam more worried about the way she spoke this morning. She wants to ruin my happiness. But why. I am out of her life. And iam thankful that she is out of my life and you are with me. I cannot live without. Iam very scared that she will make me all alone like before.
I: Raman are you talking like this. You are my brave charming hero and these kind of words don't suite you well. Don't you trust that even if the heven falls I will not leave you and go.
Raman looks terribly upset. Ishitha tries to cheer him up and he is not responding. She decides to do something for him thinking that will give him a solace and confidance that's Ishitha is his.
She switches of the light and hugs him very close to her. Raman smiles. She kisses his forehead and tells him that he will have all the relationships of the world in her. Raman is keenly hearing her speak while she is comforting him.
"Raman when I hold you close to me when you are upset and comfort you by caressing my hands on your hair Iam your mother
Raman when I guide you about something and you listen to me with full ears iam your father
Raman when I play with you pranks iam your sibling
Raman when I listen to you with all ears of mine to you and obey you Iam your child.
Raman when I support you and you share your feeling with me I am your friend.
Raman when I lovingly do everything for your and enjoy seeing you enjoy whatever special I have done for you Iam your lover.
Raman when I kiss you and make love to you iam your wife
And I will always be with you. So how can you be alone Raman tell me. Iam all in one for you. Tell me what you want me to become now Mother, Father, Sibling, Child, Friend, Lover or wife."
Raman is overwhelmed by her care for him. His naughty sides creeps in and he rolls her down on the bed, with a cheesy naughty smile he says
R: Its so Obvious Janshi Ki Rani, What will a man want a sexy women to be with him on the bed
I: I don't know
R: Oh as though you are so innocent.
I: Really Raman I don't know, faking innocence
R: Ok fine, if you don't know let it be. And fakes to go to sleep
I: Ravan Kumar pulling him closer to her tells in his ears, make me all yours for the whole night.
R: Abb aye na utni pahad ke niche
Saying that he made love to her more wildy and passionately as neverd done before.
That gives him a comfort of owning Ishitha for whole of his life and makes Ishitha's determination to seek evidences against Shagun much stronger.
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Part 30:
Everyone is surprised including Raman when ishitha provides the evidences that Shagun is responsible for the death of Adhi (Raman's Biological Son). Court grants the custody of Ruhi to Raman and Ishitha and Shagun and Ashok are sentenced for life sentence for the whole plot.
Raman is offered his position back as commissioner of Police with all his stars back. He is appointed in his own city Delhi as a token of apology from the Police department.Adhi & Ishitha feels proud to see Raman in the commissioner dress on the first day of his work.
Edited by iloveyhm - 11 years ago
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