Mayur SS- You are My Saviour Part 8/Pg-30

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Dalia.
kon nupur ko kidnap kiya?
pata nehi aisa kyun kia

Nahi kerte to SS nahi banta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

I thought story MJHT season 2 par based hogi par yaha to story full of mystery h.. Interesting...

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Part 2 Page 7

You Are y Saviour

Part 3

On the other hand Nupur was being lying somewhere her hands and legs were being tied and a small bulb was hanging around providing all light to the whole room, she opened her eyes with great difficulty and looked around her surroundings..only darkness and dim light could be seen giving her an image that she is being captured in some room but where she don't know,she recalled holding her head which was spinnng and recalled she was standing in her room remembering Mayank when someone put a cloth on her mouth and than after what happens she don't remember...she thought of her family and thought,"Agar mein yahan to Bauji..!! Hey bhagwaan na jaane kya hua hoga..aur mein kahan hoon.."

She tried to move found herself all being tied and tried to call someone,"Koi hain..!! Kon laya hain mujhe yahan...!".Mein yahan kese aayi..!!".She tried to free herself but since the rope was tied so strongly that she couldn't able to untie it and with that a fear was engulfing in her heart wondering where is she..she called out her Mayank to rescue herself from this place..."Mayank please mujhe bachaa lo bahut darr lag raha hain..!!".After few moment a man entered the room ..he sat beside her and asked evily,"Kesa lagg raha hain Nupur Bhushan..".She asked him not sounding like she is afraid,"Ko..Kon ho tum..!!"

The man gave an evil smile and said,"Mein...ab to mein hi hoon..bass yoon samjh lo..poori life ab tumari mere saath hain..mein mein hoon ab bahut jald hi tum bhi meri ho jaaogi.."

Nupur:Aisa kabhi nahi hoga..tumhe kya lagta hain ki tumne mujhe kidnapp ker liya to kisi ko pata nahi chalega...

The man again said evily to her making her to scare,"Acha to kisko pata chalega ki tum kidnap ho gayi ho..!! Mene to tumhare ghar koi ransom bhi nahi bhejha..!! Aur tumhe yakeen karaane ke liye ye lo tumhare liye kuch laya hoon...!".

Saying he showed her a line of a newspaper which stated,"Well versed Mr.Bhushan daughter eloped from her marriage ..!! bringing down the image of her father and insulting him and his family infront of whole guest present there.."

He than said to her,"Haan to bataoa kese tumhare gharwalo ko pata chalega ki tum bhaagi nahi kidnaap hui ho..Coz you had neither shouted nor there would be any sign of struggle..you came in to me just like smooth butter.. dear..he neared his hand while she turned her face ..he smiled to himself and put her fringe behind her ear while she deadly glaring him and said,"Tum bachoge hi nahi dekh lena..!!".He said with over-confidence to her,"Koi mera kuch nahi begad sakta darling..!!Tum araam karo.. mein ataa hoon..!!".

Saying he left from there leaving her all tense and scared in thinking if everyone think so that she had eloped what sort situation they have been going through...though she should think on this more but her mind was more foucsed on that whether her Mayank also think so that she had been eloped..or he trusts her and will find her..she rested her head with the pillar behind and called him,"Mayank kahan ho tum ,Please mujhe bacha lo aur apne saath le jaao Please..!!".

It looks like she called him from very deep bottom of her heart as when she called him Mayank felt a feeling that Nupur is calling him ,he abruptly sat on bed sweating,"Nupur..!! ".Calling her..,"Tum fiker na karo Nupur mein tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga..tumhara Mayank tumhe jald se jald dhundh laayega..!!".Making firm determination to himself he laid down reluctantly...

Next Day Mayank reached to Bhushan house consoling Bauji and thinking of any way ..on the other hand...Nupur was being all tied up that Man appears again in morning wishing her morning he offered her to eat something,but she turn down his offer in anger he clutched her hair making her to scream in pain and in pain she shouts Mayank's name..on hearing Mayank's name from her mouth he became more furious..he clutched it more tightly and pulled her hair making her to scream again but with more pain , tears formed in her eyes ..seeing her tears he felt relieve as if want to see her pain and said,"Yahan koi tera Mayank bachane nahi aayega samjhi..vo to kuch kr bhi nahi raha hain..police tak nahi bulaayi usne...isliye usko yaad krna band kr aur chup chap khaa..samjhi..aur haan kaan khol ker sun le ab se yahi hain teri zindagi mere saath..".She gets scared and ask him her reason to be here,"Aakhir tum ho kaun aur kyu mujhe leker aaye ho..!! Please mujhe jaane do..!!".He moved till door and said turning her,"Ye samjh le ab mein hi hoon teri zindagi mein samjhi..!!!".Saying he banged the door and left a scared and teary Nupur behind.She took the plate and crying ate..as somewhere she knew she need some energy to elope from here and go to her Mayank she need to just inform him once and if she could do so she can be saved, she was wondering on which phase her Bauji was going on..and wishes to see him..and for all that she need a bit energy to run her brain .

On the other side Mayank's mother too reached Bhushan house ..She consoled Nupur's bui and assured her that they will soon sort out something and will soon reach out for Nupur and will save her.Mayank's Friend came in disguise with his fellow team..and they immediately went upto Nupur's room searching every bit's and corner to get any clue of the kidnapper when on the teammate...observed that someone outside the Bhushan house near bushes of grass is keeping eyes..and now seeing this their doubt change into clear that kidnapper has sent someone to watch out our activities and there any move can be life threatening to Nupur.

Mayank said to his Friend,"Ab sab kuch saaf ho gaya Like a crystal clear water..!!!".

Bauji asked him,"Kya hua Mayank..!!!".

Mayank came upto him..and sat beside him..putting a assuring hand on his shoulder and said,"Bauji..Nupur sach mein kidnap hui hain..!!".

This news brought a huge tension in the environment..and making bauji and everyone very very tensed...

Bauji:To ab...

Mayank:Bauji..ab humme jo bhi kerna hoga nahut soch samjh ker kerna hoga...Kyunki unka koi aadmi ghar ke bahar hum sab ki activities per nazar rakh raha hoga..!!

Nupur's father put a scary hand on Mayank's and asked,"Meri bacchi sahi salamat to hogi na..!!"

Mayank assured him,"Kuch nahi hoga Bauji Nupur ko..!! Mein usse kuch nahi hone dunga..!! Do din ho gaye hain Npur ko...koi ransom amount bhi nahi ayaa kidnappers ke pass se...kahin aisa to nahi hain..ki koi Nupur se ya humse badla le raha ho..!!Bauji...Kya aapki kisi ke saath kuch..!!!".

Bauji negativetly nodded his head and said,"Nahi Mayank..meri bhala kahan kisi se dushmani..chote se shere mein hum sab khushi se rehte the..!! Mujhe nahi malum aisa kon hain jo mujse badla leneke liye meri beti ko utha ker le gaya..mein bass yahi dua krta hoon meri Nupur jahanbhi sahi salamt ho..na jaane kya kya jhelna padd raha hoga usse..bass usse shakti de bhagwan..!!"

Here on the other hand Nupur was trying her level best to elope from there was being tied up so tightly that she can't even untie them in whole day.

In the Bhushan house, Mayank's Inspector friend tapped all the phone in case if they could receive any information about kidnappers or Nupur they could trace their location , all that was they have to wait for right time... though it was for everyone for waiting but for Mayank he just can't sit idly like this and said,"okay Ye to samjh mein aa gaya ki jab tak ek bhi call nahi aayega hum Nupur ko trace nahi ker paayenge..lekin abhi usse bhi important kaam hain..!!"

Samrat:Kya dude..!!

Mayank:Tumhe yaad hain Kidnappers ka koi na koi aadmi yaha hum sab ki activities per nazar rakh raha hai.. we have to do something ki vo yahan se chala jaaye.. cause agar vo jaayega.. to jaayega to apne boss ke pass..aur fir shayad aisa ho sakta hai ki hum Nupur ko trace ker sake..!!

Benji:Wow..!!Dude that's brilliant..ye to bahut hi acha Idea hai..lekin hum usse ye sab yakeen dilayenge kese...

Bauji : Vo yaha se sirf ek hi shart per jaa sakta hai...

Mayank:Haan..!! Bauji...aap sahi soch rahe hain..!! Vo yahan se tabhi jaa sakta hain jab ye ghar khaali ho..!!

Gunjan:Mein kuch samjhi nahi..!!

Bauji : Gunajn..!! Mayank ke kehne ka matlab hain ki .. abhi hum sab hai iss ghr per hain isliye..Kidnapper ko lagg raha hai ki hum kuch na kuch krenge...aur vo isi baat ka intezaar ker raha hai lekin agar hum ye ghar chod de..to usse lagega ki raasta saaf ho gaya hai aur ab vo apna kaam kerne mein clear hai..!!

Mayank:Aur ye baat uska aadmi usse batayega...aur ye batane ke liye aur gang mein wapis jaane ke liye vo gang ke pass jaayega..

Inspector: Aur isse humme inki location trace ho jaayegi..!! Getiing everything he said,"Brillaint Mayank..!! You are superb..!! I think ab humme iss plan ko execution mein lana chahiye..zaayeda late Nupur ke liye khatra hota jaayega..

Mayank:Yes..!!!Let's go...

They were packing all bags... just for sake when Mayank's friend receive a phone call telling him details about how many cars went to cross the toll...He gathered everyone and said,"Mujhe abhi abhi control room se list aayi hain un cars aur van ki jinhone ye pass wala toll cross kiya hai..!! Mayank jesa tunhe kaha tha ki dulhan to bahut kam hongi..uske hisab se...uss raat 7 cars and 4 vans nikli hai...

Mayank:Acha..aage kya..

Inpector: Vo jo 7 cars thi vo to shaadi ke liye jaa rahi thi..kyunki roses se saji hui thi...but jo vans thi...ek strange baat hain...All the four vans were having tinted glasses..

Mayank:Tinted..??? But vo to ban ho gaya hain na..!!

Inspector : Vohi to..!!

Mayank:Acha unki location ka pata chala ki kahan kahan ka toll liya hai..!!

Inspector: Haan do to pune ki side per gaye hain..ek Mumbai mein hi hai..aur ek Shirdi..!!! Hum humme in sab ke traces nikalne honge..

Mayank: If I am not wrong kidnapper itni jaldi Nupur ko door leker nahi jaa sakta..cause Agar Nupur hosh mein aa gayi then.. she will fight for her rescue jisse vo pakda jaayega...

Inspector: To hisab se jo car within mumbai gayi hain..usi ke sabse bade chance lagg rahe hain...

Mayank: Yes..!! Lekin aise hi hawa mein teer nahi maar sakte...

Inspector: Ye baat confirm kerne ke liye..ye jo humara plan will help us out.

Mayank nodded and said,"Lekin for bhi tu apni force ke kuch logo ko unn vans ko trace kerne mein laga de..and if possible kya humme unki number plates millsakti hai..!!

Inspector: Mushkil hain but na mumkin nahi mein koshihs kerta hoon..

Saying he instructed some of his man to track down those four vans.Here everyone were packing bit of their luggage to shift themselves from Bhushan house to other..Bauji was sitting on his chair staring at his and Nupur's photo..and wondering about welfare of her daughter praying to her that her daughter to be safe and sound..his thought were disturbed when he heard a knock on the door , he looked up to find Mayank was standing there...he asked him to come,"Aao Mayank beta..!!".He bcame quite soften towards him , his love for Nupur had already melted his heart and seeing how much this young boy is making had made him proud on her daughter's choice and happy that he had such loving person in her life...Mayank came to him and said,"Bauji..mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai..! Please promise kijiye ki aap mana nahi krenge...!!.

Mr.Bhushan nodded his head when Mayank continue,"Aap yahan se chalker , Please mere ghar per ruk jayiye..mujhe acha lagega..please..!!".Mr.Bhushan was very reluctant but on contant insisting of Mayank he agreed, thanking for accepting his request he turned when Mr.Bhushan called him and hugged him leaving him all surprise but what made him more shocked when He said,"Mujhe Maaf ker do Mayank..!!".He instantly grabbed his hand and said,"Nahi Bauji aap bade ho..aap maafi mange aisa shobha nahi deta..!!".

Mr.Bhushan said,"Mujhe tumhe aur tumhare pyar ko samjhne mein der ho gayi beta..na jaane kitna kuch keh diya mene tumhe..

Mayank:Bauji, mene aapki baat ka bilkul bhi bura nahi manaa...aap to bade ho ..aur humare mata-pita jo bhi kerte hain..hum sab ki bhalayi ke liye hi kerte hain...

Mr.Bhushan: Tum sach mein heera ho..beta...!! Mein bahut khush hoon..mere bete banoge...??

Mayank smiled with a bit teary eyes,"Ye bhi koi kehne waali baat hai..Bahuji...apna aashirwad dijiye..ki mein apni Nupur ko bachaa sakoon..Saying he took his blessing where Mr. Bhushan blessed him whole heartedly.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Oh bechari nupur. Great update dear.
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Prachi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Chalo atlast Bauji understood Mayu. Well, on that kidnapper, i think its our own Villain Druv. Lets see how Mayu will trace that idiot person. Nice track.
Thanx for pm n update sooon...

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: DhanakZ
Oh bechari nupur. Great update dear.
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Hmm..

Thank you

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Angle.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Awesome part
Loved it so much

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: love.mayurarti
awesome update

Thank you dear

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Part 3 Page 13

You Are y Saviour

Nupur with great difficulty opened her rope..and untied herself...she looked to the whole room and waited for few minutes seeing if any one is coming up or not...and then very carefully and smartly..she went to washroom...opening the window.. tied her duppatta at the handle of it and slowly.. not coming to any one's knowledge she eloped from there...she jumped out of window..but seeing outside she was cluelss of area from where she have to go...when she saw the things properly...apart from moonlight from one place very far away she can see bit of light where on the other side of the road there were no light it was all dark..thinking the light area will lead to the city she walked out from there slowly...

On the other hand the person who was being appointed by kidnapper saw that Bhushan family is planning to leave the house and saw how everyone gather's in the car and moved out with their bags ...after they went he went upto the gate kepper and with talking to him he got that they had left for morena as living here is extremly insulting for them , giving a smirking look he took his bike and went ...unknowing that the person who told him this news was none other than one of the police member...and slowly Mayank,Benji , Samrat and Inspector followed him, where elders were resting at Mayank's house on his insist...

They slowly catching up without his acknowledgement...but since following him was also not an easy task...the person took many many stops or haults as to confirm that no one is following him...

On the other hand Nupur was running, her breath was out but still she was running , she has to run has to contact her Mayank , has let her information to be pass on to him any how...just any how.. this thing was actually making her determined to meet her Mayank .. giving her strength...which all she have...

On the other hand Mayank and gang were chasing the person but since it was night and chasing him on the quiet and alone road was making this extremly difficult...but still they were trying their best...They noticed that he crosses the same toll and move to within the city, somewhere there doubt was clear that Nupur is in Mumbai only , but where to search her in this whole big was really a very big question.

Nupur was not able to walk much... she was taking the route of forest to reach the city, and since it was all quiet and midnight and freaky was making her scared like anything.. she took a rest of the tree...taking some breaths peeping out the tree to see as if if someone is watching her or not...she stood on her heels, gaining her breath she went down again.. taking support of another tree she came to the main highway road...and was walking talking support of besides tree when she hear a similar voice.

Mayank and gang were standing near a tea stall.. due to a truck which came between them and person they were chasing they lost his track and were searching him near tea stall as they sensed he was planning to take stop on this tea stall a spot.

Mayank sensed someone is behind him...he turned to look but due to so much darkness he couldn't able to see anyone's face...he was standing there looking and here in search of person , talking to Samrat about guessing where could have been he had gone...

Nupur saw a familiar figure standing at a bit distant to her , he seemed to Mayank..her Mayank from backside..she gathered her energy and made slow steps towards her , she tried to call him but her ..throat was already dried and drained out of energy...she waled slowly towards him streching her hand...

And before she could reach out to him to a reasonable distance , a distance where he could see her , someone came from behind and clutched her...keeping his palm on her mouth...stopping to make any kind of noise... she tries to make a lot off struggle but couldn't able to reach to them or make any such noise which could reach to Mayank and he could save her...her struggle was going on where on other hand Mayank was seeing everywhere but not his back...Nupur's strength was diminishing and here Mayank planned to leave and search somewhere other...she saw a blurred retreating figure of Mayank and slowly darkness engulf infront of her eyes...

Mayank sensed someone behind him , but when turned he found no one...Inspector came to him giving hima bad news,"Mayank..!! We lost him..!! Vo kahin bhi naazar nahi aa raha hai...!! I think ab humme chalna chahiye ..subh yahin aa ker fir se investigation krenge...!!"

Mayank nodded his head and went from there again turning back for the last time don't know but he felt a connection to that foresty area which a few steps away from there...shrugging his thoughts he went from there...

Nupur opened her eyes and found herself...in that same place again...she tried to move a bit but again those ropes were being tied around her...tears dwell up in her eyes..making her felt that she has lost ... her attempt to run went down...she cried in her heart...looking up as if asking for god that he could have provide a bit energy to her to escape successfully from here...her all these thoughts were broken when her room opened with a loud bang...and the same person who claimed to kidnapped her came...but this time with a belt in his hand..and without saying anything he started beating her brutally worse than someone treats an animal...she was screaming for her help and he was increasing the speed on his beating and was again and again,"Bhaagne ki koshish tune..teri himmat kesi hui..!!"

He stopped when he was satisfies that now she can't even move a bit, he went closer to her and clutched her hair tightly making her to scream in pain terribly and said,"Tu mera kuch nahi bigaad sakti samjhi..!! Ab tera koi nahi hai..tera baap , poora pariwaar tera Mayank sab chale gaye hai ye Mumbai sheher ko chod ker..tujhe akela mere pass chod ker..ab yahin hai teri zindagi..aur agar fir se bhaagne ki koshish ki na..to jaan se maar daalunga...Samjh mein aayi baat..!!

Nupur finally asked in her pain and crying voice,"Tum aisa kyu ker rahe ho mere saath..!!"

He pulled her hair and said ,"Arey Nupur tumne mujhe pehcahnana nahi.,..mein to tumahara pyar hoon..tumhara pehla pyaar...tumhara Dhruv..!!! Aur tum mujhe ach se jaanti ho na mein tumse kitna kitna pyar kerta hoon..Tumhare liye acha hoga ki tum apne Mayank ke baare mein sochna band ker do ..else you knoe..babe what I am capable off...!!!".

Warning her he went out from there...and left her there lying , crying in pain and shock knowing what he is and why he had done this.Nupur was in great great shock , he is Dhruv..but than her mind was thinking , how did he escape from mental asylum , he was not her lover , neither she had loved him even once..it's just he was an obsessive kind of person and thinks her of his possession..and his this obsession has brought her and her loved in such a dangerous situation...she looked here and there but there was darkness in the room with only a dim light of the small bulb glowing...she cried and cried...cried in pain , cried thinking about her father... cried remembering her sister and her friends but when Mayank's thoughts came across her mind instead of oan of pain .. moan of calling her love escape from her mouth she said meekly to herself from bottom of her heart,"Mayank..!! Tumhari Nupur ko tumhar zarurat hai please..please mujhe yahan se le chalo.Please..!!".And with that she felt unconcious cause of constant crying...

Mayank was moving from left to right to right to left, he was feeling very very helpless...,"Ye sab meri galti hai..mujhe uss aadmi per ache se nazar rakhni chahiye thi..varna aaj vo humare haath nahi nikalta..!!!"

Bauji put a hand on his shoulder and said,"Calm down Mayank..Beta..!! Tumne to poori koshish ki..but vo haath se nikal gaya to isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai..!!

He said,"Per bhi Bauji...

Bauji: Mayank beta... shaant ... dimaag shaant rakho fir shayad tumhe kuch samjh mein aayega...

He nodded his head..and sat thinking what furthur steps they have to take..when his inspector friend came and said,"Mayank..!! hal vohi chalte han..jahan kal gaye they uske last spot per...I am sure humme wahan kuch na kuch zaroor milega.. jo mujhe informers ne bataya uss hisab se...

Samrat:Kya...Kya pata chala hai tumhe..!!

Inspector: Let's go mein tumhe raaste mein batata hoon

Saying the trio went out to re-investigate the place again.Investigation was going on full speed but secretly...not in knowledge of much people as there is a risk that it may reach out to kidnappers.

They went to that place where they were last night...asking the tea stall vendor that have seen any person who seemed to be suspicious...They were asking to people here and there also about the night the marriage was about to happen as sources tell that the van was being traced till here...but furthur routes cannot be determined..they even moved a bit ahead couldn't found any shed or something from where that can think the kidnapper must have gone...

Mayank to that road across forest area...to see whether he must have eloped from where he was seeing the nearby tress when something came beneath his feat , he gave a look and was surprised to see earings...and if he remembers it's the same earing Nupur was wearing one her wedding day , he immediately called but his friend and showed him , they look out for the whole forces and try to search more of clue , where they found Nupur's broken bangles and also a piece of cloth , on seeing it carefully they realize it was filled with chloroform , means Nupur was here was being caught by them and taken back.

Inspector: Lagta hai Nupur ne bhaagne ki koshish ki thi..but isse pehle vo hum tak pahuch paati unhone usse pakad liya fir se..

Mayank nodded his head feeling distress,"Ye kya ho raha hai...ye sab clues to mill rahe hain but hum koi decision nahi le paa rahe hain jahan se hum Nupur ka pata laga paayein kya krein.. Ye sab bata rahe hai ki Nupur musibat mein hai but Nupur kahan hai vo kese pata chalega.."

Inspector: Don't worry my friend pata chalega...meri pori force issi kaam mei hai pata chall jaayega...himmat na haaro hum Nupur ke sach mein bahut karib hai bass usko dekhna baaki hai...

Giving motivation to his friend he consoled him and asked him to not to loose his hopes.

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