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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: urvisaini

Nice

family reunion time it is!!!!

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sudipto-69

very very nice awesome amazing part.

fab lovely superb.
love it. update asap.😃


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: parsh-lover

beautiful nd wonderfuk update
amzng lovely part.
update nxt prt soon
thnk u so much for pm


u welcome ...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anu_anya

awesome lovely beavtiful update
jealous rd was shoo cute
rd 3 surprises r too gud
thanks for pm
continue asap
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thnku so much...
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Originally posted by: Param_love

awesome n lovely update😳👏

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: saddahaqrox

maine kahin pe res karke rakha tha lekin bhoolgayi kahaan...

read all chaps in 1 go...lovely
detailed comment later...chalega na?


ofcourse dear pls comment na in every part in new posts...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Thriller123

Hey i just read all 42 parts in a go must say u r an superb writer thank for the pm if possible plz pm me next time when u update ur next part😃


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Posted: 10 years ago

YOU ARE ALWAYS WITH ME - 43 - emotions & return gift:


RECAP : parth sang a song. sanyu noticed emptiness in parth and vidushi's life. she convinced both of them to be a couple. then after they left to sanyu's home. sanyu is surprized to see her parents. Next...


It was evening time now.
She was out of control now. She ran towards her mother, who was already in tears, anxiously waiting for her daughter take in her embrance. Sanyu hugged her tightly. Tears were continuously rolling from her eyes which made her dress wet.


S: maa.
SM: sanyu meri bachi(she kisses her every where on her face as if she got water in desert) kahan chali gayi thi tu. Kahan kahan nahi dhundha tujhe. Itne saal tu kis haal me thi bataya randhir ne. Meri bachi mujhe maaf karde teri maa tere liye kuch nahi kar paayi.


S: nai maa maafi to mujhe maangni chahiye ki kaise meri wajah se ap itne saal rote rahe.(still in tears)


SM: koi baat nahi ab tu aa gayi hai na, ab koi nahi royega. Ja apne papa se mil le. Kab darwaaze pe nazar lagaaye baithe the ki kab tu aayegi aur kab wo tujhe gale se lagaayenge.


Now she met her father and also hugged him.


S: papa..


SP: beta mujhe maaf karde bahut nainsaafi ki maine tere saath. Hamesha tere aur tere sapno k bich me khada raha deewar bakar. Kabhi tujhe nahi samjha. Hamesha apni tarike se zindagi ko achha ya bura kaha. Par beta maine kabhi tera bura nahi chaha.(also in tears)


S: main janti hun papa. Apko explain karne ki zarurat nahi hai. Koi baap apni beti ko hate nahi karta. Ap mere liye duniya k best papa ho.


SP: meri bachi.(kisses her forehead)


Now finally she came to ankit, her real enemie in the house.


S: bhai.


Now ankit was fully emotional to see her back. He had no grave in his eyes, he just had tears of regret and pain in his eyes.


He could not say anything and hugged her tightly and started crying harder. She understood the situation and in return hugged him back. He now got some strength to say something.


A: mujhe maaf karde sanyukta. Bahut galat kiya. Main hamesha chahta tha tu chali jaage, is ghar se meri zindagi se sab se. Par jab tu gayi tabse tu gayi koi nahi tha mera paas na ladne k liya na roub jhadne k liye na pareshan karne k liye.


(finally they broke the hug andhe wiped her tears and placed his palms on her shoulders)Mujhe hamesha lagta tha tu ek ladki hai tu kuch karne k laayak nahi par tune har jagah mujhe haraaya. Apna haq liye. Tu har ladki k liye ek sabak hai aur mere liye meri shaitaan behen.(sqeezing her nose)


SP: haan beta ankit tum sahi keh rahe ho(both stared their father). Meri beti to sabke bahadur hai, kya kya nahi kiye apna haq paane liye. Aaj mujhe garv hai apni beti pe.(caressing his palms on her head)


R: main bhi kabse yahi kehne ki kosish kar raha hoon par ye hai ki har bar answer aansu se deti hai.


S: tum nahi hote na randhir to ye kabhi possible nagi hota. Tumne aj mujhe sab kuch de diya meri life conplete kar di. Savh kaha tha tumne 3 sabse inexpensive gifts di hai tumne mujhe. Thank you so much.


R: ye kya teen gifts aur ek thank you. Do you think its fair???
And everyone brusted out laughing there.


SM: andar to chalo, saari baaten yahin baahar khade khade karni hai kya???


Everybody stepped inside and noticed two small twins came running towards them.


K1: mujhe de ye mera hai main dungi.
K2: to kya hua tera hai main dunga.
S: ye kaun hein???
A: khud hi pehchan le. Carbon copy hein teri meri.
S: haan bhai wo to dikh raha hai par kiske bache hein.
R: tumhare ki nephew aur neice hein.
S: are baapre ye paida hoke itne bade bhi ho gaye. Bhai inke naam kya hein.
A: Shaurya aur suhani.
R: haan haan wo to wait kar rahe the ki kab sanyu bua apni picnic se aayegi aur khud rubber lagaa k khinchegi taaki hum bade ho jaayen.
S: shut up randhir. Bhai inke saath to difference nahi karoge na ladka aur ladki ka.

A: kya sanyukta tu bhi.


Now they both came running towards her and sandhir hugged them one each.


Sh: bua bua. Dekho na ye mujhe apko dena hai par ye de hi nahi rahi hai.
Su: main dungi, ye maine banaya hai samjha.
S: koi bhi de kya fark padta hai. Dena to mujhe hi hai na. Milkar dedo. Waise bhi tumhe pata hai shaurya ladkiyan kisi bhi kaam me ladkon se kam nahi hoti.


There comes ankit's wife Manisha.


M: bilkul tumhari bua ki tarah.
Sanyu goes to her and hugged her.
S: bhabhi kaisi ho ap???
M: tum batao sanyu. Tum thik ho na. Pata nahi itne saal kaise rahi hogi tum.
S: bhabhi, abhi to apne kaha na ki main kisi ladke se kam nahi. To mujhe koi problem ho sakti hai kya. Main ekdum fit hun. Dekho.
SM: beta jao tum dono thodi der aaram kar lo fir khana khate waqt main bula lungi. Thake hue hoge lamba safar tha na.
S: maa main apki help kar deti hun.
SM: koi zarurat nahi sanyu. Tu jaa aaram kar. Aj apni maa k hath ka khana kha lena. Itna bura nahi khana banaati main.
S: maa ap bhi na.
SM: ja apne kamre me. Bilkul waisa hi hai jaise chhod k gayi thi.
Now sandhir went to room. As randhir entered the room sanyu followed him.
R: hmm... bilkul waisa hai jaise maine dekha jab har bar khidki se kud k dekha tha.



He was busy in discovering room and she was continuously staring him. His obligation towards her was incredible. She had nothing to say or give him in return. His sight was on the bed where sanyu fell over him.


He look was still locked in his eyes and he was in his memories restinh his palms on his andomen, when she came like a fire and hugged him tightly from his back. Her eyes were flooding and she spoke in a trembling voice. Her act took him out of his dreams and his palms now covered hers.



S: itna kuch diya hai tumne mujhe randhir. Mere kuch bol kar ya de kar tumhara ehsaan utaar nahi sakti. Tumhare pyar ne mujhe firse zinda kiya. I have got a life coz you pulled me back to you.


Tum nahi hote to main abhi bhi apni beti se dur apni family apne friends apne passion aur tumse door kisi mental asylum me sadh rahi hoti. Is world ka koi bhi doctor mujhe thik nahi kar sakta tha agar tum nahi hote. Main apni jaan bhi de doon to ye favour chuka nahi sakti.(still in llots of tears)



Listening to her words he turned all of a sudden and cupped her face.


R: pagal ho kya. Mazak me bhi marne ki baat mat karna. Tumhare jaane se mera kya haal hua tha pata hai??? Dobara akela ho gaya tha main. Ye sab maine tumhare liye nahi apne liye kiya hai.


His words were inactive on her as all her emotions were evoking now through her eyes. She hugged him tightly and started crylimg even more lauder.


He now started consoling her through his song. He raised her from his chest through her shoulders and again cupped her face and started singing wiping her tears off through his thumbs.


Kuch Is Tarah Teri Palkein
Meri Palkon Se Mila De


Now oscillating his head in a
no he kissed her tears..


Aason Tere Saare
Meri Palkon Pe Saja De
Kuch Is Tarah Teri Palken
Meri Palkon Se Mila De


She was still sheding tears and went to bed prong and clutched it in both her hands. He came and placed his palm over her and again..


Tu Har Ghadi Har Waqt Mere

Saath Raha Hai


She crabbed his hands tight facing him back and kissed there.


Haan Hai Yeh Jism Kabhi Duur Kabhi Paar Raha Hai (caressing her hairs)


Jo Bhi Gum Hai Yeh Tere

Unhe Tu Mera Bata De (cupped her neck in one palm, other one still in her capture. She now placed a warm tear drop there)


Kuch Is Tarah Teri Palkein
Meri Palkon Se Mila De
Aason Tere Saare
Meri Palkon Pe Saja De
(kissed her forehead)


Now he placed her sitted on bed and bent on his knees down. His face up her lap and he was clutching both her hands.


Mujhko To Tere Chehre Pe
Yeh Gum Nahi Jajjta


Kissing her hands and she has stopped crying.


Zaij Nahi Lagta
Mujhe Gum Se Tera Rishta
(placed his head on her lap)

Sun Meri Guzarish
Ise Chehre Se Haata De
Ise chehre Se Hatade


She now took one hand out and caressed his hairs.


Kuch Is Tarah Teri Palkein
Meri Palkon Se Mila De
Aason Tere Saare
Meri Palkon Pe Saja De


Resting her head on his head which was still on lap, they were in that position till her mom called her.


They changed their position and concentrating on door randhir opened it.


SM: are tum dono ne abhi tak kapde nahi badle.
R: wo maa hum.
SM: koi baat nahi jaldi aa jao.

They changed, had their dinner and slept.


Next morning..


When randhir opened his eyes he could not find sanyu. He searched her everywhere but could not find her. Finally he went out of the room and found her near the dining table, helping her mother for decorating dining from uptairs.


He called her whispering but it was not audible to her. So he brought a flower and threw towards her and to his luck, it hit her. She stared upstairs. They were talking in whispers and sign language due to her mothers presence.


R: upar aao(directing towards him)
S: paagal ho dikhta nahi main maa ko help kar rahi hoon table lagaane me(pointing to table and mom)


Observing her mind towards other side her mom saw up where she was staring.


SM: are randhir beta kuch chahiye kya???
R: aaa..haan maa chai. Ap sanyu ko bolengi mere liye chai laaye.
SM: jaa sanyu unhe chai de aa.
S: par maa main.
SM: main kar lungi tu jaa.


Following her mothers order she went to kitchen and took tea and went to him.


S: zyada smart samjha hai khud ko???
R: wo to main hun hi samjhun kyun.


While placing tea he clutched her wrist and they had an eyelock which was broke by voice of sanyu's mom.


S: dekha itne bhi smart nahi ho.(and she left)


After their dress up and exoduing her family members they left home.
Now sanyu was driving as she had planned something for randhir. As they reached home randhir got surprized looking to the view.


The whole house was decorated with flowers and garlands. It had a dazzling view which twinkled in his eyes and he twisted towards her.


R: ye sab kya hai??? Kisiki shaadi ho rahi kya???
S: khud hi chal k dekh lo. Tumne itna kuch kiya mere liye. Oops sorry humare liye. To maine socha main bhi kuch karoon. Achha thik hai andar chalo. Apne room me.


They entered the house. The interiers were alsi decorated with leds and flowers. Soon they reached their room and sanyu took him blind folded as he always did with her. When he opened his eyes, it was really a surprize

to him. His eyes popped looking looking to it.


To be continued...


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Posted: 10 years ago
superp nd beautiful prt. update nxt prt soob. thnk u so much fr pm. keep smiling

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