MY LIFE IS INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU [ PART 37 ( A ) UPDATED ] - Page 38

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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing chapter
so cute
and rd's line was so sweet
thanks for pm
next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
its superb awesome fab fab lovely lovely lovely cute
its really cute sweet nice fab part.
precap sound interesting love it.
update asap.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow. what a romantic update.
specially the lines.. they touched my heart.
thank you for pm
update soon
keep writing.

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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely dear
aww i soo loved their date
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was mind blowing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey ...i was a silent reader. But after reading this ff i cudnt stop myself from commenting... Its just awesome... 👏Fantastic...👍🏼 Thousand hugs and salutes...🤗 And lots of luv...plz update the next chap ASAP.and pm me...,
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just now completed reading all the parts in a go...
WOW your writing is just amazing I felt like reading Ravinder Singh's novel ...concept of the story is also nice
Update ASAP I wanna see oops read romance of sandhir
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pls update this ff soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Ok I know I am late... So sry 4 dat.. So here I go..

MY LIFE IS INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU - part 35b - The Romantic Night II

Recap: sanyu angry on rd. He managed to console her. Kiss . She challenged him to be romantic and he accepted. NEXT...


"so lets get started with the challenge lovely lady", chirped rd and stepped infront of me.

He softly took my hand and lightly pecked it gazing my eyes. I shivered at the sensation of his soft shiny baby pink lips and gasped. His dark brown orbs were those alcohols which can immpediately make someone drizzy. Those narcotic vision were making me crazy. I blushed and immediately hugged him.

"don't stare me like this, I would commit evil", I pouted shyfully.
"well baby, this is the starting of our challenge", his smirk appeared.

He travelled his palms to my waist and pulled me closer to him with a sudden jolt. Once again I peered these orbs without a single blink which was gradually making me addicted. He then whispered..

"wo aaye is kadar ki hum kho kahin gaye
unki nashili aankhon me hosh dhundte reh gaye
jab rehna hi tha humari baahon me unko
to wo humari aankhon me aise kyun doob gaye"


I immediated discarded my vision from his eyes to grown. When once I face him he winked at me wickedly. I turned around facing him back.

He removed me hairs from my left shoulder and inched closer to my cheek. His warm breathe was washing me and my breathes were heavy like never before. I closed my eyes and he reached my ears, so that his lips were caressing my ear pinna.

"the food is waiting for us", he whispered.

I opened my eyes and turned to him. I was embaressed and found him smirking. I somehow managed to take my seat followed by him.

We started our dinner and I was continuously staring my plate playing with noodles. He was peacefully having his food observing my expressions. Atlast he brusted out laughing.

"oh come on my princess, stop embarassing. It happens and I was just kidding", he said continuing his laughing.
"you are too much. I don't want to talk to you", I said disgusted and was leaving.

Suddenly he grabbed my wrist and placed me on his lap. My palms cluched his bleaser and he moved his arms to my waist.

"you dont know how to eat, so let me feed you", he said forwarding a forkfull noodles.

I ate it and I too fed him. Soon we finished feeding each other. A small piece of noodle was attached near his lips. I carefully wiped it and then circled my arms around his neck.

He grabbed my waist with both hid arms and inched closer. This time, his breaths were fast and mine were heavy. He pecked the crook of my neck and moved to my ears placing his palms on my back shoulder.

"you are beautiful sanyukta. May I have the pleasure to dance with the most beautiful lady of the universe", he whispered.

I broke the hug and found him staring me. I smiled and nodded in a yes latching my eyes with his.

I got down from his lap and knelt and popped out, "may I have the pleasure to dance with the hottest guy of this universe on our first date".

He giggled remembering his first proposal for dance on our last coffee date. He grinned and forwarded his hand with a finite nod.

He intermingled my right palm with his left one with right palm on my waist and left arm covered his entire shoulder.

The music started..

Tujhe dekh dekh sona
Tujhe dekh kar hain jagna

As the music started he grabbed my waist more tightly pulling me ever more closer.

Maine yeh zindagani
Sang tere bitaani
Tujhmein basi hain meri jaan haai

I smiled at him as he did this bitting his lower lip. I too moved more closer. We started moving.

Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak jaayen

I threw my sandles away and toed on his feet circling both my arms around his shoulders.

Kabse hai dil mein mere armaan kai ankahe
Kabse hai dil mein mere armaan kai ankahe

He tightened his grip on my waist through both his arms.

Inko tu sunle aaja chaahat ke rang chadha jaa
Inko tu sunle aaja chaahat ke rang chadha jaa

We continued dancing in that position.

Kehna kabhi to mera maan haai
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak jaayen

As the music deepened we got engrossed in each others eyes.

Lagta hain yeh kyu mujhe sadiyon se chaahu tujhe
Lagta hain yeh kyu mujhe sadiyon se chaahu tujhe

I was drowning in those orbs wgich were continuously attracting towards it. He was equally busy drowning in my eyes.

Mere sapno mein aake apna mujhko banake
Mere sapno mein aake apna mujhko banake

"still you think your fiance is unromantic", he asked in my ears.

Mujhpe tu kar ehsaan haai
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak jaayen

"i am the embrance of the most romantic person", I replied with a smile and pecked his cheek.

Tujhe dekh dekh sona
Tujhe dekh kar hain jagna

"i love to be pink baby", he teased.

Maine yeh zindagani
Sang tere hain bitani haai

I hit his arm lightly and leaned my head on his shoulder. He too leaned his head on mine caressing my back.

Jiya dhadak dhadak jaayen
Jiya dhadak dhadak jaayen

The music finished and I broke the hug. My hairs got spread on my entire face. He carefully adjusted those behind my ears through his finger tips. I gasped hard and closed my eyes.

He cupped my face. I opened my eyes and found him lost in me inching closer. He was breathing heavily and so was I. The length between our lips vanished during its meet. He gently sucked my lower lip. I was responding with equal passion.

This was not our first kiss yet our first passionate one. He moved to my upper lip and I follwed his lower one. As the kiss went on deepening, he moved his palms to my bare back for which I opened my entrance for him. He took the taste of my entire mouth. After a long take he broke the kiss still cupping my face in one palm. Once again our eyes latched for a long eye lock.

After few minutes it broke. We came back to our senses.

"aaa should we leave, we hqve flight tomorrow", he complained.
"sure lets go", he agreed.

"one minute"
"what?"

I took a tissue and advanced for wiping his lips which carried lipstick marks. He immediated stopped my grabbing wrist.

"what happened?", I questioned.

"hume sharam nahi is baat se
ki hai kitni mohhabat hume tumse
dar nahi is baat ki zamana kya bolega
k jab humare honto pe wo ye lipstick ka nishan dekhega"

I blushed hard and dug my head down.

"no need to blush sweeheart, this is going to happen many times this night", he teased and I blushed even more.

"log kehte hein chehra kya hai tumhare pyar ka
kya kahen hum noor kaisa hai us ehsaas ka
namuna maange wo humse agar to
hum khada kar den aksh apne dildaal ka"


"lets go mr. poet", I dragged him through his elbow still blushing.

We reached the car. As he opened the door, I clutched his wrist.

"rd lets go by walk, aaa please", I pleaded.
"but sanyu how can you walk, I mean heals", he worried.

"you don't think much on that, that's on me", I replied.
"okey", he said twisting his lips and elbow.

We started walking continuing our chats. His hands were inside his pocket.

"so what your brother is doing", he queried.
"engineering. He loves me too much. He thought it would be burden for me and was hiding this. For him only I came here", I replied.

"hmm I must say my brother in law has a big contribution for our relationship"
"rd you"

"what me", he giggled
"and what is my sister in law doing", he added.

"umm studying. Actually she too has a contribution towards this"
"really? How?"

"at first you had been so rude, so I was irritated by your behaviour. She made me understand that whatever we see is not right"
"oh god thank you darling. Sanyukta you know I will fall for your family if they are like this"

"vibhu and timi are my angels, if they would not be there. The aim of my life had been spoiled. I would have died with my parents"
"heyy, if you will say this again I will slap you hard. Till I am there, we will be complete", he said cupping my face.

I just nodded in a yes and we continued walking. Soon we reached the beach, our destination.

"rd"
"hmm"

"what if? Sid would have been my love not my friend", I chirped bitting my lower lip with a long grin.

We both started each other with blank expression for a minute and then.

"you URL, wait I will show you", he said advancing towards me.

I started running and he followed me. I was giggling and he was trying every possible was to catch me.

"first catch me then show, hihihi", I grinned and continued running.

At a particular point I stopped.

"so tired haan", he said breathing heavily still trying to catch me.
"in your dreams, you can never catch me", I replied and again started running.

"challenge to rd again", he murmered and again followed me.

After a few steps, he caught me by my waist and raised me. He spinned me two timed whereas I was busy in screaming as he was tickling my tummy"

"ahh leave ne rd, ha ha"
"i can never catch you haan"

"okey okey, you win. Now leave me ahaahaa"
"you will love sid right?"

"no no I was kidding. Leave me rd"
"i dont believe you, you have irritated me so much"

"i promise YAM. I would never do it. Now leave"
"haa haa okey"

But before he get me down, we both fell flat on sand. He was lying down and I was over him facing him back.

I gazed him and purposefully turned towards him still on top of him.

"rd, you remember this place and position where I opened my heart out", I said adjusting his front hairs lovingly.
"i remember. What a confused moment it was, which I never want to come again. I love each and every fulfillment you gave me", he said caressing my arms.

I lightly pecked his lips and started playing with his tie.

"you won't leave me na rd", I asked innocently.
"never", he said and pecked my hairs.

We both hugged each other and remained in that position whole night. I was in the safest place of world, his embrance. His warm gesture was washing all my pain out. My eyes welled up and I pecked his chest.

"i love you rd", I popped.
"i love you too", he too replied.

It was the most beautiful night of my life because after baba, first time I was feeling like my life is complete without him.

To be continued...

Precap: jealous sanyu..

Thank u 4 reading... Hope u all liked it... Plz leave ur auspicious cmnts below...

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Edited by Nain5000 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
After a long tym u updated
N it was wrthwtng
Moi luved it to the core

Sandhir romance was awsme
They both luv each other so much
They r so adorable


Precap intrstng
Sanyu jealous

Excited cnt wait

Update soon
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