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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover

m sorry guys for the delay... Last 2 weeks were totally messed up due to some or the other issues... But m back in delhi now n life is back on track too so u will get an update by tomorrow. Sorry for not replying for a long time bt i really dint gt time to inform u about my absence.


saw last comment from u... I thought u hv updated...😛 ...
happy...u r back...waiting for update
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Posted: 10 years ago
no need 2 say sorry dida...i can understand...bas intezar kerna bahut difficult hai...i m waitng 4 ur update dida
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Posted: 10 years ago
please update soon di 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
heyy guys.. jus chill
vish got a trouble.. dat is her lappy s nt working properly and she lost her data in it lyk abt updates n even her work data too! and her mobile is nt supporting her cuz its battery s down..
so guys be patient she ll give us d updates as soon as she gets evrythng right..
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chill...dida...don't worry...jab itne din intezar kiya to thore aur din...
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Posted: 10 years ago
update is in progress!! U will get an update today for sure.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover

update is in progress!! U will get an update today for sure.


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover

update is in progress!! U will get an update today for sure.

Yiippeee!!!😆🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago
I swear i won't go on long break now... It gets too tough to remember ur own story... I u find some discontinuity in this part then let me know though i read last 2 parts before update but I have history of goofing up with names.. his and her and stories. So please point it out.

Once again thanks to those who supported me and waited for this story patiently and sorry to those whom I was not able to reply.. But hope u can understand.

Okay... i promised to give something dhamakedar so here is Raghav realizing his mistake and Kalpi-Vitthal confrontation... i will try to give double update today so u will get something more interesting over there. If not then wait for tomorrow. No pms right now... u will get them at EOD,.

@Kapoor Mansion

Pakhi was keeping an eagle eye on Kapoor's gate so that she can see the person driving Kalpi's car. Finally the car comes out of the gate... She picks her binoculars and focuses on the driver seat... Expectedly, Prem was driving it... She sighs relief but a thought of Kalpi being inside comes across her mind... She steps out of the car and runs towards the home but to her relief it was locked too...Instead of leaving, she goes at the back of house and looks at one window whose lock is broken from a long time... With help of it she slowly enters the house but to her surprise it was empty and she found nothing suspicious. With a smile on her face she returns back to the car and leaves the place...

Prem who has parked his car at some distance was watching her antics from the rear mirror... He waits for her car to disappear, smiles and says.. "U can sit properly now... We succeeded in fooling my over smart sister. "

Kalpi who was lying in the back seat gets up while Maya who was hiding in the front too lifts her head... They sighs relief and compliments Prem on knowing Pakhi well.

Flashback

Kalpi takes her car keys and red clutch and runs towards the door to leave the Kapoor mansion.

"Stop" She hear Prem yelling. Maria and Kalpi looks at him with confusion.

"Pakhi was not convinced with my lies... n if I know her well, she will wait outside to confirm whether I was speaking the truth or not." Prem said.

"Then u leave... I and Maria will come out in some time. U can lock us from outside so that Pakhi feels the home is empty." Kalpi suggested.

"No Kalpi... There is a window broken in the kitchen from a long time and Pakhi knows it very well. She will surely come inside to check on u guys... I do not want to take any risk." Prem shared his doubt.

"Than what can we do??" Maria asked in tension.

"Come with me and hide in the car... Make sure that u r not visible from outside... And take the laptop and all other evidences from here... Make the home look like the way it was before our arrival." Prem ordered them.

Kalpi and Maria washed the utensils that they used and kept them in proper place... after arranging Neetu's room and taking out essential stuffs they hide themselves in the car... Prem casually drives it.

Flashback Ends

"Kalpi... from here I and Maria will leave... U take ur car with u." Prem said.

"No PRem.. M going back to home so u can take the car with u...Leave the car at office and from there u can use ur own car to reach farmhouse... That will be safe for u. " Kalpi said while coming out of the car.

Prem and Maria agrees.. She wishes them good luck for finding the culprit and takes a taxi to Singhania Mansion.

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@Singhania Mansion

Raghav was imagining Kalpi standing near the window of secret room and smiling sarcastically... In anger he rushes towards her and holds her arms tightly in anger but the smile on her face was intact which was increasing his anger...

"So this is ur real face... U destroyed me for ur own happiness... N now ur smiling... This bloody smile is for ur victory... but let me tell u... U dint win but u lost!! U lost a person who trusted u blindly... The one who loved u the most... I hate u Kalpana... I hate u Miss Jadhav. U broke my heart... U broke me... From last 5 years I was waiting for u and I was so happy on ur return but u... u just came back to take away everything from me... Such a big betrayal..." Raghav yelled in anger... Kalpi starts laughing loudly... He leaves her with a jerk but her laughter continues...

"Betrayal?? U r talking about betrayal Raghav... the one who betrayed me on the altar... The one who dint mind coming at my place with his new bride is talking about the betrayal... Yes.. I destroyed u... because it was ur punishment... Punishment for bringing Pakhi in our life... Punishment for trusting her... for sleeping with her. I am away from my family and that's just coz of u... It's u who kept her delusion and from Pakhi she turned into a vamp. I was being insulted in public and not once but again and again and just coz of u... Just coz of u... I was being called characterless... Yes, I know u r not directly involved in this but it was u who started this revenge game and I was being punished for loving u... Now, when I am playing this revenge game than how can u blame me?? It was u who taught me that culprit should be punished by hook and crook... Now when I punished my culprit then how can u accuse me of betrayal... U deserved it Raghav Singhania... U deserved this for breaking my heart and leaving me alone in this cruel world.

Do u even know how I survived in this 5 years... Do u know how I felt after being away from my family whom I loved more than my life... No Raghav u dint and still u have the audacity to call me betrayer... U r the betrayer Raghav... You are the culprit!!"

This time anger was visible on Kalpi's face... Raghav sits lifelessly on the ground... "She is speaking the truth... I deserved it... I deserved her hatred... I deserved her punishment... She suffered coz of me... This all is happening coz of me... I should apologize." Raghav murmured to himself... He lifts his head and looks at angry Kalpi... He hugs her tightly... Tears were rolling down from his eyes...

"I am sorry Kalpi... I can understand u. But please forgive me." Raghav said and looks up to look at her but there, he was standing alone and Kalpi was nowhere to be seen. He realizes it was his imagination but it was his subconscious mind that was telling him the truth and making him guilty. He decided to apologize to Kalpi as soon as possible.

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@Katnipura

Sammy reaches pco booth from where that blackmailer had called Pakhi... He shows Sheetal's photograph to pco owner.

"Do u know this lady?? Have u seen her around the place?? Her name is Sheetal." He asked the owner.

"No sir... I have not seen her around and this village is a small place... We know almost everyone over here. I am sure this lady is not in the village." PCO owner replied after looking at the photo.

"Have u seen someone new in the village?? Someone who came to use this pco... Look this is really very important for me n I can give u as much money as u want for this." Sammy requested him once again.

"A new woman came to this village 2 days back... I have not seen her face yet coz she wears burkha all the time. Yesterday she came to call someone. But her name can't be Sheetal coz only Muslims wear burkha."

"Ok.. tell me where she lives.. I will check whether she is the same girl or not..."

"At the end of this street... take a left... u will find a yellow house there... She leaves on 1st floor."

"Thank u.."

Sammy leaves the place after giving money to the man... He was hoping that the lady will be sheetal only... In few minutes, he was standing outside Sheetal's home... He knocks at the door... The burkha lady opens it.. Only her eyes visible.

"Sheetal" He asks... The lady startled on hearing her name... She holds the door tightly which Sammy notices.

"Sorry... I think u have come to wrong house." She replied nervously.

"Ohk.. I am sorry. I came here to meet Miss Sheetal... Actually my friend Pakhi gave me this address N I was being told to give her some money. But it's ok... I will search her somewhere else." Sammy lied and turns around to leave.

"Wait... Pakhi has sent u?? I am sheetal only..." she lifts the veil of burkha and reveals her face... Though she looked bit different from her old photograph but it was close enough for Sammy to know her identity. She takes him inside and asks for money when Sammy starts to initiate the conversation...

"Why r u blackmailing Pakhi??" He asked directly on not finding any other way..

"Pakhi has sent u to give money so just give it and leave... N if u have some questions than ask ur friend." Sheetal replied rudely.

"U know she won't tell me. N I m just worried about her... Can u please tell me.. I am her best friend." Sammy tried to play the victim card.

"Where is the money??" Sheetal asked on finding him empty handed.

"Ohh... Pakhi has given me cheque as she was not able to transfer it this month." Sammy found a reply as quick as possible.

"Give me the cheque..." Sheetal demanded.

Sammy takes out his cheque book and cuts a cheque on her name... She reads the account holder's name.

"But u told me that Pakhi has given u cheque... When she had already given u the cheque when y r u giving me money from ur account." Sheetal interrogated.

"Oh my mistake... She had told me to give u cheque as u know she is facing some monetary problems." Sammy tried to sound genuine but fumbled. "Can u please tell me why Pakhi is giving this money to u." He added in a polite manner. It was hard for Sheetal to avoid such genuine request but The way Sammy was trying hard to know the reason was not satisfactory. She tries to think some way to avoid the man and his questionarre.

"Actually Pakhi did an accident with her car and I witnessed it and hence she is giving me money to shut my mouth." Sheetal cooked a story on smelling something foul.

"Whose accident??" Sammy asked in curious tone.

"I do not know... I just noted her car number and black mailed her further." She said in an irritating tone. "Btw I will call Pakhi to inform about ur arrival so u can ask more details from her." She added.

"No... U can't call her..." Sammy said quickly. "I mean she has told u to not to be in contact with her for few days." Sammy tried to cover up but the damage was done... Sheetal decided to call Pakhi as soon as he leaves but agrees to him.

Sammy leaves the place with disappointment... "So it's just about an accident and nothing related to Kalpi's case." He thought in his mind. As soon as he leaves the place Sheetal too comes out of her room and goes to PCO to call Pakhi...

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@Outside Singhania Mansion

Vitthal is waiting for Kalpi to arrive... He is wearing his blue shirt which Kalpi bought for him on his birthday and hoping that Kalpi will forgive him today... he sees Kalpi stepping out of the taxi and urns towards her... In the hurry he misses a small stone and stepped over it... As a result falls on the ground.. his knees and palms gets some bruises... Kalpi notices him and runs towards him to help him.

"R u fine??" She asks him hurriedly with affection. Tears were forming in his eyes on realizing the care Kalpi still has for him.

"I am fine..." He says lovingly and caresses her head... She remembers his harsh words and the lighting pyre with all her belongings on it. She remembers how he refused to trust her... She pushes his hand aside and turns around to leave...

"Kalpi... Wait a second. Ur baba wants to talk to u." He said in a pleading tone. Hearing baba and Kalpi from his mouth makes her emotional once again... She was dying to hear him saying her Kalpi and accepting that he is her baba. His loving sound was strong enough to stop her from moving but the hurt he caused was also deep enough to let her not face him again. With her face turned... she stayed there. He holds her arm and turns her towards him. She looks at his tears and realizes that he is here to mend the relationship...

"Please let me go Baba... The relationship broken cannot be mended. I do not want to insult u again." Kalpi thought in her mind.

Vitthal folds his hand in front of her and mumbles a weak sorry... She feels like something pierced deep in her heart... Her father was pleading in front of her and she was not able to stop her... She wanted to hold his hands and hug him calling him baba but something inside her was stopping her... Finally she breaks her silence...

"Stop it... do u want something from me??" She said in a rude tone and composing herself.. in last 5 years she was preparing herself for this moment and practicing the rude words she will tell to them but today she was not able to remember those words... She was feeling weak in front of her emotions... Though she has proved herself vicious but inside her heart she was always the sweet innocent Kalpi for who believed in forgiveness.

"Yes... I just want my daughter to forgive me for my deeds... I know I have no right to come in front of u and beg for forgiveness but trust me... Staying away from u was as tough for me as it was for u... Not for a single second I forgot u... But the evidences against u forced me to stay away from u..." He said while crying.

"Today also the evidences are against me only... Thn why r u askin my forgiveness??" She asked in soft tone.

"Coz I realized that I was wrong... I overheard Raghav and Pakya's conversation and realized that u were innocent... I am sorry Kalpi. Today I do not have words to justify my act... But just a truth, that I always loved u."

"Please... Leave from here. I can't forgive u for what u did with me. I was crying and pleading to believe me but u were not ready to trust me... The same daughter who was ur pride became characterless by some planted evidences... I was not hurt coz someone wanted to prove me wrong but I was hurt coz the person whom I respected and loved the most failed to trust me."

"I know I was wrong but u too disappeared and ur disappearance proved u guilty."

"Right... n u never tried to find out why I disappeared... U know what baba.. I had an accident... I was lying in the hospital but I returned back... I returned back to lie in ur lap.. To hear some soothing words from u, especially after facing the biggest betrayal of my life... I was so broken that I wanted my father to hide me in his arms and to protect me from this cruel world but when I returned I found my father lightening my pyre... Please go from here.. I do not have anything to give u... Not even forgiveness. Just go away. " Kalpi said while crying.

Vitthal was feeling helpless on seeing her crying... He was guilty from the core...But now he had nothing more to say... He wanted to hug Kalpi while she was crying but how can he wipe tose tears which was coz of him. He turns around lifelessly and starts walking... With his mind abuzz with kalpi's words, he was not paying attention to the road.. A taxi was coming to his direction in full speed... Kalpi was looking at him with tears in her eyes when she notices the taxi.. She screams.. "Baba..." Vitthal turns around on hearing her voice... A smile appeared on his face on hearing baba... Kalpi was signaling him to move and shouting but he was busy in imagining her coming towards him and hugging him. Taxi driver tries to control his taxi but it was too late... vitthal was lying in the pool of blood... Kalpi runs towards him.. People gathers around them. Ambulance was being called and Kalpi takes Vitthal to hospital.

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P.S. : Hit like and comment u want more updates...Ur comments are my energy tonic which helps m in writing more and more.

P.S.S. : My patent lines... M too lazy to proof read it so bear with my mistakes... Sorry if u find plenty of them. We are bound to make many mistakes while writing and thinking at the same time so please bear with me for all the mistakes.

Regards
Vish
Edited by fairylover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
RES
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heyyllooo vish! u r back with a bangg! welcum back..😃
yippeee!!! me frsttt dis tym.. hahahaha..😆
wow.. it was a superrr cool n yess an emotional one too!
thank god! kalpi has escaped from pakhi.. credits goes to prem fr his smart brain.. and then raghav's part was too good.. first u showed his anger fr betraying him n then u made him realize his mistake.. dat part was super!
and then vittal-kalpi's part.. it was an emotional one.. even though she wanna forgive him she can't as she was too hurt by his beloved father.. n she can't even try to be angry to him properly.. so with this accident scene.. maybe kalpi ll forgive her dad .. let's see wat happens.. n yes Sammy got to knw abt sheetal Bt she s too cunning n dint reveal much.. eager to read more..
Edited by vasishna - 10 years ago

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