zaya ss:mujhe haq hai*prolouge for chapter 13 updated(27/12)* - Page 25

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow..it was fabulous !!!😊
absolutely loved it❤️
thanks for pm
please continue soon..😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA

<font color="#6633CC">wow..it was fabulous !!!😊
absolutely loved it❤️
thanks for pm
please continue soon..😛
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thanks ruh
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

Sorry for unressing so late😭

Awesome update as always
Loved it
Kiss kardiya ab sharma rahe hai😆
Lipstick spread over his lips like butter on bread😳
OMG marriage after 4 months
Bechare zaya
Saif is cho cute
Apni gf ko ghar jaldi lana hai😆
Great they are going oto mussorie
Yes they will win their immtehaan
Continue soon

it's okey dear...
Yes marriage after 4 months...
Abb mein aagayi toh update bhi anewala hai jaldi...
No tension...
They have to win their immetehaan...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update soon priya .. i m waiting and give a long wala update plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

it's okey dear...
Yes marriage after 4 months...
Abb mein aagayi toh update bhi anewala hai jaldi...
No tension...
They have to win their immetehaan...

😃
I think that peer baba told that
Jaldi jaldi jaldi
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

😃

I think that peer baba told that
Jaldi jaldi jaldi

haan yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow priya this is beautiful written. Read whole 4 chps in one go & it was fabouls.
Zaya are so adorable & fast too 😉
and that kiss 😳
Do update asap.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hello guys..
what's up?
first all i am sorry for the late update of the chapter..
maaf kardo..🥱
okey no more bakbak as u guys might be angry...
...
4 months..such a long gap for the love birds who fell in love at first sight only when they saw each other photograph without knowing much about each other...
for both zain and aliya the night was really big to pass and it seemed like a long dark tunnel..
the whole night passed by tossing in bed cheerising the moments shared with each other and also the kiss..
IN MORNING
aliya was still feeling shy as her hands brushed her lips...
her cheeks turned crimsone red when she was bathing and saw zain there staring at him...
she covered herself with towel and went near to her and to realise that it was all her imagination..
aliya:to herself
aliya beta abhi esa hal hai toh bad mein kya hoga ...budhu kahin ki..
she came out of the washroom only to collide with ayat who was coming towards aliya only..
aliya:ayat kahan jaa rahi this voh bhi itni jaldi mein...
saying this she rubbed her head
ayat:appi mein apke pass hi aarahi thi..
aliya:aesa bhi kya important work tha..
ayat:voh firdose di ka phone aaya tha...
aliya:kya??
ayat:haan..
aliya:kya bol rahi thi voh
ayat:voh keh rahi thi ki tell aliya that she saw everything what happened in the terrace
(F.Y.I here she saw everything means she saw zain and aliya kissing each other)
aliya was shocked hearing it..
ayat:that's why i wanted to ask ki esa kya hua tha...
aliya blushed and ran away in her room...
she took out zain picture from drawer and hugged it tightly..
aliya:i miss u so much zain...i want time to just lfy so i can meet u...i can hug u...i can fell u...
saying this she again hugged the photo...
ont he other siide in delhi someone was too feeling the same...
zain concentration was more on the photo of aliya than on his work...
he was looking at hee phot continuously when he heard knock on the door...
ghulam entered inside..
before entering he saw zain staring at the photograph and planned to tease him...
ghulam:woh zain i wanted to know did you completed mehta's presentation i wanted to make a copy of that?
zain:yes dad..and he passed the pendrive to him...
as he attached the drive he said
zain osman shahab called up to say that they will not be able to go to musorrie as they donot want to go so we have to cancel up the plan
zain who was drinking water let it fell down...
zain:kya dad?
ghulam:yes zain he too added that they will not have any outings in these 4 months...
hearing this zain face became like he was just gonna cry while on the other hand ghulam was enjoying the whole scene...
zain:yeh nahi ho sakta...i will call him right know and convience him that he has to go and if he donot wanna come then send aliya instead...
zain realised what he said in anger and covered his mouth ..
ghulam could not controlled his laughter anymore and laughed ..
zain was confused seeing ghulam laughing like donkey...😆😆


zain:what happened dad?why are u laughing?
ghulam:sorry zain i was just teasing you that's all ..there was no such phone call from osman side...and again laughed...
zain was flushed...
ghulam went and zain took the phot
zain:dekha aliya mera tho majak bhi banene laga hai aaj kal...
i miss u aliya..hope this week pass soon...
aliya u know i have decided to call u malika-e-zain after our marriage because u will be mine and mine forever and hugged her photo again...
both were talking to each other's photo and craving to talk to each other, to meet each other and to feel each other..
aliya phone beeped as she recieved message from zain
message conversation:
zain:hi aliya...how r u?
aliya:i am fine zain..what r u doing?
zain:remembring u...i miss u aliya
aliya:i miss u too..
zain:i want to skip the time to meet u
aliya:so do i
zain;u know what happened today dad made fun of mine
aliya:kaise?
zain:he told me that osman uncle called him and said him that u all will not come to musorrie ...hearing this i became angry and yelled in anger that if he donot want to come than it's okey but send aliya...
and dad started laughing..
aliya:lol😆
zain:u too started..i will not talk to u
aliya:sorry jaanu
zain:no..wait what u said?
aliya:jaanu😃
zain:maaf kiya
aliya:u know same thing happened with me too...
zain:kya hua jaldi batao?
aliya:firdose,our neighbour called ayat and said her that she saw me and u doing something in the terrace and from that time she is after me to know what happened...
zain:😆waise what happened between us?😉
aliya:u donot know?😡
zain:no..🥱
aliya:u know na jaanu...😳😳
zain:yes jaan..kiss uff i am lost in that since morning..
aliya:😳even i am
zain:i love u
aliya:i love u too
zain:i wish this week pass soon in a blink
aliya:i too wish the same..😳
zain:i have to go now fahad bhai is calling me for meeting with foreign clients..
aliya:all the best..even i too have to go to help mami in cooking
zain:thank u..i will wait to eat your hand made food
aliya:u r wlcum..yes sure when u will come to my house
zain:bye..
take care..and yes i will wait
aliya:bye.. u too...come fast..will be waiting for u
saying this they both went to do their respective work..
the seven tortureful days passed like a wind..
everyday day and night they used to chat and talk to ecah other sharing what happened with them ...
finally the day came when they were going to meet each other...
...
so here was it dearus..
i know jadda bada nahi tha..
sorry for that...
next part pakka bada hoga...
-PRIYA

Edited by iluvuzaya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Zyada bada NAHI tha...par FONT TOH BOHOT zyada bada tha...😆
Loved the update PRIYA...
Must say very well written of the DESPOS...😆
And nice way to add FIRDOSE here as well...come on FIRDOSE read it ASAP...😆
GHULAM laughing like donkey🤣
And their phone texting AW SO SWEET...

You had to end it there KYA...😡
Cont soon...thanks for the pm...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update priya
So loved it!!!!
Thanks for om
N nxt time u must make a lamba chauda update hun!!,

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