IKK -Gen-X-Pt45 Pg76 'Bachelor Parties' - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part rach 👏
cont. soon
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Exellent part 👏 i loved it ... it was very funny i coundn't stop laughing my head off on some bits 😆

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oh man..I just can't tell you how much I love it...well I haven't known anything about Kunal's character in series...but I'm liking KK in this ff...lol Angad man......I love his and KK's chemistry...dad and son.......it was so nice..........loved the bike part too....do continue soon....and man...I can't wait for Aryan's scenes!!!....gonna be interesting!! 😉
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hahahhaha 😆 😆 😆 kk is soo cute lol he was trying to look at his present and when he got that bike which wouldnt start awww I could just imagine the look on his face. At first Angad made his sons wait soo patiently and then when they were the last ones to get their gifts they got something which didnt work. Poor kids. I thought that this part was really cute. The whole happy family thing and all those naughty, sweet and teasing moments were really adorable. I really enjoyed reading it. Cant wait for their first day of collage bet there is going to be alootttttt of MASTI! 😉 😆 Great work absolutly loved the part continue soon and keep up the great work. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i love all the characters in this new generation.lovely part!! continue soon pls 😃
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ok for everyones sake...the jodis are Aryan-Ria, Kunal-Roshni.....and as for Tia....she's like the baby of the family so every one sees her as a sister, including Karan, so they can't b a jodi.....so i'll prob introduce another girl and guy 4 Karan and Tia.....hope tht clears everything....I'll try continue today 😛
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awwwwwwww 😭 😭 i hoped karan adn tia would be a pair 😭 😭 but i'm sure you'll introduce another girl for karan 😊
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thanx so much 4 the comments everyone 😛 next parts coming up
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Ok please do hurry

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Previously

K - Angad put me down
A - I will....when we get to our room
K - the boys might see
A - not likely, they're both sulking in their room

Angad heads upstairs as Kripa giggles

Part 3

Garewal House
The sun shine sover Mumbai, Roshni wakes up and opens her curtains, she smiles at the painting hanging on the wall which Angad had gifted her. She heads for the bathroom, showers and gets changed into jeans and a kurta top, then heads for Aryan's room, she goes inside and sees Aryan sleeping, she shakes him softly
R - bhai wake up
Aryan doesn't move so Roshni shakes him harder
R - bhai get up!
Ar (mumbles) - go away
R - fine, I will, and I'll call mom...M...
Aryan jerks up and covers Roshni's mouth with his hand
Ar - are you insane? mom will pour water on me
R - well you're the one whose not getting up
Aryan yawns
R - you do remember what day it is?
Aryan looks puzzled, he scratches his head and shrugs his shoulders, Roshni hits his arm
R - its the first day of college, your final year remember?
Ar - oh yeah...don't remind me, once this is finished, dad will pack me off to Delhi to take care of the "family business"
S - why? is that a problem?
Roshni grins while Aryan sits up in bed and looks at Sujal standing by the door, he shakes his head
Ar - nope dad, not a problem....I was just saying....how good it is....that I'm following in your foots....
S - enough....now get ready and come down for breakfast
Ar - yes dad
Sujal leaves, Aryan looks at Roshni smiling and hits her with a pillow
Ar - stop smiling
R - ok, now hurry up and get out of bed, and I'm going to come back in 5 minutes, if you're not ready I will pour the water myself
Aryan nods his head, Roshni leaves the room and Aryan puts his head back onto the pillow, Roshni pokes her head back into the room
R - bhai!
Aryan jerks up and gets out of bed
Ar - I'm up....I'm up
Aryan yawns then heads for the bathroom.
Bose House
Suhana comes into Tia's room and sees she's still sleeping, she goes over to her bed and shakes her
Su - Tia get up now
T - not now
Su - yes now, you have to go college, now up!
Tia yawns and gets out of bed and heads for the bathroom, once she's showered and changed she knocks on Ria's door, and pokes her head in
T - Di wake up
Ria still sleeps, Tia grins and goes back into her room, she comes back with a CD and puts it into Ria's stero player, she turns it on and cranks the volume up, Ria's sleep is disturbed as Tia's rock music blasts through her speakers, Ria jerks up in bed looking very puzzled while Tia smiles, she turns the music off
T - good you're awake....now hurry up and come downstairs for breakfast
Tia leaves the room while Ria yawns and gets out of bed, she goes into the bathroom, soon she comes outside in her towel, she goes to her cupboard and picks out a mini skirt and a tank top. She gets changed and goes downstairs to the kitchen where Suhana, Prithvi and Tia are having their breakfasts. Prithvi sips his coffee but when he sees Ria he spits it out
Ri - morning mom, morning dad
Su - morning
P - what morning? what are you wearing?
Ria looks at herself
Ri - clothes
P - I know that....look how small that skirt is!
Ri - dad this is the longest I have
P - she has smaller....Suhana she has smaller....
T - chill dad
Su - calm down Prithvi, she wears clothes like this to college all the time, you just never see because you used to go work early...
P - and you allow her to wear these clothes?
Su - it was awkward first but she looks good in them so its ok and I trust her
P - and what about the boys at college?
T - dad, its all good, Aryan bhai, KK and Karan are there aren't they
P - yeah of course they are but...
Ri - just chill dad....
Khanna House
Kripa does her usual routine to wake the boys up, which of course takes longer for KK who keeps moaning but eventually wakes up. Both are now in the kitchen with Angad and Kripa having their breakfast
A - so how did you guys like your presents?
KK - they were absolutely....
Kar - great!
KK glares at Karan who just smiles.
K - what do you boys have planned for today?
KK - I don't know...just hanging out with friends
Kar - I don't know....hey dad, can we go in the limo today?
A - why?
Kar - because every year we take new cars
KK - and since the new bike i have, and the new car Karan has....don't work...we can't take them, so can we go in the limo?
K - go on Angad, its fair on them
A - fine, but only for today
KK - thanks dad
The guys grin, they finish their breakfast, kiss Kripa then run out of the house into the limo. The limo stops outside the college, everyone gathers round to see who it is, when KK comes out the girls all smile and giggle, he grins and blows kisses to them, when Karan gets out, the girls follow KK, Karan frowns, Aryan who had been watching from a side comes by Karan and puts his arm around his shoulder while laughing
Ar - don't worry dude, you'll have these girls after you one day
Kar - yeah right....you're saying that to make me feel better
Ar - yeah I am....forget it, lets go
Kar - yeah
Just as the two are about go to their classes, KK comes in front of them
KK - man these girls.....anyways have you seen Roshni?
Ar - she shoud be here, we both came in my car
KK - I'll go look for her
Kar - ok, see you in class
KK - sure
KK runs off in the opposite direction to Karan and Aryan. He finds Ria with her "crew", he pulls her to a side
KK - where's Roshni?
Ri - I don't know, haven't seen her
KK - she's your best friend
Ri - so? why are you so concerned?
KK - because Kashish aunty told me to take care of her, where's Tia?
Ri - probably with her friends, if I see Roshni, I'll let you know
KK - whatever
KK runs off, he looks through the coridoors trying to find her when he hears some guys speaking
guy1 - look at her man, she's such a benji
guy2 - even benji's dress better than her
guy1 - yeah I can't believe she's friends with Ria....she probably feels bad for her, that's why she hangs out with her
KK looks and sees a girl, when he looks closer he sees Roshni crying, this makes his blood boil, his hands turn to fists and he lunges for the guys, he turns the first one around and punches his nose, he then pulls the other guy and punches his stomach, soon a crowd forms as KK beats the two guys up whle Roshni stands at the side, soon enough word travels to Karan and Aryan who go to the same place. Karan rushes to stop KK while Aryan rushes to Roshni, he hugs her
Ar - what happened?
R - those guys....
Roshni tells him what happened, Aryan has an angry look on his face, he makes his way through the crowd where KK is punching the guys stomach while Karan is trying to hold him back, Aryan puts his hand on KK's shoulder, KK turns around and sees Aryan fuming with anger. Aryan moves KK out of the way, KK and Karan go to Roshni
KK - are you ok?
R - yeah...thanks...but bhai....
KK turns and sees Aryan taking his jacket off revealing a black sleeveless t shirt underneath with his killer muscles. Aryan picks one of the guys up from the floor by his collar
Ar - that girl...who you called a benji.....is my sister
Aryan puts his hand up to punch the guy when KK holds his arm
KK - don't ....the principals coming....and besides, they got what they deserved.....lets go
Aryan pushes the guy on the floor and puts his jacket back on and puts his arm around Roshni's shoulder and takes her away, KK pulls the guy up
KK - if you....go anywhere near her again....I'll kill you
KK pushes him to the floor
Kar - KK lets go
KK follows Karan to their homeroom where Roshni is with Aryan, Aryan faces KK
Ar - take care of her....I have to go to class
Aryan kisses Roshni's forehead
Ar - don't worry, KK and Karan are here ok
R - ok bhai
Ria and Tia come running after finding out what happened, Ria hugs Roshni
R - is she ok?
KK - yeah....stay with her ok, don't let her out of your sight
Ri - yeah I will
KK glances at Roshni before going into the class, Karan gives Roshni a small hug
Kar - those guys won't say anything to you now....not since KK bashed them..and Aryan was nearly about to do the same
T - wow I never knew KK was so protective over Roshni
Kar - Tia...he's protective over all three of you
T - yeah but Roshni more....do you think he likes her?
Ri - shut up Tia and go to your class
T - whatever
Tia runs off o her class while Karan, Roshni and Ria go into theirs. Karan sits at his normal seat and waits for KK to come sit by him, Ria is about to sit with Roshni when one of her friends pulls her into a chair, Ria looks at her apologetically but Roshni just smiles and sits down at another desk, KK comes in and is about to sit by Karan when he sees Roshni on her own so he goes and sits by her, he glances at Karan who just nods his head. The two guys from before come limping into the class, they glance at Roshni then KK then put their heads down and sit at the back.
R - thanks KK....but you didn't have to...
KK - shut up, you're Aryan's sister and one of my close friends, if I don't protect you then who will? and besides this is Aryan's last year, he won't be here after to make sure you're ok....so I'm here
R - and Karan
KK glances at Karan who has his head buried in a book, KK looks back at Roshni
KK - like I said....I'm here
KK puts his arm around her, Roshni looks at him and smiles, KK takes his arm away and begins playing on his phone, Roshni smiles
R - aren't you going to pay attention?
KK laughs
R - yeah thought not...you can borrow my notes after
KK - thanks....thats why I love you....
Roshni's head jerks up and KK smiles nervously
KK - like a friend...you know....like I love Ria....and....Nisha...man she's looking hot
KK's gaze changes from Roshni to a girl behind her, Roshni just shakes her head as KK flirts with the girl.
coming up - Aryan and Ria trapped in a stockroom.......
This part took so long, I was almost finished but then something happened to my mouse, and it went beserk and I lost it all so had to start again...anyways 10 comments for the next one😛
Edited by Gaurav's Love - 18 years ago

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