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hayeee waitinggg ... dil bale bale kar raha hai...
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heyy guys.. hope u all r doing well..
i am really very sorry for not updating in last 2 months..
i was very much occupied..sorry...
here is next part.. kinda filler one.. but please read and leave ur comments...
also i noticed that now this forum is very much inactive.. so i was wondering if i should cont my stories or not..

Part 25..RaNtara in Pune, KW Day 1.

it was 6 in the morning..Antara woke up as sun rays fell in the room..
she sat on the bed and removed her blanket..and remembered how she dozed off last night..
she looked in her right side.. raghu was sleeping far away from her on another corner of bed.. and wearing his tshirt and trouser..
she remembered.. how he was actually sleeping last night..
"may be.. raat ko uthe honge.." she thought..
she got fresh and up and came out from the room..
mrs naik and Rashmi were already awaken..
they were sitting in the lobby
antara came there and wished them good morning..they both smiled..
she joined them and discussed about usual stuffs...
After an hour they saw sid, raghu, sam and abhi coming together..
kya baat hai.. sab itni jaldi uth gaye.. mrs naik asked them..
yes badi maa... today we will go for jogging.. ok bye bye everyone..
let's go bhaiyya.. Abhi said and all three followed him..
after a few minutes anjali and shikha also came..
mrs naik asked them all to get ready so they will make breakfast together..
anjali, shikha and rashmi left..
antara was about to go when mrs naik stopped her and made her sit with her..
ji maa...
mrs naik caressed her head and gave her blessings...
yesterday you were quite busy with all family members and you were tired too...
nahi nahi.. i am ok..kuchh baat h??..
kuchh nahi.. she smiled..
aise hi.. i din't get time to talk to you in-person...
antara smiled and placed her head on her shoulder and wounded her arms in her neck from side..
i missed you maa...
mrs naik patted on her hand.. missed you too beta..
tum batao ghar pe kaise hai sab.. you went to delhi a few weeks back..?
ji.. sab achchhe hai..
raghu went there for the first time.. he must have enjoyed a lot...
ji... she replied and smiled meakly..
unwillingly but moments from that night flashed in front of her eyes..
she touched her neck with two fingers.. she could still feel his touch there..
but when she saw mrs naik she closed her fist and
why don't you and papa come to bangalore and live with us.
bhaiyya and Abhi are also don't live here.. only u n papa live here..
plz come to bangalore.. or let me talk to him and we will try to shift here..
antara said.. mrs naik just smiled
after a few minutes mrs naik asked antara..
"Antara..??"
ji maa..
is everything ok between u n raghu..
ji.. why??
yesterday i noticed that u both din't talk much to each other ..did he say something to u..???
nahi maa.. everything is fine.. wo.. actually.. yesterday i was quite nervous..
nervous..?? but why??
i came here for the first time.. first time i met rashmi bhabhi n anjali.. sam bhaiyya and abhi.. so...
ohk..ohk..it happens...
but i hope now u're ok..
yeah!!n they both smiled..
they kept talking for some time and then they heard someone laughing.. n then saw raghu and gang coming back from jogging..
they all came inside the house and went into their respective rooms to get ready...
antara excused herself .. "maa.. i gotta go.. he is back,.. i need to get his stuffs ready... and its too late.. even i din't get ready."
it's ok beta.. mrs naik replied..
n she left from there in hurry..mrs naik chukled seeing her so nervous...
she followed raghu and came inside the room..
good morning.. she said softly.. raghu smiled and wish her morning...
howz ur jogging..
good..
u wanna hv something..??
nope..! i'll just go n get ready..
umm.. can i go first.. i need to help bhabhi in kitchen...
ooohhh!!!! he said and rolled his eyes...
nope!!
please... !!
NO!!! he said..
she was about to take her clothes from bag..when he just took his towel from the cupboard and rushed into the bathroom...
please na..!! what will maa and bhabhi think that i din't even help them in kitchen...
raghu turned on the shower.. and antara sat on the bed..
i hate you... she shouted...
mutual feelings sweetheart... raghu too shouted from bathroom...
kitna bura lagega.. main hi sabse late jaungi...
Antu??,...hooo... pani thanda hai... raghu was calling her on top of her lungs..
shut up!!.. ek to mujhe late kara rahe ho.. upar se....before she could complete she heard the click of knob..
and her eyes were wide open..raghu was standing there bare chest and wrapping a towel on his waist...
and her heartbeat definitely raised... she din't know where to look at..
this was the first time he came like this in front of her.. he was behaving quite bold for a while..
raghu walked towards her ...she tried to look away.. but she couldn't..
she looked deep in his eyes.. and it felt like if time was stopped...
raghu brushed his little bit wet hairs with his fingers and she sighed deep down...
she was standing 2 foot away from him..still her breath got harder..
and unknown to himself but deep down he also wanted to see his effect on her.
though he was happy with his life with her.. but somewhere he always gets confused why he wants her to be in love with him..
doesn't she like me... ?? at all??? 'course she does..
but .. liiike wala like... he thought...
and why the hell you want that...??? stupid... he was fighting with his own thoughts...
ufff!!! he mumbled...and she came out of her trance.. she turned immediately and closed her eyes..
kuch sharm varm hai ya nahi.. ya kahin bhool aaye ho..
ye kya tarika hai kisi k samne ka...
she definitely does not like me... he mumbled again..
now what do u want??
nothing..pani wakai mein thanda hai.. tum jao.. maine geyser chalaya hai.. main garm mein nahaunga...
haan to.. kapde pahan ke nahi aa sakte...
raghu made a face and turned back.. he stood in front of mirror and set his hairs..
antara looked at him and again her heart skipped a beat... he saw her through mirror and their eyes met.. she lowered her eyes.. and he smirked..
aaahhhaaannn!!!
dekh lo.. dekh lo...
main??? tumhe???
kapde pahan k nahi aa sakte...??? achchha ji...???
shakl dekho aaine mein apni... huh!!
antara looked away and she took her clothes from her bag...
she removed her dupatta and kept it on bed.. and was about to walk into bathroom.. but then she saw something and stopped..
she walked towards him.. and he raised a brow at her.."what??"
"ye kya hua??" she pointed towards his left shoulder..
kya?? he tried to look..
oh this???.. i got hit with some tin shade in park...
but she got worried when she saw dried blood near the cut..
oh! bleeding bhi hui hai..
aap dhyaan kyun nahi rakhte apna...
antara put her clothes on bed and got the first aid box..
it's just a small cut.. don't worry..
small cut?? ye small cut dikh raha hai aapko...bleeding hui.. aapko pata bhi ni chala...
antara din't listen to him.. and applied the ointment softly on his cut after cleaning it with anti-septic liquid..
it was quite deep.. which made him hissed in pain..
"is it paining???" she asked..
he nodded in no...
u sure?? hmmm.. but as ointment moved inside the cut he again hissed in pain...
she blew air on his wound
his body was stiffened but he felt relaxed..
let me cover this with this small bandage..
Antu.. i am fine.. it's nothing..u'll do the bandage and then i'll take bath in few minutes.. it will get wet.. then???
I am ok.. itna pareshan mat hua karo...he cupped her face and smiled...
u sure..it was some shade.. this cut looks deep..
u're not getting late now..?..ya haath lagane k bahane dhund rahi ho??? he smirked..
u know what..?? hold this.. she gave ointment in his hand. took her clothes and walked into the bathroom..
he held her hands and pulled her to himself.. arey!! sorry.. sorry.. ab naraj mat hona..
to kya karu??? u don't answer me a simple question.. to baat karke kya fayda...
arey?? bataya to tha ki shade lag gaya.. ab tum shaq karti ho to main kya karu??
haath chhodo mera.. she tried to freed her hand from him..but he held it tightly..

KIDS!! UFF!!
Akash (son of sam) and Nikita (daughter of shikha) were looking at them for 2-3 minutes.. then they both looked at each other and ran outside..
they called Abhi, Shikha and Anjali... "uncle aunty se lad rahe hai.." they told their parents...
hmmm?? they asked again..
Raghu mamu mami ko maar rahe hai.. nikita said..
kya bol rahe ho beta.. kahan dekha aapne.. Shikha asked.. raghu mamu to room mein h apne...
haan wahi lad rahe hai dono.. chacha ko chot aayi hai..aur chachi sad lag rahi hai.. akash told them...
chot aayi h.. abhi to bhaiyya humare saath jogging se wapas aaya hai.. Abhi wondered..
kahan chalo dikhao... Shikha said...
Shikha beta??? mrs naik called her so she left..
Abhi and Anjalo walked towards Rantara's room with Nikita and Akash

Meanwhile Rantara...
arey?? bataya to tha ki shade lag gaya.. ab tum shaq karti ho to main kya karu??
haath chhodo mera.. she tried to freed her hand from him..but he held it tightly..
he held her close.. she din't look at him...achchha suno..
meri taraf dekho to sahi.. she still din't look at him.. he held her chin and made her look at him.. "look at me.."
main.. kisi.. ke.. saath.. kahin.. kuchh nahi kar ke aaya.. so don't worry.. shade se hi laga hai...
her brows were frown... she pushed him away.. "bahut badtameej ho..."
raghu burst in laughter...u know.. mere office ki bahut si girls marti h mujhpe...n college ka to u already know...phir bhi...
hearing about other girls from him she lost her control...ek kaam karo... tum unhi k paas jao.. she threw those clothes she had in her hands on him..
bahar se ye sab (she pointed towards the cut) leke aa jao.. aur biwi bas unpe dawai lagati rahe..
right...???
she looked for something to hit him and then found pillow.. she threw it on him and he ran on other side of bed..
she was about to pick another pillow.. but he already grabbed it..
she grabbed a vase and about to throw it.. when he stopped her..
nahi nahi.. wo wala nahi.. wo maine kharida tha...
ohk.. she said and put the vase back on the table..
raghu smirked...she threw his bag on him.. but he caught it.. he stopped when she din't throw anything on him but sat on the bed quietly...
her eyes were moist..
sara pyaar..sari mohabbat.. sab un college aur office ki ladkiyo par lutana...
waise bhi na mere to kuchh lagte nahi aap.. aur na mera koi haq hai..
mujhse bas ladai karte hai aap.. us baar bhi 1 mahine baad hi kyun baat ki thi.. chale jate kisi aur ke paas..
kisi ke saath kuchh nahi kiya hai.??. she wiped her nose and folded her legs...
he realized that she was actually hurt with his statement...
he started to walk towards her..she saw him so just to avoid him she got up from the bed..
raghu looked at her and dropped the pillow on bed but it fell down...
she picked her clothes and walked away..
raghu held her elbow and pulled her towards him.. she dropped her stuffs.. again she walked away.. but again he pulled her back..
her feet got stuck in the dupatta that was lying on the floor and she fell on the bed..
raghu tried to hold her but he got slipped on the pillow and fell on top of her...
he placed his hands on either side of her and she held his right shoulder
they both looked at each other and burst in laughter...
after a minute or so.. they stopped laughing and looked into each other eyes..
she just remembered about his cut and caressed his left shoulder softly..
raghu was leaning over her and her eyes flickered.. her heart skipped a beat..
raghu realized their proximity.. .."u okay..?..." he asked her... she din't reply but lowered her eyes.. raghu closed his eyes in disbelief that she again took it in that way..
"i am sorry.. i just..." he said and tried to get up...
she knew it wasn't like that always. whenever he comes closer to her..she shouldn't take it in same way.. we can't let that evening affect our whole life..
esp when we know we can't live apart from each other...
antara held his shoulder and nodded in no..."it's ok.."..." i know.."
forgetting every argument.. every fight they had now or before.. raghu leaned over her and placed a soft kiss on her forehead..and she closed her eyes..
he touched her nose tip with his and moved her hair strands behind her ears...
main us waqt bas majaak kar raha tha.. mujhe laga nahi tha tumhe itna bura lag jayega...
sorry..
its ok..
A&A walked towards their room calling rantara's name..
but they just stopped seeing them like this..
they put their hands on their mouth to stop their laughter and closed eyes of nikita and akash..

rantara were still lying like that only.. they din't see A&A.
raghu joined his forehead with hers and her hands caressed his shoulder and back from one side..
tumhe ek baat pata hai..? raghu whispered... she felt his hot breath above her lips..
umhm.. she could utter..
i like this.. when we behave like two best friends.. when we have no hesitation.. no shyness.. and when we can say anything to each other..
i don't like when we fight...
but u always start that..
no..! i don't..i just play some pranks n u turn them into fights..
antara turned his away with her hand.. and they both chuckled..
ek baat bolu??
hmmm???
he moved back a little.. just to look into her eyes.. she too looked at him.. but couldn't handle his piercing stare at her and lowered her eyes..
don't say that again ki main tumhara kuchh nahi lagta.. or u hv no rights on me...
she looked at him in awe...
main tumhara hi to hu.. upar se neeche.. daanye baaye.. sara ka sara tumhara hu...
she chuckled.. so did he.. she caressed his face..roamed her fingers on his cheek and placed her hand softly behind his ear..
he leaned over the crook of her neck..she was pressed under his masculine body...he moved her hair locks behind and she blushed..
anjali looked at abhi and they both giggled..!!
antu.. no matter how our relationship is.. i respect this.. he whispered in her ears..
me too...she said softly in his ears...
and i would never cheat you.....she shivered when he said that in his husky voice and hugged him immediately taking care of his shoulder..
i know.. she said and nodded in yes..
they lifted up a bit and raghu hugged her back and kissed on her cheeks...
wowww.. this looks so romantic.. Abhi said..
umhmm... anjali said.. and placed her head on Abhi's shoulder..
rantara first looked at each other and then in the direction voice came from and their eyes popped out..
what are you doing here...??? raghu said while trying to get up..
his towel almost slipped down and raghu held it... A&A giggled and closed their eyes..
Antara felt very embarrassed.. she also tried to get up...
sorry sorry... we re just leaving..Abhi nodded in no..and anjali looked at him..
raghu's foot again got slipped on pillow and he fell on top of her...again... Abhi and Anjali ran from there laughing and kids too followed them..
they both got up from the bed carefully...and antara glared at raghu in anger...
nahi nahi.. ab naraj mat hona.. meri koi galti nahi h is baar... raghu pleaded...
antara grabbed her clothes and walked into bathroom.. and raghu walked outside calling Abhi's name on top of his lungs..
Abhi????
he came outside and saw Abhi leaning over a pillar..
bhaiyya...???
aap yahan. aur wo bhi aise...??? he looked at him from top to bottom..
go n get dressed.. koi kya sochega...Right akash...??
Right chachu..!! Akash replied...
jao jao...jaldi jao... abhi said and laughed...
i'll kill you...Raghu gritted his teeth...and left to his room
aur sambhal ke.. ab mat gir jana...
he turned back and looked at him again... i won't spare u..

precap: rantara moments..and prep for karwachauth...

thanks for reading..:)
please leave ur feedbacks/comments/sugg..
plz hit the like button..
luv u all..
-Akki

Edited by DeadDevil - 10 years ago
Komali14 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
res me first pm se pehle res kardiya...😊

Akki this was beautiful...😊

Antu n her MIL convo was good...

Antu Raghu ki kitni chinta karti hai...

Raghu bhi na bechari ko tang karta rehta hai...

Raghu in towel n antu lost in him hayeee...😳

Rantara encounter on bed was tooo good...

Raghu said uspe antu ka haq hai ...

Abhi , Anjali , Akash n Nikita sab kabab may haddi ban gaye...

Last part nice raghu went out in towel...😆

Great update dear...

Cont asap...

Thank u😊

Edited by Komali14 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh dat was such a cute nok jhok loved it
thanks for this sweet update
do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg omg omg finally u updated
i was waiting for ages
dont discont people are busy but they will surely read ur stories
i seriously read one different update of urs everyday
i loved this update
rantara were so cute
lol kisi ke sath kuch nai kiya.. how blah yaar
ntu nazaraz
seriously out of the blue updates
last rantara part was romantic
when will they confess yaar this friendship and fights are in the way
pls cont asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my god akkii u finally updated...
Thanks for updating yaar...ha aur forum to inactive hoga na kyonki aapke jaise talented writers eid ke chand ki tarah aate hain...
Bye the way loved the update...it was awesome...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update Akki

Antara aur Raghu ki nok - jok. Haayee kho gayi main

Raghu mujhe bilkul bhi bura nahi laga jab tum sirf towel main hi baahar aaye

Seriously??? Kuch nahi kiya tumne kisi ke saath😆😆😆

Last part was romantic Akki. They both accepted this relationship aur ab deri hain bas unki confession ki

LOL these kids. Romantic scene bigaad diya😳😳😳

Waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yay......FINALLY AKKI JI updated...🥳......
Plz dont discontinue...not any of dem...(...surely b heart-broken if it happens...🥺...💔...😭...)...
most of dem r preoccupied...(...aftr all...D YEDI CONNECTION...)...but still keep tab of d forum...😊...e1 if cant login...😔...

Awesome Update as usual...n waiting 4 othrs update too......

i was thinking to comment dat...

Diwali gayi,,,,n Christmas aanewaali hain...
kya Akki k "Shaukeens" se pehle...
humari Akki ji ki koi Kahaani release hogi...???!!!...

n here v got it...LUV ya...LOTS...

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Posted: 10 years ago
heyy guys.. thank u so much for liking the update..

@readers.. can some one please send pm to forum members about this update.. my pm box is not working.. :(
i'm not able to send pms.. thx..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow..
What a update..
So cute..
Really nice..
Raghu tovel..
kise ke sath kuch nahi kiya..
Wow..

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