MG Time pass teen age love story of maaneet part 23- on 153 - 28 jan

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cuteeagle65

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Posted: 11 years ago

#681

awesome update past was so nice geet dancing singing maan hug her 4 shirt chain goes down lovely & in present she lifeless sad 4 her maan also feel something bad happen with her it was little emotional

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gunjar

@gunjar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#682

awesome update mahi..
very emotional dear..
maan tho andhar hi andhar toot raha hai lekin upper se gussa dikha raha..
and geet wo tho life less soul bangayi ha..
ho god unn dono ko isse dekhe nahi jaaraha mujhe..
their soul talking was great..
past was just lovely..
geet dancing..
their hug was just dreamy yaar..
precap😆
eagerly waiting to read it..
continue soon mahi..
great work yaar..

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preetidhawan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#683

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Gudiyeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#684

geet worried her father health she went to office her first day...maaneet both are restless evening geet sitin park sensed someone seeing her maaneet thoughts went to past memory maan stuent seeing geet drenched in rain geet shocked maan suddenly hug her lovely update

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#685

part 12
nice...
poor Geet...
sigh will Maan ever come to know about her life?
cont soon...

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hira2010

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Posted: 11 years ago

#686

feeling bad for both other fault they sufer past is awesome

maan is bindass want geet to enjoy her life

geet enjoying n dancing

maan save hr dignity this is really good

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nadia khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#687

that was soo damn funny the precap was hilarious kuch hill raha hai god 🤣 awesome mahi

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Gudiyeet

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#689

thanks for comment and like

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part 13

maan hand shake for second he slowly closed that in that process his finger touch her back she clutch his shirt more tightly and press herself more into him but that is wrong move her lips just touch near his M shape lips and both moan maaan geeet and both hug each other tightly this hug wake up so many new emotions ...in their virgin body as well as mind also

maan hug her tight and called aisa mat karo apunko kuch kuch hota hai ...poor geet who lost in maan touch forget to reply and loook him with big eyes

maan - geet apunko tumko kuch kehana hai please

geet - who come out from her maan land and look other side to hide her shy she feel so shy like what she done

she went littel away from him to control her heart bits mummer ye kya kar diya chumban (KIss ) le liya

here poor maan al confuse first geet soft lips touch upon that her silence than it click him may be she get shy he smile like small kid who get ans of tuff qustion he took trees small branch and write on land

Muje kuch kehana Hai (i want to say somthing )

geet like his idea and she write abhi nahi karo toda intazaar ( wait for some time )

maan - dil hai ke manta nahi

geet - dil to paagal hai

maan - kuch kuch hota hai

geet -huuu hum apke hai kon

maan -- maan stunt with her question and look her with shock

now what he will ans before he say anything geet say hume hume chalna chiye she look to time

poor maan who want to say something he lack or lost word

poor boy nodded in yes and they have to finish their adhi adhoori date and kiss (Mahi is devil )

both start to miss eacvh other like anything this adha adhoora confession and kiss make them mad next day maan get massage that geet want t o meet him and maan dance like mad and went to meet her

both come to thier special place before maan say anything geet closed eyes and say iw ant say first hum pheale kuch bolna chate hai

maan nodded in yes and there star shud hindi geet handa express which made hell confused to poor maan because geet say

geet come near maan and say

hum jabhi apke pass aate hai humara hrudye bahot jor se dhadkne lagta hai aur humare dimmag main kuch ajeeb si lehare utani lagti hai jo hamare hrudaye
ki spandane aur bhi badana lagte hai ye hrudye ye hamare naina sirf apka hi mookh dekhana chahate hai

(whenever i come closed to u my heart start to make sound
and so many wave start to come in my mind which make heart beat more fast my heart and my eyes just want to saw
your face )

maan gap her like fool ke ye kya tha he dont get one word of her talk and before he ask her meaning geet just run from there ...standing all confused maan
and maan devil u know devil come to him and

adi vicky - kya bola usne

maan boli kuch hil raha hai kuch khada ho raha hai( she say somthing is shaking and something is standing )

adi and vicky ask in high voice kya ...and gap him like fool all ahem ahem thought come in their mind

present

after dagdu encounter with geet , geet sit for some time blankly than took her perse and went out tear fall from mr handa eyes geet come out from chowl and start her walk as usual maan is behind her after talk with meera di he come out and drving his car no wear but he himself don't get when he come to geet chawl and found her walking on road he look to his watch and its 10.30 night

maan what the hell she is doing he mummer and start to follow her thou he want to give life but all confused

just than he saw her out side of government hospital maan heartbeat skip for second like ye yaha ku he park his car and went behind her she stop near General ward maan saw her she went near one bed and sit near on stool and took someone hand in her hand and tear start to flow from her eyes

maan hear her word

geet - wo bahot bada business man ban gaya hai building banata hai sab settle ho gaye u know wo dagdu he is chwal owner of our room ...great na but he say he want to talk about room kya wo hume nikal dega bhai ...

land slip from maan foot bhai it means dev handa maan run to them and found dev with that life support system..

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

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part 14

geet - wo bahot bada business man ban gaya hai building banata hai sab settle ho gaye u know wo dagdu he is chwal owner of our room ...great na but he say he want to talk about room kya wo hume nikal dega bhai ...

land slip from maan foot bhai it means dev handa maan run to them and found dev with that life support system..

this is big blow for maan because in dream also he could not think like this , Dev Hnada he never bad treat to maan alwyes treat like small brother but he is also doll of Mr Mohinder Handa hand but what happen that dev hear that also like this

other side poor geet all lost in talk with dev she not get that maan is stnading behind her

geet - bhai apko pata hai unko aj chot lagi thi haat main muje itna bura laga feel like just run to him and asked what happen can not u took your care properly lakin fhir soucha jo Zkham huamne unhe diya hai uske samane ye zkham to bahot choti hai na

bahi ku hua ye humare sath pata nahi meera di kaha hai and just than dev blinked his eyes

geet say pata hai pata hai meera bhabhi ...ku mili hume itni badi saza Pyyar karne ki she keep her head near dev , a tear fall from dev eyes and other side maan froze in his place what life showing him ye truth hai kya hua ahi in bhai behan ke sath thats they facing all this kya hua hai he feel like his head brust any time with so many thoughts

maan feel like someone stab him in his heart ...kya ho raha hai without any sound he went out from ward he come on road he forget his car and start walk like zoombi jaise koi life hi na ho body main same time rain start to fall from sky like unke sath kudrat bhi ro rahi ho

maan stop when his leg start to give up he look his around he come in desert area he look to sky and cried why why u do this kya galti thi humati ku kya sach hai jo us din USNE kaha ya fhir aj ka she callleing meera di bhabhi phir us din why she use such word for meera di why why why ahhh he cried loudly WHYYY ager ye truth hai to that day kya tha jisne humari zindgi badal di kya hua tha USKO ku bola USNE aise ku laagye itne gandhe ilzzam muje per aur di per kuuu

maan fall on ground closed his face with plam and cried kya hua hai ku USNE sab kiya wo sab ku kiya thak gaya hu main aise zindgi se thak gaya hu muje itna hi darde dena tha to ku milya muje USKE sath ku , dekhane diye sapne jo kabhi pure hone wale hi nahi tha kuuu maan sob like small kid

just than someone put hand on his sholder and maan turn to see it is dagadu who serching maan on meera di called when di get scared on maan not taking phone call maan hug him tightly its needed this time he need his near one for crying he is soo tired to show his tuffness

khud ko stone banya liya tha lkain ye dil aur uska dard aj to maan khud ko control nahi kar saka ...he cried in hug cried , and mummer Dev bro hospital main hai dev bro hospital main hai

dhagadu feel like he misheard something jaise kuch galat suna ho ...he ask with fear kya bol rahe ho maan dev to abrod main hai na

maan nodded in no and say nahi muncipal hospital ke genral ward main lifeless pada hai

past

adi vicky - kya bola usne

maan boli kuch hil raha hai kuch khada ho raha hai( she say somthing is shaking and something is standing )

adi and vicky ask in high voice kya ...and gap him like fool all ahem ahem thought come in their mind

maan glare to them and say gutter jaisa dimag band karo warna ...

adi and vicky come out from thought

vicky ok ok I LOVE U bola kya

maan - bahot kuch bola lakin ye three word hi nahi bola yaar
and jo bola wo mere ser ke upper se chala gaya like airoplane

adi mummer aise shud hindi wali GF banai ye to hona hi tha
abhi tak kiss wis bhi diya kya I love u boleygi

maan hear adi word kiss

maan mummer wo jarrori hota hai kya

adi and vicky both nodded in yes

maan gulp hard kiss lakin muje wo

adi - kya kya bolo

maan mumer kuch nahi and went from there adi and vicky hi fi each other

next day maan went to adi house and adi gulp hard

adi - kya hua maan

maan - wo i want to lern this apun ko ye sikhana hai

adi - ask with scared tone

maan - ye mman show titanic kiss image and say aisa wala kiss

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago