Sandhir ff - with me, without me...!!!#updated part 4#31/10/14 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
OMG! It's all just like a game! Someone says something else, others say something else! A whole lot of mishap! But I am loving the craziness and Randhir!
Bechari sanyukta isn't able to understand the situation. The chapter was so much fun!
I really loved it! Couldn't stop laughing at randhir's words in the end!
I really enjoyed reading it!
Continue pretty soon janavi!
Thanks for pm'ing.

Keep writing,
Love,
Karishma. :* <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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luvly no mattr hw mch u run sanyu at the end it wil b rd whom u r gonna clash wid mst say d update was gr8 n thnx 4 pm w8ing 4 nxt update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Loved it dear...
thnx for d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54


awesome dear, really loved it... eagerly waiting for next part... pls update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
its really nice awesome superb fab lovely lovely superb.
they again kissed.
really interesting part. sandhir fight was quite good.
love it. update asap.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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just fabulous and interesting
want to read further
it is awesome hanvi
thanks for pm
lots of luv
sakshi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey awesome update its getting interesting by each part so continue soon eagerly waiting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey dis is fully like d story of bang bang but dis was more interesting than the movie... Ovio coz of sandhir😛
And the kiss...😳nice way to shut sm1's mouth...!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
wow nice fully bang bang
I really loved it
update ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
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With me,Without me part 4..!!


Sanyu ran to her friends house..!! She met him there and asked him to have a coffee with her..!!

" sanyukta...!! I think we make a great pair.! We shouldn't have broken up..!!


" listen kabir I was in the club last night and there was a guy who was like an agent or something..!! He met in the morning and FBI people came and then shooting..!! Just leave that ..!! I want your help..!!


" I think you need to relax a little..!! I will bring you coffee..!!

" you are not getting me..!! He was kind of dangerous and and ..!!

"Why are you holding my hand??
"Because I'm here for you
- You are so stressed
"And I understand, I understand
" all those interviews new job ..!! And all those is stressful..!!
"What do you mean??

" God...it's not like that..!!
" Hello sanyukta..!!! Sorry if I interrupt something.
'm Randhir ..!!
"Kabir chopra
"Listen, you may not put it in clear
but we have to be together...
our situation..!!! Spoke randhir looking at sanyu..!!

"In case you did not notice, Rodney
is a firefighter so it is able
to handle any situation,thank you very much..!! Said sanyukta

"No doubt, since I was a child lot of respect for firefighters..!! In fact, I do not think they pay enough
- Are you an officer?
- Yes, that is
- Do you give the promotion?
- I hope so
- How you doing?
- It's a bitch
- Are the tower with...
- The post, if
- Kabir...
- For the flames



Sanyu was signalling kabir that randhir is only the guy she was talking about..!! But he was not getting it..!!

"I should be a firefighter
"What??Is this the guy??
She signalled him yes...!!

"Kabir whatever happens,
for your own protection

- Stay here
- What do you mean?
Everybody get down!
Everybody get down or i will fly brains!
He will fly brains..!!


And randhir caught hold of sanyukta and kept the gun on her forehead..!! Kabir got up a little..!

- Kabir what I said?

He shooted in the air to scare people..!!

"Sorry, you should not move
Sorry..!!! It's okay, do not move
Cake for everyone!
All will receive cake with ice cream
If you do not receive, I will return
No one will follow us or I kill myself
and then kill her..!!


He dragged sanyu out and pushed her in the car..!!

- Get in the car please
- No
Mind your head
- They are in a blue Volvo
- Kabir!

And he shot near his knee..!!
"God, Kabir..!!!! shouted sanyukta

Randhir bent to kabir and spoke..!!

"It's okay, was shot
input and output
Do not hit the bone or organs
Everything okay?
Are you okay?

Kabir nodded in a yes and randhir went inside the car..!!

- You shot Rodney
- Yes, I did
- But I asked him not to move
- You shot Rodney
Perhaps the best thing that happened
Yes, everyone should shoot
occasionally
Rodney is a good guy
but not right for you
In my opinion, but it is nice guy

Stop the car
Stop the car

It's okay
- Stop the car!
- I can not
I want to leave, stop the car
please, now

" you are not safe without me..!!

" dammit you shot kabir..!! He was my ex..!!! You ... Arggghhh..!

" are u done??

" I was safer with the FBI people..!!

" what did you say?? You think you were safer with them?? Okay ?? Now you don't feel safe??


" yes I don't feel safe..!! At all..!!


He stopped the car with a jerk and got out...!! She also got out of the car and looked at him..!! He turned around and came near her..!!

" Your life expectancy is here
With Me.. without me
With Me.. without me
I just wanted you to live but it
depends on you..!!!! I need another car to keep moving..!!!

And he shouted at her while seeing another car..!!

" Trust me, every second that passes
risk death chasing me..!!

He sat in the car and waited for seconds..!! Sanyukta without any argument sat beside him..!!and he drove them to a store for some food and refreshments..!!


She went to the washroom and came out and saw kabir on the tv..!!


-News-

"What were you thinking kabir
with your heroic actions?

"I did not think, just acted..!!It is the work
- You must be proud
- Thanks

"It did not hurt, it was like
a bee sting

That brave fireman..!!!


-News ended-


She went to him and kisses him..!! He was shocked by her sudden reaction but gave in when he felt her soft lips on hers..!!! They were standing in the parking and leaning on the car and kissing each other madly..!!


They broke the kiss and sanyu went and sat in the car..!! Randhir aksi came inside..!! Before he could start the car sanyu took the keys..!!


" what now??

" tell me why they are following us??

" because I have a friend whose name is parth..!! And he had worked in laboratory and is really smart..!! So when he was on resarch he made a battery ..!! That little thing is the first source of perpetual energy..!!


" woaahh..!! So what's the matter...??

" some agents are after parth because he has the battery and they want to take it and kill him..! And I want to save him..!!

" and where does FBI come from..?
I am an international criminal so just like that...!!!

" just like that..!!

" what do you mean by just like that...!!

He snagged the keys from her and starts the car...!!! He was driving when she asked


" so where are we going??

" some place safe..!! And then i will pick parth..!!

" okay...!!


To be continued...!!!!



So here I end..!! Pls do comment..!! Would love to see your reviews..!! Waiting..!! Hope you like it..!!
Okay so some twist is going to come soon...! Stay tuned and sorry for being late

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