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InspiredSoul

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Posted: 10 years ago

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chavvi16

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I so wanna do a evil laugh

For Shyam of course

His plan just went down the drain

Ahhh that's fun

So all raizadas and malliks here

Good to see

So this was his plan

Well getting the family here

And let things unfold

He is good at he Arnav but you my dear writer are simply best

So let's see how peeps react to this situation

Ahhh very good morning indeed

Right arnav she fell on him

Why am I not surprised man

Just what happens with her

Things are about to be in open

Well I hope so

They went back to his room where he was kept captive

True they wouldn't search that room

So they are safe

Till his family comes

Which they are here

Time for the big finale

Well let's see somehow. I think there is more to come

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J P

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Posted: 10 years ago

#583

Hey buddy just caught up with this Ff and man I love it! What an interesting start and then an amazing twist! That was totally unexpected!!

Loved the way you have shown the Bondings and then the pace at which you have built it all!

Khushi is just awesome and she is related to these people? I'm sure she has something to with their past!

And fact that he's still Dhruv for her yet he's all that she requires!

They are made for each other! And it's sheer thrill to read them amongst passages and secrets!

Looking forward to be a part of this wonderful journey!

Can I buddy you for future works?

Cheers

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Shyamala

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Posted: 10 years ago

#584

Very intriguing the way the story is progressing. Love the update. Thanks :)

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docs

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Oh no I have to wait till the next update...nahiii

Excited ... Yaaay

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shiv456

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Posted: 10 years ago

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hope he is caught soon awesome

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InspiredSoul

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Posted: 10 years ago

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MDTharun

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Arnav is not stupid to take khushi and run out for escape where all of the goons are waiting to catch their prey . Indeed ASR is very smart , he used his only chance of escape brilliantly . Akash was instructed what to do if ASR gets a chance to talk or follow plan B i.e., land directly in Sheesh Mahal with Police .

Hope Shyam has explanations to his wife or accept he is the culprit

Did you have to stop it here , this is ramanchi