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Arsha4eva99

@Arsha4eva99

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

hey very nce...plz update fast..n PM me

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shannel

@.ShannelArsha.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

gud that's exactly what I want

always keep smiling kiddo!

oh gods diyu so many stories.

ek toh my index is getting full and second I keep forgetting what the stories are about -.-'

chalo it's gud because of these things I at least sit and relax which is what u want.

loved this part.

pleashhh jaldi jaldi jaldi update this one.

but yeah do get enough(at least 5 hours) of sleep!!

muah luv u more <3

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Sunaina

@sunu.nainu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Awesome update...
So now the dare is on...
Would love to see how it turns out... Update soon sweety

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trishika rajput

@trishikarajput0

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Lovely update

Brilliant concept
Rey's dare
Kria will get hurt

Thanks for pm

Continue soon

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

I just loved the whole update so much its uniqe one
Ur improving so much sweetipie ur writing skill take a good high
Love the kriyas pov
Oye drama queen
Hmmm tujhe confusion create karna itna pasand kyun hai?
Swayam...where's he gone...Kriyam convo where's it leading???
They are supernatural???
Love kriya's divaish attitude...
So its Sharon & simmi who dared reyaansh...
you said vicky would...bechare par taras agaya kya
Rey ka attitude itna kyu hai
Kriya kaun hai bata de
Plz
Update
Next part as soon as
Update

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

amazing!!

kriya's attitude is too good!!
great going!!
thanks for the pm.

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shakz_KR

@shakz_KR

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

amazing 1
suspense uff ussi pe eng ergh...
hawh... merra naam nahi hai kati
update soon

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nature-beauty

@nature-beauty

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

OMG this is like really amazing choti

i like daring Rey now a days anyway

so Kria is passionate abt dance

but Rey's dance is not mentioned particularly anywhere

so have to see how the bet is going to turn out

im so excited😊

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Diya

@diyaswaronholic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

A KRIYAANSH FANFICTION

Hola Guys!!
So am back with an update!!
I know I know, am really late!
Sorry for that!!
So heres the update!
Wait!! before that, good news to u all!
Any confusion, any doubt? Pm me! U will get all the answers!!😛
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A small spark lit by a small, thin matchstick is enough to originate a loud, long-lasting explosion, even one tiny misunderstanding could put an end to a blooming, lovey-dovey relationship. The wicked dare was accepted, death of any individual lay beyond my concern, revenge working itself inside my alert mind, as a shapeshifter, my useless victim diving into a treacherous pool of death. Forgetting the deadliest element which could force any living to give up the courageous spirit to stay alive, not even a blood thirsty weapon could work more efficiently than that 4 letter word, the emotion that ranked number 1 in deaths:- *Love*.

Every challenge lover's desire was to win, losing, not in their rich blood, and in this college, that place was only mine!

Someones soft palms brushed across my carefully set, jet black hair, couple of seconds flew away, starting the next period of milliseconds, a sense of knowing cleansed my sight, my prediction soon to be true. Three... Two... One... Bam!

So right was I and my timing could never be better! High Waves belonging to the world of pain rushed towards me. I knew who this idiot was, the only crazy fool who dared to ever face me.

"SHARON RAI PRAKASH!!" I growled, my sparkling white teeth ready to cut through and eat her delicious, tender flesh hungrily.

"Awh..Shut up Mr. Vampire! Now get on your freaking feet!" demanded Sharon, glaring hard at me.

God, rejecting her was expensively hard. She knew my weakness, my strong friendship bond with her, I could never see any watery pearls leave her light brown orbs, her shining smile was something I always craved to see.

Was I in love with her?? Nope? Bet that was the first question that danced in your mind! Na! It was just our friendship, only friendship, nothing more...

'''Swayam Shekhawat''', I am gonna put an end to that guy. He, without even trying, without even making an attempt, he stole her heart by just a look, being locked up in those 4 walls, not even breathing. Urgh!! Grumbles went continuously on and on, walking, on their handmade paths.

Sharon rolled her eyes, her so-called charming best friend could never leave in an idiotic DREAM WORLD!

"REYAANSH SINGHANIA!!" she yelled, her loud voice throwing him back on the grounds of Gaia, the earth.

"What the hell!! Cant I ever get peace in this dumb world!" I shouted, removing my frustration,

"Dude, bid goodbye to your magical dreamworld, you really need to convince Kriya." answered Vicky.

"No wait!! I demand a rap on this. Vicky, am I right or am I right?" teased Sharon, a smirk filled with mischief.

"Gimme the beat guys!
Dhoom Dhoom Tack, Dhoom Dhoom Tack!
Come on guys...
Kriya's the so-called fashionista fighter,
Not to forget our very own dazzler Rey.
Both hating the word, LOOSE..

Dhoom Dhoom Tack, Dhoom Dhoom Tack!" sang Vicky, clearly ignoring the hot, ashy smoke erupting from my ears, ranging my anger to unlimity.

"Woah woah! I never lose idiots. Get that thought out of your senseless brain." I rose to my defence.

"Actions speak louder than words sweetheart. Show me what tricks you got huh!" teased Sharon continuously, smirking.

"Ex-sca-use me!" I said, clearing my hoarse throat too loudly.

Lights, camera, action! She had such perfecto timing. SO, here you go Ms. Victim, my first tricking, wooing girls was no biggie and she! God, talk about breaking, hammering hard, a precious diamond hidden beneath the dark coals.

"If am right, arent we SUPPOSED to meet each other." She spoke, attitude raised to full volume.

I raised my shaped eyebrows,"Sweetheart, you crossed our way not us."

My harsh voice might have been compiled intro a sickly sweet endulging from the depths of a beehive, crossing each and every element, mixtures of the bright, gold honey. I could feel thousands of orbs whether brown, hazel or even black staring at me, their pair of eyes wide with bewilderment.

I introduced myself, hadnt I? A SHAPESHIFTER! Trusting me, being close to me, covering up my vacant victim space, was like inviting a merciless, threatening clock, each hour passing by a flash of dazzling lightning, 24 hours a day equals to 24 threats every hour, more chances for me to betray...

Keep that in mind, I seldomly allow u to smile. Smile, only a temporary one...

"Warming up to me huh? Not a chance!" she dared, knowing oh-so-little about me, she was going to fall for me soon.

"Warming? If its another word for flirting then yes I am. You gotta a problem sweetie?" I asked, my voice turning more sweeter word by word.

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What in the world was wrong with Rey, sweet talks, flirting! God, I so miss the dazzler, attitude-lover Reyaansh Singhania. Something was up, his crazy brain challenged, if, I was a victim, I aint going to fall that easily.

"Hmmh.. I dont think so you are." I answered, letting go of a light chuckle.

"Honestly, Babes, you are in my domain, my home. I decide what to do not u!" he spoke, his beautiful lightish brown orbs dancing with joy

"Seriously?..." I started, unable to complete what I wanted

How could I? I was speechless, no words trying to be voiced over. I gasped as I dropped in Rey's lap, his comforting arms protecting me. I left his chamber, moving away from construction of a special corner for him.

"Thanks..." I muttered, glancing at his fellow mates, who stood, rooted to the spot, startled.

"Any probs sweetheart! You know I so love protecting u.." he murmured, coming close to me

"Hey! Stay back!" I shouted, fearing his intensity.

"Try to stop me." he answered, extending his strong arms to cover my slim waist, my heart beating right next to his, our faces just a distance away.

"STOP!" I shouted, pushing him back.

"Sorry baby, couldnt stop myself." he apologized, his head held down in shame.

I didnt know what to say, acceptance of his apology meant me warming up for him, rejecting mean world war. My hazel orbs swished over, wondering what do, confusions entering my difficult life twice a day! God, couldnt I ever get some peace. Every minute, a new problem was formed, just to show how miserable I could be!

Are u done, Mr. Life! Am tired already! Muttering all around, I agreed. 2 Could play a game too but he doesnt know me. We havent even introduced ourselves yet.

If someone bags the position of being a devil, I rush forward, capturing every right she has, in short, proving no one could ever beat me. Smirking, sharpening my silver blade, perhaps he was the next, Mr. Dazzler.

"Whatever! Lets introduce ourselves again, I am a weakling and we get exceptionally rare chances to hang out with you. Any other girl might be interested but not me! So, I guess u better find someone else now." I answered, my mode changing again, moods swinging

"Of Course.." he said, hoping to make me his one day. Ya sure! That one day would be NEVER, is that okay??

He walked away, meeting my eyes for a long time.

"Kriya.." some whispered

"Swayam!" I whispered, biting my tongue, trying to soothen the flowing, red blood.

"Yes girl. I wont be telling u where I am but I bet you can feel my presence." he started, his thoughts, his words grooming me for the future

"Who are u?" I asked, curiously, why did he always want to help me.

"Kriya.. Didnt I ever tell u, I am your protector. You will know more about me later but now, its not important.." he answered

"Ofcourse it matters! I dont even freaking know u!" I shouted, cutting him in between

"You do know me Kiru, just wait for a while. All I can advice u is, dont fall for this boy. He might kill u, without u even knowing, pain up to none to be felt but after a couple of minutes, the pain over the limits burning u." he whispered, confusing me even more.

God, he should definitely be in the mysterious Sherlock Holmes series. He is just sooo confusing!!!!! But I couldnt deny his advice, he was always right and this time, I had felt it for myself as well...

I just nodded while his soft lips touched my forehead, kissing me.

"Thank u.."

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PROMO:- Will the dare work out?? Rey failed, the challenge winner lost? Will Kriya fall for him?? Confusion, Confusion every where
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So here's the update
Hope you guys like it!
Please Comment big and like!!
It would really mean alot!
Jhootas and chappals welcome! Dont forget that eggs arent banned tooo!!LOL

OH AND BREAKING NEWS!!
U can pm me or scrap me your doubts!
Plus I wont update before getting lots of likes and comments!
SO guys, start working!! xD

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Diya

@diyaswaronholic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

THank u soo much guys for commenting and liking!!!
Hehe I know I have replied after a long time so dont kill me!!
Okiesh So here's your individual comments:-

@Raju didu- hehe so finally urs is the first comment!! Thanks soo much didu!! Oh rally who said vicky wouldnt!! this is just the starting!!! aage aage dekho hota hai kya!! xD

@Akku di- Thank u sooo much!! hehe updated!! xD

@Alisha- Thanks soo much!!!

@sweetydiyafrien- Thanks girl!! Sure definitelyY!!

@Devilishpam- heeh thxx diduu!!

@Meghz- Karing karin!! PAr i want a big comment from u samjhe!!

@Lunia- Thank u meri jaan!! SO happy u liked it!!

@Hina- Thanks babY!! Aajkal ho kaha huh, ek dum se gayab hogai hoo!!! Love ur comment soo much!! Missing u!

@Anjali- Thanks a lot!

@Kiarawinget16- Meri pyaari diduu thank u!!! Missing u soo mch! xD

@Raina- Thank u!!

@Kiruuu!- Thanks baby!! Glad u enjoyed this update!

@Kreyafan- Thank u!! Will surely update fast!

@Snehu- Kya baat hai! Aaj comment milgaya!! hee thxx baby! glad u liked it!! Koi nahi, atleast u commented naa!! :P

@Aishu didu- Thank u sooo soo much!!

@Meri Ms Unique, Prachuu- thanks meri jaan! ofcourse hu, koi shak??

@Arsha4eva99- Thanks soo much!! will surely do so! hope u have added me!!

@Shannel di- Thanks sooo much didu!! Love ur comment, love u even more!!

@Sunu.Kriyaansh- THanks loads dii!!! Will surely do soo!!

@Trishikarajput0- Thanks sooo mcuchh!! Glad u liked it!

@mere devil- Thats agood boy!! Angel!! Good bada comment diyaa!! hehe thxxx!!

@-Raj- - Thanks sooo mucH!!!

@Meri jaan, MD- Thanks jaan! glad u liked it! xD Aur ek second, tera naam???

@Kritzz- Thanks a lot!

@Shreeju didu- Thanks a loot didu!! hehe thats a suspense!! wait and watch!! xD

Edited by diyaswaronholic - 11 years ago