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arshihydfan

@arshihydfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#391

Hi,

Please continue the story.

We're definitely interested. 😊

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#392

Wow Katie,

can't tell you how much I love your works!!

This,

One especially,

yeah it does give the feelings that since soon everything would be fine,

there's a chance of it ending!!

But to tell you the truth,

don't want it to end!!

Keep them coming!!

Lovin'it!!

Take Care!!

😊

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inamajar

@inamajar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#393

The last two updates were very emotional & well written. No two friends should be separated because some one else made the choice for them. No one has that right to make decisions or judgement of such situations.

Arnav & Khushi were first Friends and then they loved each other with the other not being aware of the same. They have always been there for each other when others did not know how to be so . A&K were also always there for their 4 friends both individually & together and also to bring them together with their love.

So if A&K had a fight they would have in their terms and time solved it and come back together. They never needed anyone else to be there to interfere or advice them on the same. They friendship was something only these two understood and no one else could have done anything much for them under the circumstances.

Anjali & Payal had no Right under any circumstances to separate these two. They had no right to think they were doing the right thing for Khushi. They had no understanding of how the dynamics of A&K worked. They only thought of separating two lovers who had not confessed their feelings to each other which again they should not have done. They did not realize that they were making a wrong decision which will impact the best friends.

They never understood their respective siblings, but always depended on them for their life situations. What kind of one sided, selfish attitude is that. Should have they not tried to understand even during the 3 years when things started changing. They were happy because their life was Peachy. They never thought of what was happening to A&K or the consequences of what they did to them. They never tried to rectify the same. What did they think it will never come out??

A&P if they truly cared should have given the space for A&K and talked to them and brought them together. Instead they made the wrong decision of making choices on their behalf and separated them for good 3 years, when A&K needed each other the most. They wanted A&K for helping them out with their life decisions but chose to keep them away when they should have brought them together. The concept of trust was lost to A&P. Khushi trusted these two immensely and even though she might forgive them she can never trust these two again. She should keep them always at a distance. The only reason Khushi will keep in touch is because they happen to be their siblings. Otherwise for what A&P have done, Arnav will never forgive, Khushi will just keep in touch for the sake of Akash.

Rohin in all this is again selfish because once he got his soulmate he did not look beyond. Akash when he came to know what A&K wanted realized that they had never looked at it the right way, even from a friends point of View. Over all the four friends were selfish and just used A&K's good heart and were never true friends to them. Glad Akash is making amends. But can't say much for the other three.

Glad Arnav is more stubborn than Khushi, But Khushi will also keep for distance till she and Arnav talk things thru.

Edited by inamajar - 11 years ago

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Katie

@love_iqbal_khan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#394

Originally posted by: seeta_naips
good that Akash blasted Anjali and Payal

they so deserved it and more

ah finally we will find out about the debacle with Shanaya

Anjali and Payal aren't off the hook just yet..😉 and yes...its time to visit the witch again..😛

Originally posted by: angelgirl_a
Res...! i have comments pending to post... just little too busy be back later

No worries honey...take your time. :)

Originally posted by: rk2127
Res
Edited.

Loved the way Akash ouburst had the glimpse of ASR and the way he showed his anger to Anjali and Payal being an understanding brother and a good friend. The way he took charge for helping Arnav and Khushi to prepare for there leaving. Yes Payal and Anjali it boiled down to them being selfish from a third persons POV not able to understanding and deciphering your friend and cousin's feelings when everything was good in your world.

But not for a second Arnav and Khushi thought of the being selfish they were angry for the fact that there meddling created more problem and distance between them. It was there anger on not able to confess themselves and than there friends breaking there trust who they expected to understand them.

I feel bad for Arnav, on his thought of why always Anjali not able to understand his feelings.

Finally, the face to face discussion on shanaya's chapter. Can't wait for it.

Katie you mentioned earlier that you have a story in mind to show there love life after there union as lovers. Would really want you to continue with this.

I refuse to make Akash a spineless character...I liked the character of Akash and I really wish that they'd made him more like ASR (not completely though) but didn't get to see that...so I like to make him a strong character in my ffs😳

In their places, Payal and Anjali are somewhat right but like you said...from a 3rd person view, it does boil down to selfishness. And once again...you've pinned it on bullseye...Arnav and Khushi are angry because distances between them created and there was nothing they could have done to change that because a third party was at work..

Anjali-Arnav bond...usually always a perfect bro-sis bond in most FFs and the show...I kind of wanted to highlight that sometimes, you're closer to your friends/cousins rather than your own siblings...nothing is wrong with that, of course...but those scenarios do exist..😊

Thank you for your vote! popular choice seems to be that I continue this FF a bit more...I'm already working on a timeline for the track I had in mind.😳😉

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Shyamala

@shyamidutt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#395

This is one of my favorite stories, eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

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abigail93

@abigail93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#396

Hey there... Nice update... I think payal and anjali deserve what they got...

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Katie

@love_iqbal_khan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#397

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#398

Res

~Unres~

You left it at that???!!! Thats not fair!

Cliffhanger😔

I loved how Arnav paid back Shanaya and Sheetal.They both deserved this.

I can understand Khushi's turmoil and Arnav's appehensions of her slipping away from him.Both of their feelings were heartwarming and you expessed them quite awesomely!!

Hope Khushi's decision will be good for her and Arnav as well as NK!

Eagerly waiting for the next Update!

PS. Me first.Wow!😳

Edited by Hina69 - 11 years ago