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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ankitasidana

Okkk...so you planned a new twist...yayy.. loved it
Its so real...it actually happens yrr with kids
Loved how you showed ishitas aging
Haha...at that point of both kids racing for her milk...i was laughing like anything lol
I know practically its true..hota hai aisa.. i mean hota hogaa.. hota hi hogaa...i dont know...bt i enjoyed it
I was thinking ki raman ko bhi chahiye hoga or dekho he also asked for it..hehe...dirty mind mera..chi chi
No no m a gud bachaa
And then dhakka...bechara raman...but loved how mi mi both explained their sibling..that was so sweet
So room decorated..spa taken...dresses decided...younger kids outside...elder kids slept...ab kyaa
Aaj ki raat hona hai kyaa...but yahan to episode hi khatam ho gyaa ...update sooner now
And by the way kya sochkar yeh pucha ki continue kru ya nhi...do u think there is a single person in this forum jo yeh khega ki nhi rehne do..is update ka to silent readers bhi wait krr rhe hain ..you just start writing the next one...okk sweety
And yrrr... you write romance really beautifully and naturally...loved it yrrr
Awesum update

Ankitha love you for the detailed comments that you give. Its a booster to any writer.
Post delivery and the next year is a very stressful time for a woman. Their whole schedule changes, they become irritated for small things due to lack of enough rest and the kids are very demanding. This makes the women very vulnerable and men need to really understand their wife well to empathaise with them.Glad that you liked it.
Kids racing for milk. It really happens that too when they are twins it really happens so.
Kya ankitha dirty mind kaise. Raman ka hakk hai. Ishu sey nehi puchega toh aur kissse puchega😉
You are good Baccha only but Romantic Baccha. Whats wrong about it.
I wrote the dakka part , then I felt probably that was very rude. Toda Ishu ka out of charecter ho gaya like in the show currently.
AAj ki raat wai hoga jo Raman ne Ishu ko Godh baraye ke din Kundan set pehnake kaha tha
Will update the next part soon. I really love to read your comments. They really motivate me to write more.
And whatever I have bolded above really loved those lines of your. I never expected that someone willl like my writing and I get to see this comments. You dont even know what I felt reading that comment of yours darling thank u sooo much. And after seeing the comments I started writing the next part already. Will update it soon.
And romance, Iam a romance lover myself and whom am I writing about ISHRA romance king and queen. The moment I imagine abt both of them Romance comes automatically. Credit to ISHRA only not to me
Edited by iloveyhm - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhajo

Many many thanks for continuing and plzzz don't stop.

Awesome update. Waitinggg for next.

thank you so much will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

This is my 750th post in India forums. Iam not part of any other forum apart from YHM. All these posts are part of YHM forum only.I just joined this forum in april and I havemade 750 posts. Look at the craze I have for YHM. I started writing stories after joining the YHM forum. This is the first show Iam so crazy about and write with inspiration of KP and DT. The encouragement that I got for you guys is amazing. Thanks for supporting me. I hope i am able to write more parts to make all of us enjoy the ISHRA journey and we get to see beautiful moments which will show the progression of their relationship in the show as well

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

Wonderful part Nithya.Are you teasing us?Please continue the story still fresh like you just start it.How WONDERFUL writer you are.!Thanks for PM.👏👏👏

Thank you so much. Really feels good to see comments like this . Will update the next part soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I read all parts in one go so nice story plz write so many stories. Ucan also write a story on ISHRA based upon ARRANGED MARRIAGE just i thought u can write it too well dats y. anyway thanks for nice story👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lakshya5

I read all parts in one go so nice story plz write so many stories. Ucan also write a story on ISHRA based upon ARRANGED MARRIAGE just i thought u can write it too well dats y. anyway thanks for nice story👏

25 parts in one go. Really amazing yaar. Thanks will write my next SS with ISRA and arranged marriage concept. Thanks for yor comments
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Posted: 11 years ago

Excuse me for any grammatical or spelling errors.

Part 26: Desire that's burning is not only in you, iam also burning with equal desire

Raman enters the room and shocked to see the way it's decorated. Ishitha was struggling with her blouse and blushed the moment she saw Raman at the door step.

The room was having a sensuous fragrance of lavender which he loves. She had thoughtfully switched off the lights of the room. The room was illuminated with the shady night lights and scented candles all around the room just to give enough light for their sensuous night. The bed was decorated with roses on either side in a vase. She had place few bunch on the head box and the other end. She had made a huge heart with rose petals in the middle of the bed. He could clearly understand what she was upto. He was taken by a surprise. He wanted to give her a night full of peaceful sleep and she was ready for a passionate one. She always amazed him by her sensitive behavior towards his feelings. She proved it yet again. But he wanted to take a sweet revenge on her for what she did last night.

He slowly walks into the room. She is still struggling or rather pretending to struggle with her blouse. Once he comes to middle of the room, Ishitha asks him to tie her blouse from back. She was wearing a see through black saree. She had ensured her milky white waist is wide visible to tease him. The blouse was a low neck one revealing his favorite parts (her breasts). The sleeveless blouse had a knot to be done at the back and Ishitha was requesting Raman to do that only. He slowly moves to her. She feels happy as is he coming to her. He ties the blouse very tight as though he crushes her body. That made her specific personal parts to be more revealing. Raman is losing all his control seeing his wife tease him.

He wanted to tease her back. He was RKB after all. She had pushed him when he was passionate to have her. He will not leave without evening with her. Moreover he wanted her to ask him today. He tied the knot and simply left to the study table faking that he wanted to read. Ishitha was confused, he was the one who was longing for this last night. When she is ready why was he going away. She thought he was angry with her. She slowly went near him and encircled her hands around his neck. He was simply reading or rather faking to read. She pecked his cheeks and said

I: Raman mere pyare pathidev, Iam sorry. Please maaf kardo

R: Why must I forgive you? You are insaf ki devi. You never do anything wrong

I: Jannu please gussa chodo, biwi ko deko na. Srif Srif Srif apkeliye tyar huye hun.Batavo na kaise lag rahe hun. Mai abhi aur moti ho gaye kya( Please leave your anger. Look at your wife. I have got ready just for you. Tell me how am I looking. Have I grown fat?)

He was laughing internally thinking about Ishitha's never ending insecurity. But was adamant to make his wife get him to bed tonight

R: Bolna kya hai Achhi hi lagthe ho.( What is there to say you look good only)

Ishitha was feeling very bad to see Raman totally uninterested in the conversation. She was thinking of ways to make him look at her. She was wearing a kamarband that Raman had gifted her during one of the weekend outing at their farm house. They really had a romantic time when he gifted that. He made her wear it himself and he made his way through her waist in the pretext of making her wear it. He also sensuously removed it with his teeth when they made love. The kind of sensuous kisses he gave while he was removing it was something she remembered. She wanted him also to remember that night.

I: Raman see this it is hurting me, can you please help me remove it pointing to the Kamarband. She also added do you remember the day you gifted me this

When Raman turned around he was simply bowled she was generously showing him off her waist. The blouse was a very small one and she had worn a low hip saree. She was showing half of her upper body in the pretest of her waist. He was really finding it difficult to control himself. He was also reminded of the day he gifted it to her and the wild passionate night that followed. Ishitha was expecting him to remove the same way he had removed it on that day. To her surprise he simply removed and turned around to start reading again.

Ishitha was really getting worried how to change Raman's mood. She thought I have hurt him very badly. But Raman on the other hand was laughing thinking of his wife's plight. She tried moving her fingers over his lips. He was not reacting to it. She then moved her hands over his chest which was visible in his usual half open shirt. He stopped her, she felt happy that he was at last reacting. But he asked her keep quite as he was reading. She then turned his chair. And sat on his lap. She gave give a very intense gaze her eyes full of desires for him. But was not budging. She kissed him with her hands working on his hair. He enjoyed it and decided not to respond so that he will have a fun time tonight making her lure him. She was already on the job of luring him. His total reaction less behavior really hurt her. She parted and looked at him. He behaved as though he was not at all affected.

I: Raman, what is this. I am sorry. What else will I have to do to get you out of your anger.

R: Go sleep. You wanted rest. That's why I told and amma and mummyji to handle the kids for one night. Yesterday you only said I don't think about you. Today when I have done so much for you , you still have complaints.

I: What you asked amma and mummyji. I asked mummyji to take care of the kids so that I can give you what you desired last night. It was due to my request

R: What you also told her?

I: See both of us think alike, saying that she pecked his cheeks

R: No there is a change. You had a different expectation and I had different. Go now, sleep.

I: Raman, do you even know how much effort I had put to decorate the room as per your wish. I got dressed as per your likes. You are not even turning towards me.

R: Kya yaar bakwas kui kar rahi ho. So javo mujje tang mat karo.( Go sleep, don't disturb me)

Ishitha literally was in tears. She started sobbing

I: Kithne mehanat se karma sajaya aur kodo appke pansand ane jaise sajaya. Mai kud beshar hoke apke pass aye hun apko fir bhi eithan bhi nehi hai. Cheliey mai ja rahi hun. App toh mujjse pyar karna bul hi gaye. ( I put in so much effort to decorate the room and got dressed up as you like. I was so shameless and came to you but you are not even bothered. I am going. You don't love me at all now.)

Ishitha's tears was the last thing he wanted on that day. He was just teasing her and he would go weak whenever he saw tears in her eyes. Meanwhile she had already gone to the bed and laid down.

R: Ishitha sunno, majak kar raha tha yar. Tumhe mere se kya sharam. Yeh kya besharam laga rakha hai.( Listen I was making fun. What is this why will you be shy with me. )

She was not responding. He goes to the bed and laid down next to her. He touched her hands. She pretended to have slept.

R: Sunnu janu kya kar rahi ho. Deko ethna uksaya tumne aur aiyse chodke so rahi ho. Sunna Ishitha (Listen dear, what are you doing. You stimulated me so much and you are sleeping)

She was not at all responding.

R: Ishitha, itni jaldi so gaye kya, hey majak kar raha tha yar( Did you sleep so soon. I was making fun). Ishu, we hardly get time for ourselves, don't waste the decoration that u did yaar.

I: Ya you only told that iam tired. So I slept immediately after I laid down

She bit her tongue after saying that. He was a smart guy he also sensed what was she upto.

He silently moved away. She started to panic now. Oh fir see unka mood karab kardiya( I spoiled his mood again). He knew about Ishitha's self-control. She can never resist him. The moment he tries to be intimate with her she will give in immediately.

He went to one of the flower vase and pulled out a tender rose. He removed the stem and put the rose on his lips. Came back and slowly and laid down beside her. He started moving the rose over her bare back. He lips touching her bare at times teasing her further. She was unable to bear the sweet tortures he was giving her. She swiftly turned around and hugged him.

I: Raman Iam very sorry. I must not have pushed you Very sorry. Tried thi mai. I was not even understanding what I was doing

R: Hey leave it na, is it the time to speak about that.

He cupped her face and said, in fact I am sorry I also over reacted it. And kissed the tears she was having. He was fiddling with the knot of her blouse. Then he wanted to get a better view of her upper body. He slid her pallu. She was damn sexy. She worked her way to her shirt buttons. He smiled at her desperation. He slid the rose over her body and started sending unique sensation all through her body. She was also burning in equal desire. His sweet tortures were really killing her

Raman ... she morned and pulled him into a tighter hug. "Please ab aur mujjse bardash nehi hota. Ajjavo na( I cannot tolerate anymore, come on)

R: Janshi Ki rani har chiz tumhe super-fast chahiye.

I: Ravan Kumar abhi tak ek kiss bhi nehi diya

Raman laughed at her comment and started raining kisses all through her body. In the event he removed all her cloths. She lie defenseless in front of him.

R: Beautiful, do you even know how sexy you have become after your delivery. Oh my god your breasts.

He was shirtless and covered her upper body with his. She was morning his name

I : Raman ... didn't you want to drink milk today. She pleaded

R: Ajj bachho ko infection nehi hoga( Will children not get infection today)

I: Chi Ravan kumar kithne bure ho.( How bad are you)

Abhi bata tha hun kithna bura hun.( Now I will tell you how bad am I) He started biting her breasts vigorously and she was not able to manage his passion and came over him to make him stop whatever he did. She removed his pant and kissed his manhood. He lost the last bit of self-control he had and started raining kisses over her body. He kissed her surgical stiches and she felt touched by his act. Then they made love, in a most unique way. Raman always felt a new Ishitha every time he made love with Ishitha. So was she. They did it after 9months, He wanted to be gentle as it was not even 6 months since her C section. But she was stimulating him to be aggressive. They were not getting enough of each other. She was totally behaving the opposite of how she behaved last night.

They were passiontaley in love with eachother almost till early in the morning. He let her free after yet another time she slowly said breathing heavily

I: Raman its 4 AM. My normal time to sleep. Abb toh chod do( Leave me at least now) Let me sleep for atleast next two hours so that I will continue my regular routine

R: Anyways you have to get up in another two hours why can't we do this for two more hours

I: Chi Raman, do you ever get satisfied

R: What satisfied, I got to do it after 9 months, and tomorrow anyways you will have your lectures about child upbringing, parenting and most importantly infections. Then what will I do

I: Raman please, iam really tried. I cannot do it anymore

R: Why are you tried yar. Tum toh bas leti hui thi. Sab kuch toh mane kiya( You were just lying down. I only did everything)

I: Ravan Kumar saying that she hit his chest and both laughed

Both sleep and Ishitha gets up by 6 AM. When she is getting up he pulls her back

R: When will we do it next?

I: Raman you are so shameless

R: what, this is my right, don't even think of letting me starve for this for months. I need my medicine dose twice a day

I: Raman, what are you saying?

R: Ok at least once in 2 days

I: Raman ... Kya hai ye

R: Tik hai baba, once a week

I: Kya hai , are you doing business negotiations

R: Negotiating business is easier than negotiating for sex with you. Ok Let's have a deal, we will start our monthly outing to the farm house once a month and then there we will do it

I: Raman you really don't have any work.

Saying that she leaves. Raman doesn't go for work the next day. He was very tried. The morning he had asked Mihir to come home to sign some papers. He got up at 8 AM and came to the living room holding his hip.

Mr Bhalla: What happened puttar, why are you holding your hip

R: yeh sab apke bhu ke karname hai papa.( This is all done by your DIL) he said in a fit of emotion.

Ishitha had bathed that day and was working in the kitchen. She was taken aback by his statement.

Mr Bhalla: Ishitha ne kya kiya puttar( What did Ishitha do), what happened to you.

Ishitha was really in a fix didn't know what to answer and so was Raman when he realized what he spoke. Toshiji came to their rescues

T: kya hona hai Bhalla Ji . Wahi hua jo hal apka hotha tha har bar jab mai mere delivery baad maike se atthi ti. Bachho ko akela chod dijye. Kaise saval kar rahi hai. Kuch toh sharam kijeya na.( What is to happen, same thing happened what used to happen to you when I used to come back from my mother's place every time after my delivery. Leave the kids alone. What kind of questions are you asking them?)

Mr & Mrs Bhalla giggle and leave. Ishitha is full anger and give Raman a furious look. Raman comes to her and hugs her from back.

R: Kya hai Janshi Ki Rani. Subh Subh talwar utaliya tumne( You have lifted the sword early in the morning)

I: Chodiya. You don't even know what to talk in front of whom.

R: Fir see chandi ka roop chad gaya kya, kal rath ho toh badi meneka banke merra brahmacharya tod rahi ti( You become chandi again. Yester you were meneka trying to break my celibacy)

I: Apko aur koi kam nehi hai na. Mujje hai. Mai ja rahi hun, amma ke ghar Riddhi ko lane( You don't have any work. I have. Iam going to amma's place to get Riddhi)

Raman goes and calls Mihir to come and get few files signed as he would come down to office. Mihir comes and sees Raman sleeping. Ishitha comes and greets Mihir. She asks him to sit and wakes up Raman.

M: What happened Bhai, you are still sleeping

R: Nothing Mihir I was little tried.

M: don't tell me you were working all night

R: Looks at Ishitha giving a naughty smile and tells Mihir, I was working only Mihir, but not official.

Mihir understands what Raman is telling. He starts giggling. Ishitha really gets embarrassed and leaves. Raman sleeps after the breakfast while Ishitha looks visibly tried and doing household work. After the lunch Raman takes care of the kids and asks Ishitha to take rest. In the evening Raman takes Ishitha and his kids out for dinner. They go out very happily, it was a very cute sight to see. Mr and Mrs Bhalla feel very happy to see them together.

How was this part. Must I continue or is it like i have forcefully extended the story. Please let me know your comments can be positive or negative.

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesom update...
romance is mrethn xpctd...
im was laughing bcoz of ishu antics...
i really njyd ishu's luring towards raman..
so senseous...
im very evbry happy af raeding it...
due to shw im depresd bt ur update totally chngd my mind...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hot!
I love raman teasing
Cont. Soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
Raman n his teasing
no words over that

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