Fought For Ur Soul..(ar ff) part ~ 16 updated 28/5/2015- Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sara.dmg

awesome
continue soon



thank u dear...
I wil.. 😊 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

that was an awsumm part..!! finally ridz will remember her old life..!! but this sapna...huhh...i hope everything will be normal continue soon..!!

its getting interesting day by day..!! cant wait



Thank u soo much dear... Im glad that ur linking it...
Ur wait wil be over soon... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: polishedtechie

great partsss...

need to know whats gonna happen next... continue soon plzzz



thank u soo much di...!!! 😊 😃
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PART 11

R : (screams ) anji...!!!
Sh : di..
Shilpa moves near anji sprinkle some water on her face to make her councious...

Anji : auchh..!!
Sh : di u fine.??
Anji : haann main thik hn.. Chalo sab bahar chalte hai... ( in a low tone..)
R : nahi di..
Sh : ridhima plz iswaqt chalo.. Anji di ki tabiat thik nahi hai..

R :.pehle ab log mujhe sab btayenge.. Akhir ho kya raha hai yahan...

Anji : chalo mere sath.. Tumhe kuch dikhana hai...

Anji moves out n all of them folows her..

Anji enters ridhima's rum..

R : di ye mera rum.. Dont fol me...

Anji moves to ridhima's bed post ..

Anji : sid plz ye photoframe utar do...
Poiting towards a lagre photo frame of ridhima's childhood hanging on the wal..

R : di ap plz kuch btao ge..!! ( bit angrily..)

Anji opens the cupboard that was hiden behind the photoframe...

R : di ye sab...
Anji : ridhima tumhe yaad hai bachpan tumhe dreams aye krte hai jinhe dekhkr tum aksar dar jari thi..
R : haann bt vo toh ane bmd hogye the...
Anji : bnd hue nahi the.. Hmne block ki thi...
Ridhima ab jo main tumhr btane ja rahi hn.. Ho sakta hai tumhe vo sab jhut lge.. Bt tgis is truth...
Il start with my name.. Mera name anjili joshi nahi.. Anjali atul malik hai... Beatians ki choti daughter in law..

Anji tel ridhima about beatians.. Their powers n all stuff...

R : di ye sab..
Anji : i know rids ye sab bahut ajeb hai.. Dificult to believe bt all this is true..

Anji open a drawer of ridhima's study table n takes out her scrap book..

Anji : ridhima tu hamesha puchti thi na.. Ki kyi bachpan se tu ye stches bnati thi 16 pages wali...

R : nodes her head..

Anji tore all the pages of scrap book in aranges tham on floor..

Anji : ye armaan ka sketch hai..
By saying this anji shows her a photograph of armaan..

R : di pr ye kaise maine toh ise kabhi dekha hi nahi...

Anji : yes ridhima tumne ise nahi dekha.. Apne is jnm main.. Bt in ur previous life he was ur husband LOVE OF UR LIFE .. UR SOUL MATE... Tumne same aise hi sketch use gift kie the shadi ke bad uske 1st bday pr... Aise sketches bnana was ur art.. Tum har chiz ko 16 equal parts main bahut achese fit krti thi... Infact inhe sketches ko dekh kr hmne pta chala tha ki tum hi himari ridhima ho... Jb maine or arul ne atul ne tumnhr pehli bar dekha tha orplnage main.. Tum yahi skeyches bna rahi thi... U were jst four that time ridhima...!!!

Anji : ridhima ab ise jda main tumhe btaungi tum shayad mujh pr believe na kro.. Islie tumhe hi kudh sab kuch yaad krns hoga...
Is cipboard main ( poiting towards the cupboard that was hiden behind portairt..)
Tumhari kuch chizen hai.. Some gifts.. Some pics n a scrap boks..
Ridhima ( holding her hand ) agar tumnhe apni di pr thoda sa bhi trust hai toh plz inhe ek bar dekhlena n ho sake toh yaad krne ki koshish krna.. Ab humare ps jda waqt nahi hai..!!

By saying this anji folowed by sid and shilpa leaves ridhima's rum..!!

Ridhima takes out one scrapbok n sits on her bed

Ridhima pov
Jo bhi.di ne kaha.. I dont know who to react.. Ekdm confuse hogi hn.. Kya sach main ye sab exist krta hai powers.. Omg..!! N rebirth.. Bt y me.. Bhagvan ji plz meri help kro.. Pta nahi kya ho raha hai mere sath.. Saps jo meri best frnd thi.. She was after my life..


Other side anji's rum..
Sh : di kya ridz ko sab yaad ayega.. Vo humari baat mnegi..
Anni : i dont know shilpa bt main itna zarur jnti hn ridhima or armaan ka pyaar bahut strong hai.. unka pyar ki ho takat hai jo ridhima ne dubara jnm lia.. ab unka pyaar n bhagwan ka unpr ashirvad hi sab thik krega..

sid : hope so aisa hi ho.. rimi ko sab kuch jldi se yaad ajaye.
sh : di btao na hume kuch ridhima or armaan ke pyar ke bare main plz..

anji : ridhima ko 1st time dekhte hi armaan ko use pyaar hogya tha.. jb usne ridhima ko 1st time dekha.. he realised she is the one for him.. his soul mate..

** flashback..

anji atul armaan n muskan in australia..

muskan loved organinzing diferent kind of shows.. being the cultural head of her clg.. muskan organized a dance event in which various dance foms form difdrent cultures n regins were to be perfimed..

every thing was properly done.. all reharsals.. muskan has chosed the best danceres.. all prepartion were done as if some highly skiled profesional has made the aragements..!!

Dance event..!!
Muskan : helo n welcome every one.. Im not here to give a long welcome spech... I just wanna say.. Tonite infrint of u various dance forms acros the world would be performed.. I hope u all will enjoy tonite....

One after the other all the dance performance were a huge sucses..

Back stage..
A boy with a fractured leg
: muskan...
Muskan : (shocked..) wat the hel kaise hua..
Boy : i sliped from the stairs.. Im sorry..
Muskan :(angrily ) tre sory bolne se sab thik hojayega kya.. U are my lead dancer that of last performace..
Boy : i know muskan.. Bt it was an acident..
Muskan ( sjouts..) get out my sight..
Ab kya krun ab kya hoga.. Koi toh meri help kro..
Idea..!!

Muskan dial up a no..!!
Muskan : bhai plz dekho ap hi meri last hope ho.. Plz mna mt krna..
Other side : muskan tu pgl toh nahi hogi.. How wil i perform.. I cant mujhse nahi hoga
Muski : plz bhai apki muski ke lie plz mnjao.. Mera pura event barbad hojayega.. Plz plz.. Is ki lead dancer meri best frbd hai agar achese na hua uska dil tut jayega...plz..
Boy : muski yaar how can i..

After about 15 mins of ful drama n emotion black mail.. Stil there was no hope of muskan's suces..

Muskan : Armaan bhai thats it u have to do it.. Its my order..

Finaly muskan got replacemant of lead dancer.. Armaan being a obediant brother.. Did not dare to go against his princes' order..

Muskan ( on stage..)
: hope u all are having fun.. Now boys n girls put ur hands together for the last performanve of the day. That is on a punjabi boli..!! All the way round from india...



[ writers note..- heya readers.. I have used a punjabi boli 'kala doriya , from the movie allu chat ' you tube link.. ~ v=uAlIEeCkYYQ&feature=youtube_gdata_player">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uAlIEeCkYYQ&feature=youtube_gdata_player
Its my fav song n i got a perfect chance to add it here...
Many of u might not know punjabi.. I googled bt could not find translation to the song so i have tried n given mine so that u could jst conect to the song..
Hope u guys enjoy it.. As i toh love it..!!]

Curtains open n girls dresed in proper punjabi look.. Suits.. Long breds with parandi
Standing in a semi circle..

Music begins..

All girls singing : kala doriya kunde naal adiya e oye
ke chote devra bhabhi naal ladiya oye
{ meaning ~ Husbands younger brother faught with his bhabhi..}

( girls are holding their parandi In left hand n moving them round n round..
Spot light falls on a girl who enters from rite corner of the stage..
Looking exaclty like a punjabi mutyaar.. Dresed in typical punjabi style...one n only our ridhima...)

R : chote devra teri tor balai ve
naa lad soniye teri ek parjai ve

{ meaning ~ dont fight husband's younger brother.. U just have one bhabhi..}
kala doriya kunde naal adiya e oye
ke chote devra bhabhi naal ladiya oye
All sing in courus : chote devra teri tor balai ve
naa lad soniye teri ek parjai ve
kala doriya kunde naal adiya e oye
ke chote devra bhabhi naal ladiya oye

(ridhima moves towards her fellow dancers.. Singing..
Others standing n claping on the beat..)

(Behind the stage..
Muskan : bhai i dont care u have to do it..
Boy : no ways muski.. I cant yaar.. Muskan : u have to u have no other choise...
N pushes him towards the stage..)

All other gils..: phula di bahar rati aao na shava rati aavo na
bhul nahi ghumna raati aao na shava rati aavo na
R : aase pava pase pava vich vich pava galiya
( ridhima comes in the midle..)
R : je mera ranjhan na mainu miliya, dhund phira sab galiya
{Meaning ~ if my love is not here ill go n search him in all the strets..
Heer ranjha wala ranjhan..;-) :-P }

(ridhima looks here n there as if finding some one..
Her eyes fals on the armaan..
For a few seconds she just frioze to her place..
N ar share a smal bt cute eye lock..

Mean whlie other girls form a cicle around ridhima..

Other side armaan
As he enters ops sorry as he was forcefuly made to enter the stage.. Frezes on spot.. Looks at ridhima as if no one exists other than them...

Ar's eye lock is brokes wen one of the girl taps ridhima's shoulder in a teasy way asking her wat happened...!!)

Ridhima comes back to the real world n starts dancing..!!

R : ek mera ranjhan aaya shava, dil na chandan aaya shava
{ meaning ~ my love(ranjha) is here..}
( pointing towards armaan.. Other gils starts teasing ridhima..
In order to stop the teasing sesion sesion ridhima moves a fee steps forwards n starts to dance..)
R : ek mera ranjhan aaya shava, dil na chandan aaya shava
All of them in corus : phula di bahar rati aao na shava rati aavo na
bhul nahi ghumna raati aao na shava rati aavo na

(armaan with a gruop of boys moves towards the centre of stagw n stands with their redlective partners..)

R :bari barsi khatan gaya si khat ke le aandiya faliya
{ its a pharse used in punjabi boli.. }
others : bari barsi khatan gaya si khat ke le aandiya faliya
R : ve kudiya punjab diya
dudh makhna naal paliya kudiya punjab diya
{meaning ~ gilrs of punjab grew up eating milk n buter..}
Others : dudh makhna naal paliya kudiya punjab diya
dudh makhna naal paliya kudiya punjab diya
( all of them starts dancing together..)

A : bari barsi khatan gaya si khat ke le aandiya kadiya
ve airi gairi naal byah ni karde
haan mai enjh aisi byah ni karde
byah ke launde pariya munde punjab de
{ meaning ~ boys of punjab dont marry any ordinary girls.. They marry faries..}
( armaan holds ridhima's hand n turns her around..)
byah ke launde pariya munde punjab de

R : goriya baha de vich shan kan chudiya
(poiting towards her bangle in her hand..)

mehandi wale paira vich pajeb chhanke
( points towardd her payal wore in jer feet with beautiful designs of mehandi..)

All in corus : ni aaja nach le gidde de vich laat banke
{ meaning ~ come lets do gida.. Laat ka meaning mujhe bhi nahi pta..:-P }
ni aaja nach le gidde de vich laat banke
ni aaja nach le gidde de vich laat banke
( every one starts dancing on a faster beat..)

** end of flashback..

Sh : wo di.. Ridhima n armaan pehli bar mile stage pr that to dance performanxe.. Kahi tabhi toh ridhima ko music se itna pyaar toh nahi..

Anji : vo sab mujhe nahi pta.. Bt yes i rember one thing us din ke bad armaan ko zarur music se pyaar hogya tha..
Sid :that was fun.. Kash main bhi vo sab dekh pta..
Anji : vo toh bahut mushkil tha kunki tb tk toh muskan n rahul mile bhi nahi the..(n winks at sid)

To which shilpa n anji burst out into laughter..!!

Late nite..!!

Ridhima's rum
Ridhima was sleeping.. There was a frown on jer face.. She was sweating badly...
N sudenly she wakes up

R : armaaannn...!!!

Hearing ridhima's scream anji runs to her rum..
Anjo sits on ridhima's side n takes her into a hug..

Anji : relax ridhima.. Tum ne koi bura sapna dekha.. Kuch nahi hua.. Calm down..
R : di.. Bahut hi ajeb n scary dream tha.. Log fight krrahe the.. It was nt at a normal fight.. Bahut powerful the vo log.. Ek ldke ko kuch logon ne ghera hua tha.. Vo bahut buri tarah se zakhmi tha..!!
Anji 's face fel hearing this..
R : kya hua di..
Anji : kuch nahi ridhima.. It was jst ur dream.. Sojao tum.. Relax..

Outside the rum..

Anji (thinking..)
Oh my god..Ridhima ko dreams ane shuru hogye.. Main kush houn ya nahi kuch smj nahi araha.. Bhagvan ji kyu kr rahe ho ridhima ke sath aisa.. I cant see her in pain.. Kitna dri hue thi vo.. Use pehla dream aya bhi toh kya.. Armaan ki defeat ka jis fight ne ise armaan se dur kia tha.. Jis fight se armaan ka soul capture hua tha... Plz bhagvan j
i.. Ridhima ko is dard se jdi free kro.. Aise roz roz tadapte nahi dekh sakti main ridhima ko..!!

Tear fels from anji's eyes..
By removing her tear anji went back to ridhima's rum n sat beside her..!!


That it guys.. Hope maine apka jda dimag nahi khaya..
Diwali wk is here.. So il be writing now after diwali wk..!!

Happy diwali to all of u.. Enjoy..!! :-) :-D 😊😃

Edited by little_angle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
HAPPY DIWALI..!!!




Edited by little_angle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was an awsum part./.!! finally AR ki first meet...aur riddhima ko truth ka pta chala...waiting for more eagerly..!!
And happy diwali to u too...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey great going story.. when will the next part come???
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Posted: 11 years ago


thanks dear...!!!😊😊
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thanks dear...!!!😊😊😊

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