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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 12

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Daadi : Hum nhi jaante aap yaha se durr kyun bagate hai

Itna hi miss krte hai usse

Pyaar krte hai usse

Wapas le aaiye ussi apni zindagi mein Maan

Pr yu khudko

Hum sbko sja mt dijiye

Maan : daadi mujhe kuch smjh nhi aa raha

Aap kya kh rhi hai

Daadi : bniye mt maan

.

.

Hum aapko one week ka waqt dete hai

Sochne ke liye

Aap is ghar mein ya geet ko waps leke aayenge

Ya fir

Maan : ya fir

Kya daadi

Jb aapne fasla le hi liya hai

Toh apna pura fasla sunaiye

Daadi : humne aapke liye ek ladki pasand ki hai

Aaj uski puri family dinner pe aa rhi hai

Aap shagun se mil lijiye

Maan : daadi mujhe koi interest nhi hai

Daadi : Maan jaake ready ho jaaiye

Bs wo aane wale hai

Maan : mujhe kissi se nhi milna hai

Daadi : Maan aapko humari kasam

Without saying any word, he left the place...

**********

He throws the court on couch...

Supriya : maan bte

Maan : maa ab aapko bhi kuch khehna hai

Supriya : Maan aap phle shant ho jaaiye

Maan : maa please aap daadi ko smjhaiye

Wo yaha rhehna chahti hai

Thik hai hum rahenge

Par mujhe kissi bhi ladki se nhi milna hai

Supriya : thik hai maan

Aap jaisa chahenge waisa honga

Par

Maan : par kya maa

Supriya : geet ko wapas le aaiye Maan

Aap ydi geet ko le aayenge

Daadi kbhi aapko dusri shaadi ke liye nhi kahengi

Aur aapki khushi bhi toh geet ke sath hai

Maan : maa

Maine aapse phle bhi kaha tha

Mujhe is topic pe baat nhi krni

Supriya : thik hai mt kriye

Fir aapko wo krna honga

Jo daadi aapse kh rhi hai

Maan : maa mein ye nhi kr sakta

Supriya : aap geet ko nhi la sakti

Uski jagah kissi aur ko nhi de sakte

Aap aakhir chahte kya hai

.

Maan : maa aap toh mujhe smjhiye

Supriya : pichle panch saal se whi koshish kr rhi hu Maan

.

.

Aakhir asa us din huya kya

Humara ghar yu bikhr gya

.

Aap dono kitne khush the ek sath

Fir wo tufaan kaisa aa gya aap dono ke bich

Jisne aap dono ko yu alag kr diya

Maan : maa bhul jaaiye wo sb

Supriya : kya aap bhool paaye hai Maan

.

Maan : maa aap kya sunana chahti hai

Supriya : wo sch jo aapne aaj tak hum mein se kissi ko nhi bataya

Geet aur aapke bich asa kya huya

Jo aaj tak aap dono ke bich deewar bnke khada hai

Aapne humari bahu ko ghar se jaane ke liye kyun kaha

Maan : maa maine usse jaane ko kaha

Aur wo chli gyi

Gusse mein tha mein

Ruk bhi toh sakti thi wo khud

Par nhi

.

.

Fir bhi jb Maine New York settle hone ka fasla liya

Tb bhi mein akela nhi jaana chahta tha

Uske liye uske ghar pe ticket beji thi maine Maa

Par wo nhi aayi

.

Galati uski thi maa

Supriya : Maan ho sakta hai

Wo ticket usse mili na ho

Maan : maa maine Adi ko beja tha khud

Uske dad ne receive ki thi wo ticket

Fir usse kaise nhi milli

Supriya : Maan ek aur mauka dekhe dikhiye is rishte ko

.

Before he says supriya said "humare liye"

Supriya : Maan

Maan : ji

Supriya : chaliye ab ready ho jaaiye

Maan : maa maine abhi toh aapse kaha

Supriya : mein sb smbhal lungi

Guest se mil toh sakte hai

Maan : par maa daadi

Supriya : Maan wo daadi ke guests hai

Hum pura dhyan rakhenge ye get together shaadi ki baat tk nhi puche

Now happy

Maan : hmm

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Abhi : mom boliye na aapko gift kaisa laga

Geet : beautiful

Itna pyaara gift mujhe aaj tak kissi ka nhi laga

She kissed both kids & takes her into embrace... she feeling so low after seeing this gift... she missed her children childhood ... both first move, first word... and many more thing...

She standing near window lost in own thoughts...

Malik : beta kya soch rhi ho

Geet : dad I missed all beautiful moments

Mein apne bacho ko kbhi apni god mein nhi le paayi

Jb wo apni maa ko pukar rhe honge bukh ki wajh se

Tb mein khud mein itni khoyi huyi thi

Baki kissi cheez ka hosh nhi raha

Malik : beta isme teri kya galati hai

Tu bimar thi

Geet : dad unhone phla sbd kya bola tha

Dad wo school ke phle din khush the

Ya roye the

Bole na dad

Dad : geet beta

Phle tu chup ho ja

She not knows when tear came in her eyes...

He wipes her tears...

Dad : mere pass kuch video's hai

Chl tujhe mein dikhata hu

Geet : schi dad

Dad : hmm

Par mein sb kuch record nhi kar sakta tha

Par kuch pal maine kad kiye hai

Tere liye

Geet : mere liye whi kaafi hai dad

Jo gunaah maine kiye hai

Uske liye ye saza bhi km hai

Dad : gunaah

Tune kya kiya hai

Geet : dad

Sorry

Jb mein yaha aayi tb bhi aapse sch nhi kh paayi

Mein Maan ka gussa ...unka dard dekhke darr gyi thi

.

Mein aapko khud se durr nhi jaane de sakti thi

Please dad mujhe maaf kr dijiye

Dad : geet tumne kya chupaya hai mujhse

Saaf- saaf batao

She narrates all incidents which she confesses in front of maan on that day... He raise the hand for hit her but stop seeing her teary eyes & her condition...

She held his hand & said "dad hit me"...mein issi ke layak hu...par mujhse please nazre mt fariye

Apni geet pe gussa kriye

Usse datiye

Par chup mt rahiye

Dad : I never except this type thing from you geet

Tumne mujhe meri nazro mein gira diya

.

Itne saal tumahri is halaat ka zimmedar mein Maan ko smjhta raha

Yhi sochta raha

Kyun usne meri beti ko ghar se bahar nikala

Ussi ki wajh se meri beti ki ya halat hai

.

Par geet tum ne asa kyun kiya

Geet : dad mein us waqt nhi smjh paa rhi thi

Ek ajeeb sa junoon tha

Maan sirf mera hai

Wo kissi aur se kaise shaadi kr sakte hai

Mein unse bhut pyaar krti thi aur hu

Dad ussi sb mein maine ye kr diya

I hurt his whole family & him too...

.

Please dad doesn't leave me alone like maan...

Mein nhi ji paayungi

He takes geet in embrace & tries to console her...

Dad : beta shant ho ja

Mein humesha hoon tere sath

Stress mt le

He know her daughter very well... in madness for him she cross the limit but now she truly love him & feeling guilty... due to this she share this maan & now with me...

******

Maan try to go from this get together, but his daadi always stop him & give order to him show whole house to shagun...

Maan (think ) : mein kaise bachu in sbse

His phone buzzed...

Maan : unknown number

Shagun please excuse me...

Maan : hello

.

Kaun

Abhi : itni jaldi bhool gye

Maan : no baby

Wo tumhara number save nhi kiya tha na maine

bolo is waqt kyun phone kiya

abhi : thanks khehne ke liye

mom ko apka select kiya gift bhut acha laga

maan : ab khush ho tum

Abhi : ha

Bhut

.

Aapko pata hai

Ye phla gift diya hai aaj humne mom ko

Before he says more about mom mehar come...

Mehar : abhi kisse baat kr rhe ho

Abhi : mall wale uncle se

Unhe bta raha tha

Aaj phli baar humne mother day ase celebrate kiya hai

Mehar : abhi phone rakho

Abhi : kyun

Mehar : stranger se baat nhi krte

Abhi : wo stranger nhi hai

Unhone humari help ki

.

Mujhe lagta hai

Tumhe bhi unhe thanks khehna chaiye

Mehar : mein abhi sb kuch mom aur nanu ko batati hu

Abhi : sorry friend

Hum baad mein baat karenge

Maan : bye

He feel refresh after chatting with him...

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Posted: 10 years ago
oh dear
wait what did she do
so her dad thought maan was responsible for it
but it was geet
must have done something in her madness for him
but how far did she go
seems real far
even her dad is mad at her
which is saying something
but how come she didnt go with maan
or was she in bad state by then
god knows
lot of mus going on
and things didnt go the way they were supposed to
but his family is trying to get maneet together
hmmm hope it works
as without one another they are incomplete
plus their kids need their parents
geet there is still time
get your life back together then
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Posted: 10 years ago
Priyanka it's superb. Atlast maan is ready to think about geet's come back. What happened in their past which made them separate for a long time. Which mistake geet did in past which is not forgiveable. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
kya irony hai...khud k bete ne maan ko uncle bula rahen hai...aur maan ne geet k liye hi gift choice kiya hai...kash abb sab thik hojaye...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Geet liked gift
Maan was so upset with
Daadi decision
Maan's mom try to calm Maan
and asked the reason behind MG separation
and she told Maan to bring Geet back
Geet confess to her dad wat she did to have Maan

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Posted: 10 years ago
fantastic update...so loved abhi's and maan's conversation...so they are trying to bond...thought mehar and he would but looks like abhi and he did...also glad geet told her dad the whole truth...am hoping now that somehow dad will meet maan or his dado or someone and connect them up...but feel abhi might do the job too...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Woww Superb :-):-) suspence is going on wht have Geet did n love part:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan is thinking of a patch up?Geet n kids...beautiful.want a perfect family here.hope they unite
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Posted: 10 years ago
sooo lovely and loved the father son talk


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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update! Well written! So wt did Geet do? her dad blamed Maan bt it was her. update soon!

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