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Part 37:-
 
Altaf(laugh):jise hi hamara ye call cut hoga..tumhara phone mere aadmi hack kar lenge..tum kisi ko call nahi kar paogi aur nahi tumhe koi call kar sakhega..yahi nahi tumhre sare team members ke phone bhi..aur mall ke sare phones bhi..(he laugh)mere aadmi 45 minutes me arjun rawte ke ghar pahochege..aur 45 minutes me hi udhar mall me bomb blast hoga..bomb mall ke foodcourt ke kitchen ke dustbin me rakha gaya he..black wire cut karogi toh bomb diffuse ho jayega..rathod ke ghar se mall 20 minute ki duri pe he..tum aasani se mall pahoch sakti ho ya fir 30 minutes pe arjun rawte ka ghar he jaha par jake apne bte ki jaan bacha sakte ho..now choice is urs..apna beta..ya duty..??(he laugh evily )

Altaf cut the call...

Riya's phone get sliped from her hand..

She become numb for some seconds..n then come to action..she calls sam..n everyone in team..but altaf was right..her phone not able to work..she tried to call by landline but its also dead..

Riya(in mind):hey bhagwan kya karu..?arnav ko bachane jau toh itne sare logo ki jaan khatre me daal du..?ye kis ulzan me fasa diya tumne muze..?(she took deep breath)calm down riya..thande dimag se soch..(suddenly something struck to her mind)arjun ka ghar yaha se 30 minutes ki duri ke..aur arjun ke ghar se mall 20 minutes ki duri pe..agar mein arjun ke ghar pahoch ke arnav ko leke mall pahoch bhi jau toh fir bhi 5 minutes late hi pahochugi..agar kisi tarike se mein arjun ke ghar aur fir waha se mall isase kam time me pahoch jau toh kuch ho sakta he..

She make up her mind..she took out her gun n take all bullets available she have..

Riya:tuze ye karna hi hoga riya..

She come out of sam's house..n take sam's bike..

Ya she drive bike..(uhooo)..

She drive like manic breking all traffic rules n signals..n reach to arjun's home within 20 minutes..

Maid open the door for her..

Riya(hurrily entering in house):arnav kaha he..?

Maid:usake bedroom me..lekin..

Riya runs to arnav's room..

She take him in her hand..kiss his forehead..put arnav in baby carrier bag(kangaroo bag)..n ware it..

She come out of his room..

Maid:madam ji aap kaha ja rahi he arnav ko leke..?

Riya:tum ghar se bahar mat niklana..ok..

She leave..riya come to security incharge of arjun's home..n ask them to be alert..

Riya(looking to watch):dam it..25 minutes ho gaye he mere pass sirf 20 minutes he..warna bomb blast ho jayega..

Riya again start bike..(she is carrying arnav in kangaroo bag with her)..she found one suv is following her..

Riya(in mind):zarur altaf ke aadmi honge..

she drive more fast..

here altaf come to know about riya's step..

altaf:ye ladki toh bahot hi chalak nikali..(ordering his man)woh riya..mall tak kisi kimat pe nahi pahochni chahiye..

his man nodded n leave..

here altaf's men following riya's bike..

riya(in mind):dam it..ye altaf ke aadmi mere piche pade he..kya karu..?

(suddenly she remember something)she open up her purse in which she always kept some screws..she throw that screws on road..n  when altaf's men suv goes from that screw their suv get puncture..

riya(smrik):bevkoof kahi ke..

she drives fast..here altaf's men lost riya..riya finally reaches to mall..

in mall:

chotu n aayesha busy in sending all people outside mall..while sam ,shree n arjun,roshni busy in searching bomb..bomb scaud had not reach yet..

sam:dam it..itane bade mall me kaha hoga woh bomb..

shree:sir aur hame jo information mili he uss hisab se bomb blast hone me ab sirf 5 minutes bache he..

arjun:hame bomb dundna hoga..mall abhi bhi puri tarah se khali nahi hua he..mall me abhi bhi kam se kam 400 log he..un sab ki jaan khatre me he..

sam:come on quick guys..

roshni(in mind):hey bhagwan sirf 5 minutes..muze itani jaldi marna nahi he..(look to her team)ye log toh jaise marne ke liye utawale ho rahe he..par muze nahi marna..

she quickly escape from there ..n come to exit of mall..

here riya come to mall..

she look to watch

riya:oh god..only 5 minutes..

she run towards main entrance but suddenly stop..

riya(in mind):lekin agar mein time pe bomb nahi dund payi aur usse diffuse nahi kar payi..toh..bomb blast ho jayega..muze apni fikar nahi he lekin arnav mere sath he..arnav ko kuch nahi hone de sakti mein..lekin iss situation me karu kya..?alatf ke aadmi jo mera picha  kar rahe the..woh kisi na kisi tarah yaha pahoch hi jayege..

then she found roshni standing on exit..

riya(in mind):roshni mam yaha..?aur puri team toh under mall me he..hmm..woh apne jaan ke liye risk nahi le sakti..issliye woh mall ke bahar aa gayi he..?toh fir unake sath arnav safe rahega..kyo ki woh apni jaan bachayegi aur unake sath hone ke wajah se arnav bhi bachega..

riya run to roshni..

riya(handover arnav to roshni):roshni mam,..arnav ko sambhaliye..

riya then run to inside of mall..

roshni:are par riya..arnav yaha kaise..?aur tum yaha kyo aayi..?

but riya had already left..

riya come to mall..n look to watch its just 3 minutes more for bomb blast..

she found arjun..

riya(yell):arjun ..bomb foodcourt ke kitchen me he..

arjun first shocked to see her there..but realized what she said n run after her..

sam n shree also hear riya.n they too rush to foodcourt's kitchen..

arjun:riya..?tum yaha..?aur tumhe kaise pata chala ke bomb kaha he..??

riya:woh sab chodo..bomb dustbin me he..

they search for dustbin..

sam:dam it..yaha pe toh kamse kam 10 dustbin he..exactly kyon sa..?

all including riya get puzzled..

they all emptied all dustbin..n started searching in dust..

finally RIYA found a laptop bag in which bomb is placed..

they all look to bomb timer it shows 1 minutes 23 seconds left..

riya:shree..black wire cut karo..

shree(puzzled):black wire..?kyonsi wali..??yaha toh 3 black wire he..

riya:kya..?

riya look to bomb circkit..

riya:shit..(in mind)matlab altaf ne zoot bola..usane kaha mein ek toh arnav ya fir mall me fase logo ko bach sakti hu..lekin jab se mein sam ke ghar se nikali hu usake aadmi mera picha kar rahe the..aur muze shoot karne ki koshish kar rahe the..fir usane kaha tha ke bomb dustbin me he..yaha pet oh der sare dustbin the..cheating ki usane..toh fir ye black wali wire ke bare me bhi galat hi bataya hoga..par ab bomb diffuse kaise hoga..?

chotu:mere khayal se ye 1st wali black wire cut karte he..i hate black colour..

arjun immigiately cut that wire but still timer goes on..

sam:ye second wali black wire cut kare toh..i hate black too..

arjun cut that wire too..but bomb still active..

riya(in mind):altaf ne itana bada plan aise hi nahi banaya hoga..usse agar muzse bomb duffuse hi karwana that oh itana bada risk kyo liya..isaka matlab he black wire cut karne se bomb diffuse nahi balki blast ho jayega..

n here arjun was about to cut 3rd n last black wire..riya almost threw his hand..

riya(yell):nahi..bomb blast ho jayega black wire cut karne se..

shree:I think blue wire..i hate blue colour..

arjun cut blue wire.. but still bomb remains active..

aayesha:muze lagata he ke red coulor ki wire cut karni chahiye..i hate red..

arjun cut red wire but timer still continue..

arjun:whats going on this..?koi comedy show he kya ye..?i hate black..so cut black..i hate blue so cut blue wire..i hate red so cut red colour wire..kya laga rakha he ye..?last 20 seconds bache he..

aayesha:issiliye toh comedy kar rahe he sir..socha he marte waqt to has le..waise bhi bomb duffuse nahi ho raha..

smile crept on everyones lips..

riya(flashes her dimple smile):wow..that gr8..ab sirf mein hi reh gayi batane ko ke kyonsi wire cut karni chahiye..so I hate yellow..cut yellow colour wire..

the timer is showing only 8 seconds remains now..

arjun(looking to riya,n khife is ready to cut yellow wire):n like u..i too hate yellow color pari..

all eyes get wide in shock,fear..only 1 seconds remain..but before it arjun cut yellow wire..

n timer stop..

all just keep looking to bomb with shocked expression..

arjun(manage to wishper):bomb diffused..

all come out of shock..shree chotu yell in happiness...aayesha run to choree..n trio share group hug..

riya too run to them..n they share group hug..

sam smile n shook his head in disbelief..

arjun too smiling n taking sigh of relief..

suddenly something struck to riya..

riya:oh..shit..arnav..arnav..

she run towards exit of mall..

all look to her puzzled..

arnav(yell):riya..?kaha ja rahi ho..?n what about arnav..?kya woh yaha he..??

he n all run after her..

 

here outside mall:

altaf's men who were fallowing riya also manage to reach mall somehow..they found arnav with roshni..

so to kill arnav they attack on roshni..roshni answer well them back but..they are many in numbers..

riya rush to exit..n found one goon pointing gun to arnav..

riya(yell):nooo..arnav..

she shoot that man..

now the goons also realized riya is back..they starts firing towards riya n roshni both..

both riya n roshni answering them..but arnav is horrified hearing the bullets firing noise..n started crying..

riya(in mind):dam it..arnav ko kisi tarah safe jagah le jana hoga..ha usse mall ke andar le ja sakti hu..waha pea b bomb bhi nahi he..aur puri etf team bhi he..

but she realized that altaf's men has block her way to again get back to mall..

riya(in mind):no..ab kya karu..??par yaha se toh dur jana hi hoga..

she somehow manage to come to roshni..she take arnav in her hands..again put him in kangaroo bag..n rush to bike..

riya:don't worry..roshni mam..bomb diffuse ho gaya he..team yaha bahar aati hi hogi..par tab tak mein inzaar nahi kar sakti..arnav ke risk nahi le sakti..usse safe jagah le jana hoga..aap inn goons ko sambhaliye..

saying this she quickly start her bike carrying arnav..

here roshni continue fight with those goons..

n the next moment whole etf team those are following riya come out of mall..n they saw fighting going on between roshni n goons..they too started helping roshni n fight back to goons..

here altaf mens get horrified looking whole etf team against them..so 2 of them escape from there n starts following riya..

 

here riya take a shortcut road to reach to safe place..

riya(in mind):kisi bhi tarike se muze sam ke ghar pahochna hoga..kyo ki sam ke ghar pe ekdam higher grade ki security he jise par karna possible nahi..

but her bike get stop with sudden jerk..

riya again ty to start bike..

riya(yell):ab isse kya hua..

she again try to start it..but invain..

riya:ab kya karu..?arnav ko yaha se leke jana hoga..hmm..yaha se arjun ka ghar sirf 5 minutes ki duri pe he..waha ja sakte he..par agar waha already altaf ke aadmi honge toh..??but ab itna risk toh lena hi hoga..

she started running on road which take her to arjun's home..(she had carried arnav in baby carrier bag)..

she come to arjun's home..

riya(in mind):yah ape toh sari security waisi hi he..isaka matlab altaf ke aadmi arjun ke ghar tak nahi phoche..thank god..

she rush inside home..handover arnav to maid..

maid:madmji arnav ko kya hua.?ye itna ro kyo raha he..?

riya(hurrily):usse shant karo..usse kuch khilaio..plz..

 

here outside mall:

etf team get ride of altaf's men..they all rush to roshni..n ask her who were the goons..

roshni:I don't know..ye goons kyon the..par woh arnav ko marna chahte the..

arjun:kya..?arnav ko..??arnav kaha he..??

roshni:usse riya leke gayi..

 arjun:what..??kaha..?

roshni:I don't know..she said arnav ko kisi safe jagah le jana zaruri he..

arjun started calling riya..but could not..

arjun:ye phone kyo nahi lag raha..

shree n chotu too try to call her..but in vain..

sam:kya hua..?wait mere phone se try karta hu..

but still not worked..(altaf had hack all team's phone..so they are not working..)

shree(doubtfully):ham me se kisi ka phone work nahi kar raha..??

he check something..

shree:sir..hamare phone kisine hack kiye he..aur shayad riya ka bhi..

sam:dam it..do something shree..

within next 2 minutes shree started his own phone again..

shree:sir..mera phone thik kar liya he..aap mere phone se riya ko phone kar sakte he..

sam call riya..but riya's phone too hacked..

sam:nahi lag raha..

shree:ho sakta he riya ka phone bhi hack kiya gaya ho..

sam:kisi safe jagah matlab riya kaha ja sakti he..?

aayesha:ek toh aapke ghar..ya fir arjun sir ke ghar..

sam:right..

sam call to security incharge of his home..but he come to know that riya had not reached there yet..

then he call to arjun's home's security incharge..n come to know that riya had just reached to arjun's home..

sam:thank god/..riya rawte ke ghar pahoch gayi he..

arjun took sigh of relief..

arjun:uhhh.uuu...god..thanks.riya safe he..

all look to him strangly...while roshni glaring him angrily..

arjun:ummm..i mean...arnav aur riya safe he..

sam:aayesha..roshni tum yah ape sab sambhalo..hame rawte ke ghar jana hoga..

both girls nodded...n boys rush to suv..

arjun:shree..mere ghar ke maid ke number pe call kare toh riya se baat ho sakti he..

arjun call to maid..

maid:ji..sahib..

arjun:riya he waha..??riya ko phone do..

maid handover phone to riya..

riya:arjun..dekho yaha pe..

arjun:riya..shant ho jao..tum thik ho na..?aur arnav..?

riya:ham dono safe he..

arjun:don't worry..ham log bas 10 minute me waha pahoch jayege..

riya:hmm..

arjun:par ye sab tha kya..?i mean tum mall me..?aur arnav..??

riya told him how altaf had give her 2 choice to choose arnav or to duty..how she tried to contact them but could not..then how she decides to take arnav first from arjun's home n to reach mall..

arjun(angrily):altaf..isse toh mein choduga nahi..ye toh accha hua ke tum mall me time me pahoch gayi..

riya:ha..mein mall pahochi tab bomb blast hone me sirf 5 minutes the..meine socha ke agar mein bomb blast hone se nahi rok payi toh..arnav ko bhi bomb blast me(she pause)fir meine roshni mam ko exit pe dekha..aur arnav ko unhe deke mein mall me aayi..

all hearing whole conversation of ariya..

shree:roshni mam exit pe kya kar rahi thi..?

riya don't know what to say..

riya:I don't know..

chotu(with disgust in his voice):ham sab waha apne jaan pe khelake bomb dundne me lage hue the..aur roshni mam apni jaan bacha rahi thi..

then all s eyes turn to look arjun..arjun face too showing same disguse feeling..

riya:hello..?tum log sun rahe ho..??

arjun:hmm..pari..bolo..

riya don't like he call her pari..but this is not time to fight on it..

riya:bomb diffuse hone ke baad jab me bahar aayi toh meine dekah ke altaf ke aadmi roshni mam aur arnav pe attack kar rahe he..waha se kisi tarah arnav ko safe nikalna tha..kyo ki 1-2 minutes me aap sab log bahar aa hi jate aur roshni mam ki help karte..issilye mein waha se arnav ko leke chali gayi..meine socha ke sam ke ghar jana jyada secure hoga..par bike kharab ho gayi..altaf ke 2 aadmi mera picha kar hi rahe the..aur waha se arjun ka gahr 5 minutes ki duri pet ha..issilye meine socha ke arjun ke ghar pe jati hu..

arjun:riya...tum fikar mat karo..ham bas waha pahoch hi rahe he..pehale tum sare door n windows lock karlo..

riya:ya right..

she closed all doors n windows..

arjun:arnav kya kar raha he..?

riya:maid usse khana khila rahi he..

arjun:hmm..tumne sare doors n windows band kar li na..?

riya:ha..bas hall ki ek window band karni reh gayi he..usse band kar rahi hu..

she was about to close the window..but what she saw made her shock..

arjun:riya..?r u there..?

riya:arjun...?tumhare ghar ke gate pe 2 constables the right..?

arjun:ha kyo..?

riya:woh waha nahi he..

arjun(shocked):what..??thik se dekho..shayad dusari jagah khade ho..gate pe 2 constables..aur each side wall ke pass 3 constables aise pure 5 constables he..

riya checking it..

riya(horrified):no arjun..ek bhi constable nazar nahi aa raha..

arjun:bas riya..tum fikar mat karo..ham bas 5 minute me pahochege..

riya again look outside through window..n what she saw make her more horrified..

riya(horrified voice):woh aa gaya he arjun..

arjun:kya..kyon..?

riya:altaf..entering through gate with his 8-9 mens..

arjun(yell in worry):riyaa..

riya:don't worry arjun..jab tak mein zinda hu..altaf ki parchai(shadow)bhi apne bte pe nahi padne dungi..

she cut the call..

arjun(yelling):riya..hello..riya..

all looking to him with horrified expression..

arjun(yell):sam..drive fast..

sam started driving as fast as possible..

but suddenly he stop suv with jerk..because altaf's men attack on them..

sam:dam it..ye log hame arjun ke ghar tak pahochne nahi dene ke liye he..finish them..

he order his team..

all started fighting with goons..but in mind they all worried for riya..how she will able to handle altaf n his 8-9 men lonely..

 

arjun's home:

riya take out her gun n get ready for fight..

riya take maid n arnav to bedroom..

riya(to maid):kuch bhi ho jaye...chahe kuch bhi..par iss room se bahar mat nikalna..

maid nooded with horrified expression..

riya was about to leave but again turn..

riya(to maid):don't worry..mere hote hue tumhe aur arnav ko koi touch bhi nahi kar payega..

she come out of bedroom..n lock it properly..

she hide herself behind a big piller in hall..

n at the next moment she hear a loud bang of breaking door  of home harshlessly..

 

Precap:

Riya(breathing heavily):arju...arjun..promise me..tum arnav ko kabhi kuch nahi hone doge..tum usse har khushi doge...tum usse bahot pyar karoge..aur tum..usse kabhi maa ki kami mehsoos nahi hone doge..promise me..promise me arjun..

Arjun(with teary eyes..holding her hand):I promise u riya..i promise,...

Small smile crept on her lips..

Arjun keep looking to her smily lips..what had hidden in that smile..pain..sadness..love..lose..or something more..

The smile faited away..suddenly arjun look to her..her black core,deep,dove shape eyes had shut..

Arjun(yell):riyaaa...no...no...riyaaa..

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Its awesome update di
Riya fighted very well
Now what will happen
Altaf came with his men
Now what will riya do alone
Please di don't kill her
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
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yaaar ...dont killl her pls
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plz cont soon
ria stood as a real fighter
she saved both her son n peple
arjun called her pari
oh god precap is damn scary hat happen to ria
plz update soon, plz dont make her die before ariya unite
plz plz plz cont sooonnn
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Nice update Rita save arnav and
Mall also precap look interesting
Update soon
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Scary
Pls Riya ko galti se v marna math
I want to see Ariya together
post soon
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Awwwsssmmm Updat
Loved it
Supperbly written
Amazing...
Precap looks sceary
Hope Riya will be fine
Cint Sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Are yaaawwwrrr...
Riya ko mat maro please...
Mujhe accha nahi lagraha hai...
Arnav Riya ke bina kya karega?
Chote se bacche ko apni Maa se dur mat karo.
Beginning was scary yet awesome.
Fight was great.
Riya ne Arnav ko bachaya aur mall ke logo ko bhi.
Roshni kitni selfish hai.. Khudko bachana chahti hai...
Oh God.
Arjun ke ghar pe Altaf ke aadmi attack kar rahe hai.
Arnav aur uski maid ko kisi kamre mein safely rakh ke aaye hai.
Mall mein bomb diffused hogaya...
Oh God.
Precap is too much scary...
Meko rona araha hai.
Please continue sooonish.
Thanks for the pm.