**MY LOVE FOR YOU IS ETERNAL**--sandhir ss.#Updated Chp 9#.... - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago

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😊 wow nice update...continue asap...😊


Thnx dear😳
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Originally posted by: andy1245

suprn update yaar next asap plz plz plz plzzz can't wait 😊


thanx dear nd updating now...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Heyya people...I'm back with the most awaited part...

I've tried my best to express the emotional conflicts the two souls can undergo after meeting after 2 long years. It is the toughest part till I've written. Sorry if it didn't match your expectations.

Do drop in your views guys and criticism is more than welcomed. Do review and suggest. They help me to improve and write more...

So here we go-----------


CHAPTER-8

"LOVE RAINS TILL ETERNITY"

There stood he, her Randhir. Yes, in front of her eyes stood her love, her everything. She still couldn't believe her eyes. But he had changed, changed a lot.

His face no more had a cute, innocent expression on it. It had a surprising toughness, as if reality had whipped him hard with its slack. His face was covered with unshaved beard. His eyes were dark, tired. That spark his eyes had was lost. The proud, confident, arrogant smirk he carried which made him RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT, the best, was lost.

She was shocked. Was he her Randhir? Was he the same Randhir, she knew? Was he that Randhir whose one smile could flutter a girl's heart and create jitters in her stomach? Was he the same Randhir?

"Di, meet Randhir Singh Shekhawat, my buddy. Older than me but still my best friend. Aur dar mat jana di, he hasn't shaved for one whole week. Very careless to himself and arrogant from outside but an awesome person at heart," he smiled.

But the two souls were in their own world, lost in each other.

Randhir couldn't still believe it. Was she really standing in frnt of his eyes? If he want, could he touch her, feel her, kiss her? Could it be possible in anyway? Was life giving him a second chance to live? Could his fate, which always betrayed him, be so merciful?

But she hadn't changed a bit also. That same proud smile, that bright face, that beautiful deep eyes which could make any guy fall head over heels for her. Nothing had changed in her. She was the same Sanyukta, he knew, he loved, he craved for.

To him, it was his insensibility, insecurities, lack of trust on his ladylove that resulted in their separation and end of their eternal love.

But he was wrong. Can love ever end? Nah. Love can never dies. It may remain suppressed, subsided in our hearts but it stays. We may stop showing our love to that person but we can never stop loving that person. Our love for them never dies, for love is eternal. It rains till immortality.

"You know di, two years back, when I met him, he was Mr. Handsome. If you had seen him then, you could never recognize him today. In these two years, he had been too rough on himself. No food, no care. God only knows for what he tortured himself like this. For a reason best known to him, di. How much I tell him to take care of himself, but he'll never listen," Adi complained.

A lone tear tickled down her eye. Why, Randhir? Why had you done this to yourself? Why? Had I broken you beyond repair?

She had always blamed herself for their divorce. To her, it was her impatience, stubbornness, anger that led to the position they were then.

And today, after seeing him, her guilt grew more. She became more vulnerable. Yes, she was the sole person to be held responsible for his condition, rather their condition.

"Hey, di, are u ok?" Adi shook he lightly.

"Hmm...I'm fine. Something went inside my eye. I'll go and wash my eyes once," Sanyukta replied and lowered her eyes which was filled with tears then.

Randhir smiled. His own eyes had tears.

He was right. She was still the same. She was the same Sanyukta, miserable in lying.

"Ok, di but before you leave, say a hello to Randhir na," Adi was surprised. Sanyukta never met his guests and frnds like that. She was always cheerful with them but today she hadn't said a word to Randhir. Moreover, as if she was ignoring him and was behaving oddly, what's wrong?

Sanyukta looked at Adi once and then at Randhir. As her eyes she stared at him, her eyes began to well up again. She lowered her gaze, badly trying to control the tears that were threatening to fall and extended her hand to him.

Randhir took her hand. That same touch, warmth. He craved for this touch for two long years.

Sanyukta looked up with tears filled eyes and tried hard to smile but in vain. His touch after so many years was making her weak. Yes, he still had this much effect on her mind, soul, body.

"Hi Sanyukta," Randhir smiled with glistening eyes.

Adi interrupted, "hey Bro, how do know her name? I never told you."

They were brought out of their trance. They immediately withdrew their hands.

Randhir was short of words.

Adi knew Sanyukta but he never recognized him as her husband. That meant, they didn't knew about her past. Like him, she had also treasured their memories to herself only. And he had no right to inform them about something, she herself never told.

"Umm...you only told me on phone, Adi," he managed to utter recovering from his reverie. He tried to blink away his tears.

"What? When?" Adi was confused.

"Leave it, Adi. Go and meet Sulu," Sanyukta tried to divert the topic. Her voice still heavy with tears.

"Yeah, good idea. Di you also come with us na," Adi suggested.

"No, Adi. I'll meet her later. Have a lot of work here," She lied. She needed to be alone, to register this sudden retreat of her past in her present.

"But di..."

Randhir cut him off.

"Its ok, Adi. Let her be. Let us go," Randhir knew the reason behind her deny.

Sanyukta stared at him. He could still understand her without even her uttering a single word.

"Ok, fine," Adi confirmed.

And they started for the outhouse.

Sanyu was expecting him to turn back at her just for once. But he didn't. Maybe he was angry on her. Maybe he still hated her. Maybe he had no feelings for her anymore. Maybe he had moved on. Maybe he had a family now...

Her eyes again welled up with tears. The thought of him being with another girl cringed her heart. The thought of him having no feelings left for her ached her heart.

She turned and dashed to her room. She couldn't hold back her tears anymore. They badly needed to flow. The pain in her she had to let go.

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Hwz it????

Bad or worst???

Do drop in ur views my lovely sweet readers...Love u all a lot😳...Thnx for ur support guys😃



IMP A/N: Guys I'm going maybe for a month or more. Reason is my exams for which I'm just least prepared. I'm feeling like crying to leave at such a point but have to go. Plz forgive me. Whoever feeling to stab me, are free to say it😭. I know its unfair😭. SORRYYY...



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Posted: 10 years ago
Yayyy get aside all and let me do a happy dance 😆
I am first ..i am first
Srry got a bit overexcited 😳
Coming to the update
I did not know yr u write so well
So well portrayed emotions
But feeling bad fr sanyu 😭
And still not prepared fr exams 😆
I told u na that everything will be fine
Take it easy 😛
But awsm chappy yr
Nd haan jb bhi next updte kro na
Just tell me in advance
Will be prepared 😆
Thnx fr pm yr 😃
Always luv u so much ..muahh
Sanya 😳

Edited by Sagl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
An emotional reunion
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yr I m happy n sad too

Happy bcz u updted
N sad bcz u r going to inactive for a month

Ye exams kbi chain se ni jeene dete h

Really authors note broke my heart
Bt I totally understand study comes first
Use second priority ni kr skte

So don't worry
N if possible updte whenever tym permits

Now coming to the update

U wrote it beautifully

Their emtns n inner turmoil were so flawlessly portrayed

Hatts off sweety 👏

I really wanna in dese years how was rd life
What hppnd in the past

So much to know bt hve to wait


Luv u yr will miss u

All the best for exams 👍🏼
Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi rakhi...awesome update. U write so well both sanyukta and randhir emotions that they are felling metting after 2 yrs.
BEST OF LUCK FOR YOUR EXAMS and don't say sorry we understand.
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg! awesome! the emotions of randhir and sanyukta are perfectly penned! i love u!
u again lefting us at this point??😭anyways, all the best for ur exams! till then, will be waiting...
Edited by prushasil - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was amazing yaar
sandhir 1st meet was amazing and emotional too
best of luck of your exams dear
and next part soon
lots of luv
sakshi

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