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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 10

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Geet : sir

Aapko baarish pasand hai

Yaariyan ve... Yaariyan
Yaariyan ve... yaariyan ve..
Yaariyaan... yaa...



Maan : why you want to know Miss khurana

Geet : fir se Miss khurana

Sir

Maan : am not interested to hear your lecture

Geet : sir it's not lecture

Maan : tum apne kaam pe dhayn do

Toh jyada acha hai tumhare liye

Geet : whi toh kr rhi hu

Maan : apne boss se bhs krna tumhara kaam hai

Geet : no sir

.

Sir I love rain

Mujhe lagta hai

Aapko bhi baarish pasand hongi

Aap itne bhi khadoos nhi ho

Maan : khadoos

Ab tumne ke sbd kaha mein tumhe yhi bich raste mein chod dunga

Geet : lagta hai

Aapko logo ko bich raha mein chod dene ka bhut shok hai

.

He sees towards her...

Geet : sir mein toh bs mjak kr rhi thi

.

.

I love the rain the way it feels on my skin.

Just like I love your touch and the way I know I win.


Maan : what

Geet : sir this is not for you

Ye toh maine bs us couple ko dekhke kaha

.

Waha dekhiye

How he hugging her...

Maan : hotel aa gya hai

Geet : hmm

***********

He sits in hotel room & thinking about geetanjali words...

lagta hai

Aapko logo ko bich raha mein chod dene ka bhut shok hai

Iska aas pass hona mujhe humesha mere past se kyun jod deta hai

Flashback in

He held her wrist make stop ...

Geet : maan

Mausam kharab ho raha hai

Kbhi bhi baarish ho sakti hai

Hume niche chalna chaiye

Maan : nhi


Dil mera hai nasamajh kitna

He pulls her & encircled hand around her waist ... Rain started & starts drenching the both...

Besabar ye bewkoof bada
Chahta hai kitna tujhe
Khud magar nahi jaan sakaa

Her hair stoping him to seeing her face... in thundering of light giving him light view of her face ... He touched her face, placing curls behind her ears, but she placed dupatta in mid...

Maan try to remove her dupatta... But she denied...

Maan : geet that's not fair

Tumne mujhe toh dekh liya

Par ab tak mein tumhe nhi dekh paaya

Geet : yhi aapki saza hai

Maan : saza

Kisliye

Geet : mujhe pareshaan krne ke liye

Maan : pareshaani mujhe huyi hai

Toh saza mujhe deni chaiye

Geet : aap mujhe punish karonge

Maan : ha

Geet : ok

Bolo kya punishment hai

He comes close to her and plant a kiss on her earlobe then gave a wet long sucking kiss on d curve of her neck.


Is dard-e-dil ki sifarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mill jaaye isey woh baarish
Jo bhigaa de poori tarah


Geet : maan

She hugged him tightly; he also hugged her back...

.

Is dard-e-dil ki sifarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mill jaaye isey woh baarish
Jo bhigaa de poori tarah

Geet : maan its too late

Maan : hmm

Before going she give peck on his cheek & left...


Yaariyan ve... Yaariyan...

Flashback out

Mr. Maan singh khurana

This is only start

Abhi toh bhut lamba safar baki hai

.

Kal aapka birthday hai

Jo hum sath manayenge

After all humari shaadi ke baad ye phla birthday honga jisme hum sath celebrate karenge

.

Thanks to dad

.

12 bjne mein bs 5 minute hai

.

Let's start

***********

Someone knocked on his door...

Maan : is waqt kaun hai

He opened the door...

Maan : tum

.

Tum pagal ho kya

Geet : no sir

Maan : yaha kya kr rhi ho

Geet : sir aapse baat krne aayi hu

Maan : time dekha hai tumne

Geet : nhi sir

aap hi ab dekhke bata do

maan : geet am so tired

Please leave

Geet : thank you sir

Maan : thanks ?

Geet : sir aapne mujhe mere naam se bulaya hai phli baar

Is khushi mein celebration toh bnta hai

He realized, he call her with name not with surname...

Geet : sir bs ek minute

Waiter

Waiter comes with trolly...

Geet : thanks

She gives tip to him & he left...

Maan : ye sb kya hai

Geet : sir aapki aankhen kamzor ho gyi hai

.

Cake hai sir

Maan : mujhe bhi dikh raha hai

Par mere room mein kyun laayi ho

Geet : sir abhi toh bataya

For celebration

Phli baar aapne mujhe mere naam se bulaya

She sits on bed...

Geet : sir come & sit

Aapka hi room mein

.

Firstly he is so confused, and now she irritating him... he so much angry... he held her wrist & make stand on floor...

Maan : tum khud ko smjhti kya ho

.

Geet : sir jo mein hu

Maan : tumhe kya lagta hai

Ase mujhe irritate krne se

Mere aas pass gumne se tum mujhe apne jaal mein fsa longi

Tum jaisi ladkiyo ko mein achi tarah jaanta hu

Geet : aapko kya lagta hai

Ase ladke fas jaate hai

.

Aur ab tak aap kitni ladkiyo ko jaan paaye hai

He shocked to hear her words... in her face no sadness or hurt...she calmly says to him...

Geet : aapko kya laga

Aap asa bolonge

Aur mein rone lagungi

Ya ye kahungi

Sir mein asi ladki nhi huyi hu

.

I openly saying to you sir

I ... like ... you

Toh usme burai kya hai

.

Now let's cut cake

Dekho 12 kb ke bj gaye

Happy birthday sir

Maan : how you know

Geet : geetanjali jisse pasand krti hai

Uske baare mein sb khabar rakhti hai

.

Sir please jaldi se cut kro na

Mujhe cake khana hai

His phone buzzed...

Maan : hello dad

Dad : happy birthday beta

Maan : thanks dad

Dad : maan geetanjali tumhare sath toh hai na

Maan : ji

Aap worried kyun lag rhe ho

Dad : maine usse call kiya kyi baar

Par usne uthaya nhi

Pata nhi wo cake leke puchu ya nhi tumhare pass

Bs yhi jaanana tha

Maan : dad aapne kaha usse

Dad : ha

Kyun

Maan : kuch nhi

Dad : tumne cake cut kr liya kya

Maan : abhi nhi dad

Dad : chlo fir cut kro

Par usse phle camera on kro

I want to see you

Maan : ji

He cut the cake & take cake close to phone...

Dad : maan geet ko khilyo na

Maan : what

Dad : oh common

Tum inte old fashioned toh nhi lagte mujhe

Maan take cake near to her, she happily takes it...then she feed him...

& hidely pick little cake on her hand & placed on his face...

Geet : now birthday complete

Maan shouted on her...

Geet : dekha aapne dad

Jb dekho mujhpe bs ase hi gussa krte hai

Maan : dad

Geet realized what she said in front of him...

Geet : kyun nhi kh sakti

Mere dad ki age ke hai

.

Aur pata nhi kyun

Aaj mujhe apne dad ki bhut yaad aa rhi thi

Bs ussi sb mein , mein aapko dad kh gyi

I hope ko aapko bura nhi laga honga

Dad : not at all beta

Tum meri beti jaisi hi toh hai

Tum mujhe ab dad hi bulana

Maan : dad par

Dad : maan relax

Good night both of you

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Posted: 10 years ago
love it love it it was sooo aweosme
love the way geet irratte maan
now my confusion clear geet meet him with veil on her face sorry mera brain thoda late chalta hai
celebating habby brithday n she openly said she like him wow geet love u yaar


omggg me first
yahooo

Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice
very funny
geet is taunting maan which make him to go in past n he thinks her talk make him remember past events with geet in hp
geet make maan speachless by say openly that she like him
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part
geet irritating maan [:)]
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved the update. Geet very smartly celebrated Maan's birthday without him realizing anything.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
loved how geet is irritating maan!!!!!!!
loved the update!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update.love it.
thanx for update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh.. time for mrs.khurana to sudharofy mr.khurana.. nice hun.. lol izhar bhi kardiya or geet ne cale bhi khila diya.. not bad.. cont soon hun
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Posted: 10 years ago

nice update. Geet making Maan crazy. She had such an good idea of celebrating Maan's birthday at midnight. Now I get it why Maan doesn't recognize her becuase he hasn't seen her face.

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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update
geet taunting maan 😃 and irritating him 😊 cont soon

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