PARCHHAIYAN - ateet ki Updated EPILOGUE on 20-1-2015 /P 142 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
awesome & interesting update. looks like geet have past . another side maan impressed with geet 😉 & he indirectly told this to his mom .
waiting for next
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
nice update.
geet is really a professional and maan is amazed with her work.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry for not replying each and everyone seprately
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PART - 3


Geet's past wont let her live peacefully. Darkness of her past life haunted her,make her eyes filled with tears. Her aunt stroking her back,composing her till she again falls in sleep. In her motherly warmth she feels protected and soon went to sleep. She push her down gently from her embrace and tugged her under sheet. She caressed her head softly. 'God knows when she get rid of her painful memories. God pls help her.' She get worried for her and pray for her. She stood up and leave the side lamp on.

Sun dawn and Maan get up quickly to reached his office. 'aaj aap badi jaldi ready ho gaye?' She teased him knotting her brows in a suspecious manner.

Maan stare her. 'mom..'

'mazak kar rae hai. Aap kare to theek,hum kyu nahi kar sakte?', both smiled and after having his bfast he reached to office.

Geet again masked her pain. Her face is stern carrying no emotions. Her aunt knows but in past 6 years she learnt about her so never invade in those territories which she wants to hide. Geet to reached office.

Life again run on its pace. Sun dawn, sun set,nothing bring change in her daily routine life. She came and engrossed herself in her work,without bothering what is happening around her.

3 months passed,when Maan take the charge of his office,but hardly she noticed him. For her he was only her owner,while with every passing day Maan getting affected by her hard work and dedication towards work. Her honesty,her silence,her intelligence to handle the projects unknowingly affected him too much. It wasnt like he is dependend on her,but yes he trust her completely. He knows if he gave some work to her,she will not let him down.

Unknowingly this impression turn into an attraction and soon into a love. She simply affted him in many ways. The girl he always wanted to be in his life is Geet. Without seeing her he felt empty and breathless. Gradually whole office noticed his falling for her except Geet,as she locked herself from outer world.


One casual day Geet took off from office as her aunt is not well. Maan felt restlessnes. He couldnt even able to concentrate on his work. His heart is pounding. 'gosh,she made me mad. Now i cant even able to concentrate on my work.' Maan was so frustrated and threw his file in anger which directly hit the head of his Assistant Adi,who is coming to gave him some important papers. Poor soul's timing was wrong and he came in front of his file,which is flying in air by him.


'ahhh' he winced in pain and Maan's ears alerts him.


Maan's eyes widened. 'Adi knock to karna chahiye tha na.'


'i am sorry sir. Its my mistake. i knocked but apne suna hi nahi. I think i dont do it properly.' holding his forehead he bend on his knees and collect the papers scattred everywhere. 'sir ye currior aaya hai apke liye.' Adi gave it to him. Maan damped it on table. Adi noticed his frustration. In past 3 months it was first time when he saw him like this. 'what happened sir?' he couraged and asked.

In return Maan glared him and turn to another side. Already whole staff assumed what is happening with him. Adi cleared his thought and come closer to him. 'sir if u wont mind i have a solution.' he said meakly loosing his tie.

Maan stared him in amusement.'kya matlab?'


'sir file fenk k koi fayeda nahi. Files uthane se fayeda hai.' he said teasingly but Maan stared him. 'sorry sir. Let me clear my self.' he went out and soon brought one file with him. 'sir ispe Geet mam k sign chahiye.' he showed her raising his brows.


'ha to?' Maan wont get him.

'kuchh nahi sir main peon ko mam k ghar bhej deta hu file leke. Wo sign b lelega or jo file mam k pas hai project ki wo b le aayega.' Adi try his level best to hint him.


When Maan not replied Adi start moving. Suddenly Maan stood up and went to him. 'adi ye file mujhe do. Mujhe..usi side kuchh kam hai to...' Maan hesitated. He was caught he knows still covering his desperation.


'sir aap peon ka kaam karenge?' Adi teased him but his another glare shut him. 'main samjh gaya sir. Sir ab zada time mat waste kariye,ispe urgent sign chahiye.' Adi winked and left and Maan stared him in amusement. He chuckled on his condition.

'to sari duniya ko pata hai sivaye uske.' he flip th file and went outside. Maan took his car and stopped only when he reached to her home. Bell buzz and Geet found Maan. She was in shock seeing him here.


'kon hai beta?' Her aunt asked and appered there.

'sir aap yaha?' Geet wont found exact words. It was completely a surprize for her.


'Geet you are so careless. Tum project ki file ghar kyu le aai?' Maan masked his feeling and pretend that he came only for project file.

'bete ye?' Her aunt came there.


'massi ye hai humare new chairman Mr. MSK.' she introduced him.


'ha to ab kya unhe darwaje pe hi khada rakhna hai?' Her aunt remind her to welcome him inside.


Geet realized her mistake. 'i am sorry sir. Please come in.' She welcome him leaving the door. 'sir she is my aunt. Wo aaj massi ki tabiyat theek nahi thi na,isliye mujhe off lena pada. Aap baithiye main file leke aati hu.' Geet was talkong calmly while his eyes struck on her face. He wont hear what she said exactly but lost in her.


Maan came to senses when she disappered from his sight and her aunt asked him to sit comfortably. Maan scanned all around and noticed her aunt. 'excuse me if i am not wrong your full name is Mrs. Aasha Chawala.' he gave strain on his forhead.


'ya right but how would you know this?' her aunt get confused.


'aunt apne pehchana nahi? Main Maan,Mrs. Sakshi Khurana ka beta. Sakshi khurana apki childhood friend.' Maan tod her about his mother and remind her off her friend.


Her eyes widened with happines. 'OMG. You are Maan,Sakshi's son. I am sorry beta. Par last jab tume dekha tha tab tum sirf 13 saal k the.' she apolozised and went near him. She kissed on his forehead and asked about Sakshi her best friend.


'its ok aunt. Apne Canada kyu chhod diya tha. Apko pata mom daily apko yaad karti hai. Or aap yaha hai to apne mom ko contact kyu nahi kiya?' Maan showered question on her.


'i am sorry beta...wo...' she even couldnt complete when Maan intruots her again.


'anyways ye sab clearification aap mom ko dena. Parso sunday hai. Main khud ko apke ghar invite kar raha hu. Main or mom aayenge aap khud hi unhe samjhana. I am sure she gona angry on you.' Maan got something which is beyond explainantion. His heart is bouncing in rejoice.


Geet came there with file meantime. 'sir apki file.' she said simply.


'keep it Geet kal le aana. Ok aunt i am leaving right now. See you on sunday,so be ready for it.' Maan said in hurry and left from there with a big smile on his face.


Geet wont get his behaviour. 'inhe kya ho gaya? Itni durr file k liye khud aaye or liye bina hi chale gaye. Weired.' she said to herself.




PRECAP :- Maan proposed Geet



Edited by richa_kapoor - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
nice update ...
Maan teases geet 👍🏼
geet nightmare 😲
continue soon ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96

wow lovely naughty cute update..te way my maan ki naughty teasing but his geet baby took as a taunt and shouting at te workers was lovely cute.. now my maan fida on his geet and want to research his geet but maan be careful u r going to fall on her, but she is shreni so better be care ful maan babu..i love te update
Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
maan is impressed with geet's dedication to her work
and maan and his mom have a lovely relation
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Amazing part
maan teased geet but she took it as an insult
maan has a great bonding with his mom
the perfect girl for maan is geet n only geet
geet had a nightmare n she got scared
what is in her past
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
maan is new chairman n geet is one among the mds
maan testing geets ability
n was impressed
his mom cribbing him 2 marry
n his dreams of his girl suits geet
his wink assures he is thinking of geet
geet has some past
what is it
nice parts
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Posted: 10 years ago
both the parts are wonderful... congrats on this new story...

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