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part-73




Few days passed..

Time for the wedding of Anie and Rahul was just few days ahead..all the preparations were in the last stages..Maan suggested both families to select a joint venue for the marriage as Maan and Geet both were the sibling of Bride and groom..so it was difficult for both to run from KM to HM and HM to KM to join the rituals of both sides..It solved Maan's two purposes at the same time. ,First he and Geet could enjoy the wedding fully from both sides and second...it was their own Punarvivah too..as Maan promised Geet to marry with all the rituals and that too without being noticed by anyone..

Geet and Maan helped Gautam and Sudha too in arranging everything ..They did not let them feel that they were alone..Rahul was not able to handle everything as he was the groom and was held with his own preparations too ..

Gautam and Sudha were touched with the gestures of Maan as he did not let them feel for a moment that he was their SIL not son..

It was midnight . Maan and Geet were sleeping...Suddenly Maan started to toss in the bed..

He after a long time was having that dream again..(Yash Geet,Maan and Arpita going somewhere and Yash and Arpita fall from the hill and when Geet tries to go behind Yash Maan holds her hand to save her from going behind Yash and shouts out of fear) GEEETTT and he woke up from his sleep .


.Geet too heard him shouting and she to woke up..she looked at Maan he was sitting in the bed..panting badly and was covered with sweat..

Geet got scared to see him like that and asked him- Maan what happened ? Why were you shouting like this?..

Maan looked at Geet and he cupped her face and kissed all over her face-Geet tum theek ho na.?What were you doing ?..why were you going behind them leaving me?

Geet was surprised to see him talking like that-Maan..why you are asking me all this? I was here with you. Where I will go? I m perfectly fine but you are not looking fine..What happened..See you are all sweaty..kya hua Maan..koi sapna dekha kya? She handed him the glass of water which he took and emptied it..he had calmed down now..Geet wiped off his sweat with the towel..

Geet-Maan aisa kya dekha aapne sapne me jo aap itna darr gaye?

Maan-Geet..I don't know why I m having this dream again now..I mean earlier it was fine because I thought that I had something in my heart for you which was hidden from all.But why now?

Geet-Maan I m not getting you..what did you see in your dream?

And Maan narrated to her what he saw in his dream?

Geet was shocked to hear.and she said-But Maan I m here with you so many months but it never happened..it's first time that you were shouting my name like maniac..

Maan-haan Geet.I thought that we are married now and even love each other so I have got rid of that dream.but I saw it again

Geet-Maan..I think it's just a coincident..may be recently we met Suman so you must be thinking about our past for some days..otherwise what that dream means now..we are together.

Maan nodded - May be you are right Geet

Geet- Now sleep.. And both again laid down in bed,,maan held Geet as if she was going to leave him .

Geet-Maan I m here only..calm down..Seeing him restless she took him in her arms and made her sleep by putting his head on her shoulder..

Maan encircled his arms around her and slept.

In the morning they woke up and Geet asked Maan if he was fine or not and Maan nodded his head and smiled-I m fine Geet. Thanks

Geet frowned- Thanks? Kisliye?

Maan-for handling me so well last night

Geet-Oh for that ..Ok..mujhe bhi bahut saare thanks bolne hain..maine kabhi bola nahin na apko..How many time you handled me,but it's time to thank now..You count I m starting

1-Thank s for being good friend of mine since I came here

2-Thanks for supporting me in everything even if Yash denied . You knew that sometimes I was wrong too.

3-Thanks for taking care of me after Yash left me.

4 -Thanks for saving me from the wrath of taiji

5-Thanks for saving me from the clutches of Suman and Taiji.

6-Thanks for being with me to handle me whenever I was alone and was not able to share my heart to anyone

Maan was looking at her with open mouth- what she is doing? And then he realized that he thanked her for being his support at night and she was doing the same

Geet opend her mouth to thank him 7th time but Maan closed her mouth by putting his finger on her lips-Chup bilkul chup..tufaan mail..

Geet tried to speak but he did not let her-Chup...Not a word more

Geet removed his hand-Arrey you were thanking me na so I was doing the same..

Maan-Ok baba.I give up.I m taking my thanks back..

Geet-That's better Maan..Remember it in future too..and raised her eyebrow looking at him and man shook his head-Ok as you wish.. but I m saying it with my heart Geet I m feeling very light today as I m not alone to bear that dream alone from now. he pecked on her temple and again said - Ok..now enough of the emotional talks ..it's time for the good morning wishes...wo to maine kiya hi nahin

He moved his lips down on her face but this time she smartly ditched him and ran towards the washroom. Maan looked at her and smiled a little. The little bit gloominess which he was feeling because of the dream vanished quickly and he was feeling light..

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At breakfast table Priya asked Geet to take leave from FH ..as Pinky and Rohit were there to look after it. She needed Geet in doing the arrangements..and Geet agreed as she already knew that she had to stay at home for few days before marriage to help Anie and Priya..priya had already told her so Geet was prepared for that but she realized that she did not tell maan about it..

Maan frowned at her.as if asking- what is this?..Geet looked at him with puppy eyes mouthing a sorry..

Maan asked Geet to come in to the room at the pretext of some work.

She entered in to the room and Maan locked the door.

He caught her after closing the room-what is this?..You did not tell me that you are not coming to FH from now.

Geet-wo I m sorry..I forgot to tell you.

Maan-Sorry? What sorry..? you should have told me about this an advance

Geet-Excuse me ,I don't work for you so why should I tell you about this?

Maan-I don't know about that you will have to pay back for hiding it from me

Geet-What? Maan I did not hide it. it was just like I forgot to tell you.

Maan -so what..you did a mistake and I want you to pay back and he pulled her near him and kissed her deep on her lips.

They parted and Geet pouted-Maan aaj kal aab bas bahaane dhoondhte rahte hain.


Maan-Is it? if you say that I seek excuses.To theek hai..That kiss was for hiding the truth from me,..and now I m going to miss you at KC..so be ready to pay back for that in the evening..Ok sweet heart,,

Geet's mouth opened hearing that she was going to say something but Maan's phone buzzed..he lookind in to it . It was Shekhar. He received the call-Hi Shekhar Good morning

Shekhar-Maan it's my wedding anniversary today..we are celebrating it in our farmhouse near Gurgaon..I want you and Geet there in the evening

Maan-Ok..many happy returns of the day..give our wishes to your wife too.and yes we will be there in the evening. Bye see you in the evening..

Maan -Geet It's Shekar's wedding anniversary. he is inviting us . Be ready in the evening..

Geet noded and Maan said-But I not going to leave you.. Be ready for the payback..Till then enjoy your day Sweetheart..and he left smirking..Geet was standing there with her open mouth..and then she smiled and blushed at what Maan said..

They both came down and Maan informed his parents about their evening program..

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It was almost evening and Priya got the call from the jewelers that they were having some emergency and were going to shut their shop for few days so they wanted them to collect their jewelry..Priya called Ram and told him the situation..Ram asked her to come at jewelry shop with Anie..and he would join them directly at the shop with the payments..Geet did not accompany Anie and Priya as sshe and Maan were going to attend Shekhar's party

Maan dropped Ram on the jewelry shop and drove off to home..He reached home..and Suresh was there..Maan asked Suresh about Geet and he told him that she was in the kitchen..and he informed him too that he was going to the doctor as his son was not well. Maan was concerned-Kya hua baby ko..kuchh serious to nahin hai na?

Suresh-Nahin bhaiya..weather change ho raha hai to bas thoda cold hai..

Maan-Hmm.. and he gave him some money -ye lo and take him to the child specialist..koi laparwahi nain honi chhaiye uske treatment me..

Suresh-Bhiaya I have money.I don't need it

Maan-I know ...phir bhi rakh lo..i don't want any carelessness..aaj kal pata nahin chalta ki medicine me kitne paise lag jaayen

Suresh-Ji ..and he took money from him..Suresh and his family had a special place in Maan and Geet's hearts for whatever Suresh did for them


Maan entered in to the kitchen and found Geet busy in some cooking..

He encircled his arms around her waist and Geet was startled first and then became at ease feeling that touch..

Geet-Aaa gaye aap?

Maan-haan..he hid his face between her shoulder and neck-I missed you today Geet

Geet-I know it very well.You did not miss me but your object of teasing ..hai na..

Maan-That means you too missed my teasing..wow that's a new piece of information for me.

Geet- when did I say that I missed you?..I enjoyed a lot today..

Maan smiled-Liar..his chin was still on Geet's shoulder

Geet -Not at all..I m saying true.. I watched TV..talked a lot with maa and Anie...I m enjoying my break..

Maan-Really? Lucky you are

Geet-Yes I m ..Maan.you go and get fresh..I will bring your coffee..

Maan-nahin..mujhe coffee chhaiye pahle

Geet-Ok..she tried to move but Maan arms were still around her..

Geet-Maan chhodiye mujhe.. tabhi to coffee banaaungi..

Maan..Hmm..No...and he removed his one arm from her still holding her in other arm and took the jar of coffee from the nearby cabinet and gave it to her..Ye lo..

Geet-Maan I need sugr and milk too

Maan handed both the things-here are all the things ab banaao

Geet shook her head at him as he was not ready to leave her.

.but she was not scared as she knew that no one was at home that time...coffee was ready and Geet after pouring it in the cup gave him..

Maan sipped and made a face..

Geet-kya hua?

Maan..something is missing..lagta hai kuchh bhool gayi tum

Geet-but I put everything in it..

Maan-you check and he gave the coffee mug to her she took a sip..

Geet took one sip-Maan this is perfect..sab kuchh to hai

Maan-really? Ok let me check once again and he sipped once again.-.arrey haan ye to perfect ho gayi..wow meri cherry me kuchh to baat hai ..and he winked at her grinning widely.Geet was so shy-Maan aap bhi na..never miss any opportunity to tease me..

Maan-Because I know that you love my teasing.

He finished his coffee and Geet finished cooking as family were out and Meena and Suresh were busy with their little son so Geet cooked some food for Ram Priya and Anie..

Maan-Geet ready ho jaao hame party ke liye nikalna hai..

Geet-Ji bas abhi jati hoon..

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Maan and Geet attended the anniversary party of Shekhar..The farm house was very far from the KM..After attending the Party they were on their way back to home..Weather was turning in a to a bad one..

Geet-Maan ..weather is changing..I think it's going to rain heavily

Maan-yes..it seems so..but don't worry we are in the car so we are safe..

Geet-Hmm..and after going few Kms away wind storm started and rain started to pour with hails...water started to fall so rapidly that it became hard for Maan to drive as the moisture of water was turning in to a mist and was blocking his view at the wind screen..maan was driving slowly..

That area was managed very poorly as drainage system was blocked by the encroachment of the local people..

Though that area was having so many Farm houses but old villages too were scattered everywhere . Those villages were not too developed so roads were still not perfect..and soon the water of rain started to come out of the drains and in few minutes roads were under the water..so Maan was not able to see where the road were perfect and where was uneven..

Car was of some high brand and it's ground clearance too was low..Visibility because of the mist on wind screen was very poor. Suddenly Maas saw a little calf crossing the road at the last moment and her mother cow was behind her..Maan took sudden breaks to stop the car to avoid the calf from hitting with the car

Geet shouted to see that little calf as she thought that he will be hit by the car but Maan manages in the nick of the time..Calf was safe..the cow and the calf went away and Maan started the car but ..it was their bad luck that the water entered it to the silencer as that patch of the road was broken and the rear wheels were in to a pit..

Maan tried but car did not stopped..It was 12 in the night but because of the rain any one was not there..

Geet was panicked-Maan..what happened?

Maan-I don't know ..let me see..and Maan came out of the car and went towards the rear side of the car and found the silencer dipped in to the water.he drenched in the rain but he had to check the car

Maan-O No?..what will I do now..it will not start ..he came in to the car and told Geet about what happened?

Geet-Maan ab kya karenge..ghar to yahaan se bahut door hai and we can't find anyone here to help us as it's raining heavily..

They were in a fix..could not think of anything..

They could not ask at home to send another car as it was raining and was difficult to anyone to reach there..Iat this time of night it was not easy to locate the correct address of the place..

And then they heard a knock on the window from Geet's side..Geet jumped on her seat and came towards Maan as she got scared to see someone there..

Maan held her and looked at the person..and that person came to Maan's side and knocked again..Maan prepared himself to face that person. He asked Geet to sit properly at her place and he rolled down his window a little.. it was his good luck that car was only troubling in getting started..it's electronic functions were working..Maan's hand had already turned in to a fist to punch that person..

The person-Excuse me sir..I think you are in trouble..I can see your silencer under water so it's sure that it would not start now..

Maan found that person quite concerned..so he looked at him..he was a man with a medium height with the thick specs..he was holding an umbrella in his hand..It was looking as if he was returning from some nearby place..

Maan-yes..actually I had to press breaks as a calf was in front of car and after that it did not start..

The person-Oh..that's a problem..Right now you can't get any aid here..you can get any help here in the morning only..sir If you don't mind you can come to my home to spend the night. it's the matter of few hours only..

Maan was fully drenched in water because he was out to see the car..Maan looked at Geet and Geet shook her head in a no..

Maan looked at the person and said-It's ok..we will manage here only..

The person smiled-I know sir ..it's not easy to trust a stranger..but sir look at yourself. you are completely drenched..you will be sick if you stay here in this condition..See that is my house you can spend this night here.Geet looked again at Maan and she too found Maan completely wet..

The person-Maam ..you can trust me..then Maan and Geet noticed that the person was talking very nicely .he was sounding quite educated..and his tone of talking was very soft too..

Maan looked at the person and thought to accept his help..as it was an stormy night and it was not safe to spend the night in car any big vehicle could hit the car from the back in the thick dark..Maan asked Geet to come out..

The road was full of water..Maan and Geet came out of the car..that person forwarded his umbrella towards Geet but Geet denied. The rain was pouring haeavily and she was already wet between those few moments after coming out of the car..the person signaled towards the path and said-Sir..Ma'am..please be careful ..Road on this path is muddy and uneven..

Geet was moving holding Maan's hand and suddenly her foot got a jerk.

Maan-Geet kya hua?

Geet-Maan I m wearing a footwear with a pointed heel and it going under the mud on every step..it's getting difficult to walk..let me take them in my hand..

Te person-No ma'am don't do that. it's very dangerous..this muddy road can have broken pieces of classes or some nails and even any small water animal too..so don't take them out...

Geet-Maan but I m not able to walk..it's very dark too..

And next moment she found herself in Maan's arms .. He had lifted her and was walking

Geet-Maan..what are you doing.?.we are on the road..Put me down

Maan-Geet just few minutes and we will be there..it's not good to stand here in this rain so it's better to move from here

The person-yes..ma'am sir is right..and don't worry about me..I m not some illiterate person who would mind this..After all you are his wife..

And after walking few minutes they were in front of a small house..the person unlocked the house and they entered in to it..and Maan put Geet on the only cot which was put there..

The person-sir ..You seems to belong to a rich family but I don't have too much to comfort you..

Maan-It's more than we need at this hour of the night .thank u so much for helping us

Geet -You live alone here..I mean..

The person laughed in an strange style-yes I live here alone

Geet got scared of his laughter and she clutched Maan's arm tightly.

The person-I m sorry Ma'am if you are scared ..actually I laugh only like this..people find me quite funny when I laugh..and hearing this Geet too smiled and said sorry to him for behaving like that

Geet-but you don't have sufficient place to sleep for all of us?

The person-Don't worry about that..next house is of my friend's..I will share his room tonight ..you can stay here..

And he brought few clothes-actually I live alone so only have these clothes only..if you don't mind you can change in to these clothes. I have only these clothes.Your clothes will dry till morning ..

Maan-What is your name?

The person-I m Aditya ..People call me Adi..I think you should take rest as it's already very late ..we will talk in the morning.

Saying this he went out instructing them to lock the door..

Maan closed the door..

Maan called at home and narrated the situation to Ram and asked him not to worry about them..he also asked Ram to send a car in the morning after confirming the right address of that place..after cutting the call he looked at Geet she was standing there shivering with cold.

Maan-Geet you change in to these clothes..

Geet-maan How can I? these will not fit me..

Maan-we don't have any other option..we both will get sick if we append the night in these wet clothes..

Geet looked here and there to find a place to change..there was a wooden partition..Geet was l hesitating to change there as that partition was not fully blocking the view from other side.

Maan understood it and said-Geet you change ..till then Iwill lit the woods in fireplace

Geet nodded and went behind the wooden partition and Maan went to lit the woods in fire place..

Tough Maan did not want to look back at Geet but the jingling of Geet's bangles forced him to look back..He found Geet staring at him only.

both pair of eyes met..and it seemed that both were hypnotized. Both were unable to remove their gaze from each other.

Geet while looking at him took her dupatta and put that on the upper edge of the partition..and that made Maan realized that he was staring at Geet in that odd condition...Finally he removed his gaze from her so that she could change her dress..

Maan too changed in to a vest and a lower..

Geet changed in the clothes that Adi gave her and after changing she looked down at herself and her eyes widened with horror-OH no..I did not think about this..How will I go out of this partition now..No..no..I can't go in front of Maan like this..and she stayed behind the partition..

Maan had lit the fire and he could see Geet's clothes on the partition and he understood that she had changed her clothes

Maan-But why she is still standing there?

And he called her-Geet..wahaan kya kar rahi ho? Bahar aao..

Geet-No..I won't come..I will sleep here only..you sleep that side.

Maan could see her moving to and fro behind the partition

and he was surprised to see her behaving like that-What happened to her? And he came towards her..Seeing him coming she got shied and moved back..and while moving back her back hit in Maan's chest as he came from the other corner of the partition..

Geet for a moment turned to see him but immediately turned her back towards him..

and Maan was blew away with the view in front of him..His throat went dry seeing Geet..He turned her towards him and Looked at her from head to toe-Oh God..How I m going to control myself tonight seeing Geet like this?..Weather was playing a cupid between them..Geet looked at him and could see his desire filled eyes..

Maan-Geet-you are too beautiful...and Geet could not bear those intense gaze and his words created an effect on her and her heart started to beat fast-Maan Please don't look at me like this..

and she lifted her hand to close his eyes. But Maan stopped her from doing that..Today Geet was feeling herself burning under his deep eyes which were full of desire and passion.She could sense that something was going to happen today..She tried to run from there..

Precap- Love and passion continues..

PS:- Sorry for stopping here..Next part very soon


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this time will try for the comment 😛
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Originally posted by: JeevanaP

this time will try for the comment 😛

abhi bhi try hi karogi😡
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lovely part rashmi dii...maan again dreamed but this time geet was there to make him calm...in morning maan again on his teasing mission and poor geet have to always bear his teasings...maaneet's car got some problem and adi helped them by providing his house...maan lost in geet woah...will wait for next part
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Originally posted by: rashmivaish

abhi bhi try hi karogi😡

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update came wen i was having lunch...
see today i know ki upd kabb aaya😛
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Originally posted by: mirror1521

update came wen i was having lunch...

see today i know ki upd kabb aaya😛

wow that's great
aap to bahut hi gyaani nikli😆
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toda hogaya ... baaki baad maine need to rush

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