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maannn hw dare f yu too dance wd someoneee :(
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THANKU FRIENDS FOR ALL UR LOVELY COMMENTS WHICH MAKE ME HAPPY AND UR LIKES...LOVE U ALL
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(THANKU SHRUTHE DIDI FOR A LOVELY BEAUTIFUL BANNER)








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Maan was staring at Geet , her sari complimenting her skin..she look gorgeous in tat red sari..te maroon colour adding more glow to her skin..her milky waist which is playing hide and seek from her sari , making his heart to miss a beat..her blouse hugging her curves and sleeveless blouse , showing her arms , he was gazing her from head to toe making her shiver..even though they standing far away, but Maan ki eyes drinking her beauty with his eyes, making her shudder with his intense ...



Dev went near her and extend his hand, but wen he didt get any respond , look at Geet who was staring at Maan ,

Dev : hai beautiful, broked her trance , u can drool him afterwards , now cum..Geet blushed and look at his hand Geet placed her hand on his..



Maan was watching Dev ki antic and clenched his hand on te glass which he was holding, anguish tore his body wen Geet placed her hand on Dev's hand..he had sudden urge to punch on Dev..he cant bear it, gulp te remaining drink, Geet glared at him wens he saw he is drinking..she thought today he will became talli and pour his heart, but she love wen he drank and blabber..but Maan snap her glare and became busy with his client..

Geet know he was seething in angry: kallulimangan one side asking me to move on and other side he cant see me with anyone..wat I will do with him



Maan suddenly stopped wen he felt his client is not listening to him, but they gaze was on some thing else..he move his gaze to see wat they client watching with jaw open..at once he saw his , a roar of anger seethed thru his eyes to burn every single person present in te hall who gazing his Geet.. his biceps flexed ready to murder everyone

Geet was talking to Mrs.R, her back was shown to him, he gulp seeing her bare back , as her blouse has a single strap holding her blouse..



Maan : wat te hell she is wearing , he notice some of te mens looking at her..he cant tolerate it..he saw Geet was standing alone looking here and there conscious abt her surroundings adjusting her sari now and then..he know she was not comfortable with sari then why she is wearing it.,.he saw her moving, before she does Maan move to her, hold her shoulder like stopping her



Geet felt his presence on her back..Maan hands slowly raised to her shoulder caressing her bare back, making her to feel goosebump all over her body..He slowly took her hair which was on her shoulder and placed it on her back, correcting like hiding her whole back with her hair..Geet clenched her pallu as his touch burning her body..Geet turn her face and look at him over her shoulder who was busy in arranging her hair properly..Maan saw her staring at him

Maan got angry : who ask u to wear sari wen u are not comfortable



Geet smirk : why Maan u cant resist after seeing me, haan..Maan was stunned with her words..how im looking Maan, showing herself turning right and left..actually Aunty ask me to wear sari I cant deny her..say me Maan how im looking

Maan try to turn, Geet stopped him : i know Maan u were looking at me with ur big big eyes, dont lie tat u drool me, smirking,

Maan again try to leave , fed up with her non sense : Geet move



Geet : no first say me how im looking, showing her dimple smile, but they moment got interupted by Rasika

Rasika : Maan im searching u every where , u r standing here, cum I want to intro u to all my friends ,

Maan was abt to snap her hand but seeing Geet ki fuming eyes, he decide to move with Rasika..he left giving a look to Geet making her startled..she didt feel good to see Maan ki behavior..she felt some thing bad..even though Maan want to prove Geet tat he didt affect with her presence so, wen Rasika called him , he agreed but now he is irritated with her gesture, te way she holding his hand, ..he now and then try to move to create a distance between them..all her friends was staring at him making him feel awkward to stand between them, like seeing they fav candy..



To his lucky, a client wished him and he excused from them and move his client, taking a long breath..Geet was watching his every gesture, to show her ,he went with Rasika but she know how uncomfortable he was , ..she smile seeing all her friends ogooling at him...seeing te client his relief made her happy..Maan look at Geet was smirking at him, gesturing i said so tat u cant be with any girl, making him glare

It was time for cake cutting..Rathod called everyone..Rasika drag Maan along with her,..Geet didt feel good to see..Rasika standing in te middle , all surrounds her..she was still holding Maan's hand who was trying to pull himself.. Dev was standing with Geet..

Rasika cut te cake and all clapped they hands..she took te first piece and extend to Maan, making everyone to gasp..all were shocked to see tis,as all know Maan wont encourage like tis kind of behavior with any one especially with girls..Geet was angry and glaring at Rasika, she want to kill her with her bare hands..but she know Maan wont accept, but to her surprise , Maan open his mouth making everyone to open they mouth to ground..

Maan : thanku , hb

Rasika was cloud nine : thanku Maan, kissing his cheeks



Geet glare at him, who ignored her, she felt hurt ..Maan was angry wen Rasika offered him te first piece, but seeing Geet,he don't know wat went thru him and accept her offer , eventhough he felt irritated..Rasika offered te cake to everyone and all wished her..wen Geet came to wish her, she turned her face snapping her..Maan didt like te way she snap Geet, but he didt want to show his expression to her..Mrs.R didt like it, she drag Geet and apologize to her behalf of Rasika..Geet smiled and gesture its ok

Dev : Maa dad is calling u, she left, Geet was abt to leave , Dev hold her hand, Geet look at him asking wat..pls Geet be with me, dont leave me alone and go

Geet got confuse and look at him

Dev : wat naa I feel shy standing among those girls who ready to eat me for they dinner, see see how they looking at me, pointing to te girls, Geet cant control and bursted into laugh making Dev to frown

Dev : hare yar don't laugh, u making fun of me

Geet giggled

Dev : ok ok I know I cant stand in front of ur Maan, but im also little bit handsome

Geet : really



Dev pouted : im ur friend yar

Geet : then I have to accept, both look at each other and laughed

Dev : Geet im sory, for Rasika

Geet smile : its ok dev I know abt her

Dev : Geet she is not tat bad, but being in boarding school from childhood she became like tis..

Geet : why she was in boarding school

Dev : dad have to travel all over te world for his business and my mom too have to go with him, thought our studies will get spoil , so they made us to stay in boarding but she thought our parents didt love her,..she changed herself completely

Geet : tats why I advice not to send kids to boarding school, wat ever every parents should spend time with they kids, even if they don't have, her thought went to her kutty, she missed her so much..tis is te first time, she left Ayesha for three days , after she came to delhi




Dev : hmm, yes Geet u r correct, I miss my baby sister who run behind me for everything , his eyes welled up

Geet touch his shoulder like consoling him : u love u sister so much naa

Dev nodes : ok ok, now no rona shona, all will think Im cry baby , cum lets have dinner

Geet smiles , but she look at Maan who was moving to buffet along with Rasika..

Dev : don't wory , he will have his

Geet : no no im not looking at Maan, but Dev ki smirk made her blush and both went to have they dinner



Maan wat ever he try but he cant move his gaze away from Geet and dev..Geet too was eating half te time and staring at MAAN , who was pretending to be busy with his clients now and then talking with Rasika, who standing alone with him...Geet was so much wish to be with Maan, she was craving to hold him, eat with him and show te world she belongs to him, but she cant..her heart cried seeing Rasika with Maan..but she don't want to create any scenes as her b'day and next for rathods who was very good at heart..she don't want to hurt them

The party was in full swing, along with Rasika b'day party, rathod going to sign deal with khuranas..before tat they were called for dance.. all were dancing , as Dev was called by Rathod , he left..Geet was watching everyone.,.,she remember her dance with Maan, wen she felt some thing for him , his first touch..



She was watching te couples dancing and look at Maan who was staring at her like he too remember they dance..she didt know wen her legs carried her towards Maan..Maan look at her..both are staring at each other..Rasika came broking they trance

Rasika : Maan can I have a pleasure to dance with u, before Maan deny

Geet : no he wont dance with u

Rasika : who u are say tat, before Geet retorted back

Maan : leave her Rasika, lets dance , he moved with Rasika leaving a startled Geet



Maan hold her waist and Rasika hands were encircling his neck..Geet felt like she is standing on te fire..she felt hurt..her eyes welled seeing her Maan with some one..they were moving slowly along with te music..she cant bear te sight..she is not tat much weak..she rush to them, pulled Rasika and pushed her..she drag Maan to a corner..as te light was dim, no one notice them

Maan snap her : wat u doing Geet

Geet : wat u doing Maan, why u making a show of urself by doing things tat ur mind doesnt approve off

Maan : whats wrong i m only dancing

Geet : dancing, tat i can see, wat u want to prove doing all tis Maan




Maan mocked her : why u cant bear it.. u thought I cant move on, but wen I prove it why u feeling sad Geet..u have to be hapy tat im enjoying my life , u want tat only naa..then why u feeling sad seeing me with some one

Geet : Maan are u behind tat challenge

Maan : im not behind any challenge but I have to prove u tat ur presence or absence does't affect me , I can move on with whom ever I want, I can even touch any girl, before he utter those words Geet slapped him, it was not tat hard , but he was angry

Maan gritted : Geet

Geet : do u know wat u talking, u will regret Maan, so better stop all tis non sense



Maan hold her shoulder : why Geet, why I have to stop, u said if I prove u will move away from me, r u sad thinking u lose te game haan

Geet stare at him, before she speaks, rasika spotted them..she was angry and felt insult wen Geet pushed her..but before she react Geet drag Maan

Rasika : how dare u Geet

Geet point her finger to her : how dare u touch my Maan



Rasika got confuse : ur Maan

Geet : yes , holding Maan ki arms, my Maan ..thank ur stars tat I didt kill u, I don't want to hurt ur parents tats why..but why u care abt them..so better stay away from him

Rasika was shock and her heart broken hearing Geet : Maan wo im sory

Maan snap Geet : Rasika don't care abt her words, she is nothing to me

Geet eyes turn to Maan , she felt hurt wen he utter those words, she was staring at him

Rasika : so we can dance

Maan : sure , he move with her, Rasika was smirking

They both went to dance floor leaving a broken Geet..Maan was holding and dancing with Rasika, soon her friends too join them..all were dancing with him..as he took his coat , his first four buttons were open and all were touching his chest ..even though he was dancing with them, his gaze was on Geet who was staring at him without blinking..





Maan didt know wat he is doing..he just want to prove her, but in his angry everything went out of his control.. his mind was corrupted with his damn big ego which not letting him to think wat he is doing.. in wat ever state he be, still now he didt cross his limits ..but today he forgot all his values , in his gussa which he is going to regret later..he thought he is proving Geet without knowing he is trying to prove himself tat he didt affected by Geet.


Geet was just watching him standing alone.. it kills her wen ever she saw Maan ki hands touch any girl..Rasika was hugging him and dancing..they were doing salsa.. they moving according to te steps..Rasika looking at Geer, move close to Maan, to make her fume more..



Geet felt hurt wen Maan lift Rasika up, remembering they dance..it was they most beautiful moment,which she always preserved in her heart, she was really broked thinking how can he share tat with some one..she stood startled, watching him with tears in her tears



Her throat burned , her eyes welled up.. she sat in chair as she don't have any strength to stand..waiter passed thru her, she stop him and took a glass and gulp it in one go without knowing she have took hot drinks.. te drink was soothing her burning throat..she like it,she again took another glass and drank it

Rasika was happy being with Maan, but she felt bad thinking even though Maan dancing with her but his gaze was on Geet..she didt like it..she suddenly hug Maan and kissed his chest , making him furious..Maan shocked and look at Geet, who till now was sad, but now smiling at him..He was startled with her smile, Her smile killed his soul, her lips was smiling but her eyes was crying..



Geet who was hurt , watching Maan, but wen Rasika kissed his chest which belongs to her, she died at tat moment..she broke te glass which she was holding , pirecing te glass pieces on her skin..Maan at once pushed Rasika glaring at her

Maan : be in ur limits Rasika

Rasika : wo Maan I

Maan : just shut up, but he heard Dev ki wory scream and rush to them

Dev who came inside saw Geet smiling and her palm was bleeding..he got worried and hold her palm

Dev : Geet wat happen , he took his handkerchief and tied her palm

Maan rush to them and shock to see her bleeding palm, he remember her words , if u touch any girl, I will kill myself..he closed his eyes in furious..yes he was angry , but he didt want to hurt his Geet..he know he have broke her with his behaviour..he was angry on himself , he have crossed all his limits and forget his values ..how can he do like tis..

Geet was blabbering some thing..dev pulled te glass and smell it

Dev : omg she drank, he patted her , Geet Geet get up wat u drank..Maan got shock and look at her



Geet giggled : I I, hmm tat waiter gave me some thing but it was nice, Dev pwles get me more I wbant it, she was stammering due to heavy drinking..she was full talli

Dev : I think she drank heavily, Geet cum we will go

Geet snap his hand : no I wanbt to dance, I want to dance with u, see everyone dancing me too want to , holding his hand

As they were standing in te corner, no one notice them..

Dev : Geet we will dance some other time, now cum its late

Geet : no, with a baby face




Dev was laughing seeing her cute face, but seeing Maan ki glare he control himself..Maan didt like te way he is holding her

Dev: Maan I will arrange a room for her, she cant go like tis

Maan : no need

Dev : pls Maan

Maan : Geet lets go, he try to hold her

Geet snap his hand : don't touch me, and cling to Dev, Dev dance with me naa, pleweaes

Dev : Geet



Maan try to again pull her but she snapping his hand, she was abt to trip , Dev hold her by holding her waist, making MAAN to fume..

Dev : Maan I think she didt like u , so I wil take care of her, u leave

Maan : thanks, pulling Geet away from him, and scooped her in his arms and carried her out to gh..

It was all of sudden, tat Dev was stunned and open his mouth to ground..Mrs.R closed his mouth and both stare at them..

Dev : he love her so much maa but he is idiot

Mrs.R : wat happen Dev

Dev narrated wat happen, mrs.r became sad



Mrs.r : don't wory dev everything will be alright, she is prefect for Maan, if priya ( Maan's mom) was there she could have felt happy to get Geet as her bahu..

Dev : hmm, both watching them with content smile.

Maan was carrying Geet, who was wriggling and try to get down from his arms..

Geet : leave me, I wont cum with u leave me, dev help me, pls I don't want to go with tis Rakshashan , Dev , leave me I want to go to Dev




Maan hold on her waist increased , wen she utter those words..he carried her out..seing them Raghav ask te driver to bring te car and he open te door for them, before te media pounce on them..Maan placed Geet on te back seat and sat beside her..Geet try open te door , but it was locked, she try to go out thru te window, Maan hold her and cagged her in his arms gesturing driver to start te car..

Geet was wriggling, and try to push Maan, but his hold was strong in front of her..she suddenly bite his finger making him winch

Maan : ouch, geet

Geet giggled : i wanbt to dance with dev , Dev he is very sweet i want him

Maan got angry hearing dev purana and glare at her



Geet : mummy i want to dance, leave me, stop te car, she was whinning like a baby

Maan was having hard time to control her , he dont wat to do, but he was fuming hearing Dev ki name and cursing himself for his antic which made her to drink..Geet was trying to open te door, Maan pulled in a jerk, tat she landed on him

Maan : chup bikul chup









PRECAP : TALLI GEET .. EVVANO ORUVAN VASIKIRAN ( MERA YAAR MILA FROM SAATHIYA MOVIE )

NEXT PART : THREAD - 6


Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago

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