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Posted: 10 years ago
Damn good update.I like your style of writing very much.So clean and highly eye-catching.
Good that Kalpi had poured out her feelings to Sammy.Now Sammy will be in a dilemma ,whether
to support Raghav or Kalpana.
What is the confusion hovering abt Kushi,Sheetal And Pakhi????.Why did Neetu become abnormal???
😕😡😲🥱
So many emotions inside us are willing to come out only because of Vicious Kalpi .SO PLS
CLEAR THE CONFUSIONS AND GIVE US A SWEET GULAB JAMUNY UPDATE.( I AM NOT DIABETIC).SO CHALEEGAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update as always
Loved dat kalpi told Sammy d truth n he will b a good help in finding truth as he is close to ragz
Awww prem n maria postonded der marriage ...true frnds
Lol sulky kalpi n kadwaa karela😆
My doubt on khushi being raghav n pakhi's daughter has increased after pakhi's reaction...dat obssessed lady can go to ny extent for raghav
Finally kalpi decided to cnfrn raghav indirectly...wonder hw pakhi managed to transfer monety w/o his knowledge...guess will get my answer in next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Plzzz update soon..eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Kalpi has proved herself to be one of the smartest woman on earth :)
She is not only a pretty face but has brain to back it up
I like that she told Sammy everything
Sammy telling Kalpi to asked herself if Raghav can ever betrayed her in that way was nice
Hope Kalpi find the real culprit soon ;)
Superb update


Thanks Natasha... M glad u liked the brainy Kalpi as i am fed up of dumb leads of tv.

I can't assure u about Kalpi knowing about real culprit but i assure u that she will find about Rags innocence in next chapter.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: balarangarajann

Damn good update.I like your style of writing very much.So clean and highly eye-catching.

Good that Kalpi had poured out her feelings to Sammy.Now Sammy will be in a dilemma ,whether
to support Raghav or Kalpana.
What is the confusion hovering abt Kushi,Sheetal And Pakhi????.Why did Neetu become abnormal???
🥱
So many emotions inside us are willing to come out only because of Vicious Kalpi .SO PLS
CLEAR THE CONFUSIONS AND GIVE US A SWEET GULAB JAMUNY UPDATE.( I AM NOT DIABETIC).SO CHALEEGAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Thank u dear... btw what should i call u.

M glad u liked my writing style and loving the story as well...

Neetu became abnormal coz of the trauma of Sahil's death n later Pakhi dint let her recover.. Soon i will reveal about it from pakhi's pov. Will try to update soon n clear all the confusions.. Actually i have exams next months so i am not able to update FFs regularly.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rani214

Awesome update as always
Loved dat kalpi told Sammy d truth n he will b a good help in finding truth as he is close to ragz
Awww prem n maria postonded der marriage ...true frnds
Lol sulky kalpi n kadwaa karela😆
My doubt on khushi being raghav n pakhi's daughter has increased after pakhi's reaction...dat obssessed lady can go to ny extent for raghav
Finally kalpi decided to cnfrn raghav indirectly...wonder hw pakhi managed to transfer monety w/o his knowledge...guess will get my answer in next update


Thanks Rani.. happy that u liked it.

Everyone is doubting about Khushi.. Do u feel Rags n Pakhi are not healthy enough to conceive a baby??😆 But i agree that obsessive lady can go to any extent for Raghav.

U will surely get to know the answer in next 1 or 2 updates.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rupalpanchotiya

Plzzz update soon..eagerly waiting for next part


Sorry for the delay.. i will try to update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Plzz update soon can't wait for next update..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rupalpanchotiya

Plzz update soon can't wait for next update..


Will try to update before the day ends.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello guys... M back with a new update... Again no proof reading so please forgive me for all the mistakes... this bloody headache is not giving me strength to read it..n god knows what i have typed so please forgive me if u find something hilarious in the update. No pms again...As i am still idle and planning to update 3rd FF as well.

Kalpi is pacing restlessly in her room waiting for Raghav as she is sure that he will come either to apologize for the mistake or confront her for the 1 crore cheque gave him... "What if he plays a game again?? I need to do something that he can't lie this time.. I can't take chance this time..." She thought. She hears footstep of Raghav and picks her cell.. in panic she calls Prem's number... Maria receives it.. before she can say hello she hears Kalpi saying.. "Yes sweetheart, trust me... I only love u. I do not have anyone else in my life. I have forgotten the past.. The ugly past... my life lies in ur arms. U won't understand how much I miss u.. The way I feel for u... I have never felt for anyone." She paused for a while as if hearing the person on the call while all she was looking at Raghav's reflection in the mirror placed in front of him.. "I know Raghav.. u can't lie in anger and my closeness with someone else is the best way to flare ur anger." She thought. Maria who was confused by Kalpi's talk looks at Prem and puts the cell on speaker.. Kalpi continues... "No darling, I promise I won't stay away from u any more.. Soon I will join u.. than the nights won't be lonely and the bed won't be bigger... " She giggles and looks at Raghav who was burning in jealousy and anger. She smirked and continued.. "u know what my lips are getting dry.. come and..." Raghav can't take it anymore.. and yells "Kalpi." She turns around and disconnects the call saying, "I will call u later." Maria was still giving the confusing glances to Prem.. who laughs on realizing that she is doubting him and tells her how Kalpi makes fake call for annoying Rags and this might be one of it. Maria sighs relief and scolds Prem for laughing on someone's else misery as Rags can be proven innocent but Prem cuts her in mid saying, "Still Rags has to prove that he dint kill my father." Maira hugs him on realizing the pain he has hidden inside him.

Kalpi glares at Raghav as if confused for the reason of his anger..

"What Rags.. why r u so angry??"

"What the hell is this?? What all bullshit u were saying??"

"What happened?? What r u talking about??"

"This cheque damn it.. why u gave me this 1 crore rupees n why did u said that I gave u this amount." He replied while covering the real reason of his anger.

"Com'n Raghav.. I told u that I do not want to discuss the past than y r u dragging it again n again.. I have understood that u have moved on n for that u have to throw me out of ur life n u did it.. so no issues at all."

"What?? I threw u?? It was u who left me... u went without giving me a chance to explain. U went without saying anything to me... N u r blaming me??"

"Than whom should I blame?? What did u expected Raghav that I should have stayed here after watching u and ur wife naked under that blanket?? Or were u expecting me to stay here and help ur wife in producing ur babies... Be a nurse to her like mother always does."

"That was a mistake Klapi... I know I made a big mistake but that's coz I was fully drunk n hallucinated u in Pakhi.. but what u did was in full consciousness... I don't remember that night even but u.. u fully remember the day u left me. Why u dint gave me a chance to explain??"

"N what would u have explained.. that fake abortion report?? This one crore ruppes cheque or that photographs which proved me charcterless... N how the hell u can question.. I should be me who would have asked the reason for all of this..Tell me Raghav why u did this?? U wanted to move on with Pakhi.. All u had to do is tell me and I would have freed u but why u played with my emotions.. with my self respect.. just coz of u I am away from my parents.. my life. My father who loved me the most has disowned me.. I have seen him burning my pyre.. N it's all coz of u... Why the hell u did it??"

"What all r u saying... I dint did anything.. what is this new game kalpi?? If u want to move on with ur new boyfriend than go... I am not stopping u but stop putting false allegations on me.. Don't u feel ashamed while saying all this about urself... u left the ity.. left kamla maa n Vitthal uncle who still craves for ur love.. left me and now u r blaming me.. I am ready to accept my fault... I made a mistake.. I touched Pakhi but that's only once.. till today I love u only. "

"What I am lying... I should be ashamed.. wait a minute Raghav... look at this bank statement which says that 1 crore is being transferred in my account." She said while showing the old bank statement which has her blood on it.

"Com'n Kalpi... grow up!! It says 1 crore is being deposited in ur account but where is it written that I transferred the money?? It's the cash deposit and not even the account transfer... " He said while calming down as he feels Kalpi is telling the truth.

"Ok.. I know but who else can deposit such big amount in my account... N this is not enough than look at this photographs... the chawl papers and the abortion report... which clearly says that Kalpana Jadhav had an abortion.. The termination of the pregnancy which never existed. N the photographs which proved that the pregnancy was coz of Mr. Raghav Singhania n the chawl papers to prove that I aborted the child in return of the money and land." She said angrily.

Raghav is confused right now.. kalpi looks at his expressions and realizes that he is not aware of any of them... tears flowing down from her eyes.. She runs out to hide them as the realization has struck her and the anger for Raghav has been replaced by the love. Rags looks at her going out but he is too confuse to do anything.. Kalpi runs out and enters the secret room which was fortunately open. Rags has forgot to lock it coz of the bank person came to meet him. Kalpi falls on the floor and folds her knees and hides her face between her palms and starts crying loudly.. The tears were mixture of happiness and sadness... Happiness coz the man who she loved most is not her culprit but sadness coz the love of her life is a father of an innocent girl and she doesn't have any right over him. She remembers all the moments she shared with Rags.. After some time of crying she gets ups to go to his room when she bumps in a photo frame.. She picks it up and in dim light of coming from the window realizes that it's her photo.. she switches on the light and looks around.. all her photographs were scattered in the room... She looks at the rose plant growing in the window and remembers that it's the symbol of their love.. her scarf was kept on the table.. The tears who has stopped few seconds ago starts flowing again.. this time she was guilty on realizing that the Raghav whom she was hating from last 5 years was treasuring their memories. She opens the drawer and looks at the card.. and starts reading it.. Few letters which Rags has written for her and the wrapped gifts.. she starts unwrapping them and is surprised to see the unexpected small gifts like a key ring.. locket, ganesha idol, kumkum n many more.. She stayed there for god knows how long but she made sure that she read every card and letter and saw all the gifts.

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Raghav on the other hand is confused about all that conspired right now.. the revelation has made him forget about the secret room.. All he wants to know is the truth.. he decides to confront Pakhi as she was the one who said Kamla maa doesn't know the reason for kalpi's leaving but decides not to as he doesn't trust Pakhi at all... he call kamla to talk to her but she disconnects call saying "I do not know any Raghav n Kalpana.. All I know is my daughter Pakhi." He tries calling Vitthal but he dint receive it. Rags doesn't redial thinking Vitthal is already angry on him n might not reply to his calls.. Finally he decides to meet Pakya to know the details.

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Sammy on the other hand has already started his investigations.. He has met the SP and took the permission to trace the calls of Sheetal and find the latest details..SP has given the permission after hearing Kalpi's story without knowing her name. SP also suggested to file complain but Sammy said the girl will lodge the complain only after finding the true culprit.. He takes the permission letter from SP and edits it using his technical skills and includes the taping of call of Pakhi in the letter as well.

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Rags is standing outside the chawl waiting for Pakya to return from his shop constantly watching at his watch impatiently.. he wants to call Sammy as well but how can he call him after insulting him so much.. "I need Sammy the most today.. but how can I call him after insulting him so much.. he had the misunderstanding regarding Kalpi but still he is my best friend.. I dint had the right to insult him."He thought while regretting for his behavior. Suddenly he felt a familiar touch on his shoulder.. He turns around and finds Sammy smiling at him. He hugs him and apologizes but Sammy tells him to forget that issue and they promise to not talk about it ever. Sammy remembers the call he got from Kalpi few minutes back while she was crying and telling him to help Raghav as he is innocent and she has revealed almost everything to him, she apologizes for creating rift between them but Sammy assure her that everything is fine as she is one who suffered most... Sammy knew Rags will be in chawl and hence come here to meet him. They see Pakya coming and Rags waves at him but he gives a disgusted look and tries to avoid him.. Rags goes near him and requests him to give few minutes to him.

"What do u want now after spoiling my sister's life." Pakya asked angrily.

"Truth... I want to know everything happened with Kalpi.. " Rags pleaded.

"Saying as if u don't know anything... " Pakya taunted.

"Pakya please... I am here only, if u want u can beat me but please tell me everything in detail." He tried to convince Pakya.

Pakya agreed and tells him everything from the start.. Raghav was listening to it carefully while recording it in the Dictaphone for future reference.. While telling the story pakya had tears in his eyes and Raghav realizes the pain of the family. Pakya finishes her story and gives an angry look to raghav.

"Pakya trust me... I was unaware of all of this n I am not the culprit.. but I assure u that I will find the culprit" Rags said while keeping his hand on Pakya's shoulder. Pakya doesn't budge and leaves the place.

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Kalpi comes out of the secret room with all the gifts and cards and lovingly places it in her suitcase. She takes out her cell to inform Prem about Rag's innocence but stops thinking Prem's doubt on Raghav being the murderer of his father.

"I have to find out about Sahil uncle's accident too... I think Neetu aunty know something about it... I have to take a closer look at that pics once again." She opens the cells and starts looking at the pics while zooming at it... See understands something and leaves to meet Prem.

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Sammy and Raghav is in Sammy's home discussing about the events and hearing Pakya's recording.

Pakya saying on record, "You too told Ayi that u r really sorry for all that happened and want to move on with Pakhi ."

"u agreed to move on with Pakhi??" Sammy asked..

"No yar.. I was talking about Kalpi". Raghav replies while recalling the incident that took place..

Flashback

Pakhi comes to Raghav saying Kamla maa wants to talk to u.. Raghav takes the cell from her hands and speaks to Kamla.

"Yes, Kamla maa.. tell me."

"Raghav baba... what I heard is correct?? U r regretting for ur mistakes and want to move on in life.."

"Yes Kamla maa... this revenge has ruined my life.. I lost everything coz of 1 mistake. I know after marriage also I made a huge mistake.. But now I have repaid for it and wants to start afresh."

"That's good to hear Raghav baba... So u r ready to move on with my daughter naa!!"

"Yes Kamla maa... I can't wait to start my life with her. Ur daughter is truly special for me and I promise u that I will sort everything soon."

Pakhi snatches the phone from Raghav and chides.. "Thanks Kamla maa..." and leaves from there.

Raghav feels happy on seeing Pakhi taking everything so sportingly and helping him by reuniting him with Kalpana...

Flashback ends

"Oh no... This kamla maa and her daughter issue... I was talking about Kalpi and they understood Pakhi but how is it possible as I told pakhi to inform that we are taking divorce soon and I will marry Kalpi after that." Raghav said while hitting his fist on the wall.

"I think Pakhi played a major game... we need to confront her." Sammy said.

"No... we can't confront her.. we need to find evidence against her or the real culpriut but before that I need to find about that 1 crore rupee."

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Kalpi reaches Prem's apartment... Maria and Prem are playing there with Pari.. kalpi greets them and gives chocolate to Pari.. Maria's mom takes her inside and Kalpi starts telling everything to Prem.

"Ok... I agree Rags is innocent in ur case but what about my father's murder" He asked angrily.

"We have to find the culprit and I want to show u something..." She said while showing him the mobile screen.

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P.S. : Once again sorry for the typo/spelling/grammatical mistakes and my special his/her goof ups. Please hit like and comment just to show ur interest in the story.

Regards
Vish
Edited by fairylover - 10 years ago

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