ArHi FF : Beauty & The Beast#4 : Thread 5 Link Pg 146 - Page 24

Hiii... I just few days ago started this story..

I in evry thread tried to post a cmnt bt poor me.. each thread was closed ... so finally today.. wen I read all 53 updates... I am here to comment.. and luckily its not closed yt...

Ok so now coming to story first...

Beauty and the Beast ... with the title my mind went a long way first to think wat it can be all about.. will arnav be a negative character... and will change later... or something else.. bt I thought to complete some chapters and then decide on this..

As I started .. I find all things going well... then again, I wondered wer comes the beast...

I really liked how well u have used the past in present from both Khushi and Arnav's side.. excellent .. very well executed.

I as proceeded from next to next chapter became more curious and cant stop myself to read one more .. one more and this is how in a very short period I finished the whole 53 chapters... its all because of ur writing style and the way u create suspense and the the execution.. What shall I say about it.. no words... marvelous..

The topic u took in this FF of Spouse rape.. is a very crucial reality of socity that is known by very few..

There are many women who face such situation .. but not having the strength to fight back lead them to hell and they remain helpless and stay in that hell for forever... that is not appreciated.

Khushi, who was also a victim of such Horrendous act... stood back and fought against it .. and stood strong and also led many lives turn like her... strong and independent... I really like her every aspect... This character of Khushi is really an inspiration .. as seeing how she didn't let her life into the misery ... and fought back...

Khushi... with every update... taught something new.. How a single mother survives.. how a victim to can turn to a strength for others ... how a lady who has no one led a respectful life and made her own status in this society inspite of all falls she faced in her past... Excellent u have really put a life in her character.

Arnav... he was a gentleman... but the alcohol turned him into something that is called a beast... and I really feel bad the moment wen I read .. how he turned to a beast... at that moment I was like pinched hard to come out of my sweet dreams... that hurt me.. to see how he killed a innocent girl that day... evn she is living bt she is no more the same ... whom he married .. the chirpy .. talkative Khushi...

But as I continue ... I will add one think that Arnav earned her forgiveness .. rathr than gtng it out f pity and that moment I was again roud of him..

II was not evn for a moment felt gt attracted by his charms and felt bad for him.. Until he showed the man behind the beast.. I then started feeling his condition.. but that does nt mean I forget what he did to her.. bt it ws that I accepted .. it was not him, but the effect of alcohol and I liked how he repented all these years... same time it hurt me reading how he was in the past all tried to kill himself.. by involving himself in such acts that can take his life out of his body .. but thank god he came to India nd met khushi.. and with that started the journey of a man and a woman who both were affected by past and managed to build a future..

Both made efforts... equally and that only I can say was the reason that they are together..

Aditya and Amber... My god.. I feel like these kids became a part of my life ..as I started feeing them.. just because the way u penned their characters ... it gave them a life... and I really hat off u for penning such wonderful characters of Amber and Aditya.. I really love them.

This kids really played a major role... and I am amused how u can potray them so well... really its great work done by you.

Akash and payal... man these two were no less... I really enjoy reading them.. and I was overwhelmed to read the bond btwn Akash and Khushi , and btwn Arnav and Payal.. really wonderful...

I admire the fact that u showed how the family supported Khushi ... knowing the bitter truth ... that was really appreciative that they stood by her side.

Kripa and Angad .. man which character shall I leave ... u turned my eyes to popping bulbs .. which turned in amusement while I read every character... amazing their role was alos very well written .. and they really played a major role in setting their lives... as they too were the sailors of same case.. and are living now happily and taught the realty to Arnav and inspired him.. that was really a major step in Arnav's life.

Anjali.. aww.. poor girl .. it was so cruel ... wat happened with her... I felt like crying wen I read what happened with her... bt thank god she survived and now is living with her son ishaan... u really have written her character in an amzing and excellent way.. it must have taken ur more efforts to write such critical events... hats off.

Aman... He too is just like ur other characters .. a marvelous person.. I never expected that I will enjoy reading his scenes.. I really like him.. its all because of u that I feel a secret crush towards him.. bt sorry I am a loyal lover of Arnav so sorry Aman...

Aman ... is really a grt peson who accepted Anjali as seeing the heart and person she is.. he not evn for a second cared what was in her past.. and is ready to accepted her.. that raised him in my eyes... really Katie u are just too good to potray every character...

Overall every character u have written in this story was just like I am watching in front of my eyes.. You have written it so intensely...

I appreciate ur every effort that u mst have put to give a life to this story.. this is really a excellent piece...

I forgot to say the best part I liked about this story ws the emotions ... u made me cry and smile the same tym.. really that was so indifferent.. thanks for this wonderful story.

And one more thing .. this story looked so natural as the flow was so well like everything went on right tym.. How you manage to set the pace.. That looked all realistic... hats off to your genius brain.

Sply.. now as how they are trying t make their relation normal sply physically... tremendous

I also like the bond btwn the kids and Arnav and kids and Khushi... just sme tym mad me cry.. aww... Katie u really are so talented..

Last but not the least.. u are a wonderful and amazing writer.. I am really lucky to read this wonderful piece of writing..

You have a great art of writing from emotions to dialogues to romantic scenes to playfool moods .. to each and everything.. Hats off..

Hope I concluded almost things... still I can say what I feel for this story is not I can justify with my words.. its now in my fav. List..

Please bear my typo mistakes...

This is sooo amazing just loved it soo much, They are trying to work things out.