AR FF 'TALAASH' new Part 20 on Page 123 (26/02/2015) - Page 81

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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update
i really wish ar come together soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb part dear...
loved every bit of it
aah...i like the way riddhima answere back to armaan n anjili
no one is understanding her POV except rahul n muskaan
nd m gr8 atul gave a little peice of his mind to armaan
he is such a big head
hope armaan jaldi samjhe n riddhima ko accept karle and riddhima too
she should stop running now
nd accept amaan with krishh

waiting 4 next soon
bye
take care dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part
Can't believe he knew Riddhima for 8 years
Can't wait to read more
Update fast plz :)
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awsm update
superb part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb post.
Anji v bad dear.
Muski and atul now khushi 's side.
Poor soul khushi.
Arman irrirating her v badly.
Krish nice baby.
Tf pm.
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Awesome update..loved it...I wish everything gets sorted between them...cont soon..!!!
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fbus ye yhi khtm hgya... age ki life nh discuss hui... bus ye 14 parts ka hi ff tha 😭
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plz jldi se 15 part update kro sis 😊
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part 14 on page 110

PART 15

Atul and armaan conversation, atul tying to make armaan realize his real feelings and now ahead

"I just said all this cause I want you to give your life a second chance armaan , think over it for yourself or if not for yourself than for your family , your son and your son mother I am just your friend and give you advise rest its your life you have all the rights to handle it the way you wanted" said atul

And after that atul left the room leaving armaan in deep thoughts

while here as atul left outside he saw anjali standing on the door , with moist eyes , this made atul understood that she have heard it , she have heard everything that armaan and atul were talking about

"its ok anjali have faith in that god i am sure that if he have got them till here then he will himself make them together" said atul taking anjali from there

"we all were so unknown about so much, anyways i am happy now have a little hope that now armaan life will be at some peace, and all the bads and evils in his life will go away" said anjali smiling in reassurance, when they saw maya coming down from the stairs

[remember maya was still living in the same ouse as naina's guest]

"you , what do you think you are doing here till now, why dont you just go away from armaan and our lifes" said anjali to maya in anger

"as for your life i am really not at all interested in being a part of ,but armaan well you can say i was and will always be a part old his life and today i am here to get back my old place in his life" said maya with attitude
"in your dreams Ms Maya kapoor, armaan have long through you out of your lifes all thanks to you and your mistakes and now you think that armaan will repeat the biggest mistake of his life ever again getting you back in your life so don't even try and make a fool of yourself, just go away" said anjali

"I knew I did mistakes in my life with armaan but everyone makes mistakes and can be given second chance , I also realized my mistake and came back in armaan's life don't forget that I am armaan's wife and he will soon start considering me that again and now after he got his son I am sure he will need me for his son atleast" said maya

"ex-wife, correct yourself maya, and the reason for his long suffering and do you think armaan will again consider you in his life then keep on dreaming maya , as for now I am here in this house so better take care that I don't get a chance to see your face again and again and you better pack your stuff and leave this place as soon as you can, and yes stay away from armaan and krish, got you and yes you are not and never required for krish, because krish have his own mother to take care of him got that" said anjali with warning

"forget it anjali why are you wasting your time and energy with the people not at all worthy for that , its just a waste of time, maya go away and we really don't care you are living in this house or not cause for us you are still not important so live your life and lets just not get in our paths" said atul warning and they left from there

Leaving a fuming maya behind when naina malik came back maya went near her

"naina aunty nothing is working the way we supposed and now with krish and this anjali coming I don't think we can do anything, we need to plan something bigger to work on our plan" said maya

"you don't worry maya I have a little plan armaan is too happy with his child, you just have to do one think behave like a good mother for krish, take care of that child so that armaan can consider you eligible for being his mother and that's the only way you can come back in armaan's life" said Naina

"but naina aunty I have never taken care of kids I don't knew how to handle them" said maya in horror

"then learn it , look maya if you want to become Mrs Armaan malik again you have to learn being krish mother first" said naina

And then naina and maya went to find krish

Here krish was in the garden , riddhima and krish were playing in the garden ,

Krish was sitting on the grass with his little toys making that block game one over the other and while riddhima was just sitting with him looking at him as he put all the blocks inside he started clapping for himself with his little hands

"good boy my krishu is getting to intelligent day by day" said riddhima kissing him lightly in his head

"he have to be intelligent after all he is a malik blood" said Naina coming there with maya by her side

When maya came ahead and bending towards krish

"hello baby is this yours come we will play" said maya with faking smiles picking on of a block

And krish started crying loud,

"my toy , my toy, gandeee gandee[bad bad]" said krish in the middle of his crying ,and hitting maya with his little hands and snatching his block from her

And maya already bending very uncomfortable lose her balance and fall back sitting on the grass completely

"awww oh god my clothes they got all dirty cheee" maya exclaiming

While here our little krish started gigghuling on this , he was clapping now looking at maya falling even riddhima was smiling looking at her it was so funny

While maya looking at riddhima in anger , so she look at krish

"krish baby this is bad, look aunty have fallen" said riddhima faking scolding krish

While krish kept quite on his mother saying and crawing on the ground he came near riddhima away from maya and holding riddhima he stood and hugged her

"its ok baby come lets go inside we will play some other game" said riddhima holding him properly and getting up from there she went inside

"god this good for nothing girl bloody care taker, what the hell does she thinks of herself" said maya in anger standing up

"with krish considering him as mother she have actually forgotten what she is and what is her status I think we need to remind her that" said Naina in anger

The day passed like this, riddhima taking care of krish , anjali meeting her normally

She and riddhima getting along well after sometime and anjali even started bonding with krish, krish also liked this new aunty who lovingly played with her

In the evening armaan was in the living room when anjali and riddhima came out with krish , krish was sitting in a baby pram while riddhima was scrolling it

"guys we are going for a walk , me and krish are thinking of having a little evening walk in the garden you knew our krish loves gardens and looking at flowers and trees" said anjali happily

"so you and krish have already got a nice friendship" said atul smiling

"yes krish like his father like me a lot and we are now friends" said anjali smiling

"great only he don't like me that's why we are not friends yet I suppose" said armaan

"well I think you both can also be friends just you have to make little efforts armaan I have an idea why don't you take krish out on a walk" said anjali

"that's a great idea like this you both will get lots of time alone to knew each other" said atul

And armaan eying on him for his double meaning talks

"I mean like this you and krish can get close to each other , it will be nice" said atul smiling

"ok I will take krish with me" said armaan and taking the baby pram from riddhima he scrolling it and moving out, when krish looking that armaan was taking him and his mother is still standing behind he started crying again

"mumma mumma aa" said krish in crying

"oh oh baby be quite your mumma is coming with you, riddhima why don't you also go out, just be with krish from a little distance like this krish will get little time with armaan plus he wont feel uncomfortable because you will be near them" said anjali smiling


while riddhima just nodded and started scrolling krish pram ahead ,

"wait riddhima i will take it out , you just come behind" said armaan taking pram from riddhima

and then they went out together

"perfect aren't they together" said atul smiling looking at riddhima armaan and krish together

"yes a perfect and a complete family" said anjali smiling side hugging her lovely husband because of whom today she got such a big hope for armaan and now armaan life will also be happy

over here armaan taking krish out while riddhima just following them , and krish was also enjoying his little ride he loved the pram ride it was fun for him

and soon they all were in the garden

"tree wowww treee" said krish in his language looking at the greenery everywhere around him

"yes tree you like trees, want to go near them" said armaan smiling looking at krish excitement over such s general stuff

"woowww" said krish as if he enjoyed his ride he was so excited as he went more near the little plants

"look here we are see the flowers all the flowers" said armaan trying to make conversation touching the flowers grown on the plant

"meee mee meee" krish screaming

"what its ok baby are you scared, ok we will go from here" said armaan not understanding why krish reacted like this he came ahead and started scrolling

While krish screaming again

"naaa naaa meee" krish tried explaining but armaan was just not getting anything

"yes krish baby we are going" said armaan

"he is saying that he also want to touch the flowers there he don't want to go back" said riddhima, she was quite for a long while but then when armaan was not at all understanding so she have to tell him what krish wanted

"oh ops , I am sorry krish i didn't understood you, ok you want to touch the flowers come with me" said armaan stretching his arms to get krish in his arms, while krish happily keep up jumping in armaan's arm , in the excitement to touch all that colored flowers he just came happily in armaan's arm as well forgetting his hatred for him

And armaan can just not be more than happy finally his son came in his armas atleast

"look here all the flowers , rose , lily orchids , all color" said armaan making krish touch all the flowers one by one with his tiny palms and loving this experience

As krish hold one flower in his hand tried to snatch it back to pluck it out

"no krish don't break it, look baby its already night and its not good breaking flowers or leaves in night" said riddhima coming a little ahead

And krish immediately pulled his hand back when he heard his mother saying not understanding what she said , still knew that if his mother is stopping that means he is doing something wrong so krish looking down

Armaan noticed that suddenly the happiness and sparkle in krish eyes turned in the sadness for not getting the flower for him

"oh no problem baby its night so we cant break a flower but tomorrow morning I will get all the flowers for you" said armaan smiling

"promiseee" said krish in his cute style making armaan and riddhima both smile at his innocence and cuteness

"yes pakka waala promise baby" said armaan smiling

"hehe achaaa[good] bunny" said krish smiling and said armaan good finally

And that felt so good to armaan till yesterday krish was just repeating that armaan is bad and now he said him good, that was all for armaan

"krish how many times I have to tell you he is not your bunny he is your" said riddhima correcting krish but as she was about to say ahead as he is krish father she stopped in the middle

"I am your dad krish you can call me dada its so simple please call me daadaa once" said armaan

"no bunny ,bunny" said krish moving his head from left to right , saying no

"ok ok say me whatever you like, I will still wait for the day you will say me daadaa" said armaan riffling krish hairs and head lightly again and again with love , krish was in his arms and this soothing touch of armaan was really nice for him

Krish immediately started feeling tired and drowsy and he kept his head on armaan shoulder and lightly closing his eyes

"I think he is getting sleepy now , its time for him going to bed, give him to me I will take him inside the room" said riddhima

"no no its ok , I will take him" said armaan still soothing and massaging krish back and head, it was heavenly, really a heavenly feel for armaan right now it feel so good holding your don like this dependent on you on your support and you can protect him completely

So they started moving back armaan slowly slowly holding krish protectively in his arms while riddhima moving behind, he went inside the room and made krish lye down on the bed till now krish was in deep sleep , nice sweet sleep, armaan sat by krish side for a while looking at his innocent cute sleeping face while riddhima covered krish properly with the blanket

"actually I have given him little medicine so that he don't get fever again maybe cause of that he was feeling drowsy and slept so soon" said riddhima

"he looks so cute while sleeping no worries of this world nothing just he and his little sweet world" said armaan looking at sleeping krish

"don't keep on staring at a sleeping baby for so long actually buaji use to say me that we should not stare at the child for so long as the baby catches the evil grin of ours very fast specially when the baby is sleeping" said riddhima

"I am his father and how can he catch evil by my looking at him" said armaan offending

"buaji use to say that evil grin are caused by the close relatives more than a stranger , specially the parents we ourself feel happy on looking at the baby and then our grin only effects the baby she even stopped me to keep on looking at him" said riddhima

"whatever I don't believe in all this customs they are just superstitions, its late in night you also go to sleep, good night" said armaan standing up, and was about to leave

"and yes if you need anything you can ask me" said armaan and he left

"as if you will give me whatever I will ask for, in that case I need the freedom , my freedom to have my child with me forever as my baby" said riddhima talking to herself after armaan left


Next day morning started with krish waking and then the daily routine his tantrums in bathing and eating and riddhima little little pleadings to him

While today krish was made sit on the breakfast table with everyone krish in his baby high chair just beneath armaan , they all having breakfast, krish tantrums were so on like always riddhima was feeding him with baby food and he was sometime throwing it down sometime not opening the mouth and sometime making all noises with his mouth resulting in food coming out again and again and his full lip chin was covered with his baby food

It was a pleasure to be watched he and his cute tactic to avoid eating armaan and atul were having there breakfast

And after sometime armaan and atul left for the office

"riddhima do you need anything from me no actually payal called and she wanted to meet so I was going at aakash place today so if you want anything just let me knew" said anjali to riddhima

"no anjali ji its ok you go ahead I don't need anything, I will be fine and take care of krish" said riddhima smiling

"ok I will try to be back soon" said anjali and she got up and left after a while

While riddhima and krish in the main hall living room alone, krish was crawling all over the place and playing with a small ball he had while riddhima was just watching him its been 4 hours since anjali left and still she was not back,

While naina malik was in the house since few hours doing something upstairs don't knew what

on the other side armaan and atul along with aakash busy in their works in the office

armaan completed all his pending work soon , he just wanted to go back home early today , all the time he tried concentrating on his work krish voices him cute tantrums on the breakfast table came in armaan mind and making him smile again and again , and then came her face that cute irritated and frustrated face, when she was fed up with krish , she looked so cute while she faked scolding krish to stop and then again and again atul words kept on disturbing him think of your life , your future, the part , his present

"oh god it is all so confusing , i just cant even think straight like this, god i need to change my mind and thinking" said armaan in frustration he was tired with this mind and heart game being played inside him

in the evening armaan came back home and saw his little angel busy in his games , krish was sitting in the main hall as armaan entered the house he saw krish smiling over playing with his sponge ball which squeezed back and as he through it towards the wall it again came back bouncing near him , and the moment ball came back to krish he started laughing loudly , and again repeating the same again and again

while riddhima was sitting by his side and guiding him , she was also smiling at his cuteness

looking at the scene in front of him and the hall filled with krish laugh finally armaan felt he came back to home and not a house

it was so peaceful and satisfactory finally it was his family he was still thinking all this when naina malik came down in the hall

"hey armaan baby you are back, i was waiting for you only" said naina with his sugar coated voice

"yes mom everything alright mom" said armaan in confusion, naina behavior was surely ttoo sweet and different today

"yes baby everything is just perfect infact more perfect armaan, you said me to think about my responsibilities as a grandmother and i was thinking about your saying and relized that you were right and so i have done something special for krish i hope he will like it" said naina smiling

"mom you did something for krish really, i mean what is it" said armaan being more shocked than surprised

"well that's a little surprise why dont you yourself come upstairs and have a look" said naina smiling and started moving up ,

while armaan following her quietly

naina reached up and stopped in front of one gate

"here you go thats my surprise, this room i have decorated personally for my grandson, i hope you will like it" said naina happily opening the door

while armaan entered the room , and looked all the way around , it was perfect the while room the decoration everything was just perfect for a baby, full room decorated with blue furniture and toys
something like this







"so how is it , do you like it" asked naina

"yes mom its perfect , its great I am sure krish is going to love it" said armaan looking everywhere , it was so soothing this baby room in his house , that symbolizes that his baby was here now finally to live here with him and make his life perfect

"I knew that you will like it , that's why I did all this, and from now on krish is going to stay here in this room I will tell that care taker to make krish sleep here from now" said naina looking at armaan still busy in looking all over the room

While naina went out of the room,

"now I will show you your real place you low class care taker" said naina to herself and went down in the hall where riddhima was busy with taking care of krish

And so naina went down and came near riddhima

"I have arranged the room for krish upstairs, and from now onwards he is going to sleep in that room , make sure of that" said naina

"ok naina mam I will take krish in that room" said riddhima and so she quietly taking krish up

She also came inside the room and was really impressed with the room , and our little prince krish the moment he saw the room and so many toys , he also got super excited, so riddhima left him down an let him crawl inside the room and choose his way of playing

While riddhima looking all over the room and then only one important thing come into hr notice, that the room consists of one baby cot and that's all no other bed was there, and now riddhima was confused , she and krish use to sleep together , and so if krish is going to sleep in the cot than where is she going to sleep

Riddhima was still in that confusion when naina looking at her understanding what riddhima was thinking

"ok its too late in night , make krish sleep in the cot, and as for you well if you still feel that you cant leave krish alone while sleeping , than if you want to stay with him so keep sitting here, and if you want to sleep with him than adjust the way a servant, sleep on the floor" said naina

And she turned to leave while leaving

"sleep on floor afterall that's your real place here in this house akways remember that" said naina and left out with victorious smile,

She knew this little act of her will surely humiliate riddhima , and how could she have left any such reason of insulting riddhima

Inside the room krish was busy with his playing while riddhima was looking all over the place and thinking what to do , its not that she was disturbed or hurt with naina comment she really never cared about any such comment she was just thinking that how will krish sleep alone in that cot, as till now he had never slept alone like this

She was still busy in thinking when she heard some voices

And she found few servants coming inside the room , shifting some furniture

"what are you all doing" riddhima asked in confusion

"actually armaan sir have ordered a new bed for this room and they have come to deliver that please you take the baby outside the room for few minutes till we will arrange everything properly here" said a servant

Riddhima was so shocked and then confused, still she took krish outside the room and let servants do their work

as she went out , she was about to move down in the hall when she heard few voices from the hall

naina and armaan were talking and naina looked really annoyed

"i didnt liked you making changes in krish room , i personally decorated it for him and what was the need for arranging a bed in there" said naina in anger

"mom i knew you did all that and everything was very nice i really didnt meant to hurt your feelings but mom you also knew that krish is still not use to be sleeping alone and he will need riddhima by his side" said armaan

"yes i also knew that but then what was the need for arranging a bed specially for her for god sake armaan she is just a worker a care taker, whats the need to give her all such kind of luxuries, let her arrange for herself, she can sleep on the floor somewhere in the room" said naina

"mom can you please end up with this, why are you adding on your personal liking and disliking in between all this, look mom i knew she is working here for us , and thats only cause we didnt left any other choice for her , still its not right to be so rude and wrong all the time with her, she is also a self esteemed decent women so no need to hurt anyone dignity in your personal disliking" said armaan

"decent women are you joking what kind of a self esteemed decent women she is who once sold herself for money" said naina sarcastically

and this comment surely hurt all the ears listening to it

riddhima was personally so effected with this statement, its true she did that she agreed to be a surrogate mother for money but then the situation was different, she was still passing on with her grief when she heard an equally disturbed and angry voice of armaan

"thats it mom you said this today but i really dont want to hear any such offended comments, yes she did so and its not that we dont knew the real reasons for her this act , we ourself made her so helpless that she agreed to all this, and today if anyone is responsible for her this condition its us" said armaan in anger , still controlling himself a lot , afterall it was his mother he was talking with right now

still controlling himself a lot

"this is the last time i am telling you please mom keep your personal issues with her away and just concentrate on being a nice grandmother for once and if you just cant do that also, than just live the way you want and had, i am myself enough to take care of my son" said armaan and he left from there leaving a fuming naina behind

while on the other side , upstairs riddhima was still standing there she was still lost in the comments she heard about herself when a servant came and told her that they can go back in the room it was ready now

so she went inside the room taking krish with him

she sat in one corner of the room and let krish crawl everywhere and play with the toys , her mind was again back in the memories of the past ,that dreadful night her father condition and her helplessness for money, she tried everything all the ways to get some money she even went to her office where she worked for applying for loan where she got one more option to get money

when her own boss presented his cheap demands towards her in return of money , she could have easily got the money there by selling herself to him but she didnt she had got many other options as well still she preferred this

ok now time for a little riddhima past well my next part is going to be about riddhima past few facts that will really effect armaan and her life ahead

i will update that soon
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superb part dear..
loved the way riddhima handels krishh..
and he is so cute.. 😃
armaan's way of answering back to naina that bitch on making changes in room for riddhuima
and hope krishh soon gets comfertablle with armaan nd anjilie n atul's words come true of AR wid krisshh as a perfect family
and yaa really liked it wen anjile first spat on that MAYA 😡
and then krissh pushed her on sand
it was awsume
but now wat else left in rist and now wat gonna happen that could affect AR's life more
and this maya nd naina...
i really feel like killing them
morons

anyways update soon dear

bye
take care 😊
Edited by megha_kajen - 10 years ago

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